Comments received on poems by rin
Trinity
sorenbarrett said:
Ahh I love poems like this. In its ambiguity, it leaves much room for thought. Did God overrule the majority rule and move on or did the Holy Spirit vote with God? To get out the meaning of the poem, one must return to the first sentence. Why did Christ spit into heaven? And within that question, lies the answer. A wonderful poem
December 8th, 2024 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
Ahh I love poems like this. In its ambiguity, it leaves much room for thought. Did God overrule the majority rule and move on or did the Holy Spirit vote with God? To get out the meaning of the poem, one must return to the first sentence. Why did Christ spit into heaven? And within that question, lies the answer. A wonderful poem
December 8th, 2024 07:21
Trinity
arqios said:
How interesting a concept which shall probably remain hypothetical, interesting nonetheless.
December 8th, 2024 05:21
arqios said:
How interesting a concept which shall probably remain hypothetical, interesting nonetheless.
December 8th, 2024 05:21
Black feathers
teardrop said:
No One knew it meant a blessing, what a missed opportunity for all. Love you thought process here!
December 7th, 2024 23:16
teardrop said:
No One knew it meant a blessing, what a missed opportunity for all. Love you thought process here!
December 7th, 2024 23:16
Black feathers
arqios said:
Wow rin! That totally needed to be translated and shared. Liked and Faved. 👍🏻 By the way, the site is beautiful, it has no comment box activated so I couldn’t leave a sign that I visited so I am doing it here in this comment.
December 7th, 2024 14:59
arqios said:
Wow rin! That totally needed to be translated and shared. Liked and Faved. 👍🏻 By the way, the site is beautiful, it has no comment box activated so I couldn’t leave a sign that I visited so I am doing it here in this comment.
December 7th, 2024 14:59
Black feathers
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and rendered to effect in charming little stanzas mincing down the page with superb imagery and a gently haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 7th, 2024 09:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and rendered to effect in charming little stanzas mincing down the page with superb imagery and a gently haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 7th, 2024 09:45
Black feathers
Lorenz said:
no blessing under the rain
sky as a shield
nothing quenching your pain
December 7th, 2024 04:52
Lorenz said:
no blessing under the rain
sky as a shield
nothing quenching your pain
December 7th, 2024 04:52
Lord of the earRing
Mutley Ravishes said:
I like your spirit! Perhaps the blood of Numenor flows through your veins? After all, it\'s been said one of the twelve Lost Tribes made it all the way to Yamato.
December 4th, 2024 06:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
I like your spirit! Perhaps the blood of Numenor flows through your veins? After all, it\'s been said one of the twelve Lost Tribes made it all the way to Yamato.
December 4th, 2024 06:58
The Three Noah\'s Arks
Cassie58 said:
I smiled. I’ve often thought animals to be more useful and worthy than some of the human species. An interesting write rin.
December 2nd, 2024 08:11
Cassie58 said:
I smiled. I’ve often thought animals to be more useful and worthy than some of the human species. An interesting write rin.
December 2nd, 2024 08:11
The Three Noah\'s Arks
2781 said:
Now, I thought the beast busted the dyke, and everybody drowned.
December 2nd, 2024 07:34
2781 said:
Now, I thought the beast busted the dyke, and everybody drowned.
December 2nd, 2024 07:34
The Three Noah\'s Arks
arqios said:
Now that is an interesting take on the story. Very creative.
December 2nd, 2024 05:43
arqios said:
Now that is an interesting take on the story. Very creative.
December 2nd, 2024 05:43
Tale of the Heike parody
2781 said:
Could be prophetic.
Nice imagery, drowning in their own crap.
The beast you speak of lived where?
Pride comes before a fall..and the meek inherits it all.
So they say.
November 29th, 2024 06:49
2781 said:
Could be prophetic.
Nice imagery, drowning in their own crap.
The beast you speak of lived where?
Pride comes before a fall..and the meek inherits it all.
So they say.
November 29th, 2024 06:49
Tale of the Heike parody
arqios said:
I thought that name (Heike) sounded familiar. Must read up on them again.And indeed the Berlin Wall fell one day, I was watching it on live TV as a young university student. Good stuff, rin.
November 29th, 2024 05:51
arqios said:
I thought that name (Heike) sounded familiar. Must read up on them again.And indeed the Berlin Wall fell one day, I was watching it on live TV as a young university student. Good stuff, rin.
November 29th, 2024 05:51
Tale of the Heike parody
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem, I thought I understood it until I got to the last line that I had to read the authors note that helped considerably. Thank you so much. This was a marvelous poem written in puzzle format.
November 29th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem, I thought I understood it until I got to the last line that I had to read the authors note that helped considerably. Thank you so much. This was a marvelous poem written in puzzle format.
November 29th, 2024 04:35
My sister
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our own ways of showing our love, and sometimes others do not perceive it the way we mean it. Nicely written.
November 28th, 2024 16:55
sorenbarrett said:
We all have our own ways of showing our love, and sometimes others do not perceive it the way we mean it. Nicely written.
November 28th, 2024 16:55
My sister
Lorenz said:
she seems to be a very excentric personality .I love it !
November 28th, 2024 10:50
Lorenz said:
she seems to be a very excentric personality .I love it !
November 28th, 2024 10:50
The transparent wall
arqios said:
Rin! You had me at the title! My ginkgo leaves are yellow but these are way cooler! The transparent wall rules 👍🏻
November 27th, 2024 06:37
arqios said:
Rin! You had me at the title! My ginkgo leaves are yellow but these are way cooler! The transparent wall rules 👍🏻
November 27th, 2024 06:37
The transparent wall
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor and vivid images, this poem speaks at various levels. Nicely written
November 27th, 2024 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor and vivid images, this poem speaks at various levels. Nicely written
November 27th, 2024 06:22
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