Comments received on poems by Severus Alexander
21 February 2017
Stephanie Showers said:
WOW what a write. Its sucks you in right at the beginning and you are compelled to stay until the end! LOVE IT!
February 21st, 2017 11:21
Stephanie Showers said:
WOW what a write. Its sucks you in right at the beginning and you are compelled to stay until the end! LOVE IT!
February 21st, 2017 11:21
17 february 2017
Christina K said:
This is a beautiful poem, well-written, great work!
February 18th, 2017 11:53
Christina K said:
This is a beautiful poem, well-written, great work!
February 18th, 2017 11:53
17 february 2017
Augustus said:
An other enigmatic. Returning home from distant shores to another seems simplistic on my part. Agate emplies semiprecious stone. Perhaps, however troubled you will always brighten my day. Enjoyed.
February 17th, 2017 23:36
Augustus said:
An other enigmatic. Returning home from distant shores to another seems simplistic on my part. Agate emplies semiprecious stone. Perhaps, however troubled you will always brighten my day. Enjoyed.
February 17th, 2017 23:36
15 February 2017
Augustus said:
Judging from your conversation with Damaged Soul, I haven\'t a clue as to the true nature of this enigmatic poem. Suffice to say that for me the \"leaves calling\" was a pleasing metaphor and I took it the speaker longed to return to the sea or near it.
February 15th, 2017 17:50
Augustus said:
Judging from your conversation with Damaged Soul, I haven\'t a clue as to the true nature of this enigmatic poem. Suffice to say that for me the \"leaves calling\" was a pleasing metaphor and I took it the speaker longed to return to the sea or near it.
February 15th, 2017 17:50
15 February 2017
Severus Alexander said:
1, 1. 2, 3. 10, 11. 6, 6. 1, 0. 6, 2. 10, 3. 4, 5. 1, 2. 5, 3. 3, 4. 1, 6. 0, 1. 7, 7.
February 15th, 2017 13:38
Severus Alexander said:
1, 1. 2, 3. 10, 11. 6, 6. 1, 0. 6, 2. 10, 3. 4, 5. 1, 2. 5, 3. 3, 4. 1, 6. 0, 1. 7, 7.
February 15th, 2017 13:38
14 February, 2017
Augustus said:
Reminds me of a song, Spanish eyes. The construction of the poem is special.
February 14th, 2017 21:19
Augustus said:
Reminds me of a song, Spanish eyes. The construction of the poem is special.
February 14th, 2017 21:19
8 February 2017
poetboy123 said:
Simple,short, and poetic. I have really enjoyed all of your poems!
February 8th, 2017 18:10
poetboy123 said:
Simple,short, and poetic. I have really enjoyed all of your poems!
February 8th, 2017 18:10
4 January 2017
Tris Eaton said:
I love your poems so much. I like the references to fire in this one. Made me feel warm. It\'s always nice to get on here and see that you wrote a poem especially one like this. It was beautiful. Never stop writing.
February 5th, 2017 15:51
Tris Eaton said:
I love your poems so much. I like the references to fire in this one. Made me feel warm. It\'s always nice to get on here and see that you wrote a poem especially one like this. It was beautiful. Never stop writing.
February 5th, 2017 15:51
2 February 2017
Severus Alexander said:
I apologize. My deductive reasoning has always been on the inadequate side.. Walter De La Mare (another of my favorites) hypothesized two aspects of imagination; The childlike, and the boylike.. Sadly, I think I possess more of a creative imagination than a deductive one. (Creativity could be analogous to induction, if you think about it. Generating many possibilities from a few factors-- and deduction, going from general to specific, is probably the aptitude most suited for cryptography). I\'ve always been interested in cryptography, and I\'ve picked up a thing or two-- but this looks less like an independent cipher, and more like a code.. I would have to guess what subject matter it encodes to in order to solve it. Nonetheless, I\'m impressed. And if I guess correctly, the only book which springs to mind that has that number of pages would be a bible of some format. However, I could be completely wrong, and in the process of making myself into a fool.
February 2nd, 2017 11:55
Severus Alexander said:
I apologize. My deductive reasoning has always been on the inadequate side.. Walter De La Mare (another of my favorites) hypothesized two aspects of imagination; The childlike, and the boylike.. Sadly, I think I possess more of a creative imagination than a deductive one. (Creativity could be analogous to induction, if you think about it. Generating many possibilities from a few factors-- and deduction, going from general to specific, is probably the aptitude most suited for cryptography). I\'ve always been interested in cryptography, and I\'ve picked up a thing or two-- but this looks less like an independent cipher, and more like a code.. I would have to guess what subject matter it encodes to in order to solve it. Nonetheless, I\'m impressed. And if I guess correctly, the only book which springs to mind that has that number of pages would be a bible of some format. However, I could be completely wrong, and in the process of making myself into a fool.
February 2nd, 2017 11:55
30 January 2017
Michael Edwards said:
So well written I do like /coattails of the wind/ lovely words.
January 31st, 2017 00:46
Michael Edwards said:
So well written I do like /coattails of the wind/ lovely words.
January 31st, 2017 00:46
30 January 2017
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful. A simple thing like a passing breeze can rouse a host of emotions, joy, smiles, sin. Loved \"coattails of the wind.\" Exceptional writing.
January 30th, 2017 23:21
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful. A simple thing like a passing breeze can rouse a host of emotions, joy, smiles, sin. Loved \"coattails of the wind.\" Exceptional writing.
January 30th, 2017 23:21
29 January 2017
Augustus said:
Sad. Enjoyed reading though I am somewhat puzzled. Maybe feeling weary, not on the same page. 🌄
January 29th, 2017 20:53
Augustus said:
Sad. Enjoyed reading though I am somewhat puzzled. Maybe feeling weary, not on the same page. 🌄
January 29th, 2017 20:53
27 January 2017
Pintu Mahakul said:
Images are unseen. But dream takes us away. Very interesting poem is shared here with wonderful views.
January 28th, 2017 00:12
Pintu Mahakul said:
Images are unseen. But dream takes us away. Very interesting poem is shared here with wonderful views.
January 28th, 2017 00:12
20 January, 2017
yellowbee said:
I saw the word bee and got excited, nice to see other young writers here!
January 25th, 2017 11:31
yellowbee said:
I saw the word bee and got excited, nice to see other young writers here!
January 25th, 2017 11:31
20 January, 2017
Shakerite said:
Here\'s hoping we all keep on beating .
A terrific poem well put
January 20th, 2017 11:28
Shakerite said:
Here\'s hoping we all keep on beating .
A terrific poem well put
January 20th, 2017 11:28
17 January, 2017
Tris Eaton said:
Please don\'t die😅 I need you. I love the poem by the way. (Then again, I love all of your poems)
January 18th, 2017 09:18
Tris Eaton said:
Please don\'t die😅 I need you. I love the poem by the way. (Then again, I love all of your poems)
January 18th, 2017 09:18
17 January, 2017
Severus Alexander said:
I\'m resolving to go to my grave in peace, so long as I set my mark upon the page. (Incidentally, to die for a loved one).
January 17th, 2017 20:26
Severus Alexander said:
I\'m resolving to go to my grave in peace, so long as I set my mark upon the page. (Incidentally, to die for a loved one).
January 17th, 2017 20:26
17 January, 2017
Severus Alexander said:
I consider the first tercet to be a poem in of itself. But let it with the others stand together, whether they stand together or apart.
January 17th, 2017 18:20
Severus Alexander said:
I consider the first tercet to be a poem in of itself. But let it with the others stand together, whether they stand together or apart.
January 17th, 2017 18:20
20 December 2016
Augustus said:
That you may travel far and well my friend. Very nice.
December 20th, 2016 22:41
Augustus said:
That you may travel far and well my friend. Very nice.
December 20th, 2016 22:41
16 December 2016
Severus Alexander said:
Thank you guys! Means a lot to me.
December 17th, 2016 19:43
Severus Alexander said:
Thank you guys! Means a lot to me.
December 17th, 2016 19:43
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