Comments received on poems by cellinic
To My Father. Winter\'s Winding Game
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem that is so well worded and rhymed it flows and is as smooth as honey. A fave
January 27th, 2026 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem that is so well worded and rhymed it flows and is as smooth as honey. A fave
January 27th, 2026 19:30
Your Footstep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is a thoughtful meditation on creation and recognition. Science, art, and spirit move together here, not in conflict but in harmony, until presence becomes unmistakable. The poem trusts the journey, and that trust carries it forward. Powerful work. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 27th, 2026 08:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is a thoughtful meditation on creation and recognition. Science, art, and spirit move together here, not in conflict but in harmony, until presence becomes unmistakable. The poem trusts the journey, and that trust carries it forward. Powerful work. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 27th, 2026 08:57
Your Footstep
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic it speaks in a most comforting mood. Vivid images paint this poem and it seems to sing rather than talk. Nicely done
January 26th, 2026 17:43
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic it speaks in a most comforting mood. Vivid images paint this poem and it seems to sing rather than talk. Nicely done
January 26th, 2026 17:43
Memory
sorenbarrett said:
It is clear to me that expectations do govern perceptions and that in such memories as well. Nicely written
January 26th, 2026 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is clear to me that expectations do govern perceptions and that in such memories as well. Nicely written
January 26th, 2026 14:04
Harmony of Peaks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I get this. The tension between pain remembered and harmony hoped for feels very real. It resonates as a quiet act of persistence. Very well done! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 25th, 2026 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I get this. The tension between pain remembered and harmony hoped for feels very real. It resonates as a quiet act of persistence. Very well done! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 25th, 2026 10:35
Harmony of Peaks
sorenbarrett said:
This reflective poem shows strong religious influence of a neo Christian nature nicely done
January 25th, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
This reflective poem shows strong religious influence of a neo Christian nature nicely done
January 25th, 2026 03:41
Your Eyes...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this is a gentle meditation on love as witness and endurance. You hold darkness, healing, and devotion together without rushing resolution, letting care itself become the miracle. A heartfelt piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 20th, 2026 15:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this is a gentle meditation on love as witness and endurance. You hold darkness, healing, and devotion together without rushing resolution, letting care itself become the miracle. A heartfelt piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 20th, 2026 15:08
Your Eyes...
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that opens as a rose bud that petal by petal opens revealing the rose. Nicely done
January 20th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that opens as a rose bud that petal by petal opens revealing the rose. Nicely done
January 20th, 2026 03:55
Beyond the conscience thoughts and my reflectionsβ¦
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem reveals the procession of life. A most lovely write and a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem reveals the procession of life. A most lovely write and a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:37
Dissolving
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this poem moves like a quiet pilgrimage. Breath, season, belief, and boredom all weave together until meaning arrives gently rather than announced. Itβs reflective, patient, and grounded in feeling. A thoughtful and resonant piece. A fave, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 18th, 2026 10:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this poem moves like a quiet pilgrimage. Breath, season, belief, and boredom all weave together until meaning arrives gently rather than announced. Itβs reflective, patient, and grounded in feeling. A thoughtful and resonant piece. A fave, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 18th, 2026 10:19
Dissolving
sorenbarrett said:
There is a rapid rush in this poem that like water in a high pressure hose moves too fast to catch the ripples and bubbles it stings with its pressure. Hard hitting
January 18th, 2026 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is a rapid rush in this poem that like water in a high pressure hose moves too fast to catch the ripples and bubbles it stings with its pressure. Hard hitting
January 18th, 2026 08:46
Enlightening
sorenbarrett said:
Here it is the rhyme and word ordering that take front seat in this poetic write. A fun read it engages the mind and takes on on a journey. Well done
January 16th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here it is the rhyme and word ordering that take front seat in this poetic write. A fun read it engages the mind and takes on on a journey. Well done
January 16th, 2026 06:40
Eurydice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is rich with myth, tenderness, and becoming. Shadow and light are not in conflict here, but learning each otherβs language. The poem moves toward meaning with grace, and that movement matters. Well done! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 13th, 2026 20:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is rich with myth, tenderness, and becoming. Shadow and light are not in conflict here, but learning each otherβs language. The poem moves toward meaning with grace, and that movement matters. Well done! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 13th, 2026 20:31
Eurydice
sorenbarrett said:
Several references to mythology fill this fantasy piece. Nicely worded. A lovely write
January 13th, 2026 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
Several references to mythology fill this fantasy piece. Nicely worded. A lovely write
January 13th, 2026 15:54
I can\'t forget, I cannot come back either...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic...well...I won\'t tell anyone! π€π€£ Thank you for the translation my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 10th, 2026 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic...well...I won\'t tell anyone! π€π€£ Thank you for the translation my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 10th, 2026 10:54
Memory
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this feels reflective and immersive. It moves gently through memory and perception without forcing clarity, and that softness gives it depth. I enjoyed sitting inside its rhythm and would love to hear it as a song. Great job.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 8th, 2026 14:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this feels reflective and immersive. It moves gently through memory and perception without forcing clarity, and that softness gives it depth. I enjoyed sitting inside its rhythm and would love to hear it as a song. Great job.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 8th, 2026 14:13
Memory
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition that things are as they are. Where everyone sees things in their own way. A nice write
January 8th, 2026 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition that things are as they are. Where everyone sees things in their own way. A nice write
January 8th, 2026 11:38
Spark of Eternity
sorenbarrett said:
If taken as metaphor this poem is a monument to restraint in a relationship that burns all the hotter for it. A lovely write that burns with measured passion that no longer seems to be the mode. Well done
December 28th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
If taken as metaphor this poem is a monument to restraint in a relationship that burns all the hotter for it. A lovely write that burns with measured passion that no longer seems to be the mode. Well done
December 28th, 2025 03:59
Happy New Year!
sorenbarrett said:
This write is a wonderful new year wish or blessing that speaks well the coming of a new age. Well done
December 25th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
This write is a wonderful new year wish or blessing that speaks well the coming of a new age. Well done
December 25th, 2025 03:58
Dans le milieu...
cellinic said:
thanks for your comment, but in fact not really much broken)
December 15th, 2025 09:59
cellinic said:
thanks for your comment, but in fact not really much broken)
December 15th, 2025 09:59
One by one, overcoming all obstacles...
arqios said:
A step at a time, a breath at a time, day by day. ποΈππ€©
December 14th, 2025 06:06
arqios said:
A step at a time, a breath at a time, day by day. ποΈππ€©
December 14th, 2025 06:06
One by one, overcoming all obstacles...
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of inner reflections and manipulations going on in this piece. Well written and nicely done
December 13th, 2025 20:52
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of inner reflections and manipulations going on in this piece. Well written and nicely done
December 13th, 2025 20:52
I Trust You Like I Trust Myself
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautiful expression of trust and unity. The words flow like a gentle stream, and the emotions are sincere. It\'s a touching prayer for mutual support and kindness. The imagery is serene, and the message is heartwarming. Very nice!!!
December 10th, 2025 05:23
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautiful expression of trust and unity. The words flow like a gentle stream, and the emotions are sincere. It\'s a touching prayer for mutual support and kindness. The imagery is serene, and the message is heartwarming. Very nice!!!
December 10th, 2025 05:23
I Trust You Like I Trust Myself
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for unity in this poem. Nicely said
December 9th, 2025 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for unity in this poem. Nicely said
December 9th, 2025 20:07
Red Nice Horsie
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a Christmas list for a young child. So innocent and child like. Loved it
December 8th, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a Christmas list for a young child. So innocent and child like. Loved it
December 8th, 2025 17:28
In the Faraway Land
sorenbarrett said:
A fanciful write that is most romantic and wistful. A lovely write
November 26th, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
A fanciful write that is most romantic and wistful. A lovely write
November 26th, 2025 10:57
My Little God
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of how we all have our gods big or small in form or not and how we nourish them. Lovely
September 30th, 2025 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of how we all have our gods big or small in form or not and how we nourish them. Lovely
September 30th, 2025 07:51
Vadim Zaitsev. The Dawn Queen.
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
The imagery of dawn, roses, and spring is enchanting. It feels timeless. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 08:41
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
The imagery of dawn, roses, and spring is enchanting. It feels timeless. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 08:41
Vadim Zaitsev. The Dawn Queen.
sorenbarrett said:
Passion hypnotic, seduced by desire in a poem nicely written. Well done
September 7th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Passion hypnotic, seduced by desire in a poem nicely written. Well done
September 7th, 2025 07:05
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