Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Turmoil In a Crazy Mind
Cheeky Missy said:
What if, however, sadly when you were told the way to peace, you rejected it? We seem to have this twisted cry for help, pushing aside whom will deliver us for more torture. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
October 1st, 2025 12:50
Cheeky Missy said:
What if, however, sadly when you were told the way to peace, you rejected it? We seem to have this twisted cry for help, pushing aside whom will deliver us for more torture. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
October 1st, 2025 12:50
Hello or Goodbye.
whats write for me said:
The great dichotomy, well done.
September 16th, 2025 21:52
whats write for me said:
The great dichotomy, well done.
September 16th, 2025 21:52
Freedom of Expression.
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent write 🙏. Great 👍
August 17th, 2025 09:14
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An excellent write 🙏. Great 👍
August 17th, 2025 09:14
Grace and Dignity.
Gershon Wolf said:
Oooh. This one hits me right in the solar plexus. As if it singled me out to point its finger right at me. Yikes, Gershon
August 13th, 2025 21:19
Gershon Wolf said:
Oooh. This one hits me right in the solar plexus. As if it singled me out to point its finger right at me. Yikes, Gershon
August 13th, 2025 21:19
Gaza (Help).
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Its really heartbreaking and heart-rending that these zionists are doing genocide pf even babies and women all just and only for land nothing else. The injured kids is shocking for this day and age ah.
Bravo to souls like you that can at least acknowledge their appalling plight!!
July 26th, 2025 15:16
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Its really heartbreaking and heart-rending that these zionists are doing genocide pf even babies and women all just and only for land nothing else. The injured kids is shocking for this day and age ah.
Bravo to souls like you that can at least acknowledge their appalling plight!!
July 26th, 2025 15:16
I Don`t Have To Agree.
ElizabethMoroz said:
What a wonderful rhyming meditation on personal expression, democracy, freedom of speech, principals of kindness, the right to hold differing opinions yet still have a friendly conversation about it, gun violence, political division and coming together to debate. This piece is a wonderful diplomatic musing on the times that we live in. Very much enjoyed the themes and subject matter & especially the rhythmical cadence of the piece! Thankyou & well written ! Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 06:04
ElizabethMoroz said:
What a wonderful rhyming meditation on personal expression, democracy, freedom of speech, principals of kindness, the right to hold differing opinions yet still have a friendly conversation about it, gun violence, political division and coming together to debate. This piece is a wonderful diplomatic musing on the times that we live in. Very much enjoyed the themes and subject matter & especially the rhythmical cadence of the piece! Thankyou & well written ! Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 06:04
Spinning Hoops
Keeter C said:
Had to look that word up! Now that I know the meaning I totally concur!
July 20th, 2025 08:24
Keeter C said:
Had to look that word up! Now that I know the meaning I totally concur!
July 20th, 2025 08:24
Broken Mirror
Joan Reese said:
Sometimes you need to see what is broken in order to make it whole again. Insightful poem!
July 18th, 2025 07:50
Joan Reese said:
Sometimes you need to see what is broken in order to make it whole again. Insightful poem!
July 18th, 2025 07:50
Convert To Peace.
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful sentiment and heartfelt prayer. I agree with this beautiful sentiment. Thankyou for the excercise in profundity with brevity! Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 17th, 2025 04:56
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful sentiment and heartfelt prayer. I agree with this beautiful sentiment. Thankyou for the excercise in profundity with brevity! Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 17th, 2025 04:56
Gaza (Help).
ElizabethMoroz said:
Your use of rhythm propels a sense of urgency in your words . Excellent work on a most devastating situation. Necessary words of the time that we live in . Well done Sincerely Elizabeth
July 14th, 2025 05:49
ElizabethMoroz said:
Your use of rhythm propels a sense of urgency in your words . Excellent work on a most devastating situation. Necessary words of the time that we live in . Well done Sincerely Elizabeth
July 14th, 2025 05:49
Just Because.
AwHec8 said:
Absolutely Love this Poem. Nice short and sweet words you put together.
July 13th, 2025 17:27
AwHec8 said:
Absolutely Love this Poem. Nice short and sweet words you put together.
July 13th, 2025 17:27
Grace and Dignity.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
On another note and another read through, the opening to this very much reminds me of good ol\' William Blake: \"When the doors of perception are finally cleansed man will see things as they truly are: Infinite.\" Again. well done!
July 9th, 2025 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
On another note and another read through, the opening to this very much reminds me of good ol\' William Blake: \"When the doors of perception are finally cleansed man will see things as they truly are: Infinite.\" Again. well done!
July 9th, 2025 08:34
Grace and Dignity.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A-fucking-men. That is all that I can say to this. THIS...right here...is all one needs to know. They get this right, they\'ll be alright! Well done, my dear friend. Well done! A major standing ovation and fave. Pulling out the brolly now, in case the heavens open up to agree! 😂
July 9th, 2025 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A-fucking-men. That is all that I can say to this. THIS...right here...is all one needs to know. They get this right, they\'ll be alright! Well done, my dear friend. Well done! A major standing ovation and fave. Pulling out the brolly now, in case the heavens open up to agree! 😂
July 9th, 2025 08:31
Grace and Dignity.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani, that peace and freedom awaits us all.
Andy
July 9th, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani, that peace and freedom awaits us all.
Andy
July 9th, 2025 01:21
Grace and Dignity.
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed - i agree with you in some cases; in others where clowns play with people\'s lives, i don\'t...
July 9th, 2025 00:16
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed - i agree with you in some cases; in others where clowns play with people\'s lives, i don\'t...
July 9th, 2025 00:16
Grace and Dignity.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words cut deep, but true grace rises above bitterness. Perhaps peace begins when we release the need to wound.
July 8th, 2025 13:37
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words cut deep, but true grace rises above bitterness. Perhaps peace begins when we release the need to wound.
July 8th, 2025 13:37
Grace and Dignity.
Neville said:
Sometimes some things just need to be said & or written down .. I prefer the dual approach .. Well poemed my friend .. Neville
July 8th, 2025 10:30
Neville said:
Sometimes some things just need to be said & or written down .. I prefer the dual approach .. Well poemed my friend .. Neville
July 8th, 2025 10:30
Grace and Dignity.
Damaso said:
Thank you so much for sharing your words. They flow like healing water washing away the wounds. It\'s always a pleasure to stop by and read. Best regards.
July 8th, 2025 08:05
Damaso said:
Thank you so much for sharing your words. They flow like healing water washing away the wounds. It\'s always a pleasure to stop by and read. Best regards.
July 8th, 2025 08:05
Grace and Dignity.
David Wakeling said:
This poem expresses a harsh truth.None of us deserve eternal peace and freedom.But that is the tough facts of life.Made me think
July 8th, 2025 04:46
David Wakeling said:
This poem expresses a harsh truth.None of us deserve eternal peace and freedom.But that is the tough facts of life.Made me think
July 8th, 2025 04:46
Grace and Dignity.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of contradictions that boggle the mind. Unlocking something eternally locked and how do you lock up freedom? How does one walk through with honesty, grace, and dignity when one has not lived that way, especially with it being more than one deserves. This sounds like political claptrap before an election where all is promised and nothing given, straddling a fence as the best defense. A fun read and well designed a fave Oh by the way Tobani are you running for office?
July 8th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is full of contradictions that boggle the mind. Unlocking something eternally locked and how do you lock up freedom? How does one walk through with honesty, grace, and dignity when one has not lived that way, especially with it being more than one deserves. This sounds like political claptrap before an election where all is promised and nothing given, straddling a fence as the best defense. A fun read and well designed a fave Oh by the way Tobani are you running for office?
July 8th, 2025 04:13
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
NafisaSB said:
yes, seeds will sprout much better when tended with love and care. true words indeed
July 7th, 2025 23:04
NafisaSB said:
yes, seeds will sprout much better when tended with love and care. true words indeed
July 7th, 2025 23:04
Butterfly.
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re so irresistibly winsome and endearing with this gorgeous number. Rendered to effect with tasteful imagery and a charming poignancy, I love it, and you. Thank you for sharing.
July 7th, 2025 18:52
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re so irresistibly winsome and endearing with this gorgeous number. Rendered to effect with tasteful imagery and a charming poignancy, I love it, and you. Thank you for sharing.
July 7th, 2025 18:52
Butterfly.
Doggerel Dave said:
Nature\'s artwork in mobile form. Compelled to be fascinated by a butterfly. Caught that in your words, Tobani.
July 7th, 2025 17:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Nature\'s artwork in mobile form. Compelled to be fascinated by a butterfly. Caught that in your words, Tobani.
July 7th, 2025 17:38
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