Comments received on poems by cellinic
La chandelle de mes jours
arqios said:
The candle of my days is as tender as my life,
Enchanted pilgrim, I continue walking on
With all my wonderful senses to the time when the book
Which is sad and so beautiful all embrace the esplanade...
And I hold in my hand every image of your days
Almost no autumn escapee will understand
The meaning of our love, and the weight that seems heavy,
But none can change it, turn it on or off...
… or something like that, apologies for the butchering.
January 10th, 2025 08:25
arqios said:
The candle of my days is as tender as my life,
Enchanted pilgrim, I continue walking on
With all my wonderful senses to the time when the book
Which is sad and so beautiful all embrace the esplanade...
And I hold in my hand every image of your days
Almost no autumn escapee will understand
The meaning of our love, and the weight that seems heavy,
But none can change it, turn it on or off...
… or something like that, apologies for the butchering.
January 10th, 2025 08:25
With Christmas rain delights become confessions...
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, intriguing to the hilt, and deliciously poignant with excellent imagery, la dee! Rendered beautifully to effect, thank you very much for sharing. [I think I\'ll just die of curiosity.]
December 21st, 2024 15:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, intriguing to the hilt, and deliciously poignant with excellent imagery, la dee! Rendered beautifully to effect, thank you very much for sharing. [I think I\'ll just die of curiosity.]
December 21st, 2024 15:38
With Christmas rain delights become confessions...
Cassie58 said:
Out with the old and in with the new. Your poem brings hope for the new year. I think we all need that in a world that is troubled. Uplifting and enjoyed. Thank you.
December 21st, 2024 13:42
Cassie58 said:
Out with the old and in with the new. Your poem brings hope for the new year. I think we all need that in a world that is troubled. Uplifting and enjoyed. Thank you.
December 21st, 2024 13:42
With Christmas rain delights become confessions...
Neville said:
Absolutely .. my fingers are all appropriately crossed in the hopeful anticipation of a half decent 2025 ... for one & all .. 🧑🎄🐧👍
December 21st, 2024 05:58
Neville said:
Absolutely .. my fingers are all appropriately crossed in the hopeful anticipation of a half decent 2025 ... for one & all .. 🧑🎄🐧👍
December 21st, 2024 05:58
With Christmas rain delights become confessions...
arqios said:
This poem\'s hopeful tone anticipates the incoming year is so uplifting!
December 21st, 2024 05:54
arqios said:
This poem\'s hopeful tone anticipates the incoming year is so uplifting!
December 21st, 2024 05:54
With Christmas rain delights become confessions...
TobaniNataiella said:
I think we are all hoping the new year will be better, very enjoyable read.
December 21st, 2024 02:24
TobaniNataiella said:
I think we are all hoping the new year will be better, very enjoyable read.
December 21st, 2024 02:24
Life cause
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought-provoking, my friend. An emotional, spiritual and creative poem that invites multiple reads for sure! Well done! 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought-provoking, my friend. An emotional, spiritual and creative poem that invites multiple reads for sure! Well done! 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 09:06
Life cause
arqios said:
A beautiful blend of emotion, spirituality, and creativity. Its rich imagery and evocative language create a tapestry of thought that is both grounded and ethereal. This poem allows us to connect with our innermost dreams and find fulfilment through poetry and spirituality. Thanks so much for sharing.
December 20th, 2024 07:16
arqios said:
A beautiful blend of emotion, spirituality, and creativity. Its rich imagery and evocative language create a tapestry of thought that is both grounded and ethereal. This poem allows us to connect with our innermost dreams and find fulfilment through poetry and spirituality. Thanks so much for sharing.
December 20th, 2024 07:16
Life cause
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I felt like a journey towards true meaning and harmony. An excellent poem. Enjoyable and thought provoking
December 20th, 2024 06:59
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I felt like a journey towards true meaning and harmony. An excellent poem. Enjoyable and thought provoking
December 20th, 2024 06:59
Life cause
TobaniNataiella said:
I will be honest i am not sure i understand what it is about, but i have enjoyed reading it, Thank you
December 20th, 2024 06:17
TobaniNataiella said:
I will be honest i am not sure i understand what it is about, but i have enjoyed reading it, Thank you
December 20th, 2024 06:17
Voice
Neville said:
Gripping stuff .. took me on a magical mystery tour with spectacular insights & views whenever I tried to read between the lines .. 😎👍
December 19th, 2024 12:48
Neville said:
Gripping stuff .. took me on a magical mystery tour with spectacular insights & views whenever I tried to read between the lines .. 😎👍
December 19th, 2024 12:48
Voice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful words that invite multiple reads! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 19th, 2024 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful words that invite multiple reads! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 19th, 2024 08:16
Voice
TobaniNataiella said:
For me a very interesting read and i will re-read, as it is making ask a lot of questions, enjoyed the read
December 19th, 2024 05:07
TobaniNataiella said:
For me a very interesting read and i will re-read, as it is making ask a lot of questions, enjoyed the read
December 19th, 2024 05:07
Voice
arqios said:
Hopefully speaking of a voice that accompanies a transformative journey from disconnection and sorrow to hope and clarity, guided by introspection and the powerful, supportive voice that brightens even the darkest days.
December 19th, 2024 04:36
arqios said:
Hopefully speaking of a voice that accompanies a transformative journey from disconnection and sorrow to hope and clarity, guided by introspection and the powerful, supportive voice that brightens even the darkest days.
December 19th, 2024 04:36
Sleepless
Neville said:
I\'ve had more than my fair share of such moments .. the guitar & or a mandolin provide but a brief distraction and respite .. a compelling post today cellinic 🎶🎶🎵👍
December 19th, 2024 02:28
Neville said:
I\'ve had more than my fair share of such moments .. the guitar & or a mandolin provide but a brief distraction and respite .. a compelling post today cellinic 🎶🎶🎵👍
December 19th, 2024 02:28
Sleepless
arqios said:
I believe the sound of the guitar to be a great accompaniment to this introspective on existential pain. Other sounds would not fit and even jar. I hear it already!
December 18th, 2024 03:19
arqios said:
I believe the sound of the guitar to be a great accompaniment to this introspective on existential pain. Other sounds would not fit and even jar. I hear it already!
December 18th, 2024 03:19
The Spirit Immersing the Waters of Passion...
arqios said:
Wow! The drive towards compassion amidst chaos speaks volumes about the resilience and nobility of the human spirit. Splendid read. Liked and Faved!
December 15th, 2024 20:58
arqios said:
Wow! The drive towards compassion amidst chaos speaks volumes about the resilience and nobility of the human spirit. Splendid read. Liked and Faved!
December 15th, 2024 20:58
The Spirit Immersing the Waters of Passion...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Now this speaks all levels of truth! Wonderful job! I will call Neville\'s dubbel 👍👍 and raise you a 🌹👏! Seriously, well done, my friend!
December 14th, 2024 10:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Now this speaks all levels of truth! Wonderful job! I will call Neville\'s dubbel 👍👍 and raise you a 🌹👏! Seriously, well done, my friend!
December 14th, 2024 10:45
The Spirit Immersing the Waters of Passion...
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautiful poem that i am very glad i read, My Fav of the day
December 14th, 2024 06:08
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautiful poem that i am very glad i read, My Fav of the day
December 14th, 2024 06:08
The Spirit Immersing the Waters of Passion...
Neville said:
exquisitely poemed .. perfection on an otherwise blank page .. gets a dubble 👍👍from yours truly ..
December 14th, 2024 03:54
Neville said:
exquisitely poemed .. perfection on an otherwise blank page .. gets a dubble 👍👍from yours truly ..
December 14th, 2024 03:54
Possessive Case
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is truly wonderfully wise, my friend! Well done. Easily faved! 🌹👏
December 13th, 2024 08:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is truly wonderfully wise, my friend! Well done. Easily faved! 🌹👏
December 13th, 2024 08:29
Possessive Case
TobaniNataiella said:
I totally echo Neville comments, really enjoyable and interesting read, Thank you
December 13th, 2024 05:48
TobaniNataiella said:
I totally echo Neville comments, really enjoyable and interesting read, Thank you
December 13th, 2024 05:48
Possessive Case
Neville said:
What\'s not to like or love .. now that aint a question, tis but an observation and statement of fact .. 😎👍
December 13th, 2024 04:40
Neville said:
What\'s not to like or love .. now that aint a question, tis but an observation and statement of fact .. 😎👍
December 13th, 2024 04:40
My Sweet Autumn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spring, Summer…and autumn (though late autumn my SAD kicks in). Still, my three favorite seasons. Thank you for this beautiful pioem! 🙏❤️
December 12th, 2024 06:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spring, Summer…and autumn (though late autumn my SAD kicks in). Still, my three favorite seasons. Thank you for this beautiful pioem! 🙏❤️
December 12th, 2024 06:51
My Sweet Autumn
TobaniNataiella said:
Each season brings around different emotions but they are interlinked, It is a very enjoyable read and i think it is not just about Autumn.
December 12th, 2024 04:00
TobaniNataiella said:
Each season brings around different emotions but they are interlinked, It is a very enjoyable read and i think it is not just about Autumn.
December 12th, 2024 04:00
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