Comments received on poems by rin
creature
Cassie58 said:
A puzzle, but you gave me great memories of collecting ammonites with a grandson, thrown on to a beach in Dorset after a stormy night. A precious memory.
December 16th, 2024 13:53
Cassie58 said:
A puzzle, but you gave me great memories of collecting ammonites with a grandson, thrown on to a beach in Dorset after a stormy night. A precious memory.
December 16th, 2024 13:53
creature
arqios said:
Interesting interplay here; the dynamic between the creature and the creator plus the observer and their creations. Omoshiroi 👍🏻
December 15th, 2024 18:18
arqios said:
Interesting interplay here; the dynamic between the creature and the creator plus the observer and their creations. Omoshiroi 👍🏻
December 15th, 2024 18:18
creature
sorenbarrett said:
God in poetry. Creating makes one its god so to speak.
December 15th, 2024 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
God in poetry. Creating makes one its god so to speak.
December 15th, 2024 03:54
mountain
arqios said:
Defiance does not aid transformation it only allows others to witness the occurrence to have taken place. Appearances can be deceptive.
December 14th, 2024 18:31
arqios said:
Defiance does not aid transformation it only allows others to witness the occurrence to have taken place. Appearances can be deceptive.
December 14th, 2024 18:31
mountain
Cassie58 said:
Against all the odds, the deer survived. Surely a story of courage in the face of extreme danger. People can be like that too. Enjoyed the read rin. All best wishes.
December 14th, 2024 13:34
Cassie58 said:
Against all the odds, the deer survived. Surely a story of courage in the face of extreme danger. People can be like that too. Enjoyed the read rin. All best wishes.
December 14th, 2024 13:34
mountain
vividvoid14 said:
I like this! Forget what your assigned to be and become who you are as a person! Kinda feel bad for the wolf😂
December 14th, 2024 05:57
vividvoid14 said:
I like this! Forget what your assigned to be and become who you are as a person! Kinda feel bad for the wolf😂
December 14th, 2024 05:57
mountain
sorenbarrett said:
A deep metaphoric story that strikes deep at human nature and individuality. We are not always what we are expected to be. A most interesting read
December 14th, 2024 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A deep metaphoric story that strikes deep at human nature and individuality. We are not always what we are expected to be. A most interesting read
December 14th, 2024 04:32
Gamera taking a camera
arqios said:
Coming back to life, there is that innate spark that ignites!
December 13th, 2024 09:13
arqios said:
Coming back to life, there is that innate spark that ignites!
December 13th, 2024 09:13
Gamera taking a camera
Lorenz said:
Does the eye of the camera know the beauty ?
December 13th, 2024 04:37
Lorenz said:
Does the eye of the camera know the beauty ?
December 13th, 2024 04:37
Gamera taking a camera
TobaniNataiella said:
It is another interesting read and i am still thinking about my interpretation of it, enjoyed the read
December 13th, 2024 03:32
TobaniNataiella said:
It is another interesting read and i am still thinking about my interpretation of it, enjoyed the read
December 13th, 2024 03:32
The two-headed eagle
Mutley Ravishes said:
Eagle envy. Love it!
\"Thoughts are not the problem.
Thinking you are the thoughts is the problem,\"
Said the million-headed eagle.
December 12th, 2024 18:59
Mutley Ravishes said:
Eagle envy. Love it!
\"Thoughts are not the problem.
Thinking you are the thoughts is the problem,\"
Said the million-headed eagle.
December 12th, 2024 18:59
The two-headed eagle
Cassie58 said:
Well rin, all I could think of when reading your poem is that when you’ve got a problem to solve, two heads are better than one. Enjoyed my visit to your page.
December 12th, 2024 13:09
Cassie58 said:
Well rin, all I could think of when reading your poem is that when you’ve got a problem to solve, two heads are better than one. Enjoyed my visit to your page.
December 12th, 2024 13:09
The two-headed eagle
sorenbarrett said:
Envy is not a good thing and little good comes from it. It would seem in this poem that the eagle represents American people. The most fun read.
December 12th, 2024 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Envy is not a good thing and little good comes from it. It would seem in this poem that the eagle represents American people. The most fun read.
December 12th, 2024 04:27
The two-headed eagle
TobaniNataiella said:
I enjoyed the read, reminds of that saying Two heads are better than one, when they are trying to solve a problem and that is not always the case, sometimes it just over complicates the issue. Good poem, Thank you
December 12th, 2024 04:23
TobaniNataiella said:
I enjoyed the read, reminds of that saying Two heads are better than one, when they are trying to solve a problem and that is not always the case, sometimes it just over complicates the issue. Good poem, Thank you
December 12th, 2024 04:23
The two-headed eagle
arqios said:
Oh for one clear thought! It appears to be about envy, complexity and understanding. King is he that determines his trouble.
December 12th, 2024 03:53
arqios said:
Oh for one clear thought! It appears to be about envy, complexity and understanding. King is he that determines his trouble.
December 12th, 2024 03:53
Humanoid
arqios said:
Inversion is a powerful concept that may represent opposite ends of a pendulum. Most people tend toward the golden mean, or that blend of compromise and self determination; a tension that is ever present from the dawn of history.
December 12th, 2024 03:37
arqios said:
Inversion is a powerful concept that may represent opposite ends of a pendulum. Most people tend toward the golden mean, or that blend of compromise and self determination; a tension that is ever present from the dawn of history.
December 12th, 2024 03:37
The two-headed eagle
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! You\'ve got me there. I can\'t pin down precisely what to reply in the face of that. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy.
December 12th, 2024 02:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! You\'ve got me there. I can\'t pin down precisely what to reply in the face of that. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy.
December 12th, 2024 02:30
Humanoid
Cassie58 said:
Scary world out there. Before we know it, all decisions will be made by AI, putting the human race at huge risk. And guess what, we’ ve done that to ourselves. Meddling too far for our own good. Enjoyed reading you rin.
December 11th, 2024 05:35
Cassie58 said:
Scary world out there. Before we know it, all decisions will be made by AI, putting the human race at huge risk. And guess what, we’ ve done that to ourselves. Meddling too far for our own good. Enjoyed reading you rin.
December 11th, 2024 05:35
Humanoid
teardrop said:
Who created the humanoids that take us as slaves and even worse? We did...lol Enjoyed reading this!
December 11th, 2024 05:02
teardrop said:
Who created the humanoids that take us as slaves and even worse? We did...lol Enjoyed reading this!
December 11th, 2024 05:02
Humanoid
sorenbarrett said:
A smile upside down is a frown. We may become slaves but we may not even be good enough for that and be eliminated. This poem reminds me of the Matrix. A lot contained in a few words and a lot to think about.
December 11th, 2024 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
A smile upside down is a frown. We may become slaves but we may not even be good enough for that and be eliminated. This poem reminds me of the Matrix. A lot contained in a few words and a lot to think about.
December 11th, 2024 04:34
Humanoid
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever bit of writing, with some irony in it, enjoyed the read
December 11th, 2024 03:21
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever bit of writing, with some irony in it, enjoyed the read
December 11th, 2024 03:21
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