Comments received on poems by rin



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NafisaSB said:

lucky you - congratulations

January 14th, 2025 00:12

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Brian Otucho said:

I love your poem. It is said that a poem might have many meanings according to the ones reading it.

January 8th, 2025 09:42

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Dan Williams said:

Rice cake? Pizza might work. Clever.

January 8th, 2025 01:06

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Thad Wilk said:

Wow!
An awesome poem indeed!
Wonderfully woven,
a really tasty treat to read! 🀀
Thank you for sharing poetess!
Best wishes πŸ€πŸ€—πŸŒΉ Thad

January 7th, 2025 21:10

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Mutley Ravishes said:

Have you ever tried genmai mochi? Fried in a little butter. Then wrapped in nori? Delicious!
And how about inviting Zoroaster for a chat too?!

January 7th, 2025 18:28

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arqios said:

Odango? With shōyu? πŸ‘πŸ»

January 7th, 2025 18:01

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Did not know that a roasted rice cake equals jealousy. I love rice cakes, but I imagine I might like roasted rice cakes even more! Wonderful, thought-provoking write, Rin. 🌹

January 7th, 2025 15:32

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sorenbarrett said:

All gods are jealous. A good write with a hidden meaning. Well constructed and true as well.

January 7th, 2025 13:07

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NinjaGirl said:

I think it\'s important for people to respect other religions, you may believe yours is right, but that doesn\'t give you the right to torment others, I like the thought of this poem...it seems to represent the worldly religion fights

January 7th, 2025 12:11

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LP2187 said:

Nice poem, we all need them to come together with rice cakes. But of course many are jealous of their power for being so mighty. At least that was my interpretation, which I\'m not good at.

January 7th, 2025 11:34

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Poetic Licence said:

Why can`t they eat together before, than the end of the world might not come, enjoyed the read.

January 7th, 2025 11:18

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Lorenz said:

You forgot Zarathustra ,Quetzalcoatl and Brahma !

January 7th, 2025 10:49

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arqios said:

Now this approach is close to my heart, rin! This poem underscores the theme that sometimes the true treasure is not what everyone seeks but what one quietly discovers and cherishes. The narrative highlights the contrast between the collective quest and the individual triumph, a reminder to us that what we seek might already be within our grasp. And so the journey itself is the treasure!

January 7th, 2025 06:18

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LP2187 said:

I like the idea of hidden truths, and that treasure must be found after a long search. Loved the poem!

January 7th, 2025 02:31

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Thad Wilk said:

A wonderful poem,
uplifting and
evocative indeed!πŸ‘
A treasure can be
happiness, and you
already have it! ☺️
My pleasure to read!
Best wishes πŸ€ πŸ€— Thad



January 6th, 2025 22:04

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NinjaGirl said:

you know, someone can spend their whole life looking for treasure only to never find it. I\'m glad you\'ve found your treasure!

January 6th, 2025 20:59

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sorenbarrett said:

Often the treasure others are looking for is not the treasure that is there. Is it possible that you found a different type of treasure or were you just that quick? Fun read

January 6th, 2025 20:23

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Mutley Ravishes said:

If they ain\'t found it, they ain\'t looked properly!


January 6th, 2025 18:19

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Poetic Licence said:

Sometimes what you really want and the treasure you are so badly searching every for, is right in front of you, but you have never noticed. Enjoyed the read again.

January 6th, 2025 16:39

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Cassie58 said:

The early bird catches the worm :)

January 6th, 2025 15:47

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Lorenz said:

There\'s a treasure at the bottom of the rainbow ...

January 6th, 2025 15:16

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

I really like this Rin. An easy fave for me. Different ways one can interpret this. My first read through, it felt to me as if the person ended up having that which they were searching for all along. That said, this poem can be read in multiple ways from different angles. I really like it. 🌹

January 6th, 2025 15:10

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Mutley Ravishes said:

Choose life like the folks in the intro to Trainspotting!

January 6th, 2025 01:04

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Thad Wilk said:

A captivating and
thought provoking write!! πŸ€”
Some poems are harder
to understand like free verse
and the use of metaphor.
Different forms I interpret those
In my own way, I have my own
special rainbow 🌈 hook.
Thanks for sharing!! 😊
Best wishes πŸ€ πŸ€— 🌹 Thad



January 5th, 2025 23:29

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Cassie58 said:

I wonder what you chose? I like to watch Netflix if I’m not reading poetry. I like gardening too, but it’s not gardening weather. Yep, some poems are difficult to read. Require patience. I don’t always have that. Good to read you rin.

January 5th, 2025 13:51

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Lorenz said:

Choose haiku or seppuku !

January 5th, 2025 11:42

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful write, Rin! I have found myself at this crossroads! I\'d imagine many have! Well done!

January 5th, 2025 08:01

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arqios said:

Choosing not to choose is always a decision. What we can do as a work around is to narrow down options and then work through these options and select one that means most to you, you are the beholder. And as far as opinions go, they cannot be right or wrong in themselves because they are opinions. But everyone has their own process. And that is valid too. What we value often reflects in our interpretations.

January 5th, 2025 05:33

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Poetic Licence said:

Each poem like life is open to your own interpretation and as such, we can never like everything we see, hear, feel, read, or do, but the important thing is We can choose. An interesting write, enjoyed the read

January 5th, 2025 04:48

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sorenbarrett said:

Some poems are undecipherable others are not identifiable, there are those that bore but if we do read them we always put our own interpretation on them and that should be a rainbow hook. Nice poem with a good message or at least the one that I got.

January 5th, 2025 04:42

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