Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Pleasing Everyone Else
sorenbarrett said:
Know oneself, be comfortable with oneself, be oneself is the process I see and this is reflected in this poem of spiritual freedom. Very well stated and nicely written.
April 14th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Know oneself, be comfortable with oneself, be oneself is the process I see and this is reflected in this poem of spiritual freedom. Very well stated and nicely written.
April 14th, 2025 04:10
Pleasing Everyone Else
arqios said:
Mistrusting and people pleasing are probably the first ailments that beset any infant child. It’s something so hard to cure and shake off, in my opinion. Glad you’ve taken up the topic in poem. 🕊🙏🏻
April 14th, 2025 02:40
arqios said:
Mistrusting and people pleasing are probably the first ailments that beset any infant child. It’s something so hard to cure and shake off, in my opinion. Glad you’ve taken up the topic in poem. 🕊🙏🏻
April 14th, 2025 02:40
Pleasing Everyone Else
MR.apocalypse said:
This was a treat to read I love the way I can just read it so smoothly.
April 14th, 2025 02:21
MR.apocalypse said:
This was a treat to read I love the way I can just read it so smoothly.
April 14th, 2025 02:21
You Get Out What You Put In
rrodriguez said:
Cute and clever playfulness, with a touch of wit. I liked it!
April 12th, 2025 11:56
rrodriguez said:
Cute and clever playfulness, with a touch of wit. I liked it!
April 12th, 2025 11:56
Children Have Rights.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, children should always be protected, love and encouraged in their lives. I cannot ever understand why people can hurt children!
Andy
April 12th, 2025 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, children should always be protected, love and encouraged in their lives. I cannot ever understand why people can hurt children!
Andy
April 12th, 2025 01:52
The Success Of My Dreams.
spilleronsheet said:
And truth be told, many lives perished under the invisible burden of generations
Keep writing dear poet
April 11th, 2025 14:37
spilleronsheet said:
And truth be told, many lives perished under the invisible burden of generations
Keep writing dear poet
April 11th, 2025 14:37
Children Have Rights.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is so true, Tobani. No child asked to be born and those who have children owe them provisions, love and care. A bold, passionate, and needed write. Well done! 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is so true, Tobani. No child asked to be born and those who have children owe them provisions, love and care. A bold, passionate, and needed write. Well done! 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:45
Children Have Rights.
arqios said:
Haha, that’s excellent… I was the product of a loving quickie, would you believe… but that’s a whole other story… I hope everyone understands that each human wherever they’re at in the life cycle has rights. Good stuff here🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
Haha, that’s excellent… I was the product of a loving quickie, would you believe… but that’s a whole other story… I hope everyone understands that each human wherever they’re at in the life cycle has rights. Good stuff here🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:24
Children Have Rights.
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful piece of work. It highlights the rights of children and the responsibilities of adults, Very important work. Excellent
April 11th, 2025 05:23
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful piece of work. It highlights the rights of children and the responsibilities of adults, Very important work. Excellent
April 11th, 2025 05:23
Children Have Rights.
sorenbarrett said:
A most noble write Tobani one that I can sense you feel strongly about. Children are deeply dependent on their parents for survival and learning and they didn\'t ask to be here so it does behoove those that made that decision willingly or not to provide for them. Nicely said
April 11th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most noble write Tobani one that I can sense you feel strongly about. Children are deeply dependent on their parents for survival and learning and they didn\'t ask to be here so it does behoove those that made that decision willingly or not to provide for them. Nicely said
April 11th, 2025 04:11
On the Road To Insanity.
Goldfinch60 said:
Insanity could be within us all Tobani but only we alone may know it.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Insanity could be within us all Tobani but only we alone may know it.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:16
On the Road To Insanity.
Mutley Ravishes said:
Reminded me a little of NF\'s rap flows. And old Zen stories, like a wannabe student climbing a mountain to see the teacher, then the teacher proceeds to throw rocks at, punch and kick the poor guy off the mountain. Great work.
April 9th, 2025 00:32
Mutley Ravishes said:
Reminded me a little of NF\'s rap flows. And old Zen stories, like a wannabe student climbing a mountain to see the teacher, then the teacher proceeds to throw rocks at, punch and kick the poor guy off the mountain. Great work.
April 9th, 2025 00:32
On the Road To Insanity.
sunshine777 said:
Crucified and analyzed. Warriors have the strongest hearts not only after the fire but in the fire. Great thoughts put together with great words
April 8th, 2025 20:52
sunshine777 said:
Crucified and analyzed. Warriors have the strongest hearts not only after the fire but in the fire. Great thoughts put together with great words
April 8th, 2025 20:52
On the Road To Insanity.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, I’m honored, my friend—truly. You didn’t “nick” a thing; this is transformation and a hauntingly beautiful one at that. The title alone, let alone the whole poem, carries such raw energy and honest vulnerability. Again, I am honored and humbled and glad you carried the dialogue forward in this poetic expression.🖤🙏🕯️🦇
April 8th, 2025 19:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, I’m honored, my friend—truly. You didn’t “nick” a thing; this is transformation and a hauntingly beautiful one at that. The title alone, let alone the whole poem, carries such raw energy and honest vulnerability. Again, I am honored and humbled and glad you carried the dialogue forward in this poetic expression.🖤🙏🕯️🦇
April 8th, 2025 19:01
On the Road To Insanity.
Cheeky Missy said:
Whether tongue-in-cheek or very truth, the none too subtle note of humor lacing this most serious discussion adds flavour. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a seriously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Whether tongue-in-cheek or very truth, the none too subtle note of humor lacing this most serious discussion adds flavour. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a seriously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:33
On the Road To Insanity.
MDStone said:
Ah, but insanity to some is creativity to others. Nicely done Tobani. I enjoyed the meter and the rhyme. But mostly, the encouragement to review my own case files. Thanks for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 05:36
MDStone said:
Ah, but insanity to some is creativity to others. Nicely done Tobani. I enjoyed the meter and the rhyme. But mostly, the encouragement to review my own case files. Thanks for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 05:36
On the Road To Insanity.
sorenbarrett said:
Is it not more insane to tell a person that they are insane because they are comfortable the way they are? Why do we give the majority the right to label the minority as insane. As Thomas Sazz says mental illness is what we call people that cause us discomfort that there is no law against. The continual use of the same rhyme at the end of each line emphasized the feel of obsession seen in many mental illnesses. Very nicely penned
April 8th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Is it not more insane to tell a person that they are insane because they are comfortable the way they are? Why do we give the majority the right to label the minority as insane. As Thomas Sazz says mental illness is what we call people that cause us discomfort that there is no law against. The continual use of the same rhyme at the end of each line emphasized the feel of obsession seen in many mental illnesses. Very nicely penned
April 8th, 2025 04:06
On the Road To Insanity.
arqios said:
Now there\'s a way to rhyme! Praise to both you and Tristan, these are quite enjoyable writes 🙏🏻🕊️
April 8th, 2025 02:58
arqios said:
Now there\'s a way to rhyme! Praise to both you and Tristan, these are quite enjoyable writes 🙏🏻🕊️
April 8th, 2025 02:58
Jimmy The Bully Man
NafisaSB said:
wow - that was one hard punch from david to goliath..well done
April 8th, 2025 00:46
NafisaSB said:
wow - that was one hard punch from david to goliath..well done
April 8th, 2025 00:46
Successfully Failed Again.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I wrote in my poem, \"Frozen Solid\", \"Failing to being a winner / and winning at being a failure\". I am not one to quote myself too often 😂, but the ending reminded me of that line. Such a relatable poem, this gets a fave from me, my friend. Well done on this. Love the form too.
April 7th, 2025 15:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I wrote in my poem, \"Frozen Solid\", \"Failing to being a winner / and winning at being a failure\". I am not one to quote myself too often 😂, but the ending reminded me of that line. Such a relatable poem, this gets a fave from me, my friend. Well done on this. Love the form too.
April 7th, 2025 15:41
Successfully Failed Again.
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said in most poetic form that we are what we tell ourselves that we are. The mind is most powerful and what we believe it makes come true. Very nicely written Tobani
April 7th, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said in most poetic form that we are what we tell ourselves that we are. The mind is most powerful and what we believe it makes come true. Very nicely written Tobani
April 7th, 2025 03:40
Successfully Failed Again.
arqios said:
The greater the effort after failed trials the greater the learning and achievement 🙏🏻🕊️
April 7th, 2025 02:47
arqios said:
The greater the effort after failed trials the greater the learning and achievement 🙏🏻🕊️
April 7th, 2025 02:47
To Be Alone
definitelymayank said:
Ahh such a lovely one, sad that I relate to it to some extent.
April 6th, 2025 11:42
definitelymayank said:
Ahh such a lovely one, sad that I relate to it to some extent.
April 6th, 2025 11:42
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