Comments received on poems by ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ



Death hurts. (Just something I was messin\' with) Not even rly a poem lol
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is quite the poem as It employs repetition, anaphora, monorhyme, parallelism, juxtaposition, alliteration, and symbolism...all of which are brilliant poetic devices. Don\'t sell yourself short, my friend. This is as much a poem (if not more so) than the next, and on top of that, it is quite profound. Well done! 🌹👏

January 27th, 2025 08:23

Death hurts. (Just something I was messin\' with) Not even rly a poem lol
arqios said:

Works for me! Words and phrases are fun 🤩👍

January 27th, 2025 03:41

Let me GO X_X
Thad Wilk said:

👍👍 Two thumbs up!!
Powerful penning,
very evocative indeed!!
Brilliantly composed poetess
and my pleasure to read!!🤩
Best wishes 🍀🤗🦻🌻 Thad

January 26th, 2025 11:38

Let me GO X_X
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Emotive expressed swell but don\'t go, just write n pray. Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

January 26th, 2025 00:49

Let me GO X_X
sheta said:

nice rhyming

January 24th, 2025 14:20

Consumption
arqios said:

An anguished and well meditated plea 🙏🏻🕊

January 23rd, 2025 16:39

Consumption
Poetic Licence said:

Quite emotionally and strong piece of knowing you have lost control and hoping you can regain it, hope you. Enjoyed the read poetically

January 23rd, 2025 03:22

Last Goodbye
Thad Wilk said:

A very poignant 😢 poem!
Wonderful brevity,
really touching indeed!
Eloquently penned
and my pleasure to read!! 😁
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌻 Thad

January 21st, 2025 23:43

Last Goodbye
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 17th, 2025 07:24

Rainbow Colors Meaning
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome brevity
a really cool write!! ✍️👌
Thanks for sharing poetess
a treat to recite. 🤣
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 Thad

January 11th, 2025 21:20

Walls of gold
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫🌫

January 11th, 2025 18:53

Walls of gold
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Np.. :)

January 11th, 2025 16:58

Walls of gold
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 10th, 2025 15:00

Walls of gold
Thad Wilk said:

A very evocative
and captivating write!!🙏
Great rhyme scheme,
blend and flow!👌💯
Thank you poetess
to read a delight!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹. Thad

January 10th, 2025 13:54

Walls of gold
sorenbarrett said:

Great rhythm in this poem of rhyme and meter. Very nicely done

January 10th, 2025 04:38

Walls of gold
2781 said:

;and they loved not their lives unto the death.

January 10th, 2025 01:37

Try, You will fail
rin said:

I think that\'s fine. Your thoughts are yours, your will is yours.

January 7th, 2025 10:34

Try, You will fail
rin said:

Even if everything is taken away, there are things that are not taken away. It\'s your heart. by Inspector Zenigata

January 6th, 2025 14:56

Rainbow Colors Meaning
sorenbarrett said:

Most creative society is full of its don\'t. Here they are on display in vivid colors.

January 5th, 2025 04:53

Rainbow Colors Meaning
sheta said:

love it kenz

January 5th, 2025 02:53

You wouldn\'t understand
Dan Williams said:

You underestimate yourself Your message is clear and well spoken. Nice work.

January 1st, 2025 01:53

You wouldn\'t understand
Thad Wilk said:

A very emotional poem,😧
great flow and rhyme!!
Things will work
out for you I know,
all in good time!!🙏
Thanks for sharing poetess!
Best wishes 🍀 🤗🌹 Thad

December 31st, 2024 13:15

You wouldn\'t understand
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 31st, 2024 10:26

You wouldn\'t understand
sorenbarrett said:

Trauma can gag us and bind the brain as well. Sad but when the brain is overwhelmed with emotion and too much information to process it shuts down like a breaker in an electrical system to prevent a burn out. Happy New Year and may the overload be fixed

December 31st, 2024 04:03

You wouldn\'t understand
Poetic Licence said:

The words have come from the head so something is on the mind, hope it sorts itself out.

December 31st, 2024 03:32

You wouldn\'t understand
orchidee said:

I might understand, you never know! lol.

December 31st, 2024 02:54

You wouldn\'t understand
sheta said:

kenz it sounds like a problem so pls tell me what that is

December 31st, 2024 01:59

Free to be free!
Thad Wilk said:

A lovely, touching
and insightful write!! ✍️
Just resonates
with greatness
a treat to recite!! 💯
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 Thad

December 29th, 2024 10:06

Free to be free!
sheta said:

free kenzie…we are free!
great poem!

December 29th, 2024 01:29

Free to be free!
Poetic Licence said:

I am not a believer but i can connect with the sense of questioning are we free in this very well written poem. I sense Soren is right in there are answer, yet i feel that is much easier said than done, enjoyed the read.

December 28th, 2024 17:40

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