Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Wise Man Say (26)
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read for the weekend Tobani. Nicely done my friend
October 4th, 2025 16:49
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read for the weekend Tobani. Nicely done my friend
October 4th, 2025 16:49
Middle Leg ( Fun )
orchidee said:
Have swooned at the first part! lol.
And - Erm, yes, I wonder if the time would come when someone could see where the sun don\'t shine! heehee.
October 4th, 2025 06:40
orchidee said:
Have swooned at the first part! lol.
And - Erm, yes, I wonder if the time would come when someone could see where the sun don\'t shine! heehee.
October 4th, 2025 06:40
Middle Leg ( Fun )
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani, these are a riot. The cricket innuendo and the torch gag both hit with perfect timing...witty, cheeky, and full of fun. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 21:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani, these are a riot. The cricket innuendo and the torch gag both hit with perfect timing...witty, cheeky, and full of fun. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 21:14
Middle Leg ( Fun )
Doggerel Dave said:
Happy return, Tobani. You have been missed. Now you are back, don\'t leave us in the lurch again, please......Notice of absence remains I note - A threat?😊
October 3rd, 2025 17:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Happy return, Tobani. You have been missed. Now you are back, don\'t leave us in the lurch again, please......Notice of absence remains I note - A threat?😊
October 3rd, 2025 17:44
Middle Leg ( Fun )
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the second one Tobani you made me smile and that was enough. A most fun read
October 3rd, 2025 15:37
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the second one Tobani you made me smile and that was enough. A most fun read
October 3rd, 2025 15:37
Turmoil In a Crazy Mind
Cheeky Missy said:
What if, however, sadly when you were told the way to peace, you rejected it? We seem to have this twisted cry for help, pushing aside whom will deliver us for more torture. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
October 1st, 2025 12:50
Cheeky Missy said:
What if, however, sadly when you were told the way to peace, you rejected it? We seem to have this twisted cry for help, pushing aside whom will deliver us for more torture. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
October 1st, 2025 12:50
Hello or Goodbye.
whats write for me said:
The great dichotomy, well done.
September 16th, 2025 21:52
whats write for me said:
The great dichotomy, well done.
September 16th, 2025 21:52
The Killing Kind.
jenny.g said:
The questions everyone holding a gun- real or metaphorical- should be asking themselves. Great, hard hitting, thought provoking write.
September 11th, 2025 14:02
jenny.g said:
The questions everyone holding a gun- real or metaphorical- should be asking themselves. Great, hard hitting, thought provoking write.
September 11th, 2025 14:02
Service Suspended.
Teddy.15 said:
I was just wondering where you are, PL I will miss your kindness and your poetry. ❤️
September 11th, 2025 06:08
Teddy.15 said:
I was just wondering where you are, PL I will miss your kindness and your poetry. ❤️
September 11th, 2025 06:08
The Comedown.
David Hopkins said:
Such a greeting and so so real. How honest of you
September 8th, 2025 16:42
David Hopkins said:
Such a greeting and so so real. How honest of you
September 8th, 2025 16:42
Cereal To Eat.
nami said:
oh OH, this has sadness seeping into every corners . Made me feel sorrowful, this is BEAUTIFUL!
September 7th, 2025 23:05
nami said:
oh OH, this has sadness seeping into every corners . Made me feel sorrowful, this is BEAUTIFUL!
September 7th, 2025 23:05
Service Suspended.
RSM0812 said:
You better not disapear my friend. I look forwatd to your poems often. It would be a shame if you stopped posting.
September 3rd, 2025 05:48
RSM0812 said:
You better not disapear my friend. I look forwatd to your poems often. It would be a shame if you stopped posting.
September 3rd, 2025 05:48
Forgotten Ukraine.
NafisaSB said:
I agree with you. Our heart goes out to the Ukrainian people who are standing firm and refuse to bow to the mighty powers
September 2nd, 2025 07:19
NafisaSB said:
I agree with you. Our heart goes out to the Ukrainian people who are standing firm and refuse to bow to the mighty powers
September 2nd, 2025 07:19
Service Suspended.
Paul Bell said:
This is me phoning anyone in public office. Press 1 for death, press 2 for instant death, press 3 if you\'re actually dead.
August 27th, 2025 13:39
Paul Bell said:
This is me phoning anyone in public office. Press 1 for death, press 2 for instant death, press 3 if you\'re actually dead.
August 27th, 2025 13:39
Forgotten Ukraine.
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A clear message, without poetic ambiguity. A call without chance of misinterpretation. Liked it very much.
August 26th, 2025 09:30
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A clear message, without poetic ambiguity. A call without chance of misinterpretation. Liked it very much.
August 26th, 2025 09:30
GRATIAS (GAME OVER)
NafisaSB said:
fantastic - leave this poem - but remain committed to share many more
August 21st, 2025 00:50
NafisaSB said:
fantastic - leave this poem - but remain committed to share many more
August 21st, 2025 00:50
Service Suspended.
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Well, at the risk of sounding impolite, I protest. I request the resumption of services, please
August 20th, 2025 10:37
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Well, at the risk of sounding impolite, I protest. I request the resumption of services, please
August 20th, 2025 10:37
New Generation.
NafisaSB said:
each succeeding generation feels it is much smarter than the one that preceded it - true in some respects, but unlike the older one, the current one is more assertive, sometimes brash, and not too respectful - they may learn to sober up given time and experience - so if they are changing the world for better, we should support; otherwise we should guide them
August 20th, 2025 07:10
NafisaSB said:
each succeeding generation feels it is much smarter than the one that preceded it - true in some respects, but unlike the older one, the current one is more assertive, sometimes brash, and not too respectful - they may learn to sober up given time and experience - so if they are changing the world for better, we should support; otherwise we should guide them
August 20th, 2025 07:10
Service Suspended.
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope this is not true Tobani, you have been a delight to read.
Andy
August 20th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope this is not true Tobani, you have been a delight to read.
Andy
August 20th, 2025 01:20
Aspersions.
NafisaSB said:
agree completely with your views - be as you are. if you are generous people tend to keep taking advantage of you; and if you look after yourself you are selfish...cant please everyone and anyone so just look after yourself and be an authentic \'you\'
August 20th, 2025 00:06
NafisaSB said:
agree completely with your views - be as you are. if you are generous people tend to keep taking advantage of you; and if you look after yourself you are selfish...cant please everyone and anyone so just look after yourself and be an authentic \'you\'
August 20th, 2025 00:06
Service Suspended.
arqios said:
...here we. are waiting for a flicker of return. but health first and foremost. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 19th, 2025 20:46
arqios said:
...here we. are waiting for a flicker of return. but health first and foremost. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 19th, 2025 20:46
Service Suspended.
Zephyrschild said:
I am struggling with depressive issues myself. I hope you are not surrendering to a lack of words. Be well.
August 19th, 2025 12:58
Zephyrschild said:
I am struggling with depressive issues myself. I hope you are not surrendering to a lack of words. Be well.
August 19th, 2025 12:58
Service Suspended.
Cheeky Missy said:
So, I\'ve nothing to answer since I\'m struggling myself today, but aside from that, I\'m very, very grieved to hear your internal torment has successfully overridden your ability to write. I myself struggle almost daily. Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and good humor despite the circumstances, not to mention a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. Please, please hang in there. Love you.
August 19th, 2025 12:57
Cheeky Missy said:
So, I\'ve nothing to answer since I\'m struggling myself today, but aside from that, I\'m very, very grieved to hear your internal torment has successfully overridden your ability to write. I myself struggle almost daily. Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and good humor despite the circumstances, not to mention a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. Please, please hang in there. Love you.
August 19th, 2025 12:57
Service Suspended.
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about the suspension of the No.7 bus service in our area due to road works. lol.
August 19th, 2025 11:34
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about the suspension of the No.7 bus service in our area due to road works. lol.
August 19th, 2025 11:34
Service Suspended.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hell yeah (pun totally intended)! That closing...Room 666, God’s Playground...that line rocks. This poem is satire and sorrow side by side, it makes the silence louder. Beautifully crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 19th, 2025 07:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hell yeah (pun totally intended)! That closing...Room 666, God’s Playground...that line rocks. This poem is satire and sorrow side by side, it makes the silence louder. Beautifully crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 19th, 2025 07:39
Vlad (My Friend)!!.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is sharp satire, Tobani and I love it, my friend. I love that it is calling out the absurdities and hypocrisies in plain, unflinching language. The irony is deep, and that closing Native American turn hits hard. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 06:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is sharp satire, Tobani and I love it, my friend. I love that it is calling out the absurdities and hypocrisies in plain, unflinching language. The irony is deep, and that closing Native American turn hits hard. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 06:43
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