Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Head Battles The Heart.
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, you\'re too good! If only! \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked: who can know it?\"(Jeremiah 17:9). Oh, I can\'t find words to express how much I love, love, love this gorgeous number of yours!!! Exquisite and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, delightful, albeit bittersweet poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, I love it!!!
June 4th, 2025 14:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, you\'re too good! If only! \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked: who can know it?\"(Jeremiah 17:9). Oh, I can\'t find words to express how much I love, love, love this gorgeous number of yours!!! Exquisite and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, delightful, albeit bittersweet poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, I love it!!!
June 4th, 2025 14:45
False Impressions.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words peel back layers, revealing truth beneath the surface. A powerful reminder that authenticity lives within, beyond any facade.
June 4th, 2025 11:46
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words peel back layers, revealing truth beneath the surface. A powerful reminder that authenticity lives within, beyond any facade.
June 4th, 2025 11:46
False Impressions.
David Wakeling said:
Yes this is so true.It is what is inside that matters. An enjoyable read compadre
June 4th, 2025 04:24
David Wakeling said:
Yes this is so true.It is what is inside that matters. An enjoyable read compadre
June 4th, 2025 04:24
False Impressions.
sorenbarrett said:
It has always been interesting to me why white people wish to be darker but discriminate darker skin and why darker people want to be lighter. A mind provoking read.
June 4th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
It has always been interesting to me why white people wish to be darker but discriminate darker skin and why darker people want to be lighter. A mind provoking read.
June 4th, 2025 04:18
Wise Man Say (11).
Jan bach said:
Loved it!! SO true, thought provoking which turns to fun - but still true !
Thank you.
Jan bach.
June 4th, 2025 03:46
Jan bach said:
Loved it!! SO true, thought provoking which turns to fun - but still true !
Thank you.
Jan bach.
June 4th, 2025 03:46
False Impressions.
arqios said:
We still often judge the outward appearance though. Good stuff🕊️🙏🏻
June 4th, 2025 03:03
arqios said:
We still often judge the outward appearance though. Good stuff🕊️🙏🏻
June 4th, 2025 03:03
Head Battles The Heart.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true but when head and heart are as one life is wonderful.
Andy
June 4th, 2025 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true but when head and heart are as one life is wonderful.
Andy
June 4th, 2025 01:13
Head Battles The Heart.
Damaso said:
What a beautiful piece. In my experience, nothing I\'ve ever done with my heart has ever been regretted, but the mind always speaks first, and with good arguments, even though they\'re usually just calculations. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 3rd, 2025 16:37
Damaso said:
What a beautiful piece. In my experience, nothing I\'ve ever done with my heart has ever been regretted, but the mind always speaks first, and with good arguments, even though they\'re usually just calculations. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 3rd, 2025 16:37
Head Battles The Heart.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The head and the heart, two vital to our existence, physically and philosophically. I have found many who neglect over the other, do so to their own peril. This poem, as I read it, is about the balancing act needed to keep both sides at bay. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 3rd, 2025 14:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The head and the heart, two vital to our existence, physically and philosophically. I have found many who neglect over the other, do so to their own peril. This poem, as I read it, is about the balancing act needed to keep both sides at bay. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 3rd, 2025 14:48
Head Battles The Heart.
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing work. Very well constructed. It puts the Head against the Head in an age-old battle. A person\'s feelings and a person\'s logic are shown in conflict at first but resolve that at the end. Well done
June 3rd, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing work. Very well constructed. It puts the Head against the Head in an age-old battle. A person\'s feelings and a person\'s logic are shown in conflict at first but resolve that at the end. Well done
June 3rd, 2025 04:14
Head Battles The Heart.
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the differences between logic and emotion and how they do not always agree. This time the head came out on top but it is not always so. A fun and very enjoyable read.
June 3rd, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the differences between logic and emotion and how they do not always agree. This time the head came out on top but it is not always so. A fun and very enjoyable read.
June 3rd, 2025 03:38
Natures S.O.S.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, we are destroying our world through greed and selfishness.
Andy
June 3rd, 2025 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, we are destroying our world through greed and selfishness.
Andy
June 3rd, 2025 01:43
Natures S.O.S.
Doggerel Dave said:
What percentage of the population deserves to go anyway? You have clearly diagnosed the sickness, but how many listen? I do even as it makes me feel impotent.
As usual Tobani, you have clear vision, and for that I must thank you.
June 2nd, 2025 19:47
Doggerel Dave said:
What percentage of the population deserves to go anyway? You have clearly diagnosed the sickness, but how many listen? I do even as it makes me feel impotent.
As usual Tobani, you have clear vision, and for that I must thank you.
June 2nd, 2025 19:47
Natures S.O.S.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem powerfully captures nature’s despair and humanity’s reckless destruction. The raw emotion and urgent message strike deep, demanding reflection. A heartbreaking yet necessary call to action before it’s too late.
June 2nd, 2025 13:57
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem powerfully captures nature’s despair and humanity’s reckless destruction. The raw emotion and urgent message strike deep, demanding reflection. A heartbreaking yet necessary call to action before it’s too late.
June 2nd, 2025 13:57
Natures S.O.S.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads like one of the judgments being poured out in Revelation. Most people miss it, but that book is highly ecological—God’s grief and anger are deeply tied to the way humanity has ravaged the earth. That’s part of why there’s a new creation in Revelation 21.Your poem is totally in that spirit. I highly approve. This is a very, very important ecological, and I would even say spiritual, work. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 2nd, 2025 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads like one of the judgments being poured out in Revelation. Most people miss it, but that book is highly ecological—God’s grief and anger are deeply tied to the way humanity has ravaged the earth. That’s part of why there’s a new creation in Revelation 21.Your poem is totally in that spirit. I highly approve. This is a very, very important ecological, and I would even say spiritual, work. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 2nd, 2025 07:29
Natures S.O.S.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful point made Tobani it is hard not to stomp out flowers in the path of a riot. The balance of nature is overturned when the population of a species outgrows its controls. Answer that no one wants to see is (Too many people) a fave for the message my friend
June 2nd, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful point made Tobani it is hard not to stomp out flowers in the path of a riot. The balance of nature is overturned when the population of a species outgrows its controls. Answer that no one wants to see is (Too many people) a fave for the message my friend
June 2nd, 2025 04:31
Natures S.O.S.
David Wakeling said:
This is an important poem with an important message.The amount of destruction is alarming especial of the extinction of species.Sad but true.
June 2nd, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
This is an important poem with an important message.The amount of destruction is alarming especial of the extinction of species.Sad but true.
June 2nd, 2025 04:14
Natures S.O.S.
arqios said:
When we listen and heed nature we survive in harmony together 🕊️🙏🏻
June 2nd, 2025 03:07
arqios said:
When we listen and heed nature we survive in harmony together 🕊️🙏🏻
June 2nd, 2025 03:07
Wise Man Say (14)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wise man says
when you look in a mirror
you see the reverse of yourself.
Andy
June 2nd, 2025 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wise man says
when you look in a mirror
you see the reverse of yourself.
Andy
June 2nd, 2025 02:11
Jolly Fun!!!
RSM0812 said:
Lol I\'m not sure if I feel soor for Mary or I want to tell her to quit eating so much food.
June 1st, 2025 23:33
RSM0812 said:
Lol I\'m not sure if I feel soor for Mary or I want to tell her to quit eating so much food.
June 1st, 2025 23:33
In My Heart I Cry.
Cirawrites01 said:
This is so true, I almost cried reading cause I relate hard, it\'s a different kind of pain when you don\'t have tears but your heart is aching, and the mask you have to wear because the moment you let it down, people are gonna keep away,, it\'s like being the most funniest person in the group and once you lay the smile to rest the face, they ask \"Are you okay? You look sad, everything fine?\" I mean, I was just resting my face, but deep down I was broken and I just couldn\'t smile that day because I was deep in my pain to put the mask up...
June 1st, 2025 22:45
Cirawrites01 said:
This is so true, I almost cried reading cause I relate hard, it\'s a different kind of pain when you don\'t have tears but your heart is aching, and the mask you have to wear because the moment you let it down, people are gonna keep away,, it\'s like being the most funniest person in the group and once you lay the smile to rest the face, they ask \"Are you okay? You look sad, everything fine?\" I mean, I was just resting my face, but deep down I was broken and I just couldn\'t smile that day because I was deep in my pain to put the mask up...
June 1st, 2025 22:45
Broken Dreams.
Cirawrites01 said:
It really hurts when your dreams break apart and all the things you hold deep in, you can\'t even express it cause it\'d hurt everyone around you, I really love this short verse and I relate a lot to it
June 1st, 2025 22:41
Cirawrites01 said:
It really hurts when your dreams break apart and all the things you hold deep in, you can\'t even express it cause it\'d hurt everyone around you, I really love this short verse and I relate a lot to it
June 1st, 2025 22:41
Wise Man Say (14)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
But by then, there might be 40 more 😂 ...and I, for one, would welcome that! Well done, my friend. These delivered! 🌹👏
June 1st, 2025 16:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
But by then, there might be 40 more 😂 ...and I, for one, would welcome that! Well done, my friend. These delivered! 🌹👏
June 1st, 2025 16:35
Jolly Fun!!!
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious. So this is Harry\'s princess, eh?! La dee. Poor girl. I hope he and she manage to live happily ever after despite these minor incidents. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 11:09
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious. So this is Harry\'s princess, eh?! La dee. Poor girl. I hope he and she manage to live happily ever after despite these minor incidents. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 11:09
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