Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
The World Holds It`s Breath
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not holding my breath!
Taking the journey to the west!
February 17th, 2025 04:54
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not holding my breath!
Taking the journey to the west!
February 17th, 2025 04:54
My Bed For The Night
Parisab said:
Glad you listened as a way of helping-good write
February 17th, 2025 03:35
Parisab said:
Glad you listened as a way of helping-good write
February 17th, 2025 03:35
The World Holds It`s Breath
arqios said:
You held on for as long as you could. That’s all that can be asked of anyone 🙏🏻🕊️
February 17th, 2025 03:09
arqios said:
You held on for as long as you could. That’s all that can be asked of anyone 🙏🏻🕊️
February 17th, 2025 03:09
Just a Bit Of Fun
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani.
\"Wise man say,
If you want the truth,
Don\'t listen to a Politician.\"
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani.
\"Wise man say,
If you want the truth,
Don\'t listen to a Politician.\"
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:10
Just a Bit Of Fun
David Wakeling said:
This was fun and very clever.Enjoyed reading
February 16th, 2025 16:33
David Wakeling said:
This was fun and very clever.Enjoyed reading
February 16th, 2025 16:33
Just a Bit Of Fun
Cassie58 said:
You ARE a wise man with a great sense of humour Tobani. I like the gardening one especially :) Much fun reading.
February 16th, 2025 12:47
Cassie58 said:
You ARE a wise man with a great sense of humour Tobani. I like the gardening one especially :) Much fun reading.
February 16th, 2025 12:47
Yesterday Was
Cassie58 said:
This is a very touching poem Tobani. A reminder of the lonely people on Valentine’s Day, and there are many of them. I particularly enjoyed the structure and the repetition of some hearts, worked well. A favourite.
February 16th, 2025 12:27
Cassie58 said:
This is a very touching poem Tobani. A reminder of the lonely people on Valentine’s Day, and there are many of them. I particularly enjoyed the structure and the repetition of some hearts, worked well. A favourite.
February 16th, 2025 12:27
Just a Bit Of Fun
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I love the second edition of this. Well done, Tobani! I hope there will be more! 🌹👏
February 16th, 2025 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I love the second edition of this. Well done, Tobani! I hope there will be more! 🌹👏
February 16th, 2025 10:48
Just a Bit Of Fun
Cheeky Missy said:
Like a silver platter with dark chocolate truffles to tantalize the senses and leave the palette satisfied, how charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy which humor balances off beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
February 16th, 2025 09:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Like a silver platter with dark chocolate truffles to tantalize the senses and leave the palette satisfied, how charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy which humor balances off beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
February 16th, 2025 09:21
Just a Bit Of Fun
sorenbarrett said:
Now one of the qualifications of a fave is something that moves me. The second stanza made me laugh so that gets it. This was a truly fun and satisfying read and I thank you for that.
February 16th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Now one of the qualifications of a fave is something that moves me. The second stanza made me laugh so that gets it. This was a truly fun and satisfying read and I thank you for that.
February 16th, 2025 04:09
Yesterday Was
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true, so much emotion comes into our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true, so much emotion comes into our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:43
Yesterday Was
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s something of sheer solace in this seemingly simple piece which yet so capable says so much more than would seem, covering the bases gently with such a tender hand, likeas a mother\'s. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 21:50
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s something of sheer solace in this seemingly simple piece which yet so capable says so much more than would seem, covering the bases gently with such a tender hand, likeas a mother\'s. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 21:50
Yesterday Was
David Wakeling said:
Yesterday seemed to be filled with hearts broken and otherwise. A very thoughtful poem. Enjoyed reading
February 15th, 2025 21:00
David Wakeling said:
Yesterday seemed to be filled with hearts broken and otherwise. A very thoughtful poem. Enjoyed reading
February 15th, 2025 21:00
Yesterday Was
John Prophet said:
Wonderful words. Sensitive write ✍️ PL
John
February 15th, 2025 19:22
John Prophet said:
Wonderful words. Sensitive write ✍️ PL
John
February 15th, 2025 19:22
Yesterday Was
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. You and I are on a similar track this morning. Serendipity. As for your poem, spot on! Well done! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. You and I are on a similar track this morning. Serendipity. As for your poem, spot on! Well done! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:30
Yesterday Was
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
A thing called the heart is so easy to break, yet so many times, it heals with love. The chances were high yesterday. Love this poem❤️
February 15th, 2025 08:12
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
A thing called the heart is so easy to break, yet so many times, it heals with love. The chances were high yesterday. Love this poem❤️
February 15th, 2025 08:12
Yesterday Was
Michael Edwards said:
I am noty usually into \'lovey\' poems but this rings so true and is so well written - much enjoyed - ikudos.
February 15th, 2025 05:08
Michael Edwards said:
I am noty usually into \'lovey\' poems but this rings so true and is so well written - much enjoyed - ikudos.
February 15th, 2025 05:08
Yesterday Was
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message contained in your poem. Sensitivity, empathy, awareness are things that have been dulled in a fast moving society. Being aware that not all people experience life the same is critical to being a caring person. A most poignant write. Nicely worded and written.
February 15th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message contained in your poem. Sensitivity, empathy, awareness are things that have been dulled in a fast moving society. Being aware that not all people experience life the same is critical to being a caring person. A most poignant write. Nicely worded and written.
February 15th, 2025 04:38
The Passion Has Gone
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Tobani, may that passion re-emerge once again.
Andy
February 15th, 2025 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Tobani, may that passion re-emerge once again.
Andy
February 15th, 2025 02:42
The Clock has stopped Ticking
whats write for me said:
Deep and dark prose. Perhaps it was not his fault. The demons that chase us each and every one. Come from our own deep, dark soul.
February 15th, 2025 00:47
whats write for me said:
Deep and dark prose. Perhaps it was not his fault. The demons that chase us each and every one. Come from our own deep, dark soul.
February 15th, 2025 00:47
The Passion Has Gone
David Wakeling said:
Inevitability of lossing love and passion is very sad.Very moving and thoughtful poem.
February 14th, 2025 15:41
David Wakeling said:
Inevitability of lossing love and passion is very sad.Very moving and thoughtful poem.
February 14th, 2025 15:41
The Passion Has Gone
Cheeky Missy said:
On Valentine\'s Day of all days in the year, this eloquent tribute to the reality of this holiday and oft-extolled romance. La dee. Too perfect. Charmingly rendered in seeming simplicity and tantalizing brevity, with tasteful imagery and an almost exquisitely haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:38
Cheeky Missy said:
On Valentine\'s Day of all days in the year, this eloquent tribute to the reality of this holiday and oft-extolled romance. La dee. Too perfect. Charmingly rendered in seeming simplicity and tantalizing brevity, with tasteful imagery and an almost exquisitely haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:38
The Passion Has Gone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s sad...but I live in this poem. Not what I want, never what I wanted, but my reality all the same. Thank you for giving it words. Brought me to tears this morning. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 14th, 2025 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s sad...but I live in this poem. Not what I want, never what I wanted, but my reality all the same. Thank you for giving it words. Brought me to tears this morning. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 14th, 2025 09:49
The Passion Has Gone
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A hard truth in life at times
February 14th, 2025 08:29
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A hard truth in life at times
February 14th, 2025 08:29
The Passion Has Gone
arqios said:
If only there was a refresh button… or even a reboot function!
February 14th, 2025 07:48
arqios said:
If only there was a refresh button… or even a reboot function!
February 14th, 2025 07:48
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