Comments received on poems by Paul W Conway
Ed Poe in Yellowknife
Doggerel Dave said:
Your poem rattled along in a way I really enjoyed. There are a couple of aficionados of Poe\'s Raven lurking here, so I\'ll leave that to them.
Yellowknife looked like one hell of a place and probably very rewarding for those courageous enough to visit!
August 27th, 2024 02:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Your poem rattled along in a way I really enjoyed. There are a couple of aficionados of Poe\'s Raven lurking here, so I\'ll leave that to them.
Yellowknife looked like one hell of a place and probably very rewarding for those courageous enough to visit!
August 27th, 2024 02:03
Ed Poe in Yellowknife
sorenbarrett said:
I heard that you have to split their tongue first. It\'s a tongue twister for them. Good write
August 26th, 2024 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
I heard that you have to split their tongue first. It\'s a tongue twister for them. Good write
August 26th, 2024 16:03
Conning the Bafflements: a Triple Triolet
Doggerel Dave said:
Not an easy form to stick strictly to and remain coherent - you\'ve cracked it.
August 25th, 2024 00:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Not an easy form to stick strictly to and remain coherent - you\'ve cracked it.
August 25th, 2024 00:45
Conning the Bafflements: a Triple Triolet
sorenbarrett said:
Disorientation and confusion upon awakening. Expressed over and over a repetitive thought. All nicely stated
August 19th, 2024 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
Disorientation and confusion upon awakening. Expressed over and over a repetitive thought. All nicely stated
August 19th, 2024 08:03
A Time to Remember or Not
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write using anthropomorphism and great images loved it
August 12th, 2024 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write using anthropomorphism and great images loved it
August 12th, 2024 08:50
The Return of Lochinvar (A Knight-Mare)
Doggerel Dave said:
I didn’t want to know….! I became acquainted with Young Lochinvar from the days of my youth and found it a completely satisfying story told in rich rapid lines – instant conversion to poetry… Didn’t want to know and now I do. You will not be forgiven in a hurry, Sir.
Well writ stuff – worthy of Sir Walter, his style pace and richness. With respect, if no enjoyment…. 😊.....🥲
August 5th, 2024 21:32
Doggerel Dave said:
I didn’t want to know….! I became acquainted with Young Lochinvar from the days of my youth and found it a completely satisfying story told in rich rapid lines – instant conversion to poetry… Didn’t want to know and now I do. You will not be forgiven in a hurry, Sir.
Well writ stuff – worthy of Sir Walter, his style pace and richness. With respect, if no enjoyment…. 😊.....🥲
August 5th, 2024 21:32
The Return of Lochinvar (A Knight-Mare)
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and metaphoric ballad and tale combining the best of both worlds. Well worded and rhymed. Loved it
August 5th, 2024 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and metaphoric ballad and tale combining the best of both worlds. Well worded and rhymed. Loved it
August 5th, 2024 09:03
Flat Petulance (Villanelle)
Paul W Conway said:
Thanks, Doggerel. I will hang in. Paul
July 23rd, 2024 19:33
Paul W Conway said:
Thanks, Doggerel. I will hang in. Paul
July 23rd, 2024 19:33
Flat Petulance (Villanelle)
Doggerel Dave said:
Could be (I say \'could be\') funniest villanelle on record.
Do hang in here at MPS. It\'s a good site (apart from a few minor technical eccentricities), interactive and worth the effort.
July 23rd, 2024 18:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Could be (I say \'could be\') funniest villanelle on record.
Do hang in here at MPS. It\'s a good site (apart from a few minor technical eccentricities), interactive and worth the effort.
July 23rd, 2024 18:57
