Comments received on poems by Adiii
Single dad
sorenbarrett said:
The strength of being a father and its joy paired with the down side of doing it on your own and missing the mother. Nice use of pairing each point good and bad.
July 12th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
The strength of being a father and its joy paired with the down side of doing it on your own and missing the mother. Nice use of pairing each point good and bad.
July 12th, 2025 04:13
Single dad
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write highlighting the difficulties a good parent can go through when they are doing it single handed, very relatable to many, it is also a very positive write as both parents are still active in a positive way in that childs life, nicely expressed and written
July 12th, 2025 01:37
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write highlighting the difficulties a good parent can go through when they are doing it single handed, very relatable to many, it is also a very positive write as both parents are still active in a positive way in that childs life, nicely expressed and written
July 12th, 2025 01:37
Should I open the door ?
Doggerel Dave said:
Why open the door if you are only going to then remove it from here?
July 3rd, 2025 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Why open the door if you are only going to then remove it from here?
July 3rd, 2025 16:53
Should I open the door ?
sorenbarrett said:
Filled with blood and flesh this poem speaks of fear of an unknown creature that drains bodies and eats the flesh and since cannibalism is mentioned they must be human. A fun read
July 3rd, 2025 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
Filled with blood and flesh this poem speaks of fear of an unknown creature that drains bodies and eats the flesh and since cannibalism is mentioned they must be human. A fun read
July 3rd, 2025 13:15
Should I open the door ?
Poetic Licence said:
This a harrowing and haunting write that cuts to the heart as this write is what some people are genuinely experiencing and feeling, wonderfully written and expressed
July 3rd, 2025 12:57
Poetic Licence said:
This a harrowing and haunting write that cuts to the heart as this write is what some people are genuinely experiencing and feeling, wonderfully written and expressed
July 3rd, 2025 12:57
Extinct Echoes
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the extinction over time of many species, although some have been through natural evolution many have been at the hands of us, and I have no doubt that in due course we will be added to that list, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 00:52
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the extinction over time of many species, although some have been through natural evolution many have been at the hands of us, and I have no doubt that in due course we will be added to that list, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 00:52
Extinct Echoes
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write on the extinction of species. We have been a tool in some and probably in our own that may come. Evolution I believe has a broader scope and we merely alter it. Species come and go as in the great extinctions by changing of climate change in atmosphere, meteor strides raising debris into the atmosphere killing the plant life and all that depended on it. A wonderful poem.
June 29th, 2025 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write on the extinction of species. We have been a tool in some and probably in our own that may come. Evolution I believe has a broader scope and we merely alter it. Species come and go as in the great extinctions by changing of climate change in atmosphere, meteor strides raising debris into the atmosphere killing the plant life and all that depended on it. A wonderful poem.
June 29th, 2025 15:24
Die
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of desparation and the feeling of despair, regret and pain, well written and expressed
June 22nd, 2025 05:05
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of desparation and the feeling of despair, regret and pain, well written and expressed
June 22nd, 2025 05:05
Die
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of regret and pain. The depression and despair shown in varying rhyme schemes. Nicely written
June 22nd, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of regret and pain. The depression and despair shown in varying rhyme schemes. Nicely written
June 22nd, 2025 03:57
Mr. Bony\'s 13 Days
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful write, written in an entertaining way but with serious meaning, how people hurt and ignore others, sometimes without knowing they are doing that, and the effects it has on the recipient, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 09:06
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful write, written in an entertaining way but with serious meaning, how people hurt and ignore others, sometimes without knowing they are doing that, and the effects it has on the recipient, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 09:06
Mr. Bony\'s 13 Days
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a moral put into verse asking each person to ask themselves how they hurt and ignore others. Most lovely
June 19th, 2025 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a moral put into verse asking each person to ask themselves how they hurt and ignore others. Most lovely
June 19th, 2025 07:04
Sometimes I wish to be
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written piece, has a touch of a bedtime story to it, don\'t question who you are, be proud of who you are, loved the write
March 20th, 2025 05:09
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written piece, has a touch of a bedtime story to it, don\'t question who you are, be proud of who you are, loved the write
March 20th, 2025 05:09
Sometimes I wish to be
sorenbarrett said:
A poem a child would love with all the animal names and rhyme. A fun read.
March 20th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem a child would love with all the animal names and rhyme. A fun read.
March 20th, 2025 04:32
Gloss
arqios said:
Good for as long as it lasts, so we make the most of everything, life is short. 🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 07:35
arqios said:
Good for as long as it lasts, so we make the most of everything, life is short. 🙏🏻🕊
February 12th, 2025 07:35
Gloss
sorenbarrett said:
There is a recognition in this poem that all life is precious and that we may take a lesson form plants if we are humble enough to listen. A most lovely message.
January 26th, 2025 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
There is a recognition in this poem that all life is precious and that we may take a lesson form plants if we are humble enough to listen. A most lovely message.
January 26th, 2025 06:13
Rhyme of life
Poetic Licence said:
A touching piece of a person who has had a traumatic and quite lonely childhood and writing was part of the escape, and allowed them to express their feelings. Well written
December 30th, 2024 04:27
Poetic Licence said:
A touching piece of a person who has had a traumatic and quite lonely childhood and writing was part of the escape, and allowed them to express their feelings. Well written
December 30th, 2024 04:27
