Comments received on poems by Kwrf
\\\"Angels From Above\\\"
Severus Alexander said:
This is excellent!
"Angels have four wings.."
"With two they hide their faces.."
"And with two they fly.."
April 4th, 2016 10:40
Severus Alexander said:
This is excellent!
"Angels have four wings.."
"With two they hide their faces.."
"And with two they fly.."
April 4th, 2016 10:40
\\\"Angels From Above\\\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS "K" GREAT POEM FOR SUNDAY ! I believe too that God can Human Believers as Angels to bring a bit of LOVE & TLC in a very hurting World. Sometimes when we are prompted by GOD to be helpful to someone in need - they will thank us and say "You are a real ANGEL. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
April 3rd, 2016 17:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS "K" GREAT POEM FOR SUNDAY ! I believe too that God can Human Believers as Angels to bring a bit of LOVE & TLC in a very hurting World. Sometimes when we are prompted by GOD to be helpful to someone in need - they will thank us and say "You are a real ANGEL. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
April 3rd, 2016 17:53
\"At Last\"
Severus Alexander said:
You are most welcome!
It warms my heart to see an emerging talent such as yourself, so devoted the art. : )
April 1st, 2016 19:38
Severus Alexander said:
You are most welcome!
It warms my heart to see an emerging talent such as yourself, so devoted the art. : )
April 1st, 2016 19:38
\"At Last\"
Severus Alexander said:
Oh, dear lord... This is beautiful!
In reading this, I feel a renewed sense of faith in prospective writers.
Sometimes It seems that every other person I run into has ripped off half of his work from some famous poet... But this... This is spectacular. My man, you're an order of magnitude greater, both in skill and in spirit, than any other aspiring poet I've met so far.
This is simply amazing.
The greatest poets speak from the heart.... Poetry is the art of expressing beauty, as well as a tool for introspection, and a means of communication, both as internal dialogue and connection.
Not only have you managed to create free-form poetry that is both fluid and smooth, and also profoundly heartfelt, but you've managed to do so in a way that's very moderate-- you're no hack; some people overuse end-rhyme, but you've clearly mastered the technique of dissonance.
You've also established a rather exotic pattern of assonance, (rather by intent or otherwise) which provides an excellent flavor... A liquid, delicious texture to the lines.
However, first and foremost, you've pumped as much love and caring into this as humanly possible.
I love it. : )
I can see that this is the first poem that you've published on
my-poetic-side;
Judging by the grade of your work, (fan-tabulous) Can I presume that you've been writing for a while?
Do you have any tips for a beginner, such as I?
April 1st, 2016 19:02
Severus Alexander said:
Oh, dear lord... This is beautiful!
In reading this, I feel a renewed sense of faith in prospective writers.
Sometimes It seems that every other person I run into has ripped off half of his work from some famous poet... But this... This is spectacular. My man, you're an order of magnitude greater, both in skill and in spirit, than any other aspiring poet I've met so far.
This is simply amazing.
The greatest poets speak from the heart.... Poetry is the art of expressing beauty, as well as a tool for introspection, and a means of communication, both as internal dialogue and connection.
Not only have you managed to create free-form poetry that is both fluid and smooth, and also profoundly heartfelt, but you've managed to do so in a way that's very moderate-- you're no hack; some people overuse end-rhyme, but you've clearly mastered the technique of dissonance.
You've also established a rather exotic pattern of assonance, (rather by intent or otherwise) which provides an excellent flavor... A liquid, delicious texture to the lines.
However, first and foremost, you've pumped as much love and caring into this as humanly possible.
I love it. : )
I can see that this is the first poem that you've published on
my-poetic-side;
Judging by the grade of your work, (fan-tabulous) Can I presume that you've been writing for a while?
Do you have any tips for a beginner, such as I?
April 1st, 2016 19:02
