Comments received on poems by athena.walker



His new Girl
Tony36 said:

Powerful write

December 10th, 2024 08:26

His new Girl
TobaniNataiella said:

I found this be quite a powerful poem and very well written about being in love with someone, knowing all it will ever be is in your head. Interesting read , Thank you

December 10th, 2024 04:36

Epilogue
Cassie58 said:

Hang in there. Broken hearts can be amended in time. This is a sad poem and many will relate. Take care Athena.

November 25th, 2024 16:41

Epilogue
Lorenz said:

Suicide could be a realistic option ...

November 25th, 2024 12:47

Fine-Line
Cassie58 said:

I smiled. Yes, it’s a fine line and most of us understand it happens like that at times. Enjoyed the read Athena.

November 23rd, 2024 07:55

What we could\'ve been
Cassie58 said:

It still hurts doesn’t it? Not all loves turn into happy ever afters they can become a poison chalice if you let them. Better to remember the good times

trench in my heart - an excellent description

Take the positives and discard the poison. I enjoyed reading you.

November 22nd, 2024 03:16