Comments received on poems by Severus Alexander



8 September 2017
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

September 8th, 2017 10:25

28 August 2017
Egyptianqt79 said:

Also I\'m a huge harry potter fan. Love your name!!!!

August 28th, 2017 23:18

28 August 2017
Egyptianqt79 said:

Love those last two lines. I felt them. Love the whole poem but wow. Nice wordplay

August 28th, 2017 23:17

23 August, 2017
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

August 24th, 2017 00:43

23 August, 2017
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 23rd, 2017 11:05

18 August, 2017
rrodriguez said:

Well expressed feeling... petrichor, I like this description used to describe the bonanza you are looking for

August 19th, 2017 20:38

18 August, 2017
Nicholas Browning said:

A calming ride. Nice.

August 18th, 2017 08:01

11 August, 2017
Lizzy Renee said:

Nice Write!

August 11th, 2017 07:56

21 July 2017
orchidee said:

A fine write S.A.

July 21st, 2017 11:28

15 July 2017
Nicholas Browning said:

Short and sweet tribute to nature. Cheers mate.

July 15th, 2017 01:03

29 May 2017
Augustus said:

I read it as our deeds we are not proud of coming back to haunt us. Well that is probably not what you indended but I enjoyed readin and reading again this enigmatic jewel.

May 29th, 2017 18:03

26 May 2017
Augustus said:

Wow.

May 26th, 2017 13:14

26 May 2017
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 26th, 2017 10:20

11 May 2017
Severus Alexander said:

Friend to me, light-hearted, heavy are your thoughts

And how warm our speech, far from worldly guile

that in its depth, lifts up something so sought

And to my face, never fails to bring a smile

May 11th, 2017 11:59

4 May, 2017
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

May 5th, 2017 00:57

4 May, 2017
swingline said:

Between the darkness and light gives me a secure sense of balance , equilibrium , peace of mind .

May 4th, 2017 15:39

7 April 2017
Garry said:

Interesting ideas, well written

April 8th, 2017 02:18

9 March, 2017
Augustus said:

Teasing playfully like children, now guess what he wrote. Enjoyed.

March 9th, 2017 16:52

7 March 2017
Augustus said:

Could the forest speak truly of our forbearers? Are we no different?
Enjoyed

March 7th, 2017 17:34

7 March 2017
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 7th, 2017 16:08

7 March 2017
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. If only they could talk.

March 7th, 2017 12:44

3 March 2017
Augustus said:

Some thoughts like those of your poem bring joy to the heart.

March 3rd, 2017 17:19

3 March 2017
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write..

March 3rd, 2017 09:06

2 March 2017
Augustus said:

You must be a musician. Like the kestrel analogy or windhover can maintain flight with minimal breeze.

March 2nd, 2017 20:02

1 March 2017
Augustus said:

With eyes unsullied. Well now I\'ll have to think about who that may be. Very nice.

March 1st, 2017 19:24

1 March 2017
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 1st, 2017 08:59

27 February 2017
Augustus said:

That the verse that flows so delicately off your never be staved. Very nice.

February 28th, 2017 21:35

27 February 2017
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 28th, 2017 13:17

27 February 2017
Reivax Camlost said:

Hey, it\'s February 28...

February 28th, 2017 10:46

24 February 2017
Goldfinch60 said:

He will always be with you.

February 25th, 2017 02:10

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