Comments received on poems by kwrites
REVENGE BEST SERVED HOT
Dan Williams said:
Yow, this makes even me, the sultan of grim, cringe a little. I can seriously relate though.
August 31st, 2024 01:20
Dan Williams said:
Yow, this makes even me, the sultan of grim, cringe a little. I can seriously relate though.
August 31st, 2024 01:20
MY BLOODY FOOTPRINTS.
Vanshika_bnsal said:
I could literally feel the words...I loved how this was written
August 31st, 2024 00:55
Vanshika_bnsal said:
I could literally feel the words...I loved how this was written
August 31st, 2024 00:55
REVENGE BEST SERVED HOT
sorenbarrett said:
Anger and rage pervade this poem of hate for an abuser. Hot is the atmosphere and vitriol pours from every word. Well stated
August 30th, 2024 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Anger and rage pervade this poem of hate for an abuser. Hot is the atmosphere and vitriol pours from every word. Well stated
August 30th, 2024 09:33
REVENGE BEST SERVED HOT
Thoughtless said:
Filled with vitriol and revenge unrequited. Good write kwrites.
August 29th, 2024 14:29
Thoughtless said:
Filled with vitriol and revenge unrequited. Good write kwrites.
August 29th, 2024 14:29
MY BLOODY FOOTPRINTS.
sorenbarrett said:
A sad story too often happening. The victim is always the victim and perpetrators are often victims too, not only of abuse themselves but of a shattered sense of self and senes of inadequacy. This poem was very well written and the last image was strong and powerful
August 22nd, 2024 15:52
sorenbarrett said:
A sad story too often happening. The victim is always the victim and perpetrators are often victims too, not only of abuse themselves but of a shattered sense of self and senes of inadequacy. This poem was very well written and the last image was strong and powerful
August 22nd, 2024 15:52
MY BLOODY FOOTPRINTS.
Thoughtless said:
Most abusers are someone who is known by the victim.
August 22nd, 2024 12:24
Thoughtless said:
Most abusers are someone who is known by the victim.
August 22nd, 2024 12:24
MY HEAVY HEART
sorenbarrett said:
The heart is a heavy penalty to pay for its benefits. Lovely thoughts expressed in this piece. Thought provoking.
August 21st, 2024 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
The heart is a heavy penalty to pay for its benefits. Lovely thoughts expressed in this piece. Thought provoking.
August 21st, 2024 05:13
The Scalpel Saga...
Thoughtless said:
It ain\'t Scrubs either. Nothing is expected. Nice expression of your angst.
August 19th, 2024 15:04
Thoughtless said:
It ain\'t Scrubs either. Nothing is expected. Nice expression of your angst.
August 19th, 2024 15:04
The Scalpel Saga...
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the labor to pay one\'s dues and enter the trade. It is not always what one imagined it to be. The work is harder, the days are longer, and the excitement is duller. Nicely written
August 19th, 2024 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the labor to pay one\'s dues and enter the trade. It is not always what one imagined it to be. The work is harder, the days are longer, and the excitement is duller. Nicely written
August 19th, 2024 07:53
LIFE OF LIE
sorenbarrett said:
Questioning oneself in doubt. Short but well written. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:15
sorenbarrett said:
Questioning oneself in doubt. Short but well written. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:15
TO BE AN ANXIOUS PERSON
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety a terrible adversary lurks in the dark places of the mind and attacks when least expected. A good description of the beast.
August 10th, 2024 15:53
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety a terrible adversary lurks in the dark places of the mind and attacks when least expected. A good description of the beast.
August 10th, 2024 15:53
I AM A WOMAN
Thoughtless said:
The struggle to realize your own worth. Bravo. You know what to do.
August 7th, 2024 13:16
Thoughtless said:
The struggle to realize your own worth. Bravo. You know what to do.
August 7th, 2024 13:16
I AM A WOMAN
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about the paradoxes and inconsistencies of life as a woman or just a person for that matter.
August 7th, 2024 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about the paradoxes and inconsistencies of life as a woman or just a person for that matter.
August 7th, 2024 10:07
