Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Figment of Your Imagination
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed tis so. And my imagination is a figment itself. A truth well spoken.

February 24th, 2025 04:15

Figment of Your Imagination
arqios said:

Love this. It counters the idea of the objective second set of eyes πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ‘€

February 24th, 2025 03:47

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Goldfinch60 said:

Some true words there Tobani, fun write.

Andy

February 24th, 2025 02:44

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Loving this series, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

February 23rd, 2025 22:29

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
hzugman said:

Very nicely done. Good read.

February 23rd, 2025 15:42

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

February 23rd, 2025 15:41

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Neville said:



No aint that the bloomin truth .. wise men should take it easy on Sundays .. N

February 23rd, 2025 14:10

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
John Prophet said:

Well said. John

February 23rd, 2025 07:10

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
sorenbarrett said:

Wisdom found here. It is in the trash that we find it and in sadness humor. I love these little gems they always give another look at things and add a smile. Nicely done

February 23rd, 2025 05:44

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
arqios said:

This series is becoming a regular delight hereπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

February 23rd, 2025 03:51

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words Tobani. I hope Harry recovers.

Andy

February 23rd, 2025 02:48

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Tony36 said:

Love it

February 22nd, 2025 10:35

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A lot of fun. These are great! Happy weekend, my friend!

February 22nd, 2025 09:55

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
arqios said:

Kinda wondering what happened to Jack… or is this another β€˜Mary’? Still a fun read as promised πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 22nd, 2025 06:02

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Mutley Ravishes said:

Harry has balls like balloons
He\'ll be appearing in
A South Park cartoon
Anytime soon!

Enjoyed the read!

February 22nd, 2025 05:39

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
sorenbarrett said:

Poor Harry \'twas not merry because of hairy Mary. Hairy wished to tarry Mary was contrary kicked him in the berry which he was unable to parry. All I want to know is what happened to Larry and Rosemary. A fun read that brightened the day

February 22nd, 2025 04:55

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
David Wakeling said:

Great fun.Brightened my day

February 22nd, 2025 04:51

I Can`t Hide It
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Tobani, that anger can be destructive so it is better to keep it hidden.

Andy

February 22nd, 2025 02:55

I Can`t Hide It
faie said:

A very good poem about emotions and within.

February 21st, 2025 21:36

The Same Picture Frame
faie said:

A very good poem that identifies routine and aging.

February 21st, 2025 21:19

I Can`t Hide It
Salvia.S said:

This makes the readers curious until they read the last line. Powerful and well written!

February 21st, 2025 20:58

I Can`t Hide It
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The question for me is, why hide it? Of course, there are reasons for doing so, but i have only ever found that hiding my anger makes me even more angry. All the same, brilliant expression my friend. Thought-provoking and worth a fave! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

February 21st, 2025 11:13

I Can`t Hide It
2781 said:

Looks like you can\'t judge a book by its cover.

February 21st, 2025 09:08

I Can`t Hide It
Cassie58 said:

All revealed in the final line. Anger is not a pleasant emotion to deal with it. Most people experience it at differing levels. Some can hide it, others not do. I like the way you led us down the garden path to find the solution. Have a good day Tobani.

February 21st, 2025 07:30

I Can`t Hide It
Mutley Ravishes said:

I once read that when anger is purified it leads to clarity.
You kept me guessing what \"it\" is until the last line! Great write.

February 21st, 2025 07:26

I Can`t Hide It
David Wakeling said:

Anger is a cross to bare.Powerful poem

February 21st, 2025 06:14

I Can`t Hide It
arqios said:

Don’t we all have it hardwired. When as a child it used to startle me when my hackles would rise quite suddenly πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

February 21st, 2025 05:39

I Can`t Hide It
sorenbarrett said:

I love the way you have left the reveal until the very end it provokes that strong human drive of curiosity and pulls the reader through the poem. Very nicely done.

February 21st, 2025 05:01

The Same Picture Frame
Goldfinch60 said:

Each morning we awake takes us into a new good day as we are still here Tobani.

Andy

February 21st, 2025 02:14

The Same Picture Frame
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous and serene.

February 20th, 2025 14:25

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