Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Thank You
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope these are just fine words Tobani and that you wll continue writing your fine words for us to read.
Andy
April 21st, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope these are just fine words Tobani and that you wll continue writing your fine words for us to read.
Andy
April 21st, 2025 01:46
Smile
NafisaSB said:
i try my best to remain smiling, but sometimes circumstances can be really trying - and that\'s when i should learn what you have written - to control the words that can hurt and leave a lasting mark
beautifully explained in a concise manner
April 20th, 2025 23:17
NafisaSB said:
i try my best to remain smiling, but sometimes circumstances can be really trying - and that\'s when i should learn what you have written - to control the words that can hurt and leave a lasting mark
beautifully explained in a concise manner
April 20th, 2025 23:17
Thank You
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Come back soon friend, the world of poetry await you.β₯οΈ
April 20th, 2025 16:18
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Come back soon friend, the world of poetry await you.β₯οΈ
April 20th, 2025 16:18
Thank You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh no, my friend! What will I do without our ongoing interactions, reading your wonderful poetry, hearing your insightful feedback? I truly appreciate you and look forward to our interactions, friend. They have blessed me and, reading your poem, it seems these interactions with this community have blessed you. If that is the case, then I trust you will return. We all need breaks and I can understand the need for that. If you look back at my publishing history on here since 2017, you\'ll see I took my share. π€£ But here I still am. So, rather than goodbye, I\'ll say take care till next time, my friend! π€β€οΈπ Be well.
April 20th, 2025 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh no, my friend! What will I do without our ongoing interactions, reading your wonderful poetry, hearing your insightful feedback? I truly appreciate you and look forward to our interactions, friend. They have blessed me and, reading your poem, it seems these interactions with this community have blessed you. If that is the case, then I trust you will return. We all need breaks and I can understand the need for that. If you look back at my publishing history on here since 2017, you\'ll see I took my share. π€£ But here I still am. So, rather than goodbye, I\'ll say take care till next time, my friend! π€β€οΈπ Be well.
April 20th, 2025 07:58
Thank You
David Wakeling said:
Some wonderful wisdom and advice here.Inspirational
April 20th, 2025 05:16
David Wakeling said:
Some wonderful wisdom and advice here.Inspirational
April 20th, 2025 05:16
Thank You
teardrop said:
you could have written this from a page out of my book for I know the demons of depression all to well. I hope you\'re alright. I am often told I write so much about sorrow and pain. Which I do. What else am I to write about? When I write, I write for me for writing is my only release. I know of no other way. Also since I am wring to myself, I have np choice but to be honest. I can\'t lie to myself. Keep writing and don\'t stop. Believe me, I have notebooks of poetry I have never shared with anyone, yet plenty of relief has been felt by me just penning them, Again, I hope you\'re ok. Please don\'t leave, I just met you. thamk you for sharing a huge part of yourself with me.
April 20th, 2025 05:08
teardrop said:
you could have written this from a page out of my book for I know the demons of depression all to well. I hope you\'re alright. I am often told I write so much about sorrow and pain. Which I do. What else am I to write about? When I write, I write for me for writing is my only release. I know of no other way. Also since I am wring to myself, I have np choice but to be honest. I can\'t lie to myself. Keep writing and don\'t stop. Believe me, I have notebooks of poetry I have never shared with anyone, yet plenty of relief has been felt by me just penning them, Again, I hope you\'re ok. Please don\'t leave, I just met you. thamk you for sharing a huge part of yourself with me.
April 20th, 2025 05:08
Thank You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem before a journey an odyssey fraught with perils. The poem reads well my friend and my heart goes with it. Some poems are too real and tender to be touched and this seems one. My hands are too rough for its surface. Wishing a rapid return missing your Sunday wise man says
April 20th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem before a journey an odyssey fraught with perils. The poem reads well my friend and my heart goes with it. Some poems are too real and tender to be touched and this seems one. My hands are too rough for its surface. Wishing a rapid return missing your Sunday wise man says
April 20th, 2025 04:18
Thank You
arqios said:
Hope this isnβt goodbye. And our community is part of our strength ππ»ποΈ
April 20th, 2025 03:13
arqios said:
Hope this isnβt goodbye. And our community is part of our strength ππ»ποΈ
April 20th, 2025 03:13
Just a Waste of F------ Time
maydanae said:
Wow this was hard to read because I feel for younger you. It is never pleasant to feel like that and to have people in your life put those words in your head is really sad. I hope you are doing better in recent years. You are loved
April 19th, 2025 11:40
maydanae said:
Wow this was hard to read because I feel for younger you. It is never pleasant to feel like that and to have people in your life put those words in your head is really sad. I hope you are doing better in recent years. You are loved
April 19th, 2025 11:40
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
Tony Grannell said:
What a cracking end to Harry\'s best laid plans. An Easter to remember, indeed. A joy to read and then some.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 19th, 2025 08:55
Tony Grannell said:
What a cracking end to Harry\'s best laid plans. An Easter to remember, indeed. A joy to read and then some.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 19th, 2025 08:55
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That Harry, my goodness. LOL! I love this series, my friend. πΉπ
April 19th, 2025 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That Harry, my goodness. LOL! I love this series, my friend. πΉπ
April 19th, 2025 08:30
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
teardrop said:
This was a very enjoyable read. The story kept my interest and kept me wanting to read more. Thank you for the smile!
April 19th, 2025 05:45
teardrop said:
This was a very enjoyable read. The story kept my interest and kept me wanting to read more. Thank you for the smile!
April 19th, 2025 05:45
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun tale.Enjoyed reading.Well done
April 19th, 2025 05:09
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun tale.Enjoyed reading.Well done
April 19th, 2025 05:09
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
sorenbarrett said:
Got to break a few eggs if you want to make an omelet they say. Humorously sad. Found this a day brightener. Thanks for the smile. Written with good rhyme and flow it went down well. Loved it
April 19th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Got to break a few eggs if you want to make an omelet they say. Humorously sad. Found this a day brightener. Thanks for the smile. Written with good rhyme and flow it went down well. Loved it
April 19th, 2025 03:55
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
arqios said:
Cracking beds have happened before so itβs a bit of fun indeed for that to be featured in a poem ππ»ποΈ
April 19th, 2025 01:44
arqios said:
Cracking beds have happened before so itβs a bit of fun indeed for that to be featured in a poem ππ»ποΈ
April 19th, 2025 01:44
Heart or Mind.
Goldfinch60 said:
Both are important in life Tobani, the mind thinks and the heart feels.
Andy
April 19th, 2025 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Both are important in life Tobani, the mind thinks and the heart feels.
Andy
April 19th, 2025 01:39
Pleasing Everyone Else
β¦ π₯ππΆπ©π’π¦π€π₯ β¦ said:
This is brilliant! I especially love in the third stanza when you write, \"don\'t be tied go their thoughts like a mental slave\" and, \"you dong always have go sing other people\'s song\"
April 18th, 2025 12:55
β¦ π₯ππΆπ©π’π¦π€π₯ β¦ said:
This is brilliant! I especially love in the third stanza when you write, \"don\'t be tied go their thoughts like a mental slave\" and, \"you dong always have go sing other people\'s song\"
April 18th, 2025 12:55
Heart or Mind.
Cheeky Missy said:
Since \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked, who can know it?\" (Jeremiah 17:9 [see also verse 10]), the mind seems initially preferable. Yet I cannot help but think the mind is controlled by said heart, until this conundrum leaves me floundering. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Since \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked, who can know it?\" (Jeremiah 17:9 [see also verse 10]), the mind seems initially preferable. Yet I cannot help but think the mind is controlled by said heart, until this conundrum leaves me floundering. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:57
I Got Burned.
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re not allowed to cull laughter with such a macabre and gristly rendition, yet you invariably do, somehow, until I\'m left here at its conclusion, trying to stifle smirks and giggles. How capably rendered with gorgeous imagery and a ghastly, haunting poignancy, yet a very lively sense of humor.
April 18th, 2025 10:52
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re not allowed to cull laughter with such a macabre and gristly rendition, yet you invariably do, somehow, until I\'m left here at its conclusion, trying to stifle smirks and giggles. How capably rendered with gorgeous imagery and a ghastly, haunting poignancy, yet a very lively sense of humor.
April 18th, 2025 10:52
Heart or Mind.
sorenbarrett said:
I love question poems because it leaves it up to the reader and thereby decreases resistance. The question frees the mind to think and choose. Here the question between heart and mind is the age old split between logic and emotion, male and female in traditional thought and as has been thought in old myth the perfect god is a hermaphrodite that shares both qualities. One without the other is hard to imagine Even Star Trek\'s Spock had a little feeling. Very nicely written this poem dichotomized into two three line stanzas
April 18th, 2025 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
I love question poems because it leaves it up to the reader and thereby decreases resistance. The question frees the mind to think and choose. Here the question between heart and mind is the age old split between logic and emotion, male and female in traditional thought and as has been thought in old myth the perfect god is a hermaphrodite that shares both qualities. One without the other is hard to imagine Even Star Trek\'s Spock had a little feeling. Very nicely written this poem dichotomized into two three line stanzas
April 18th, 2025 03:36
Heart or Mind.
David Wakeling said:
Thats a tough question.I think they are both important.Great poem.Made me think
April 18th, 2025 03:01
David Wakeling said:
Thats a tough question.I think they are both important.Great poem.Made me think
April 18th, 2025 03:01
I Got Burned.
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Tobani, the innocent do often get punished.
Andy
April 18th, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Tobani, the innocent do often get punished.
Andy
April 18th, 2025 01:51
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