Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Success Of Lies.
Goldfinch60 said:
He obviously became a politician then Tobani.
Andy
May 30th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
He obviously became a politician then Tobani.
Andy
May 30th, 2025 01:18
Success Of Lies.
Cheeky Missy said:
That twist in concluding, the entire sarcastic discussion is so deliciously rendered it simply drips with burning hot sarcasm. Oh! How gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Superb.
May 29th, 2025 11:24
Cheeky Missy said:
That twist in concluding, the entire sarcastic discussion is so deliciously rendered it simply drips with burning hot sarcasm. Oh! How gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Superb.
May 29th, 2025 11:24
Success Of Lies.
Damaso said:
I feel a poem in the form of a slap that awakens, a perfect discourse that leaves us with more questions than before, but with a very clear reflection that we are very distracted. It\'s always a pleasure to read you, sir.
May 29th, 2025 09:45
Damaso said:
I feel a poem in the form of a slap that awakens, a perfect discourse that leaves us with more questions than before, but with a very clear reflection that we are very distracted. It\'s always a pleasure to read you, sir.
May 29th, 2025 09:45
Success Of Lies.
Doggerel Dave said:
An oblique view of the state the world is in. Lies and cons everywhere.
Very much enjoyed this for it\'s irony.
May 29th, 2025 09:14
Doggerel Dave said:
An oblique view of the state the world is in. Lies and cons everywhere.
Very much enjoyed this for it\'s irony.
May 29th, 2025 09:14
Success Of Lies.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man, I have read this three times now. This is so subversive, I LOVE IT and find my home in it. Thank you for writing this my friend! 🌹🌹🌹🌹👏👏👏👏
May 29th, 2025 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man, I have read this three times now. This is so subversive, I LOVE IT and find my home in it. Thank you for writing this my friend! 🌹🌹🌹🌹👏👏👏👏
May 29th, 2025 08:21
Success Of Lies.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spoken like a prophet of plainness! And the funny thing is, even now, the Son\'s followers will still fall mostly deaf to its message! Not a judgment toward anyone, just an observation. I am a believer so this could apply to me too, but I hear it\'s message loud and clear, my friend. I hope and pray, fuck that, I will shout it out along with you. This is why the Jesus Facepalm meme was created! Because even plain speech and common sense gets ignored by the ones who supposedly hold \"The way, the truth, and the life\". 🌹👏
May 29th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spoken like a prophet of plainness! And the funny thing is, even now, the Son\'s followers will still fall mostly deaf to its message! Not a judgment toward anyone, just an observation. I am a believer so this could apply to me too, but I hear it\'s message loud and clear, my friend. I hope and pray, fuck that, I will shout it out along with you. This is why the Jesus Facepalm meme was created! Because even plain speech and common sense gets ignored by the ones who supposedly hold \"The way, the truth, and the life\". 🌹👏
May 29th, 2025 08:20
Success Of Lies.
David Wakeling said:
This is powerful. The truth and dishonesty mixed together to give confusion. Its a deep and serious question. Well done
May 29th, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
This is powerful. The truth and dishonesty mixed together to give confusion. Its a deep and serious question. Well done
May 29th, 2025 04:14
Success Of Lies.
sorenbarrett said:
Was this the first day of politician school? A sad but fun read that seems to be its own Bible of a sort. Loved it
May 29th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Was this the first day of politician school? A sad but fun read that seems to be its own Bible of a sort. Loved it
May 29th, 2025 03:56
Success Of Lies.
HolesInMyJeans said:
Wow. Very nice. And a sad world we live in when that’s the way things are.
May 29th, 2025 02:29
HolesInMyJeans said:
Wow. Very nice. And a sad world we live in when that’s the way things are.
May 29th, 2025 02:29
Broken Mirror
RSM0812 said:
Maybe you get to see the reflections of every part of yourself.
May 28th, 2025 21:09
RSM0812 said:
Maybe you get to see the reflections of every part of yourself.
May 28th, 2025 21:09
Broken Mirror
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, or...perhaps it is not the mirror that is broken after all. We\'re all a little broken, some more than others, so we can\'t judge the mirror! Or so an aspiring Wise Man Say 🤣. Wonderfully profound poem and deserves to be more faved than it already is, my dear friend! I have now helped that cause! 👏🌹
May 28th, 2025 19:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, or...perhaps it is not the mirror that is broken after all. We\'re all a little broken, some more than others, so we can\'t judge the mirror! Or so an aspiring Wise Man Say 🤣. Wonderfully profound poem and deserves to be more faved than it already is, my dear friend! I have now helped that cause! 👏🌹
May 28th, 2025 19:39
Broken Mirror
Damaso said:
Fragmenting the reflection, perhaps. Excellent. Regards.
May 28th, 2025 17:08
Damaso said:
Fragmenting the reflection, perhaps. Excellent. Regards.
May 28th, 2025 17:08
The Dream I Wanted.
Cheeky Missy said:
Exquisitely painful in conclusion, how very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy. Perspective is another angle, perhaps, to pursue, as I guess I had an oddly cheerful perspective on my own early years. Thank you very much for sharing. I wish I could comfort you.
May 28th, 2025 15:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Exquisitely painful in conclusion, how very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy. Perspective is another angle, perhaps, to pursue, as I guess I had an oddly cheerful perspective on my own early years. Thank you very much for sharing. I wish I could comfort you.
May 28th, 2025 15:24
Blade In My Hand.
Cheeky Missy said:
The tongue is neither shiny nor appears to be a blade which can be sheathed, yet my late mother warned me too many years ago about how much like a scimitar mine was and against using it freely in that regard. Likewise, in the battle of kill or be killed, I learned painfully that I\'d rather be the victim than the murderer, and again, not so evidently as a knife battle proves. Ergo, it\'s a painfully relevant discussion raised. Excellently rendered with exquisite imagery and a painfully resonating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 15:20
Cheeky Missy said:
The tongue is neither shiny nor appears to be a blade which can be sheathed, yet my late mother warned me too many years ago about how much like a scimitar mine was and against using it freely in that regard. Likewise, in the battle of kill or be killed, I learned painfully that I\'d rather be the victim than the murderer, and again, not so evidently as a knife battle proves. Ergo, it\'s a painfully relevant discussion raised. Excellently rendered with exquisite imagery and a painfully resonating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 15:20
Broken Mirror
hzugman said:
A different way of looking at yourself differently. Good short write.
May 28th, 2025 12:45
hzugman said:
A different way of looking at yourself differently. Good short write.
May 28th, 2025 12:45
Broken Mirror
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! Peering at oneself in the shards of a perfect reflection, when the situation itself is a metaphor of damnation in the fables is an interesting predicament indeed. Fascinating and disarmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 10:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! Peering at oneself in the shards of a perfect reflection, when the situation itself is a metaphor of damnation in the fables is an interesting predicament indeed. Fascinating and disarmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 10:58
Blade In My Hand.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Scary world we are in. I need not even begin to bring up the gun violence plaguing my country. I need not even say which country \"my country\" is when mentioning gun violence. 🙄 Anywho, wonderful and timely write, my friend. 🙏🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Scary world we are in. I need not even begin to bring up the gun violence plaguing my country. I need not even say which country \"my country\" is when mentioning gun violence. 🙄 Anywho, wonderful and timely write, my friend. 🙏🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 08:28
Broken Mirror
David Wakeling said:
This is very true mi amigo. A clever and wise poem
May 28th, 2025 04:15
David Wakeling said:
This is very true mi amigo. A clever and wise poem
May 28th, 2025 04:15
Broken Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is broken and gone to pieces lol This poem puts a positive spin on loss and what is gained. Very positive and progressive. If we could only put such a perspective on all elements in our life it would be so much easier and the load lighter. I wonder if such a mirror would see a person as a multiple personality. Ah just thinking.
May 28th, 2025 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is broken and gone to pieces lol This poem puts a positive spin on loss and what is gained. Very positive and progressive. If we could only put such a perspective on all elements in our life it would be so much easier and the load lighter. I wonder if such a mirror would see a person as a multiple personality. Ah just thinking.
May 28th, 2025 03:39
Broken Mirror
teardrop said:
I really like your words here. Beautiful metaphor, beautiful thought, beautiful words.
May 28th, 2025 03:30
teardrop said:
I really like your words here. Beautiful metaphor, beautiful thought, beautiful words.
May 28th, 2025 03:30
Blade In My Hand.
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Tobani, there is a lot of knoife crime around and i just do not understand why, is the world that bad these days!
Andy
May 28th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Tobani, there is a lot of knoife crime around and i just do not understand why, is the world that bad these days!
Andy
May 28th, 2025 01:48
Blade In My Hand.
MendedFences27 said:
Kind of a terrifying piece of poetry. What is the world coming to if we have to exist in conditions such as this. Is there no hope for mankind? Your poem shines light on situations that spell disaster for future times. Will the world be a place of armed camps? Kill or be killed? Not such a pretty picture, but you\'ve painted it well. Enjoyed this read. - Phil A.
May 27th, 2025 14:19
MendedFences27 said:
Kind of a terrifying piece of poetry. What is the world coming to if we have to exist in conditions such as this. Is there no hope for mankind? Your poem shines light on situations that spell disaster for future times. Will the world be a place of armed camps? Kill or be killed? Not such a pretty picture, but you\'ve painted it well. Enjoyed this read. - Phil A.
May 27th, 2025 14:19
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