Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Turmoil In a Crazy Mind
Cheeky Missy said:

What if, however, sadly when you were told the way to peace, you rejected it? We seem to have this twisted cry for help, pushing aside whom will deliver us for more torture. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.

October 1st, 2025 12:50

Turmoil In a Crazy Mind
Poetic Dan said:

Wow that was powerful and a beautiful flow, my mind rested even if just for a mo.
Thank you

March 20th, 2025 07:00

Value of Gifts
Caring dove said:

Gifts show people are thinking of you .. that’s true ..

Least someone has been kind enough to think to buy us a gift

A nice writing

March 19th, 2025 03:19

On The Outside Looking In
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing . There’s a nice softness to your words

March 5th, 2025 03:18

Value of Gifts
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice And Poignant Tobani

March 1st, 2025 06:11

Comes Life
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice One Tobani
Nice Yin And Yang

January 30th, 2025 05:01

Is Our Children`s Future On a Knife Edge
Tristan Robert Lange said:

All I cam say to this, as a person living in a country with a major gun violence epidemic, AMEN, AMEN, AMEN! Well done, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 29th, 2025 00:43

Is Our Children`s Future On a Knife Edge
Thad Wilk said:

A powerful poem,
thoughts and
message too!!πŸ™
Eloquently expressed,
I totally agree with you!! πŸ’―
Best regards ✌️ Thad


January 28th, 2025 19:54

Is Our Children`s Future On a Knife Edge
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant.

January 28th, 2025 16:59

Is Our Children`s Future On a Knife Edge
2781 said:

I wondered what is missing.

January 28th, 2025 07:33

Is Our Children`s Future On a Knife Edge
arqios said:

It’s a lot of things and most if not all of them not good. Thanks for addressing this topic πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 28th, 2025 05:12

Is Our Children`s Future On a Knife Edge
sorenbarrett said:

A powerful write where the author\'s emotions are right out there. I too would advocate for safety but removing the weapon will only lead to the invention of a new one instead find the cause and remove it.

January 28th, 2025 04:24

Is Our Children`s Future On a Knife Edge
Cassie58 said:

A very topical write Tobani and one which fills me with fear. Indeed, what has happened? Whatever it is, it needs to be dealt with swiftly. Harsh penalties for a starter, for carrying a knife and stop and search, plus education in schools and a multitude of others. Social media has played its part too. A complex situation which is out of control. You write so well about it.

January 28th, 2025 04:17

On The Outside Looking In
Thad Wilk said:

A touching and
poignant poem
of love lost. 😒
Strong feelings
and emotions,
expressed eloquently!! ☺️
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 23rd, 2025 20:16

On The Outside Looking In
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 23rd, 2025 16:20

On The Outside Looking In
NinjaGirl said:

We\'re always on the outside looking in on others lives, I wonder who\'s looking at ours, who\'s envious of ours.

January 23rd, 2025 12:23

On The Outside Looking In
Neville said:



What\'s not to like or love .. Some things are just not meant to be .. no matter how much one might want them to be .. a lesson for everyone .. Neville

January 23rd, 2025 10:01

On The Outside Looking In
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow, heartbreaking. But also true love, no? Love not only receives, but gives. It not only keeps, but it also knows when to let go. Heartbreaking for the one who goes without in the end, but it is true love that dictates that. Very relatable and a wonderful write, Nataiella! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 23rd, 2025 08:32

On The Outside Looking In
E.J. Waling said:

Very nice piece of writing.
John

January 23rd, 2025 06:46

On The Outside Looking In
sorenbarrett said:

I hear love in this poem not passion but love. When one loves someone it is shown in wishing that person what is best for them not necessarily what we want. Very nicely done

January 23rd, 2025 04:51

On The Outside Looking In
arqios said:

Very relatable and quite lyrical. Now to sit and reminisce πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 23rd, 2025 04:17

Value of Gifts
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem,
thoughts and message too! πŸ€”
Never judge a gift 🎁
for its monetary value,
so true!!🀩
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 22nd, 2025 22:36

Value of Gifts
David Wakeling said:

Yes gift giving is a complex procedure. So many gifts are unwanted or even re-gifted, This was clever. Made me think

January 22nd, 2025 19:30

Value of Gifts
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

January 22nd, 2025 13:00

Value of Gifts
Cassie58 said:

I thank you Tobani for the gift of your poetry. I have missed your postings recently. You have said so much here. It is always the thought that counts. Price etc, doesn’t come into it. A fine write.

January 22nd, 2025 12:03

Value of Gifts
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A wonderful poem, well-written with a poignant message. Well done, my friend!!!

January 22nd, 2025 09:11

Value of Gifts
sorenbarrett said:

Nataiella a great message and also a good piece of advice set in poem. Lovely

January 22nd, 2025 09:08

Value of Gifts
arqios said:

Yes! The extension of the heart pertains to the source of all outwardly objects and gestures. So deep! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 22nd, 2025 07:25

Break The Spell That`s Cast
Feysal Mohamed Omar\'Olat said:

This was a beautiful read. Thank you for sharing.πŸ™πŸΎ

January 13th, 2025 05:49

Are The Words Still Healing
Thad Wilk said:

A captivating poem
and questionnaire i\'d say! πŸ€”
Very thought provoking
the words are still
healing day by day! πŸ‘πŸ€©
Much enjoyed thank you!! ☺️
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 5th, 2025 23:37

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