Comments received on poems by MsMermaid



Rhyming Acrostic (At Briansodes suggestion)
BruisedApple said:

Really enjoyed reading your work! Very inspiring and has inspired me to push forward with a few more of my own ideas.

April 3rd, 2016 13:35

Thunderheads - a flow poem
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI MERMAID - Love the poem - it flows and it is complemented by a perfect visual - BRIAN

March 29th, 2016 03:46

Rhyming Acrostic (At Briansodes suggestion)
Severus Alexander said:

I enjoyed this thoroughly. Bravo, my fellow aspiring poet, Bravo.

March 24th, 2016 08:16

Rhyming Acrostic (At Briansodes suggestion)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MERMAID - Love you photo - you look very happy ! Thanks for taking up the challenge. Your rhyming couplets give the poem great flow and rhythm. I liked the way you carried the "rhyme = ON" from line 7 in stanza 1 to live 1 in stanza 2 (= GONE) ! Yay ! you did fine - BRIAN

March 23rd, 2016 05:00

Temptation
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI MERMAID - Thanks for sharing an important warning against the guiles of the Devil - He loves to play with our emotions. The GOOD BOOK says "Resist the Devil and he will flee from you".

This old world is very short on Real Peace - True Love - Common Sence ! I Satan had his way he would replace them with Srtife - Lust & Ignorance. Loved your use of "Old English" in the poem - BRIAN

March 22nd, 2016 09:15