Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Vlad (My Friend)!!.
sorenbarrett said:
The introduction of historical land conflict and the bizarre introduction of present day justification, if that word even makes sense, gets a fave. Cleverly woven in it made me laugh and at this time of the morning not an easy task. Good one Tobani
August 18th, 2025 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
The introduction of historical land conflict and the bizarre introduction of present day justification, if that word even makes sense, gets a fave. Cleverly woven in it made me laugh and at this time of the morning not an easy task. Good one Tobani
August 18th, 2025 03:39
Vlad (My Friend)!!.
David Wakeling said:
This is clever.Its a satirical take on the Trump Putin meetings.Sadly I dont think those two idiots will do the right thing.Lets hope sanity prevails.Enjoyable read
August 18th, 2025 02:46
David Wakeling said:
This is clever.Its a satirical take on the Trump Putin meetings.Sadly I dont think those two idiots will do the right thing.Lets hope sanity prevails.Enjoyable read
August 18th, 2025 02:46
Wise Man Say (25)
Cheeky Missy said:
Your 4th one dredged images of a wife beating her hubby over the head with a saucepan. Charming and thought-provoking with excellent imagery and winsome good humor, not to mention a haunting, waltzing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 17th, 2025 19:01
Cheeky Missy said:
Your 4th one dredged images of a wife beating her hubby over the head with a saucepan. Charming and thought-provoking with excellent imagery and winsome good humor, not to mention a haunting, waltzing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 17th, 2025 19:01
Wise Man Say (25)
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobani,
Every Sunday I always have a full Irish breakfast and for afters a good dolloping of, \'Wise Men Say\' and it is very much appreciated.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 16:16
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobani,
Every Sunday I always have a full Irish breakfast and for afters a good dolloping of, \'Wise Men Say\' and it is very much appreciated.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 16:16
Wise Man Say (25)
Damaso said:
Thank you very much, Maestro, for your teachings. As always, it\'s a pleasure to stop by and read. Best regards.
August 17th, 2025 16:07
Damaso said:
Thank you very much, Maestro, for your teachings. As always, it\'s a pleasure to stop by and read. Best regards.
August 17th, 2025 16:07
Wise Man Say (25)
Neville said:
sapiential humour .. you aint gonna find better no matter how hard or where you might look 😎👍
August 17th, 2025 11:52
Neville said:
sapiential humour .. you aint gonna find better no matter how hard or where you might look 😎👍
August 17th, 2025 11:52
Freedom of Expression.
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent write 🙏. Great 👍
August 17th, 2025 09:14
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent write 🙏. Great 👍
August 17th, 2025 09:14
Wise Man Say (25)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
25 of Wise Man Say...this poet here say yay! 🤣 Another profound set of practical wisdom, my friend. So glad you\'re keeping these going. I look forward to them every Sunday! The best way to start the week...I seriously mean that! Thanks, Tobani! You are a wise man indeed! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
25 of Wise Man Say...this poet here say yay! 🤣 Another profound set of practical wisdom, my friend. So glad you\'re keeping these going. I look forward to them every Sunday! The best way to start the week...I seriously mean that! Thanks, Tobani! You are a wise man indeed! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:24
Peace or Revenge.
Paul Bell said:
Revenge is a strong reason for killing the enemy.
Alas, the politicians who usually start wars usually end them too when the times get too tough for them.
August 17th, 2025 06:58
Paul Bell said:
Revenge is a strong reason for killing the enemy.
Alas, the politicians who usually start wars usually end them too when the times get too tough for them.
August 17th, 2025 06:58
Wise Man Say (25)
Priya Tomar said:
Wise thoughts you mentioned here.
Nicely done.
August 17th, 2025 05:13
Priya Tomar said:
Wise thoughts you mentioned here.
Nicely done.
August 17th, 2025 05:13
Wise Man Say (25)
sorenbarrett said:
Another set of sayings that today seem based on wisdom as much as humor. Thanks for the start of the Sunday Tobani
August 17th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Another set of sayings that today seem based on wisdom as much as humor. Thanks for the start of the Sunday Tobani
August 17th, 2025 04:08
Choc`O`Holic.
Neville said:
........................ Sweet .. very sweet .. and funny too .. I came close to being addicted to Maltesers many years ago .. bring back Aztec bars ... again, I say .. N
August 17th, 2025 00:58
Neville said:
........................ Sweet .. very sweet .. and funny too .. I came close to being addicted to Maltesers many years ago .. bring back Aztec bars ... again, I say .. N
August 17th, 2025 00:58
Choc`O`Holic.
Bella Shepard said:
As a recovering choca\"o\"holic I can enjoy the thought, the smell and the tase of chocolate vicariously in this wonderful poem. Now the planet Twix sounds like a great place to vacation. I shall have sweet dreams tonight. Thank you!
August 16th, 2025 13:04
Bella Shepard said:
As a recovering choca\"o\"holic I can enjoy the thought, the smell and the tase of chocolate vicariously in this wonderful poem. Now the planet Twix sounds like a great place to vacation. I shall have sweet dreams tonight. Thank you!
August 16th, 2025 13:04
Choc`O`Holic.
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my!!! Tidily rendered in rhymed couples with such irresistibly hearty humor, it\'s too good! Laden with expert imagery and a waltzing poignancy, oh, I love, love, LOVE it!!! Thank you so very much for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 10:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my!!! Tidily rendered in rhymed couples with such irresistibly hearty humor, it\'s too good! Laden with expert imagery and a waltzing poignancy, oh, I love, love, LOVE it!!! Thank you so very much for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 10:50
Choc`O`Holic.
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor, but I do not like Cadbury\'s Creme Egg. Yet I do love me some candy at times, have a great weekend.
August 16th, 2025 08:37
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor, but I do not like Cadbury\'s Creme Egg. Yet I do love me some candy at times, have a great weekend.
August 16th, 2025 08:37
Choc`O`Holic.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani, these are playful and lighthearted…a sweet tooth and a twist of humor rolled into rhyme. You had me from Choco...the holic part just is a given! 🤣 Fun little snapshots, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2025 07:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani, these are playful and lighthearted…a sweet tooth and a twist of humor rolled into rhyme. You had me from Choco...the holic part just is a given! 🤣 Fun little snapshots, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2025 07:14
Choc`O`Holic.
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
I love the humor! The first one is playful and the funniest.
August 16th, 2025 05:41
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
I love the humor! The first one is playful and the funniest.
August 16th, 2025 05:41
Heart of Relief.
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
One of the best poems I have read so far. One needs to read it twice or more to hear the voice speaking with otherworldly fire!
August 16th, 2025 05:35
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
One of the best poems I have read so far. One needs to read it twice or more to hear the voice speaking with otherworldly fire!
August 16th, 2025 05:35
Choc`O`Holic.
sorenbarrett said:
Two nougat nuggets for the poetic sweet tooth. Sugary fun for everyone. Loved them Tobani but like all such bites they ended too quickly
August 16th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Two nougat nuggets for the poetic sweet tooth. Sugary fun for everyone. Loved them Tobani but like all such bites they ended too quickly
August 16th, 2025 04:13
Heart of Relief.
arqios said:
This is dark, visceral, and unflinching, Natiella. It plunges into the depths of despair and the surrender of self to end unbearable suffering. Its imagery is raw; bone, blood, and the physical tearing out of grief and yet the final moment delivers a chilling kind of peace: harm is no longer possible. A haunting meditation on the cost of release.
August 15th, 2025 20:45
arqios said:
This is dark, visceral, and unflinching, Natiella. It plunges into the depths of despair and the surrender of self to end unbearable suffering. Its imagery is raw; bone, blood, and the physical tearing out of grief and yet the final moment delivers a chilling kind of peace: harm is no longer possible. A haunting meditation on the cost of release.
August 15th, 2025 20:45
Heart of Relief.
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! Yet another version of the infamous Dr. Faustus, perhaps one more readily digestible by this modern intellect. Macabre and ghastly with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, rendered so vividly I well- nigh shiver instinctively. Alas! Thank you for sharing.
August 15th, 2025 12:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! Yet another version of the infamous Dr. Faustus, perhaps one more readily digestible by this modern intellect. Macabre and ghastly with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, rendered so vividly I well- nigh shiver instinctively. Alas! Thank you for sharing.
August 15th, 2025 12:40
Aspersions.
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobani,
A little bit of everything and not too much of anything, the perfect balance but how to maintain this balance perfectly expressed in this very fine poem of yours. A conundrum indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:17
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobani,
A little bit of everything and not too much of anything, the perfect balance but how to maintain this balance perfectly expressed in this very fine poem of yours. A conundrum indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:17
Heart of Relief.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. hang on!
Just went in for a 2nd dive
Rocked me to the core
Yet my tears ran dry
The next breath taken
Now I feel so alive
I need to free myself as you have described, with a flow that connects me back to my hive.
Endless appreciated with peace and respect
August 15th, 2025 10:30
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. hang on!
Just went in for a 2nd dive
Rocked me to the core
Yet my tears ran dry
The next breath taken
Now I feel so alive
I need to free myself as you have described, with a flow that connects me back to my hive.
Endless appreciated with peace and respect
August 15th, 2025 10:30
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