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Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
Neilton said:

Thank you for sharing such beautiful message! Enjoyed very much

March 30th, 2025 09:25

Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great ones, my friend! You should publish these into a book. They are THAT good! Can\'t wait for more. And, oh, true story on a dog\'s breath. I\'ve experienced both breath and bite...breath is worse so long as it doesn\'t turn to a mauling! LOL! Well done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘ Have a gorgeous Sunday!

March 30th, 2025 07:55

Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
sorenbarrett said:

Thanks for brightening the day with these pieces of smiles. Loved them

March 30th, 2025 04:11

Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
arqios said:

Now this has become my Sunday rest and pot of cheer! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

March 30th, 2025 02:47

Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write PL.

March 30th, 2025 02:18

You Get Out What You Put In
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope I do get my foot back Tobani, hopping through life is a challenge. πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

Andy

March 30th, 2025 01:51

You Get Out What You Put In
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Sardonic wit, sharp humor, a foot to a jerk\'s ass..whatever you want to call this...it is masterfully brilliant in it\'s brevity, my friend. LOVE THIS! πŸŒΉπŸ™ If I ever say this to anyone in real time, you will be cited! 🀣 \"Wise man Tobani says...\" or something to that effect! Again, brilliant!

March 29th, 2025 11:08

The Race
Cheeky Missy said:

Forsooth, good Sir. Begins to remind me of my late father\'s injunction to, \"enjoy the ride! The journey is half the fun of getting there...\" whether or not that is applicable. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank go for sharing.

March 29th, 2025 10:08

You Get Out What You Put In
Cheeky Missy said:

Hahaha, you\'re hilarious! Me still is uncertain about that, though, since methinks I\'ve put in a ton more than I\'ve recieved from the effort, however I\'m not dead as yet, so who knows. Delightful and sweetly rendered with a waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing! I love it.

March 29th, 2025 09:43

You Get Out What You Put In
Friendship said:

Nicely said. Your poem aims to inspire me, as the reader, to reflect on my efforts and the potential rewards that can emerge from investing in life, encouraging a proactive and hopeful mindset.

March 29th, 2025 07:53

The Race
John Prophet said:

So true. Try or not it’s up to you.

March 29th, 2025 07:20

You Get Out What You Put In
arqios said:

Now ain’t that the truth! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

March 29th, 2025 05:31

You Get Out What You Put In
orchidee said:

Oh no! What did one put one\'s foot in? Don\'t tell me - it may be TMI (too Much Info). lol.

March 29th, 2025 03:19

The Race
Goldfinch60 said:

Just keep moving forward Tobani and the race will end when life has been satisfied.

Andy

March 29th, 2025 02:54

The Race
orchidee said:

Good write PL.

March 28th, 2025 12:31

The Race
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic wisdom.

March 28th, 2025 09:29

The Race
rebellion_in_sanity said:

So very true. Wish we could recall this simple wishdom everytime we fee dejected because we were not in control

March 28th, 2025 08:04

Devil By Your Side.
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write. Love the last lines. Nicely done.

March 28th, 2025 08:03

The Race
Friendship said:

Well said,.Excellent.

March 28th, 2025 06:36

The Race
arqios said:

And how we finish always says more about us than how it is we began the raceπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

March 28th, 2025 05:23

The Race
David Wakeling said:

Yes very true.Excellent

March 28th, 2025 05:20

The Race
sorenbarrett said:

Another piece of poetic wisdom, short and to the point. Nicely done Tobani

March 28th, 2025 04:16

Devil By Your Side.
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Tobani. In our lives the devil does play its hand but in my life My Angel is always there to take me forward into a better place as I am sure your Angel does the same to you.

Andy

March 28th, 2025 02:24

Devil By Your Side.
Damaso said:

Wow, so this is a true master of execution! Totally overwhelmed, that was too much for today. Excellent.

March 27th, 2025 13:12

Devil By Your Side.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 27th, 2025 09:45

Devil By Your Side.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Powerful poem, my friend. Truthfully, I have seen this happen in real time, Tobani. The person went to jail for murdering someone who abused them as a child. That person today is a public speaker and helping people like them find help and support in moving past their pain and suffering toward healing and making a positive impact. A powerful and important write. A must fave from me. πŸ–€πŸ¦β€β¬›πŸ™

March 27th, 2025 07:56

Devil By Your Side.
Friendship said:

Well written, Your poem serves to explore the consequences of allowing anger and revenge to dictate one\'s actions and the importance of seeking forgiveness and peace instead. It highlights the universal human experience of dealing with pain and the journey toward healing.

March 27th, 2025 07:09

Devil By Your Side.
MDStone said:

Wise words well worded. Thank You!

March 27th, 2025 06:25

Devil By Your Side.
arqios said:

I was just imagining the angel and the devil on the shoulder and here before me lay a complete-whole poem !πŸ•ŠπŸ™πŸ»

March 27th, 2025 05:30

Devil By Your Side.
sorenbarrett said:

Great write! Revenge is one of those drugs that leaves you feeling temporarily high only to fall into addiction and the ravishes of hate. Nicely written this poem switches off the pairing of devil and angel to provide a good balance nicely crafted

March 27th, 2025 04:07

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