Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Grace and Dignity.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words cut deep, but true grace rises above bitterness. Perhaps peace begins when we release the need to wound.
July 8th, 2025 13:37
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words cut deep, but true grace rises above bitterness. Perhaps peace begins when we release the need to wound.
July 8th, 2025 13:37
Grace and Dignity.
Neville said:
Sometimes some things just need to be said & or written down .. I prefer the dual approach .. Well poemed my friend .. Neville
July 8th, 2025 10:30
Neville said:
Sometimes some things just need to be said & or written down .. I prefer the dual approach .. Well poemed my friend .. Neville
July 8th, 2025 10:30
Grace and Dignity.
Damaso said:
Thank you so much for sharing your words. They flow like healing water washing away the wounds. It\'s always a pleasure to stop by and read. Best regards.
July 8th, 2025 08:05
Damaso said:
Thank you so much for sharing your words. They flow like healing water washing away the wounds. It\'s always a pleasure to stop by and read. Best regards.
July 8th, 2025 08:05
Grace and Dignity.
David Wakeling said:
This poem expresses a harsh truth.None of us deserve eternal peace and freedom.But that is the tough facts of life.Made me think
July 8th, 2025 04:46
David Wakeling said:
This poem expresses a harsh truth.None of us deserve eternal peace and freedom.But that is the tough facts of life.Made me think
July 8th, 2025 04:46
Grace and Dignity.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of contradictions that boggle the mind. Unlocking something eternally locked and how do you lock up freedom? How does one walk through with honesty, grace, and dignity when one has not lived that way, especially with it being more than one deserves. This sounds like political claptrap before an election where all is promised and nothing given, straddling a fence as the best defense. A fun read and well designed a fave Oh by the way Tobani are you running for office?
July 8th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of contradictions that boggle the mind. Unlocking something eternally locked and how do you lock up freedom? How does one walk through with honesty, grace, and dignity when one has not lived that way, especially with it being more than one deserves. This sounds like political claptrap before an election where all is promised and nothing given, straddling a fence as the best defense. A fun read and well designed a fave Oh by the way Tobani are you running for office?
July 8th, 2025 04:13
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
NafisaSB said:
yes, seeds will sprout much better when tended with love and care. true words indeed
July 7th, 2025 23:04
NafisaSB said:
yes, seeds will sprout much better when tended with love and care. true words indeed
July 7th, 2025 23:04
Butterfly.
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re so irresistibly winsome and endearing with this gorgeous number. Rendered to effect with tasteful imagery and a charming poignancy, I love it, and you. Thank you for sharing.
July 7th, 2025 18:52
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re so irresistibly winsome and endearing with this gorgeous number. Rendered to effect with tasteful imagery and a charming poignancy, I love it, and you. Thank you for sharing.
July 7th, 2025 18:52
Butterfly.
Doggerel Dave said:
Nature\'s artwork in mobile form. Compelled to be fascinated by a butterfly. Caught that in your words, Tobani.
July 7th, 2025 17:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Nature\'s artwork in mobile form. Compelled to be fascinated by a butterfly. Caught that in your words, Tobani.
July 7th, 2025 17:38
Children Had Fun.
Jeremy Leach said:
I was compelled to keep reading and I like the originality. A mix of entertainment but also perhaps touching on some deeper topics. Whatever it is, without the trip there wouldn\'t have been the poem, and I enjoyed reading it.
July 7th, 2025 12:11
Jeremy Leach said:
I was compelled to keep reading and I like the originality. A mix of entertainment but also perhaps touching on some deeper topics. Whatever it is, without the trip there wouldn\'t have been the poem, and I enjoyed reading it.
July 7th, 2025 12:11
Butterfly.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani…this one touched something deep. 🦋 That first half? Felt like my mirror. That second? Like a hope I still dare to hold. You captured both truths with such tenderness and clarity. Quietly powerful, my friend. Truly beautiful. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani…this one touched something deep. 🦋 That first half? Felt like my mirror. That second? Like a hope I still dare to hold. You captured both truths with such tenderness and clarity. Quietly powerful, my friend. Truly beautiful. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 09:07
Wise Man Say (19)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All of these are wise, of course...for you are wise man who say! LOL! That said, that last bit there...so very wise! Wonderful job, Tobani! Love it my friend! 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All of these are wise, of course...for you are wise man who say! LOL! That said, that last bit there...so very wise! Wonderful job, Tobani! Love it my friend! 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 08:22
Best Friend Harry
Hollow Enigma said:
Amazing poem with so much love. Im glad you have someone like harry!
July 7th, 2025 06:43
Hollow Enigma said:
Amazing poem with so much love. Im glad you have someone like harry!
July 7th, 2025 06:43
Butterfly.
arqios said:
The awesome beauty and symbolism of the butterfly, superbly enjoyable🕊️🙏🏻
July 7th, 2025 05:38
arqios said:
The awesome beauty and symbolism of the butterfly, superbly enjoyable🕊️🙏🏻
July 7th, 2025 05:38
Butterfly.
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful journey poem.The butterfly is seen as madly flying in circles at first and then gracefully dancing in the air.The author changes from questioning if the butterfly mimics his life to wanted to be the butterfly.Wonderful philosphical question here.Enjoyed reading
July 7th, 2025 04:27
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful journey poem.The butterfly is seen as madly flying in circles at first and then gracefully dancing in the air.The author changes from questioning if the butterfly mimics his life to wanted to be the butterfly.Wonderful philosphical question here.Enjoyed reading
July 7th, 2025 04:27
Butterfly.
sorenbarrett said:
The two sides of a coin being the same coin but seen differently. I love this dichotomy that you have depicted in this poem. And the image of a butterfly so well chosen image of metamorphosis, subject of the ancient story of the wise man\'s dream of being a butterfly and now not knowing if he is a butterfly dreaming he is a person or a person that dreamed he was a butterfly. A fave
July 7th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
The two sides of a coin being the same coin but seen differently. I love this dichotomy that you have depicted in this poem. And the image of a butterfly so well chosen image of metamorphosis, subject of the ancient story of the wise man\'s dream of being a butterfly and now not knowing if he is a butterfly dreaming he is a person or a person that dreamed he was a butterfly. A fave
July 7th, 2025 04:19
Wise Man Say (19)
MendedFences27 said:
Some wonder wisdom here. I loved the one about a \'door.\" - Phil A.
July 6th, 2025 12:08
MendedFences27 said:
Some wonder wisdom here. I loved the one about a \'door.\" - Phil A.
July 6th, 2025 12:08
Wise Man Say (19)
Damaso said:
\"A Kind Word Can Make
Someone’s Day.\" Often, you don\'t know how much those words might be worth on the other side. Always grateful for the teachings of a wise man. Best regards.
July 6th, 2025 11:28
Damaso said:
\"A Kind Word Can Make
Someone’s Day.\" Often, you don\'t know how much those words might be worth on the other side. Always grateful for the teachings of a wise man. Best regards.
July 6th, 2025 11:28
Wise Man Say (19)
NafisaSB said:
So full of wisdom today- hats off to you for this enjoyable verse
July 6th, 2025 10:11
NafisaSB said:
So full of wisdom today- hats off to you for this enjoyable verse
July 6th, 2025 10:11
Hello or Goodbye.
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh delicious conundrums! Oh sweetly twisting pretty number. Oh irresistible mystery! Charming and superbly rendered with gorgeous imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
July 6th, 2025 09:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh delicious conundrums! Oh sweetly twisting pretty number. Oh irresistible mystery! Charming and superbly rendered with gorgeous imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
July 6th, 2025 09:55
Fondly Remembered.
Cheeky Missy said:
Whether or not thy wish is granted I canna say certainly, however, history is a very, very fascinating study, whence my favorite authors in highschool: Sir Walter Scott, James Fenimore Cooper, and Jane Austen. More power to you, delving into that most engaging subject. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 6th, 2025 09:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Whether or not thy wish is granted I canna say certainly, however, history is a very, very fascinating study, whence my favorite authors in highschool: Sir Walter Scott, James Fenimore Cooper, and Jane Austen. More power to you, delving into that most engaging subject. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 6th, 2025 09:53
Wise Man Say (19)
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! Now my late father\'s warning returns as I mourn my ruined figure thanks to your excellent reminder. I love this! Pithy sayings few can argue with and laced with such humor it\'s like Mary Poppins sang about a little sugar helping the medicine to go down more easily. Delightful and beautifully rendered with a touch of imagery and haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 6th, 2025 09:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! Now my late father\'s warning returns as I mourn my ruined figure thanks to your excellent reminder. I love this! Pithy sayings few can argue with and laced with such humor it\'s like Mary Poppins sang about a little sugar helping the medicine to go down more easily. Delightful and beautifully rendered with a touch of imagery and haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 6th, 2025 09:48
Wise Man Say (19)
David Wakeling said:
I really like these gems of wisdom. A great collection here mi amigo
July 6th, 2025 04:29
David Wakeling said:
I really like these gems of wisdom. A great collection here mi amigo
July 6th, 2025 04:29
Wise Man Say (19)
sorenbarrett said:
There are at least two there today that struck home and are wiser that the wisest going deep. The last one particularly is most pertinent although on the surface it seems humerus it is so true it is funny. Loved todays selection
July 6th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
There are at least two there today that struck home and are wiser that the wisest going deep. The last one particularly is most pertinent although on the surface it seems humerus it is so true it is funny. Loved todays selection
July 6th, 2025 04:11
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