Comments received on poems by Elias H.F.



A Nervous System
Doggerel Dave said:

Economy of word play in no way diminishes the meanings of this little piece. Ingenious.

August 26th, 2024 01:14

A Nervous System
Mutley Ravishes said:

This intellect
Can`t get
Me out of this self-created prison
It has its limitations

Great write, and funny too!

August 25th, 2024 22:05

A Nervous System
Cheeky Missy said:

...Which is the reason I shut it down, when I\'m able, that is, since it\'s very present when least desired.
Lovely and evocative.

August 25th, 2024 20:09

A Nervous System
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 25th, 2024 15:48

A Nervous System
sorenbarrett said:

Clever play on words here. I too am nervous at times and always for a reason. I ruminate and seldom does any good. A great read

August 25th, 2024 10:56

Have you ever seen a green flower?
Bella Shepard said:

Love the rhyming pattern. Sweet and simple, but so very elegant. Welcome aboard my friend!

August 25th, 2024 09:05

Have you ever seen a green flower?
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and nicely done. Short but says so much

August 24th, 2024 18:32

Have you ever seen a green flower?
Doggerel Dave said:

Neat and very much worth the read.

Welcome to MPS I hope you enjoy your stay. You already interact, so go for it!

August 24th, 2024 16:16

Have you ever seen a green flower?
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 24th, 2024 13:12