Comments received on poems by BruisedApple
The Unfortunate Reality of a Fortunate Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY BA ! A sad reflection indeed BUT where there's life there's hope ~ SO ~ Pick yourself up ~ brush yourself off ~ learn by your mistakes ~ and (with a true set of values) ~ start all over again ~ Blessings BRIAN
October 10th, 2016 04:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY BA ! A sad reflection indeed BUT where there's life there's hope ~ SO ~ Pick yourself up ~ brush yourself off ~ learn by your mistakes ~ and (with a true set of values) ~ start all over again ~ Blessings BRIAN
October 10th, 2016 04:05
Seance for a Lost Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI BA - Great first poem ! Good metre easy to read and recite and a consistent rhyme pattern xaxa - xbxb etc. Love the theme - LOST LOVE - something we all experience and as you say we will try anything (even a seance !) to recover a lost love. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
April 3rd, 2016 13:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI BA - Great first poem ! Good metre easy to read and recite and a consistent rhyme pattern xaxa - xbxb etc. Love the theme - LOST LOVE - something we all experience and as you say we will try anything (even a seance !) to recover a lost love. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
April 3rd, 2016 13:18
