Comments received on poems by TobaniNataiella
Natures Wonderful Residents of Africa
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏👏
An awesomazing poem,
captivating
and \" informative\" too!! 🤩
Eye pleasing imagery
much enjoyed thank you!!!
Best regards ✌️ peace y
January 12th, 2025 21:55
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏👏
An awesomazing poem,
captivating
and \" informative\" too!! 🤩
Eye pleasing imagery
much enjoyed thank you!!!
Best regards ✌️ peace y
January 12th, 2025 21:55
Natures Wonderful Residents of Africa
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Loved this nature poem, my dear friend. Nature encompasses all...and we are all connected. Well done, Tobani! I enjoyed this a lot.
January 12th, 2025 12:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Loved this nature poem, my dear friend. Nature encompasses all...and we are all connected. Well done, Tobani! I enjoyed this a lot.
January 12th, 2025 12:12
Natures Wonderful Residents of Africa
Bella Shepard said:
We live in two worlds, the world of human beings and that of animals, funny how we think we are actually different, when in every respect we are the same. Clever, witty, priceless, loved every stanza.
January 12th, 2025 12:12
Bella Shepard said:
We live in two worlds, the world of human beings and that of animals, funny how we think we are actually different, when in every respect we are the same. Clever, witty, priceless, loved every stanza.
January 12th, 2025 12:12
Natures Wonderful Residents of Africa
sorenbarrett said:
This poem although apparently quite upfront makes great use of language for humor and make points. Apparent errors are not but are purposeful if one looks beyond the surface and take on greater meaning. Loved the Cheaters, Tiger with sugar puffs. It would have been flaky and corny to have put it otherwise. The use of African animals and their threatened extinction is a great cause and made for a fun and colorful read. Very nicely done
January 12th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem although apparently quite upfront makes great use of language for humor and make points. Apparent errors are not but are purposeful if one looks beyond the surface and take on greater meaning. Loved the Cheaters, Tiger with sugar puffs. It would have been flaky and corny to have put it otherwise. The use of African animals and their threatened extinction is a great cause and made for a fun and colorful read. Very nicely done
January 12th, 2025 06:26
Natures Wonderful Residents of Africa
arqios said:
I could see this in a safari and hopefully not in a zoo. They aren\'t really suited to wildlife, imo. 🕊️👍 Enjoyed this immensely 🙏🏻
January 12th, 2025 05:37
arqios said:
I could see this in a safari and hopefully not in a zoo. They aren\'t really suited to wildlife, imo. 🕊️👍 Enjoyed this immensely 🙏🏻
January 12th, 2025 05:37
Natures Wonderful Residents of Africa
LP2187 said:
A great depiction of wildlife and the connections within the animal kingdom, a lovely poem.
January 12th, 2025 05:21
LP2187 said:
A great depiction of wildlife and the connections within the animal kingdom, a lovely poem.
January 12th, 2025 05:21
Where Do The Lonely People Go
Olivia. said:
When you write a poem so relatable, how could you possibly feel lonely?
I connect to you poem loads! Thanks x
January 12th, 2025 03:17
Olivia. said:
When you write a poem so relatable, how could you possibly feel lonely?
I connect to you poem loads! Thanks x
January 12th, 2025 03:17
Where Do The Lonely People Go
Neville said:
I distinctly recall that I used to think along very similar lines, but that was long ago now and long before I found out exactly where the majority of them spend so much of their time trying to make ends meet and just to survive .. So very sadly enjoyed .. Neville
January 12th, 2025 02:21
Neville said:
I distinctly recall that I used to think along very similar lines, but that was long ago now and long before I found out exactly where the majority of them spend so much of their time trying to make ends meet and just to survive .. So very sadly enjoyed .. Neville
January 12th, 2025 02:21
Where Do The Lonely People Go
Thad Wilk said:
A poignant 😢
and thought
provoking poem
and thoughts penned!! 🤔
Really pulls on
the heartstrings!
Thanks for sharing my friend! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 11th, 2025 21:52
Thad Wilk said:
A poignant 😢
and thought
provoking poem
and thoughts penned!! 🤔
Really pulls on
the heartstrings!
Thanks for sharing my friend! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 11th, 2025 21:52
Where Do The Lonely People Go
David Wakeling said:
Sadly this palace is the home of the lonely.Maybe try getting a kitten they fill the loneliness gap.. A raw and sad poem but well written
January 11th, 2025 16:04
David Wakeling said:
Sadly this palace is the home of the lonely.Maybe try getting a kitten they fill the loneliness gap.. A raw and sad poem but well written
January 11th, 2025 16:04
Where Do The Lonely People Go
Bella Shepard said:
I sometimes think that we have created the perfect conditions for lonliness in our technological world. Where once people gathered as families and communities, it is now easier to self isolate with cell phones and social media where we can often be anonymous. For those who have always dealt with feelings of being different, it is an empty place in which they struggle. Such a topical theme my friend, and one that deserves much attention. Thank you!
January 11th, 2025 13:44
Bella Shepard said:
I sometimes think that we have created the perfect conditions for lonliness in our technological world. Where once people gathered as families and communities, it is now easier to self isolate with cell phones and social media where we can often be anonymous. For those who have always dealt with feelings of being different, it is an empty place in which they struggle. Such a topical theme my friend, and one that deserves much attention. Thank you!
January 11th, 2025 13:44
Where Do The Lonely People Go
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hauntingly beautiful. I know this feeling my friend. I don\'t even live alone and I know this feeling. Loneliness can be a killer. Wonderful poem! 🌹👏
January 11th, 2025 12:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hauntingly beautiful. I know this feeling my friend. I don\'t even live alone and I know this feeling. Loneliness can be a killer. Wonderful poem! 🌹👏
January 11th, 2025 12:16
Where Do The Lonely People Go
Cassie58 said:
This poem touched me because I see lonely people every week when I go to visit my aunt. She has dementia and many of them do too. So many of them never get a visit and yet have family. What’s that all about? And then others confined in their homes without friends or family. This poem took me in many directions and filled me with sadness. Loneliness is a curse. I have never known it and I count my blessings. Have a good weekend Tobani.
January 11th, 2025 09:25
Cassie58 said:
This poem touched me because I see lonely people every week when I go to visit my aunt. She has dementia and many of them do too. So many of them never get a visit and yet have family. What’s that all about? And then others confined in their homes without friends or family. This poem took me in many directions and filled me with sadness. Loneliness is a curse. I have never known it and I count my blessings. Have a good weekend Tobani.
January 11th, 2025 09:25
Where Do The Lonely People Go
Soman Ragavan said:
See the song \"Where do broken hearts go\" by Whitney Houston. Lonely people have nowhere to go in this wide world. They slug it alone till a lonely death. However, we poets leave our writings behind on sites like this one. Soman Ragavan. 11 January 2025.
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January 11th, 2025 08:13
Soman Ragavan said:
See the song \"Where do broken hearts go\" by Whitney Houston. Lonely people have nowhere to go in this wide world. They slug it alone till a lonely death. However, we poets leave our writings behind on sites like this one. Soman Ragavan. 11 January 2025.
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January 11th, 2025 08:13
Where Do The Lonely People Go
LP2187 said:
We all at some time feel lonely and want to know our own purpose. A great poem!
January 11th, 2025 07:56
LP2187 said:
We all at some time feel lonely and want to know our own purpose. A great poem!
January 11th, 2025 07:56
Where Do The Lonely People Go
sorenbarrett said:
You found it indeed a most clever write bringing the reader back to the begining of the poem and answering the question without directly answering it. Very nice.
January 11th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
You found it indeed a most clever write bringing the reader back to the begining of the poem and answering the question without directly answering it. Very nice.
January 11th, 2025 05:06
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Dan Williams said:
What would we do without clouds to express ourselves? \"I’m in desperate need of a blue sunlit sky. As the clouds gently roll on by\" sums it up nicely.
January 11th, 2025 01:38
Dan Williams said:
What would we do without clouds to express ourselves? \"I’m in desperate need of a blue sunlit sky. As the clouds gently roll on by\" sums it up nicely.
January 11th, 2025 01:38
I Might Be A Lunatic
NafisaSB said:
i don\'t think it is being a lunatic - but definitely over optimistic - and i second all your beliefs - they are worth working for
beautifully expressed
January 11th, 2025 01:07
NafisaSB said:
i don\'t think it is being a lunatic - but definitely over optimistic - and i second all your beliefs - they are worth working for
beautifully expressed
January 11th, 2025 01:07
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Tobani, Sweet Imagery
January 11th, 2025 00:33
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Tobani, Sweet Imagery
January 11th, 2025 00:33
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love the passion you put into this. I can relate to how life is always changing, but without change, we can\'t grow. I love the read.
January 10th, 2025 16:23
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I love the passion you put into this. I can relate to how life is always changing, but without change, we can\'t grow. I love the read.
January 10th, 2025 16:23
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a plee.A man alone bargaining with a life that will not negotiate.He eventually gives in to the Master, Time.I enjoyed this
January 10th, 2025 15:25
David Wakeling said:
This is quite a plee.A man alone bargaining with a life that will not negotiate.He eventually gives in to the Master, Time.I enjoyed this
January 10th, 2025 15:25
Love and Hate
Princess Osariemen Aihie said:
Yh very difficult to seperate. Well written
January 10th, 2025 14:01
Princess Osariemen Aihie said:
Yh very difficult to seperate. Well written
January 10th, 2025 14:01
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Princess Osariemen Aihie said:
What a melancholic poetry. I love it.well written
January 10th, 2025 13:59
Princess Osariemen Aihie said:
What a melancholic poetry. I love it.well written
January 10th, 2025 13:59
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
LP2187 said:
The journey of existence... a very interesting poem about struggles of life and the growth over time making one resilient and continue to fight challenges, I loved reading this!
January 10th, 2025 13:12
LP2187 said:
The journey of existence... a very interesting poem about struggles of life and the growth over time making one resilient and continue to fight challenges, I loved reading this!
January 10th, 2025 13:12
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Bella Shepard said:
You so eloquently portray the journey of life, however brief for us, we are that tiny imprint upon nature. Beautiful!
January 10th, 2025 10:49
Bella Shepard said:
You so eloquently portray the journey of life, however brief for us, we are that tiny imprint upon nature. Beautiful!
January 10th, 2025 10:49
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Melancholic and lyrical, this is truly a beautiful poem, my dear friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 10th, 2025 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Melancholic and lyrical, this is truly a beautiful poem, my dear friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 10th, 2025 10:29
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
arqios said:
Both a journey and a mantra-like melody… and all the while “the clouds gently roll on by…”
January 10th, 2025 08:07
arqios said:
Both a journey and a mantra-like melody… and all the while “the clouds gently roll on by…”
January 10th, 2025 08:07
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Cassie58 said:
Really lovely stanzas and the repetition works so well. Slightly melancholic yet beautiful as well Tobani. All good wishes.
January 10th, 2025 07:55
Cassie58 said:
Really lovely stanzas and the repetition works so well. Slightly melancholic yet beautiful as well Tobani. All good wishes.
January 10th, 2025 07:55
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