Comments received on poems by TobaniNataiella
Darling I Bought You A Hoover
sorenbarrett said:
I love the tone of this poem and how it goes. Despite best intentions and work and money some people are never pleased and some people despite how hard they try can\'t read the desires of others. In this social miscommunication so much is lost. The detail demanded in a gift always bothers me in that a gift should be given from the heart not demanded from the start. A fun write with a moral
December 23rd, 2024 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
I love the tone of this poem and how it goes. Despite best intentions and work and money some people are never pleased and some people despite how hard they try can\'t read the desires of others. In this social miscommunication so much is lost. The detail demanded in a gift always bothers me in that a gift should be given from the heart not demanded from the start. A fun write with a moral
December 23rd, 2024 04:13
Darling I Bought You A Hoover
arqios said:
Freshly received as well. Now go back to the shops and get her what she really wanted! Quite fun read. And such a quick turnover from inspiration to ‘print.’
December 23rd, 2024 02:54
arqios said:
Freshly received as well. Now go back to the shops and get her what she really wanted! Quite fun read. And such a quick turnover from inspiration to ‘print.’
December 23rd, 2024 02:54
Come On It`s Christmas (Part Two)
Thad Wilk said:
😲 wow!!
Christmas is not
for everyone you\'re right! 😱
I hope you\'re in better
spirits, 👻 come that
special night! ¿🧑🎄🌲
Thanks for scaring \'sharing\'!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
December 22nd, 2024 19:52
Thad Wilk said:
😲 wow!!
Christmas is not
for everyone you\'re right! 😱
I hope you\'re in better
spirits, 👻 come that
special night! ¿🧑🎄🌲
Thanks for scaring \'sharing\'!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
December 22nd, 2024 19:52
Come On It`s Christmas (Part Two)
Thomas W Case said:
Sounds like someone is scrooged. Trenemdous work.
December 22nd, 2024 15:29
Thomas W Case said:
Sounds like someone is scrooged. Trenemdous work.
December 22nd, 2024 15:29
Come On It`s Christmas (Part Two)
Cassie58 said:
Happy to say I am not experiencing any of what is listed in your Christmas scarf 🙂. Such a fun write but definitely reminding me of Scrooge. Well penned Tobani.
December 22nd, 2024 14:32
Cassie58 said:
Happy to say I am not experiencing any of what is listed in your Christmas scarf 🙂. Such a fun write but definitely reminding me of Scrooge. Well penned Tobani.
December 22nd, 2024 14:32
God`s Gift To Us
domilla said:
God told us to love each other and all that surround us . His gift of love showed how deep it goes . If we are to let our love run as deep we could save those in it so that as it falls we don’t go down with it
December 22nd, 2024 07:02
domilla said:
God told us to love each other and all that surround us . His gift of love showed how deep it goes . If we are to let our love run as deep we could save those in it so that as it falls we don’t go down with it
December 22nd, 2024 07:02
Come On It`s Christmas (Part Two)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, Christmas is not for everyone for various different reasons. Loved the first two in this series. Looking forward to part 3! Well done, my friend! 🙏🖤
December 22nd, 2024 06:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, Christmas is not for everyone for various different reasons. Loved the first two in this series. Looking forward to part 3! Well done, my friend! 🙏🖤
December 22nd, 2024 06:42
Come On It`s Christmas (Part Two)
arqios said:
And not everyone is for Christmas. I guess that\'s just the way it is. We have so many observed holidays now that don\'t mean anything to most apart from a day off from work and holiday pay if they are tenured. But a truly enjoyed sequel to part one.
December 22nd, 2024 04:04
arqios said:
And not everyone is for Christmas. I guess that\'s just the way it is. We have so many observed holidays now that don\'t mean anything to most apart from a day off from work and holiday pay if they are tenured. But a truly enjoyed sequel to part one.
December 22nd, 2024 04:04
Come On It`s Christmas (Part Two)
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read alphabetized mostly. Christmas is a lot of things but the ones listed are not on my list.
December 22nd, 2024 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read alphabetized mostly. Christmas is a lot of things but the ones listed are not on my list.
December 22nd, 2024 03:39
God`s Gift To Us
John Prophet said:
Creation is a concept beyond human understanding.
Enjoyed the read.
John
December 21st, 2024 18:13
John Prophet said:
Creation is a concept beyond human understanding.
Enjoyed the read.
John
December 21st, 2024 18:13
God`s Gift To Us
David Wakeling said:
Sad but true. God sure has left the Devil in charge, It takes strength and wisdom to understand,
December 21st, 2024 14:55
David Wakeling said:
Sad but true. God sure has left the Devil in charge, It takes strength and wisdom to understand,
December 21st, 2024 14:55
God`s Gift To Us
Cassie58 said:
Sadly we live in troubled times. I have to say for the first time, I believe we have lost direction and I have no confidence in politicians to find answers. They bury their heads in the sand. I fear for my grandchildren for all the reasons you have stated in your poem. Well penned Tobani.
December 21st, 2024 13:36
Cassie58 said:
Sadly we live in troubled times. I have to say for the first time, I believe we have lost direction and I have no confidence in politicians to find answers. They bury their heads in the sand. I fear for my grandchildren for all the reasons you have stated in your poem. Well penned Tobani.
December 21st, 2024 13:36
God`s Gift To Us
RSM0812 said:
The forteiture of humanity. This poem reaches for nothing. A simple clarification of evil and its effects on the world. It hit chords with me. Brilliant.
December 21st, 2024 10:50
RSM0812 said:
The forteiture of humanity. This poem reaches for nothing. A simple clarification of evil and its effects on the world. It hit chords with me. Brilliant.
December 21st, 2024 10:50
God`s Gift To Us
rhmn_7 said:
Despite all the bad things happening, it still wasn\'t enough to burry the good and beauty completely. So I say there is still hope. But a nice poem!
December 21st, 2024 07:38
rhmn_7 said:
Despite all the bad things happening, it still wasn\'t enough to burry the good and beauty completely. So I say there is still hope. But a nice poem!
December 21st, 2024 07:38
God`s Gift To Us
Neville said:
I think you poemed this at just the write time .. sadly & ever so, I fear the world is going to be in the hands & at the mercy of some serious dictators & narcissists
December 21st, 2024 06:49
Neville said:
I think you poemed this at just the write time .. sadly & ever so, I fear the world is going to be in the hands & at the mercy of some serious dictators & narcissists
December 21st, 2024 06:49
God`s Gift To Us
arqios said:
This poem powerfully conveys a sense of urgency and despair regarding the current state of the world. The contrast between the world as a divine gift and the destructive actions of humanity highlights the deep sense of betrayal and sorrow felt in witnessing the degradation of our planet and society.
December 21st, 2024 05:59
arqios said:
This poem powerfully conveys a sense of urgency and despair regarding the current state of the world. The contrast between the world as a divine gift and the destructive actions of humanity highlights the deep sense of betrayal and sorrow felt in witnessing the degradation of our planet and society.
December 21st, 2024 05:59
God`s Gift To Us
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write and stated with convition. Nicely written
December 21st, 2024 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write and stated with convition. Nicely written
December 21st, 2024 04:08
God`s Gift To Us
orchidee said:
It\'s surely mankind who are the fools - not that God needs defending by the humans who do believe in Him.
December 21st, 2024 03:42
orchidee said:
It\'s surely mankind who are the fools - not that God needs defending by the humans who do believe in Him.
December 21st, 2024 03:42
God`s Gift To Us
cellinic said:
Rather a serious write with excellent argumentation. Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 02:21
cellinic said:
Rather a serious write with excellent argumentation. Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 02:21
God`s Gift To Us
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you believe they are listening, or is there anyone there anyway? Matters llittle for the purposes of your argument, which is engaging and neat.
December 21st, 2024 01:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you believe they are listening, or is there anyone there anyway? Matters llittle for the purposes of your argument, which is engaging and neat.
December 21st, 2024 01:58
God`s Gift To Us
Michael Edwards said:
If you are a believer it\'s a world which your God created. A well constructed piece which brings home the stupidity of man - a great (but sad) read.
December 21st, 2024 01:48
Michael Edwards said:
If you are a believer it\'s a world which your God created. A well constructed piece which brings home the stupidity of man - a great (but sad) read.
December 21st, 2024 01:48
Come On It`s Christmas
Doggerel Dave said:
Monumental effort.
And of course it is bloody poetry...For the record, \"Guilty as charged\" And what I was guilty of was about half of that list in my twenties, and thereafter I have treated alcohol with the utmost respect, imbibing measured amounts daily.
December 21st, 2024 01:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Monumental effort.
And of course it is bloody poetry...For the record, \"Guilty as charged\" And what I was guilty of was about half of that list in my twenties, and thereafter I have treated alcohol with the utmost respect, imbibing measured amounts daily.
December 21st, 2024 01:47
Come On It`s Christmas
Thad Wilk said:
,😆 cool
Christmas suggestions and🎄
things to do! ☺️🧑🎄
I\'ve already started doing
quite a few!! Cheers!🍺 🍹🍸 🍻
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 20th, 2024 16:51
Thad Wilk said:
,😆 cool
Christmas suggestions and🎄
things to do! ☺️🧑🎄
I\'ve already started doing
quite a few!! Cheers!🍺 🍹🍸 🍻
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 20th, 2024 16:51
Come On It`s Christmas
Shahla Latifi said:
I like this poem very much. I think that behind the great spirit of the season, as some of us adore and respect it with sincerity, most people are, for the sake of the season, ambushed by overstress and bitterness, drifting away from the real meaning of Christmas.
December 20th, 2024 10:07
Shahla Latifi said:
I like this poem very much. I think that behind the great spirit of the season, as some of us adore and respect it with sincerity, most people are, for the sake of the season, ambushed by overstress and bitterness, drifting away from the real meaning of Christmas.
December 20th, 2024 10:07
Come On It`s Christmas
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is ABSOLUTELY poetry, And it drives its point home quite effectively. BTW...not do it anymore...drink that is. So, I found a home in this one, my friend! Well done, Tobani! 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is ABSOLUTELY poetry, And it drives its point home quite effectively. BTW...not do it anymore...drink that is. So, I found a home in this one, my friend! Well done, Tobani! 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 09:09
Come On It`s Christmas
Cassie58 said:
That was great fun Tobani. You have also helped to increase my vocab. Cheers. Must have taken some research 🙂
December 20th, 2024 07:33
Cassie58 said:
That was great fun Tobani. You have also helped to increase my vocab. Cheers. Must have taken some research 🙂
December 20th, 2024 07:33
Come On It`s Christmas
arqios said:
I think you more than clearly got that message across!
December 20th, 2024 07:24
arqios said:
I think you more than clearly got that message across!
December 20th, 2024 07:24
Come On It`s Christmas
teardrop said:
LOL. all in one day? Enjoyed reading this...thanlk you. don\'t know if I read this right but.....it did make me smile.
December 20th, 2024 06:40
teardrop said:
LOL. all in one day? Enjoyed reading this...thanlk you. don\'t know if I read this right but.....it did make me smile.
December 20th, 2024 06:40
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