Comments received on poems by TobaniNataiella
Time Cannot Heal
Neville said:
I enjoyed my visit here today .. and before I go on, just wanted to let you know that .. I also suspect from you avatar, you may follow a Buddhist path or at least be familiar with some of our Princes teachings .. Unfortunately, I am too tired having had a long day and night (hence my late visit here) but had I been more alert may have written some of the more salient points he wrote about pain and suffering, not necessarily for you, but for any others that may follow me here .. Kindest of regards, Neville 😎👍
December 18th, 2024 01:54
Neville said:
I enjoyed my visit here today .. and before I go on, just wanted to let you know that .. I also suspect from you avatar, you may follow a Buddhist path or at least be familiar with some of our Princes teachings .. Unfortunately, I am too tired having had a long day and night (hence my late visit here) but had I been more alert may have written some of the more salient points he wrote about pain and suffering, not necessarily for you, but for any others that may follow me here .. Kindest of regards, Neville 😎👍
December 18th, 2024 01:54
Time Cannot Heal
Dan Williams said:
The myth that \"time heals all wounds\" is a foolish attempt at consolation. At best, sometimes it can mitigate. Oh well. nice work.
December 18th, 2024 01:04
Dan Williams said:
The myth that \"time heals all wounds\" is a foolish attempt at consolation. At best, sometimes it can mitigate. Oh well. nice work.
December 18th, 2024 01:04
Time Cannot Heal
Thomas W Case said:
Words and actions can hurt. Very brave writing. Great job.
December 17th, 2024 22:51
Thomas W Case said:
Words and actions can hurt. Very brave writing. Great job.
December 17th, 2024 22:51
Time Cannot Heal
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome poem,
poignant 😢 and emotional
and eloquently penned!! 🖊️
Love the repeated lines!!
Great read my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 17th, 2024 16:51
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome poem,
poignant 😢 and emotional
and eloquently penned!! 🖊️
Love the repeated lines!!
Great read my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 17th, 2024 16:51
Time Cannot Heal
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Someone needed to hear this message today. And released hurt through writing, can be therapeutic. A fine write.
December 17th, 2024 15:50
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Someone needed to hear this message today. And released hurt through writing, can be therapeutic. A fine write.
December 17th, 2024 15:50
Time Cannot Heal
David Wakeling said:
You are right.Time does not heal anything.I think that we are meant to suffer for what reason I don\'t know
December 17th, 2024 14:44
David Wakeling said:
You are right.Time does not heal anything.I think that we are meant to suffer for what reason I don\'t know
December 17th, 2024 14:44
Time Cannot Heal
arqios said:
That brought me to a choice, a summation that should we choose it, Time could bring about a distancing that could parallel healing. The other choice stands as well. Sometimes to remain wounded is for some the only way to feel something ever again.
December 17th, 2024 08:17
arqios said:
That brought me to a choice, a summation that should we choose it, Time could bring about a distancing that could parallel healing. The other choice stands as well. Sometimes to remain wounded is for some the only way to feel something ever again.
December 17th, 2024 08:17
Time Cannot Heal
sorenbarrett said:
The message is received and heard I have felt it but even this time can heal
December 17th, 2024 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
The message is received and heard I have felt it but even this time can heal
December 17th, 2024 04:15
Sorry Santa / The List
Thad Wilk said:
Haaahaahaaa!! 🤣
Wow three poems all
in A row, 😳what a
great Christmas 🎁
way to go bro!! 🧑🎄
Thanks for sharing, !!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 16th, 2024 19:43
Thad Wilk said:
Haaahaahaaa!! 🤣
Wow three poems all
in A row, 😳what a
great Christmas 🎁
way to go bro!! 🧑🎄
Thanks for sharing, !!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 16th, 2024 19:43
Sorry Santa / The List
Mutley Ravishes said:
Perhaps one fine day your wife (and all the other wives out there) will give HERSELF a break?!
December 16th, 2024 18:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Perhaps one fine day your wife (and all the other wives out there) will give HERSELF a break?!
December 16th, 2024 18:42
Sorry Santa / The List
Neville said:
extra helping like this invariably go down extremely well on the run up to the big day .. Neville 👍
December 16th, 2024 09:04
Neville said:
extra helping like this invariably go down extremely well on the run up to the big day .. Neville 👍
December 16th, 2024 09:04
Sorry Santa / The List
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now these made me laugh. The second one in particular, though, that is me with every list, holiday or otherwise! 🤣 A wonderful write, Tobani! Truly enjoyed! 🙏❤️
December 16th, 2024 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now these made me laugh. The second one in particular, though, that is me with every list, holiday or otherwise! 🤣 A wonderful write, Tobani! Truly enjoyed! 🙏❤️
December 16th, 2024 08:08
Sorry Santa / The List
arqios said:
Oh, 3 in 1! Mighty generous today\'s post is.
December 16th, 2024 06:12
arqios said:
Oh, 3 in 1! Mighty generous today\'s post is.
December 16th, 2024 06:12
Sorry Santa / The List
sorenbarrett said:
The holidays are nice but for me the last of the hat and the cat made my day.
December 16th, 2024 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
The holidays are nice but for me the last of the hat and the cat made my day.
December 16th, 2024 05:14
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Dan Williams said:
Another all too frequent story, well told. Nice work.
December 16th, 2024 00:53
Dan Williams said:
Another all too frequent story, well told. Nice work.
December 16th, 2024 00:53
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
a most poignant write!! 😢
Abuse is a horrible thing
for anyone to have to go through,!! 🙏
Thank you for sharing!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 18:09
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
a most poignant write!! 😢
Abuse is a horrible thing
for anyone to have to go through,!! 🙏
Thank you for sharing!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 18:09
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Cassie58 said:
A heart breaking write Tobani. Your notes made it even sadder. To be separated from your sibling and in care must have been extremely painful for you. Sorry you had to experience this.
December 15th, 2024 14:00
Cassie58 said:
A heart breaking write Tobani. Your notes made it even sadder. To be separated from your sibling and in care must have been extremely painful for you. Sorry you had to experience this.
December 15th, 2024 14:00
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Very touching, simple lines with high impact. Fantastic!
December 15th, 2024 09:57
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Very touching, simple lines with high impact. Fantastic!
December 15th, 2024 09:57
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
arqios said:
That is so touching. My story is the reverse where Mum got between myself and the flying belt and planks of wood.We we’re both battered and bruised at the end of that beating. I knew then at 6 what it meant for someone to take a bullet with my name on it. Bless you, friend.
December 15th, 2024 08:22
arqios said:
That is so touching. My story is the reverse where Mum got between myself and the flying belt and planks of wood.We we’re both battered and bruised at the end of that beating. I knew then at 6 what it meant for someone to take a bullet with my name on it. Bless you, friend.
December 15th, 2024 08:22
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, tragic, write my friend. I could feel every word in this and, I concur with Soren, this is a great write at any age, let alone 12. I am so sad that this was your sister and your experience. I pray that you and your sister\'s were able to stay in contact and close despite the separation. Well done, friend. Well done! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, tragic, write my friend. I could feel every word in this and, I concur with Soren, this is a great write at any age, let alone 12. I am so sad that this was your sister and your experience. I pray that you and your sister\'s were able to stay in contact and close despite the separation. Well done, friend. Well done! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:35
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Neville said:
This is so very ragged and real .. it read like a kick to the stomach .. such poetry needs to be out here for the world to see what really goes on behind closed borders, shutters and doors .. 💜
December 15th, 2024 05:14
Neville said:
This is so very ragged and real .. it read like a kick to the stomach .. such poetry needs to be out here for the world to see what really goes on behind closed borders, shutters and doors .. 💜
December 15th, 2024 05:14
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
sorenbarrett said:
A most exceptional write for a 12 year old. A wonderful write at any age. This poem pulls empathy from the reader for a woman and a child. It is terrible when children have to become parents to their parents. The role reversal may make for strong children but it leaves scars. The feels are in this poem and that makes it art
December 15th, 2024 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most exceptional write for a 12 year old. A wonderful write at any age. This poem pulls empathy from the reader for a woman and a child. It is terrible when children have to become parents to their parents. The role reversal may make for strong children but it leaves scars. The feels are in this poem and that makes it art
December 15th, 2024 04:07
Vlad and Donald
Thad Wilk said:
Donald ( Mr. President )
will resolve this horrible
war most assuredly!
And Ukraine will
once again live safe and free! 🙏
Great poem my friend!!! 😀
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 14th, 2024 21:35
Thad Wilk said:
Donald ( Mr. President )
will resolve this horrible
war most assuredly!
And Ukraine will
once again live safe and free! 🙏
Great poem my friend!!! 😀
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 14th, 2024 21:35
Vlad and Donald
Doggerel Dave said:
Open solid piece with some keen insight into the current situation: “While USA paid for bombs continue to fill the Arab skies” plus next line.
Taking a step or two back, I don’t believe Zelenskyy should ever have played footsie with NATO and the US. This led to perhaps feelings of insecurity on Putin’s part.
But his invasion was/is not excusable.
December 14th, 2024 17:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Open solid piece with some keen insight into the current situation: “While USA paid for bombs continue to fill the Arab skies” plus next line.
Taking a step or two back, I don’t believe Zelenskyy should ever have played footsie with NATO and the US. This led to perhaps feelings of insecurity on Putin’s part.
But his invasion was/is not excusable.
December 14th, 2024 17:46
New Years Resolution
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the read Tobani. I no longer make new year resolutions and these days one year is very much like the last. All good wishes.
December 14th, 2024 16:55
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the read Tobani. I no longer make new year resolutions and these days one year is very much like the last. All good wishes.
December 14th, 2024 16:55
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