Comments received on poems by rin
Tale of the Heike parody
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem, I thought I understood it until I got to the last line that I had to read the authors note that helped considerably. Thank you so much. This was a marvelous poem written in puzzle format.
November 29th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem, I thought I understood it until I got to the last line that I had to read the authors note that helped considerably. Thank you so much. This was a marvelous poem written in puzzle format.
November 29th, 2024 04:35
My sister
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our own ways of showing our love, and sometimes others do not perceive it the way we mean it. Nicely written.
November 28th, 2024 16:55
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our own ways of showing our love, and sometimes others do not perceive it the way we mean it. Nicely written.
November 28th, 2024 16:55
My sister
Lorenz said:
she seems to be a very excentric personality .I love it !
November 28th, 2024 10:50
Lorenz said:
she seems to be a very excentric personality .I love it !
November 28th, 2024 10:50
The transparent wall
arqios said:
Rin! You had me at the title! My ginkgo leaves are yellow but these are way cooler! The transparent wall rules 👍🏻
November 27th, 2024 06:37
arqios said:
Rin! You had me at the title! My ginkgo leaves are yellow but these are way cooler! The transparent wall rules 👍🏻
November 27th, 2024 06:37
The transparent wall
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor and vivid images, this poem speaks at various levels. Nicely written
November 27th, 2024 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor and vivid images, this poem speaks at various levels. Nicely written
November 27th, 2024 06:22
Cricket and Grasshopper
arqios said:
Bravo! Something to continue where we left off in our younger years, keep it coming and collect them for sharing!!!
November 25th, 2024 06:11
arqios said:
Bravo! Something to continue where we left off in our younger years, keep it coming and collect them for sharing!!!
November 25th, 2024 06:11
Cricket and Grasshopper
sorenbarrett said:
A fable well written and with deep meaning. Reminiscent of Aesop fables.
November 25th, 2024 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
A fable well written and with deep meaning. Reminiscent of Aesop fables.
November 25th, 2024 05:36
let\'s kill it
Neville said:
at first, I thought this was more cuckoo than a Bavarian clock .. but on reflection, I think it say\'s much more than the average cuckoo and it appears rather clever & I keep coming back to it .. .. Tōkō shite itadaki arigatōgozaimasu .. Neville
November 25th, 2024 02:54
Neville said:
at first, I thought this was more cuckoo than a Bavarian clock .. but on reflection, I think it say\'s much more than the average cuckoo and it appears rather clever & I keep coming back to it .. .. Tōkō shite itadaki arigatōgozaimasu .. Neville
November 25th, 2024 02:54
let\'s kill it
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Rin. You don\'t want it to sing— reaper is listning. Well unless you want to plant some rice.
November 24th, 2024 14:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Rin. You don\'t want it to sing— reaper is listning. Well unless you want to plant some rice.
November 24th, 2024 14:42
let\'s kill it
arqios said:
What to do if the (lesser) cuckoo won’t sing. Don’t put it in a cuckoo-clock for sure!
November 24th, 2024 06:18
arqios said:
What to do if the (lesser) cuckoo won’t sing. Don’t put it in a cuckoo-clock for sure!
November 24th, 2024 06:18
Justice and Injustice Koreans
arqios said:
Hard to understand that cultural nuance from a Nihongo mindset.
November 23rd, 2024 09:17
arqios said:
Hard to understand that cultural nuance from a Nihongo mindset.
November 23rd, 2024 09:17
BONSAI and Ordinary talent \'BONSAI to bonsai\'
arqios said:
Like the trees that surround the Imperial palace!
November 23rd, 2024 09:15
arqios said:
Like the trees that surround the Imperial palace!
November 23rd, 2024 09:15
hot cocoa
arqios said:
楽しかった! Showa kindness park is beautiful this time of year!
この時期の昭和記念公園は美しい！( thanks DeepL)
November 23rd, 2024 09:12
arqios said:
楽しかった! Showa kindness park is beautiful this time of year!
この時期の昭和記念公園は美しい！( thanks DeepL)
November 23rd, 2024 09:12
Justice and Injustice Koreans
sorenbarrett said:
The iron of being strict on crime, but corrupt oneself is not restricted to one nation, a nicely written piece
November 23rd, 2024 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
The iron of being strict on crime, but corrupt oneself is not restricted to one nation, a nicely written piece
November 23rd, 2024 08:16
Festival of the Weaver (July 7th)
Demar Desu said:
Great job and thanks for the history lesson
November 22nd, 2024 07:36
Demar Desu said:
Great job and thanks for the history lesson
November 22nd, 2024 07:36
BONSAI and Ordinary talent \'BONSAI to bonsai\'
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor to provoke philosophical thoughts regarding what is our and what is not nature is the supreme source of art, and she produces its best forms. Natural bonsai grow cracks on mountain sides, deprived of nutrients and water, shrunk size and twisted by the wind. They’re beauty is supreme shaped by adversity.
November 21st, 2024 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor to provoke philosophical thoughts regarding what is our and what is not nature is the supreme source of art, and she produces its best forms. Natural bonsai grow cracks on mountain sides, deprived of nutrients and water, shrunk size and twisted by the wind. They’re beauty is supreme shaped by adversity.
November 21st, 2024 04:31
BONSAI and Ordinary talent \'BONSAI to bonsai\'
Demar Desu said:
Why did you feel bad for the bonsai ?
November 21st, 2024 00:27
Demar Desu said:
Why did you feel bad for the bonsai ?
November 21st, 2024 00:27
hot cocoa
RSM0812 said:
I like the last line. A quick witty star wars reference. Lol
November 20th, 2024 06:23
RSM0812 said:
I like the last line. A quick witty star wars reference. Lol
November 20th, 2024 06:23
Christmas
Cassie58 said:
A bit of dark humour here. I appreciated it. Made me smile.
November 19th, 2024 10:10
Cassie58 said:
A bit of dark humour here. I appreciated it. Made me smile.
November 19th, 2024 10:10
Christmas
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Loved this. Brought a much meeded smile to my face. Well done, my friend. 🙏
November 19th, 2024 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Loved this. Brought a much meeded smile to my face. Well done, my friend. 🙏
November 19th, 2024 09:12
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