Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
To Be My Fathers Son
Neville said:
We none of us know what exactly shaped our neighbour until we hear it from them or read it in a newspaper .. What an excellent piece of literature encompassing a life and perfectly poemed, my good man .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 09:34
Neville said:
We none of us know what exactly shaped our neighbour until we hear it from them or read it in a newspaper .. What an excellent piece of literature encompassing a life and perfectly poemed, my good man .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 09:34
The Same Picture Frame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Tobani! Thought-provoking, that makes me think of the old Heraclitus adage, \"You cannot step into the same river twice\". Change is always a reality...the only constant in a world of utter chaos. Wonderfully expressed. 🌹👏
February 20th, 2025 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Tobani! Thought-provoking, that makes me think of the old Heraclitus adage, \"You cannot step into the same river twice\". Change is always a reality...the only constant in a world of utter chaos. Wonderfully expressed. 🌹👏
February 20th, 2025 08:43
The Same Picture Frame
Cassie58 said:
A lovely write Tobani. Has such an air of calm and peace about it. Dawn is a beautiful time of the day. My favourite quiet time. Have a beautiful Thursday.
February 20th, 2025 07:04
Cassie58 said:
A lovely write Tobani. Has such an air of calm and peace about it. Dawn is a beautiful time of the day. My favourite quiet time. Have a beautiful Thursday.
February 20th, 2025 07:04
The Same Picture Frame
teardrop said:
I gotta say, this is so far one of my favorites of yours I have read so far. Love the imagery, the rhymes and the story it tells. Great write.
February 20th, 2025 06:17
teardrop said:
I gotta say, this is so far one of my favorites of yours I have read so far. Love the imagery, the rhymes and the story it tells. Great write.
February 20th, 2025 06:17
The Same Picture Frame
arqios said:
A picture window 🪟 with a new view every day🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:03
arqios said:
A picture window 🪟 with a new view every day🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:03
The Same Picture Frame
sorenbarrett said:
Change the only constant. A most beautiful poem of how it happens not just over night but in the blink of an eye. Great metaphors used here and the wording is perfect for the mood.
February 20th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Change the only constant. A most beautiful poem of how it happens not just over night but in the blink of an eye. Great metaphors used here and the wording is perfect for the mood.
February 20th, 2025 04:46
The Same Picture Frame
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Tobani
Reflective And Soothing
February 20th, 2025 04:31
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Tobani
Reflective And Soothing
February 20th, 2025 04:31
To Be My Fathers Son
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Tobani, it is amazing how lives can be changed by one new step in the right direction.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Tobani, it is amazing how lives can be changed by one new step in the right direction.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:09
To Be My Fathers Son
Cassie58 said:
An interesting account of someone who turned their life round for the better. Most enjoyable Tobani. He had a rotten start. All good wishes.
February 19th, 2025 17:13
Cassie58 said:
An interesting account of someone who turned their life round for the better. Most enjoyable Tobani. He had a rotten start. All good wishes.
February 19th, 2025 17:13
To Be My Fathers Son
Michael Edwards said:
A real engaging write which held me to the end - a super piece.
February 19th, 2025 06:37
Michael Edwards said:
A real engaging write which held me to the end - a super piece.
February 19th, 2025 06:37
To Be My Fathers Son
arqios said:
I had a cousin who was once a chief of wharfies, they had it rough, those blokes and lads. But hailing from an island, they always had provisions even when sailing and flying were canceled due to the weather and such.
February 19th, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
I had a cousin who was once a chief of wharfies, they had it rough, those blokes and lads. But hailing from an island, they always had provisions even when sailing and flying were canceled due to the weather and such.
February 19th, 2025 05:35
To Be My Fathers Son
David Wakeling said:
Some raw honesty here. But always taking the right lesson from life\'s experience good and bad. Excellent hopeful poem
February 19th, 2025 05:24
David Wakeling said:
Some raw honesty here. But always taking the right lesson from life\'s experience good and bad. Excellent hopeful poem
February 19th, 2025 05:24
To Be My Fathers Son
sorenbarrett said:
Life of hard knocks. A great prodigal son type story that keeps the reader held by the story. Nicely done
February 19th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Life of hard knocks. A great prodigal son type story that keeps the reader held by the story. Nicely done
February 19th, 2025 04:54
Two People In One
Goldfinch60 said:
Our home is the two of us in one mind Tobani where love rules.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Our home is the two of us in one mind Tobani where love rules.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:27
Two People In One
Neville said:
Two minds that think alike in different ways or one undecided mind .. or a portrait of the unity of opposites .. ain’t we complex things eh’ .. Neville 🧠😎👍
February 18th, 2025 14:16
Neville said:
Two minds that think alike in different ways or one undecided mind .. or a portrait of the unity of opposites .. ain’t we complex things eh’ .. Neville 🧠😎👍
February 18th, 2025 14:16
Two People In One
Bloomingdale said:
Our home is a happy pleasurable place❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:05
Bloomingdale said:
Our home is a happy pleasurable place❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:05
The World Holds It`s Breath
Doggerel Dave said:
Faved. What could I possibly add?
February 18th, 2025 06:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Faved. What could I possibly add?
February 18th, 2025 06:40
Two People In One
sorenbarrett said:
Anyone who has lived with a borderline personality, a bipolar disorder, even a histrionic personality can feel this. Clever and nicely structured it sends its message powerfully. This deserves a fave
February 18th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Anyone who has lived with a borderline personality, a bipolar disorder, even a histrionic personality can feel this. Clever and nicely structured it sends its message powerfully. This deserves a fave
February 18th, 2025 05:09
Two People In One
arqios said:
Likened into one with multi personality challenges, a Jekyll and a Hyde. Very engaging 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:11
arqios said:
Likened into one with multi personality challenges, a Jekyll and a Hyde. Very engaging 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:11
The World Holds It`s Breath
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Tobani very well written, all he cares about is what is in it for him and not care about anybody else.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Tobani very well written, all he cares about is what is in it for him and not care about anybody else.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:49
The World Holds It`s Breath
MendedFences27 said:
Truth, and nothing but the truth. A well-spoken piece. I feel like it will all come crashing down on him soon. (You reap what you sow). I pray for it to be true. Well spoken, - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:05
MendedFences27 said:
Truth, and nothing but the truth. A well-spoken piece. I feel like it will all come crashing down on him soon. (You reap what you sow). I pray for it to be true. Well spoken, - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:05
The World Holds It`s Breath
John Prophet said:
At 72 I’ve been around the block a few times. There was a saying no so long ago that everyone was entitled to their opinion.
I lost friends and family in the last few years as they pushed me away because my opinion did not conform with theirs. Sad….
February 17th, 2025 19:04
John Prophet said:
At 72 I’ve been around the block a few times. There was a saying no so long ago that everyone was entitled to their opinion.
I lost friends and family in the last few years as they pushed me away because my opinion did not conform with theirs. Sad….
February 17th, 2025 19:04
The World Holds It`s Breath
Cassie58 said:
That’s quite an itch Tobani. An epic one and I congratulate you on your patience. So much content here and much to be worried about. We wait with bated breath. Hope your Monday has been good.
February 17th, 2025 14:18
Cassie58 said:
That’s quite an itch Tobani. An epic one and I congratulate you on your patience. So much content here and much to be worried about. We wait with bated breath. Hope your Monday has been good.
February 17th, 2025 14:18
The World Holds It`s Breath
Neville said:
Damn, this is about as true as it gets .. and darn near made me cry with frustration and anger .. Needed to be said tho\' .. nuff said .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:22
Neville said:
Damn, this is about as true as it gets .. and darn near made me cry with frustration and anger .. Needed to be said tho\' .. nuff said .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:22
The World Holds It`s Breath
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Write on! It makes me feel less alone! LOL! That itch will come back, no doubt! Agent Orange Menace will see to that. (Oops, did I say that out loud? 🤣) Well done, on this, though I wish it weren\'t so damn true. 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Write on! It makes me feel less alone! LOL! That itch will come back, no doubt! Agent Orange Menace will see to that. (Oops, did I say that out loud? 🤣) Well done, on this, though I wish it weren\'t so damn true. 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:19
The World Holds It`s Breath
David Wakeling said:
There is so much to unpack here. I think recent events have made us all get ready for bad things to happen. Let\'s face it wars are happening around the world so more could be coming.Let\'s hope things improve.An amazing poem
February 17th, 2025 05:38
David Wakeling said:
There is so much to unpack here. I think recent events have made us all get ready for bad things to happen. Let\'s face it wars are happening around the world so more could be coming.Let\'s hope things improve.An amazing poem
February 17th, 2025 05:38
The World Holds It`s Breath
sorenbarrett said:
Strong feelings something that America has not had in a long time. Wait and see if the bull shit that has been spread is a growth stimulant or too strong and burns the roots. When the horrific becomes humorous all we can do is laugh. Good and passionate write.
February 17th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Strong feelings something that America has not had in a long time. Wait and see if the bull shit that has been spread is a growth stimulant or too strong and burns the roots. When the horrific becomes humorous all we can do is laugh. Good and passionate write.
February 17th, 2025 05:10
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