Comments received on poems by cellinic
I dissolve...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this feels like stepping into a dream and a meditation at the same time. There is something wonderfully ethereal about the movement between steam, twilight, stars, birdsong, and dawn. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this feels like stepping into a dream and a meditation at the same time. There is something wonderfully ethereal about the movement between steam, twilight, stars, birdsong, and dawn. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:32
I dissolve...
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of rhyme, meter and meaning painted in dream like imagery makes this a fave
June 11th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of rhyme, meter and meaning painted in dream like imagery makes this a fave
June 11th, 2026 04:07
Inconstancy
NafisaSB said:
A beautiful representation and reminder of what’s happening around us
June 4th, 2026 08:28
NafisaSB said:
A beautiful representation and reminder of what’s happening around us
June 4th, 2026 08:28
Russian Concertina
NafisaSB said:
a lot of questions put up here for us to ponder on...a good write..
June 2nd, 2026 02:21
NafisaSB said:
a lot of questions put up here for us to ponder on...a good write..
June 2nd, 2026 02:21
Beyond All Time, All Space and Pure Conception...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinc, this is one ambitious poem. What struck me most is the sense of vastness...history, faith, empires, memory, and human conflict all moving through the same current. It feels less like a narrative and more like a meditation on civilization itself. There is a dreamlike quality throughout that kept pulling me forward. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinc, this is one ambitious poem. What struck me most is the sense of vastness...history, faith, empires, memory, and human conflict all moving through the same current. It feels less like a narrative and more like a meditation on civilization itself. There is a dreamlike quality throughout that kept pulling me forward. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:59
Beyond All Time, All Space and Pure Conception...
sorenbarrett said:
This has the feel of Boudica and the revolt, of Druids cutting the mistletoe from the oak. Frazier\'s Golden Bough comes to mind. A lovely write
June 1st, 2026 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
This has the feel of Boudica and the revolt, of Druids cutting the mistletoe from the oak. Frazier\'s Golden Bough comes to mind. A lovely write
June 1st, 2026 11:23
Russian Concertina
rhmn_7 said:
This one definitely gets a fav, nice poem Cellinic!
May 31st, 2026 01:30
rhmn_7 said:
This one definitely gets a fav, nice poem Cellinic!
May 31st, 2026 01:30
Russian Concertina
sorenbarrett said:
A complex poem with deep meaning and emotions of loss and questioning. Well written
May 30th, 2026 11:07
sorenbarrett said:
A complex poem with deep meaning and emotions of loss and questioning. Well written
May 30th, 2026 11:07
Russian Concertina
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is beautifully melancholic. The poem feels suspended between prayer, memory, and self-examination, with music serving as the thread that carries it all forward. The atmosphere is rich from the very first lines. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is beautifully melancholic. The poem feels suspended between prayer, memory, and self-examination, with music serving as the thread that carries it all forward. The atmosphere is rich from the very first lines. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:27
Russian Concertina
Friendship said:
Well written. The poet delves into themes of love, loss, and the search for understanding in a world filled with complexities and unanswered questions.
May 30th, 2026 09:09
Friendship said:
Well written. The poet delves into themes of love, loss, and the search for understanding in a world filled with complexities and unanswered questions.
May 30th, 2026 09:09
Inconstancy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic… there’s a quiet, ancient weight in this…everything shifting, never quite settling. It pulls you into that sense of constant movement, and it lingers in a grounded way. You held that feeling all the way through. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic… there’s a quiet, ancient weight in this…everything shifting, never quite settling. It pulls you into that sense of constant movement, and it lingers in a grounded way. You held that feeling all the way through. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:36
Inconstancy
sorenbarrett said:
Entropy the overriding force of the universe. Nicely penned
April 13th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Entropy the overriding force of the universe. Nicely penned
April 13th, 2026 04:13
Sergey Gandlevsky. Shall I change the old record. Translation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this really pulls you in…there’s a quiet weight to it that just settles and stays. However you carried this into English, it lands with real presence. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this really pulls you in…there’s a quiet weight to it that just settles and stays. However you carried this into English, it lands with real presence. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:48
The Midnight Hours...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a restless, searching energy here…starting with that fractured heartbeat against the trains and moving into something deeper and more longing. That pull toward something just beyond reach carries it all the way to the end. It lingers. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a restless, searching energy here…starting with that fractured heartbeat against the trains and moving into something deeper and more longing. That pull toward something just beyond reach carries it all the way to the end. It lingers. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:15
The Midnight Hours...
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely existential write that flows well in its AB rhyme scheme and carries the reader to the end
April 3rd, 2026 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely existential write that flows well in its AB rhyme scheme and carries the reader to the end
April 3rd, 2026 07:55
Poet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a true ode to the poet’s calling…there’s a steady reverence here for the act of writing itself. It carries a sense of purpose all the way through. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this feels like a true ode to the poet’s calling…there’s a steady reverence here for the act of writing itself. It carries a sense of purpose all the way through. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 21st, 2026 08:53
Poet
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to the poet written with good rhyme and flow it sings out its message to all. Well done
March 21st, 2026 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to the poet written with good rhyme and flow it sings out its message to all. Well done
March 21st, 2026 07:32
The Time to Cherish Everlasting Dream...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this carries a heavy, reflective atmosphere. The references to Lisbon and Dublin give it a sense of wandering through old streets and older questions. It feels thoughtful and searching at the same time. A striking piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this carries a heavy, reflective atmosphere. The references to Lisbon and Dublin give it a sense of wandering through old streets and older questions. It feels thoughtful and searching at the same time. A striking piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:18
The Time to Cherish Everlasting Dream...
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem in this poem where tis better to live a dream than reality. A lovely write
March 13th, 2026 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem in this poem where tis better to live a dream than reality. A lovely write
March 13th, 2026 11:23
I Will Press to Your Hand Soft and Kind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a meditation on love that persists through distance and time. The sense of remembering shared moments while waiting for reunion feels very human. Those quiet promises carried across the years are rendered beautifully here. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a meditation on love that persists through distance and time. The sense of remembering shared moments while waiting for reunion feels very human. Those quiet promises carried across the years are rendered beautifully here. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 08:07
I Will Press to Your Hand Soft and Kind
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful write that is hopeful and faithful to dreams and love. Well rhymed and with such good meter and flow it speaks to me. A fave
March 11th, 2026 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful write that is hopeful and faithful to dreams and love. Well rhymed and with such good meter and flow it speaks to me. A fave
March 11th, 2026 05:12
February
Salvia.S said:
This captures the bittersweet beauty of February\'s thaw - winter loosening its grip, nature awakening. Beautiful!!!
February 20th, 2026 21:37
Salvia.S said:
This captures the bittersweet beauty of February\'s thaw - winter loosening its grip, nature awakening. Beautiful!!!
February 20th, 2026 21:37
February
Tonya Titus said:
February is well described here; the anticipated lessening of winter\'s grip & promise of what\'s ahead. Nicely done.
February 17th, 2026 12:47
Tonya Titus said:
February is well described here; the anticipated lessening of winter\'s grip & promise of what\'s ahead. Nicely done.
February 17th, 2026 12:47
February
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this holds the thaw beautifully. “Relinquishes its reins, yet clashes” gives it motion, and “The frost is kind, it bites no more” settles it into acceptance. It’s winter stepping aside without drama. Gentle, polished, and quietly hopeful. Love it, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this holds the thaw beautifully. “Relinquishes its reins, yet clashes” gives it motion, and “The frost is kind, it bites no more” settles it into acceptance. It’s winter stepping aside without drama. Gentle, polished, and quietly hopeful. Love it, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:43
February
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful description of nature in the transition of seasonal changes but it seems metaphor also applies
February 17th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful description of nature in the transition of seasonal changes but it seems metaphor also applies
February 17th, 2026 05:03
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