Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
God`s Gift To Us
cellinic said:
Rather a serious write with excellent argumentation. Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 02:21
cellinic said:
Rather a serious write with excellent argumentation. Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 02:21
God`s Gift To Us
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you believe they are listening, or is there anyone there anyway? Matters llittle for the purposes of your argument, which is engaging and neat.
December 21st, 2024 01:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you believe they are listening, or is there anyone there anyway? Matters llittle for the purposes of your argument, which is engaging and neat.
December 21st, 2024 01:58
God`s Gift To Us
Michael Edwards said:
If you are a believer it\'s a world which your God created. A well constructed piece which brings home the stupidity of man - a great (but sad) read.
December 21st, 2024 01:48
Michael Edwards said:
If you are a believer it\'s a world which your God created. A well constructed piece which brings home the stupidity of man - a great (but sad) read.
December 21st, 2024 01:48
Comes Life
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem and
I totally agree!! 💯
Just resonates
with greatness,
and penned superbly!!🏆
Much enjoyed my friend!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 19th, 2024 20:42
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem and
I totally agree!! 💯
Just resonates
with greatness,
and penned superbly!!🏆
Much enjoyed my friend!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 19th, 2024 20:42
Comes Life
Kevin Hulme said:
Looks like a Good Recipe. If only everyone went in the Kitchen and cooked it.
Well said.
December 19th, 2024 19:34
Kevin Hulme said:
Looks like a Good Recipe. If only everyone went in the Kitchen and cooked it.
Well said.
December 19th, 2024 19:34
Comes Life
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An uplifting poem. At times I feel the need of a heavy dose. Thankfully I chanced upon it today. Loved it
December 19th, 2024 10:57
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An uplifting poem. At times I feel the need of a heavy dose. Thankfully I chanced upon it today. Loved it
December 19th, 2024 10:57
Comes Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Agreed with our friend, arqios...this has the crescendo of a grand orchestra and leads to life-giving truth. Profound, my friend, and 💯 true. Well done and what a timely message...both the year it was written and now! 🌹👏
December 19th, 2024 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Agreed with our friend, arqios...this has the crescendo of a grand orchestra and leads to life-giving truth. Profound, my friend, and 💯 true. Well done and what a timely message...both the year it was written and now! 🌹👏
December 19th, 2024 08:00
Comes Life
Cassie58 said:
Life long learning. A wonderful reminder Tobani. Thank you.
December 19th, 2024 07:20
Cassie58 said:
Life long learning. A wonderful reminder Tobani. Thank you.
December 19th, 2024 07:20
Comes Life
teardrop said:
Wpw! What a great write. Love the thought here. Thanks for the read.
December 19th, 2024 05:45
teardrop said:
Wpw! What a great write. Love the thought here. Thanks for the read.
December 19th, 2024 05:45
Comes Life
cellinic said:
It was an interesting and exciting read! Very persuasive! Best wishes. My like
December 19th, 2024 05:20
cellinic said:
It was an interesting and exciting read! Very persuasive! Best wishes. My like
December 19th, 2024 05:20
Comes Life
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and so appropriate in these sad times when the gap between political agendas seems to be coming ever more divisive. .
December 19th, 2024 02:55
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and so appropriate in these sad times when the gap between political agendas seems to be coming ever more divisive. .
December 19th, 2024 02:55
Comes Life
arqios said:
What an orchestral Crescendo, layering and overlapping onto each other to a grand finale!
December 19th, 2024 01:56
arqios said:
What an orchestral Crescendo, layering and overlapping onto each other to a grand finale!
December 19th, 2024 01:56
Man With The Big Set of Keys
Thad Wilk said:
A very sad 😢 and
heart touching poem
and true story!
So sorry you have had
to experience this
awful abuse, thanks for
sharing, eloquently penned
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 7th, 2024 18:06
Thad Wilk said:
A very sad 😢 and
heart touching poem
and true story!
So sorry you have had
to experience this
awful abuse, thanks for
sharing, eloquently penned
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 7th, 2024 18:06
Man With The Big Set of Keys
arqios said:
Heart rending truth and express of that truth. I know the can and I know the abuse. The main difference is the environment it occurred in, I was never in the system and now realise that there is nowhere safe. Thanks for sharing what I still have a bit of a journey to arrive at expressing from my past. Thank you.
December 7th, 2024 14:55
arqios said:
Heart rending truth and express of that truth. I know the can and I know the abuse. The main difference is the environment it occurred in, I was never in the system and now realise that there is nowhere safe. Thanks for sharing what I still have a bit of a journey to arrive at expressing from my past. Thank you.
December 7th, 2024 14:55
Man With The Big Set of Keys
Cassie58 said:
I read this twice Tobani, first thing this morning and again now. It was a hard read and it must have been very difficult for you to compose. Sadly this happens all too often and it sickens me that people in authority, trusted with the care of children should behave in this way. It ruins lives. A courageous write.
December 7th, 2024 12:49
Cassie58 said:
I read this twice Tobani, first thing this morning and again now. It was a hard read and it must have been very difficult for you to compose. Sadly this happens all too often and it sickens me that people in authority, trusted with the care of children should behave in this way. It ruins lives. A courageous write.
December 7th, 2024 12:49
Man With The Big Set of Keys
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I have harboured questions and often disdain towards authority figures as they inveriably slip riding high horses. The abuse of position of power seems to be as old as our \"civilization\". Don\'t know why we keep up the pretense
December 7th, 2024 09:38
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I have harboured questions and often disdain towards authority figures as they inveriably slip riding high horses. The abuse of position of power seems to be as old as our \"civilization\". Don\'t know why we keep up the pretense
December 7th, 2024 09:38
Man With The Big Set of Keys
teardrop said:
I understand your words though they break my heart. I was raised in the same situation also in the 60;s and 70;s. Those days there was no one to tell and even when you didm they just kept it to themselves, sent you back to the den and never spoke of it again. I;m sorry you experienced this.
December 7th, 2024 05:53
teardrop said:
I understand your words though they break my heart. I was raised in the same situation also in the 60;s and 70;s. Those days there was no one to tell and even when you didm they just kept it to themselves, sent you back to the den and never spoke of it again. I;m sorry you experienced this.
December 7th, 2024 05:53
Man With The Big Set of Keys
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse of children is sad and deplorable but more common than anyone would want to believe. The powerless have little recourse but to endure.
December 7th, 2024 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse of children is sad and deplorable but more common than anyone would want to believe. The powerless have little recourse but to endure.
December 7th, 2024 04:30
Man With The Big Set of Keys
Neville said:
I think you are very brave to post this .. we all know such things go on .. this puts it into perspective .. and is just another reason why I despise so many of my own species .. Neville
December 7th, 2024 04:22
Neville said:
I think you are very brave to post this .. we all know such things go on .. this puts it into perspective .. and is just another reason why I despise so many of my own species .. Neville
December 7th, 2024 04:22
Creation of Life
Doggerel Dave said:
Well don\'t let me rain on your parade. However, for me our previous conversation still stands..
December 5th, 2024 19:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Well don\'t let me rain on your parade. However, for me our previous conversation still stands..
December 5th, 2024 19:33
Creation of Life
David Wakeling said:
They say never put all your eggs in one basket but hey what would I know. Good fun poem
December 5th, 2024 15:24
David Wakeling said:
They say never put all your eggs in one basket but hey what would I know. Good fun poem
December 5th, 2024 15:24
Creation of Life
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Tobni. For all the choices knocking Mom opened the door for the one to be you.
December 5th, 2024 10:58
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Tobni. For all the choices knocking Mom opened the door for the one to be you.
December 5th, 2024 10:58
Creation of Life
Neville said:
I think you have not only achieved your stated objective but you also took me on a very nostalgic journey back to Miss Weavers biology class back in the good old days .. Neville
December 5th, 2024 09:21
Neville said:
I think you have not only achieved your stated objective but you also took me on a very nostalgic journey back to Miss Weavers biology class back in the good old days .. Neville
December 5th, 2024 09:21
Creation of Life
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting journey. If it is a human one in all very few cases, it is only one sperm that wins the race. It is also an issue of luck as to which fallopian tube they take. Read about evolution as well and survival of the fittest which winds out overtime over luck
December 5th, 2024 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting journey. If it is a human one in all very few cases, it is only one sperm that wins the race. It is also an issue of luck as to which fallopian tube they take. Read about evolution as well and survival of the fittest which winds out overtime over luck
December 5th, 2024 08:28
Creation of Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in poem! Wonderful write. It really captures the beauty and miracle of procreation! Against all odds...the joining together to make life. Beautiful job, Tobani! An easy fave for me! 🌹👏
December 5th, 2024 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in poem! Wonderful write. It really captures the beauty and miracle of procreation! Against all odds...the joining together to make life. Beautiful job, Tobani! An easy fave for me! 🌹👏
December 5th, 2024 08:09
Creation of Life
arqios said:
Now that’s the story of my beginnings, a quite unplanned pregnancy on my mum’s part. My dad did the responsible thing and stayed, for a while and 4 children later moved on to more “love”-filled relationship. The waypoint out. It makes me realise how amazing that journey was, conception, having partaken but not having any memory of it.
December 5th, 2024 06:33
arqios said:
Now that’s the story of my beginnings, a quite unplanned pregnancy on my mum’s part. My dad did the responsible thing and stayed, for a while and 4 children later moved on to more “love”-filled relationship. The waypoint out. It makes me realise how amazing that journey was, conception, having partaken but not having any memory of it.
December 5th, 2024 06:33
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