Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
In The Veins.
sorenbarrett said:
Revenge gasoline for the fire of hatred. A heart felt write that pulls at the heart watching people sliding down the cliff of ideological feuds where bushes of reprisal are grasped at out of desperation. A curse of mankind whose memory for bad outlasts his memory for kindness and good. Well written
August 12th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Revenge gasoline for the fire of hatred. A heart felt write that pulls at the heart watching people sliding down the cliff of ideological feuds where bushes of reprisal are grasped at out of desperation. A curse of mankind whose memory for bad outlasts his memory for kindness and good. Well written
August 12th, 2025 04:09
GRATIAS (GAME OVER)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Exactly, Tobani! You’ve boiled it down to that blunt finality that hits harder because of its simplicity. The visual drop to “Game Over” seals it perfectly. Loved this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Exactly, Tobani! You’ve boiled it down to that blunt finality that hits harder because of its simplicity. The visual drop to “Game Over” seals it perfectly. Loved this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:29
GRATIAS (GAME OVER)
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess the most fascinating angle on this gorgeous beauty is how many times I\'ve spoken it aloud to acknowledge that\'s what I/we are irresistibly staring down. After that, pardon et moi, I don\'t know any Latin, excepting \"pig Latin: ig pay atin lay.\" Awesomely rendered with a disturbingly haunting and deadly poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 11th, 2025 11:12
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess the most fascinating angle on this gorgeous beauty is how many times I\'ve spoken it aloud to acknowledge that\'s what I/we are irresistibly staring down. After that, pardon et moi, I don\'t know any Latin, excepting \"pig Latin: ig pay atin lay.\" Awesomely rendered with a disturbingly haunting and deadly poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 11th, 2025 11:12
GRATIAS (GAME OVER)
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Tobani.
The master asked,
\"Why is the creator doing all of this?\"
The student said.
\"I do not know.\"
The master replied,
\"Place fingers in your ears
And close your eyes.
When I clap open both at once.\"
CLAP
\"Which is more fun?\"
August 11th, 2025 07:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Tobani.
The master asked,
\"Why is the creator doing all of this?\"
The student said.
\"I do not know.\"
The master replied,
\"Place fingers in your ears
And close your eyes.
When I clap open both at once.\"
CLAP
\"Which is more fun?\"
August 11th, 2025 07:20
GRATIAS (GAME OVER)
arqios said:
“To you, thanks I give for the jest.”
It has a slightly formal, almost ceremonial feel compared to how we’d phrase it in modern languages; like something a toga‑wearing stand‑up comic might say after a clever punchline. “I thank you for the joke”🕊️🙏🏻
August 11th, 2025 04:15
arqios said:
“To you, thanks I give for the jest.”
It has a slightly formal, almost ceremonial feel compared to how we’d phrase it in modern languages; like something a toga‑wearing stand‑up comic might say after a clever punchline. “I thank you for the joke”🕊️🙏🏻
August 11th, 2025 04:15
GRATIAS (GAME OVER)
sorenbarrett said:
Loved both the format and the message in this poem. Short and to the point it\'s wording is frustrating in reminding of messages received where access is denied on line. Password changed, wrong user name, account disabled, no record of such account on and on access denied where one had been before. The fun stops. A pertinent and poignant write Tobani
August 11th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Loved both the format and the message in this poem. Short and to the point it\'s wording is frustrating in reminding of messages received where access is denied on line. Password changed, wrong user name, account disabled, no record of such account on and on access denied where one had been before. The fun stops. A pertinent and poignant write Tobani
August 11th, 2025 03:43
Wise Man Say (24)
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Too many years ago my brothers\' line was something very like, \"... whoa! Let some steam off him!\" Pity we cannot indulge in a cuppa Barry\'s thanks to a heated exchange, haha. And oh the jokes, indeed, played on the souls who can\'t avoid taking themselves too seriously. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and good humor, and a definitely haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
August 10th, 2025 10:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Too many years ago my brothers\' line was something very like, \"... whoa! Let some steam off him!\" Pity we cannot indulge in a cuppa Barry\'s thanks to a heated exchange, haha. And oh the jokes, indeed, played on the souls who can\'t avoid taking themselves too seriously. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and good humor, and a definitely haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
August 10th, 2025 10:23
Honesty Policy (Fun)
Cheeky Missy said:
I dearly love how capably you make me burst out laughing. Poor Harry indeed! And while, of course, males and females in the \"animal kingdom\" cannot board up together for even one night without engaging in procreation, it\'s hilarious when you address reality. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 10th, 2025 10:18
Cheeky Missy said:
I dearly love how capably you make me burst out laughing. Poor Harry indeed! And while, of course, males and females in the \"animal kingdom\" cannot board up together for even one night without engaging in procreation, it\'s hilarious when you address reality. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 10th, 2025 10:18
Wise Man Say (24)
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobani,
I love them all but the first one was a gem. Bravo.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 10th, 2025 10:07
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobani,
I love them all but the first one was a gem. Bravo.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 10th, 2025 10:07
Wise Man Say (24)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Exactly, Tobani! You know I love these in their entirety.This one is just a brilliant. Each “wise man” bit lands like a wink and a nudge, but still leaves something to real to chew on, as they always do. Always a pleasure to read this series and your work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2025 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Exactly, Tobani! You know I love these in their entirety.This one is just a brilliant. Each “wise man” bit lands like a wink and a nudge, but still leaves something to real to chew on, as they always do. Always a pleasure to read this series and your work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2025 07:56
Wise Man Say (24)
sorenbarrett said:
You are so good at reminding me what day of the week it is and for that I am most grateful. Loved this edition it got me smiling early
August 10th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
You are so good at reminding me what day of the week it is and for that I am most grateful. Loved this edition it got me smiling early
August 10th, 2025 04:04
Soldier`s Remorse
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I read it thrice. Humanity came to life. An excellent write 🙏
August 10th, 2025 01:42
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I read it thrice. Humanity came to life. An excellent write 🙏
August 10th, 2025 01:42
Language of Gods.
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful commentary on music and its divine capacity for healing among other themes. Wonderful insightful writing. Thankyou! Elizabeth
August 9th, 2025 22:19
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful commentary on music and its divine capacity for healing among other themes. Wonderful insightful writing. Thankyou! Elizabeth
August 9th, 2025 22:19
Blank Expression.
Kevin Hulme said:
That English teacher sounds like a real jerk.
They say you always remember the good Teachers . That\'s half true as you remember the bad . My English Teacher was very helpful and didn\'t Hit you like the rest. She was also a Babe, but that\'s beside the Point.
People always say that I\'m very quiet. I usually say \' I\'m not Quiet l\'m just between sentences\'.
Anyway enough of my Ramblings: A fine Poem.
August 9th, 2025 19:59
Kevin Hulme said:
That English teacher sounds like a real jerk.
They say you always remember the good Teachers . That\'s half true as you remember the bad . My English Teacher was very helpful and didn\'t Hit you like the rest. She was also a Babe, but that\'s beside the Point.
People always say that I\'m very quiet. I usually say \' I\'m not Quiet l\'m just between sentences\'.
Anyway enough of my Ramblings: A fine Poem.
August 9th, 2025 19:59
Blank Expression.
Abdullah123 said:
As a student I really do resonate with this, how people often care more about the fact you look unhappy rather than thinking about why (it\'s often them hahaha, so I\'m glad they don\'t ask). It makes me feel even better looking at the long list of comments who reciprocate the feelings.
Great Write and Thank you
August 9th, 2025 08:56
Abdullah123 said:
As a student I really do resonate with this, how people often care more about the fact you look unhappy rather than thinking about why (it\'s often them hahaha, so I\'m glad they don\'t ask). It makes me feel even better looking at the long list of comments who reciprocate the feelings.
Great Write and Thank you
August 9th, 2025 08:56
Honesty Policy (Fun)
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor, well done, my friend. Have an amazing weekend.
August 9th, 2025 07:11
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor, well done, my friend. Have an amazing weekend.
August 9th, 2025 07:11
Honesty Policy (Fun)
Jerry Reynolds said:
And laugh I did, Tobani. Have a nice weekend.
August 9th, 2025 06:10
Jerry Reynolds said:
And laugh I did, Tobani. Have a nice weekend.
August 9th, 2025 06:10
Honesty Policy (Fun)
sorenbarrett said:
Starting off the weekend with a little humor Tobani. Well done and two for one too.
August 9th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
Starting off the weekend with a little humor Tobani. Well done and two for one too.
August 9th, 2025 03:47
Honesty Policy (Fun)
arqios said:
Yay, I’ll get to my fun poem for tomorrow’s post. Thanks for doing what you do 🙏🏻🕊️
August 9th, 2025 02:55
arqios said:
Yay, I’ll get to my fun poem for tomorrow’s post. Thanks for doing what you do 🙏🏻🕊️
August 9th, 2025 02:55
Blank Expression.
Teddy.15 said:
My invisible self. How very wonderful to get inside your mind. I was translucent at school by many teachers however I have two or three that truly were there with me. What a wonderful subject, you took me back to being 11, kudos. 🌹
August 9th, 2025 02:30
Teddy.15 said:
My invisible self. How very wonderful to get inside your mind. I was translucent at school by many teachers however I have two or three that truly were there with me. What a wonderful subject, you took me back to being 11, kudos. 🌹
August 9th, 2025 02:30
Blank Expression.
Goldfinch60 said:
The real me is the person that many cannot see but those who know you are those who can always see the real you Tobani.
Andy
August 9th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
The real me is the person that many cannot see but those who know you are those who can always see the real you Tobani.
Andy
August 9th, 2025 01:25
Blank Expression.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nataiella, this hits with truth...and that’s always hard to shake. The way you hold that emotional distance...it’s not cold, it’s protective. The repetition of judgment and questions mirrors the weight of living unseen. You captured that inner other-world beautifully, my dear friend. Hope all has been well in my absence. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 19:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nataiella, this hits with truth...and that’s always hard to shake. The way you hold that emotional distance...it’s not cold, it’s protective. The repetition of judgment and questions mirrors the weight of living unseen. You captured that inner other-world beautifully, my dear friend. Hope all has been well in my absence. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 19:36
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