Comments received on poems by cellinic
February
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful description of nature in the transition of seasonal changes but it seems metaphor also applies
February 17th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful description of nature in the transition of seasonal changes but it seems metaphor also applies
February 17th, 2026 05:03
Surge of Love.
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem of union that warms the soul. Nicely written in rhyme. Well done
February 15th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem of union that warms the soul. Nicely written in rhyme. Well done
February 15th, 2026 04:32
Ocean of love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this poem moves like a quiet pilgrimage through love. Depth, devotion, and inner fire are woven together without excess. Itโs uplifting without being naรฏve, and that balance gives it strength. Great job, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
February 4th, 2026 10:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this poem moves like a quiet pilgrimage through love. Depth, devotion, and inner fire are woven together without excess. Itโs uplifting without being naรฏve, and that balance gives it strength. Great job, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
February 4th, 2026 10:28
Ocean of love
sorenbarrett said:
It is a deep sea with beauty and danger. A lovely write of the origin of life, the predators it contains and its peace and peril. Well written
February 4th, 2026 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
It is a deep sea with beauty and danger. A lovely write of the origin of life, the predators it contains and its peace and peril. Well written
February 4th, 2026 05:55
Autumn Shadows
NafisaSB said:
memories and inspiration both described beautifully here...
February 4th, 2026 01:21
NafisaSB said:
memories and inspiration both described beautifully here...
February 4th, 2026 01:21
The Covenant of Love
arqios said:
That makes life so valuable and sacred! ๐๏ธ๐
February 1st, 2026 19:59
arqios said:
That makes life so valuable and sacred! ๐๏ธ๐
February 1st, 2026 19:59
The Covenant of Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this speaks to the longing for steadiness in unsettled times. The way you pair inquiry with tenderness feels honestโฆas if thinking and loving are meant to work together, not compete. I felt that balance. Beautiful job! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
February 1st, 2026 13:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this speaks to the longing for steadiness in unsettled times. The way you pair inquiry with tenderness feels honestโฆas if thinking and loving are meant to work together, not compete. I felt that balance. Beautiful job! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
February 1st, 2026 13:49
The Covenant of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a declaration that seems a marriage vow but now days that marriage seems a thing of the past such a declaration might be made as a vow itself. Nicely done
January 31st, 2026 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a declaration that seems a marriage vow but now days that marriage seems a thing of the past such a declaration might be made as a vow itself. Nicely done
January 31st, 2026 20:14
Autumn Shadows
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, my friend. That image of โhand-carved shadows, cast by the autumnโ really struck me. It gives the season intention, as if memory itself is shaping the light. A beautiful, tactile moment and a wonderful poem. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 30th, 2026 21:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great job, my friend. That image of โhand-carved shadows, cast by the autumnโ really struck me. It gives the season intention, as if memory itself is shaping the light. A beautiful, tactile moment and a wonderful poem. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 30th, 2026 21:00
Autumn Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely metered this poem presents memories and reflections. Nicely done
January 30th, 2026 19:47
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely metered this poem presents memories and reflections. Nicely done
January 30th, 2026 19:47
I don\'t love it
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is fierce and unflinching. It doesnโt hedge or softenโฆit stands upright and names what it refuses to tolerate. That moral spine runs through every stanza, and it lands hard. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 30th, 2026 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is fierce and unflinching. It doesnโt hedge or softenโฆit stands upright and names what it refuses to tolerate. That moral spine runs through every stanza, and it lands hard. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 30th, 2026 09:52
I don\'t love it
sorenbarrett said:
You list eliminates ninety nine percent of the population. A good read that talks of hypocrisy and selfishness. Well written
January 29th, 2026 19:13
sorenbarrett said:
You list eliminates ninety nine percent of the population. A good read that talks of hypocrisy and selfishness. Well written
January 29th, 2026 19:13
To My Father. Winter\'s Winding Game
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is a thoughtful meditation on inheritance and love. Illusion, memory, and restraint move together until love becomes the constant that outlasts them all. The poem doesnโt solve the mysteryโฆit stays with it. Very powerful and a fave, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 28th, 2026 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is a thoughtful meditation on inheritance and love. Illusion, memory, and restraint move together until love becomes the constant that outlasts them all. The poem doesnโt solve the mysteryโฆit stays with it. Very powerful and a fave, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 28th, 2026 10:51
To My Father. Winter\'s Winding Game
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem that is so well worded and rhymed it flows and is as smooth as honey. A fave
January 27th, 2026 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem that is so well worded and rhymed it flows and is as smooth as honey. A fave
January 27th, 2026 19:30
Your Footstep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is a thoughtful meditation on creation and recognition. Science, art, and spirit move together here, not in conflict but in harmony, until presence becomes unmistakable. The poem trusts the journey, and that trust carries it forward. Powerful work. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 27th, 2026 08:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is a thoughtful meditation on creation and recognition. Science, art, and spirit move together here, not in conflict but in harmony, until presence becomes unmistakable. The poem trusts the journey, and that trust carries it forward. Powerful work. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 27th, 2026 08:57
Your Footstep
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic it speaks in a most comforting mood. Vivid images paint this poem and it seems to sing rather than talk. Nicely done
January 26th, 2026 17:43
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic it speaks in a most comforting mood. Vivid images paint this poem and it seems to sing rather than talk. Nicely done
January 26th, 2026 17:43
Memory
sorenbarrett said:
It is clear to me that expectations do govern perceptions and that in such memories as well. Nicely written
January 26th, 2026 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is clear to me that expectations do govern perceptions and that in such memories as well. Nicely written
January 26th, 2026 14:04
Harmony of Peaks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I get this. The tension between pain remembered and harmony hoped for feels very real. It resonates as a quiet act of persistence. Very well done! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 25th, 2026 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I get this. The tension between pain remembered and harmony hoped for feels very real. It resonates as a quiet act of persistence. Very well done! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 25th, 2026 10:35
Harmony of Peaks
sorenbarrett said:
This reflective poem shows strong religious influence of a neo Christian nature nicely done
January 25th, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
This reflective poem shows strong religious influence of a neo Christian nature nicely done
January 25th, 2026 03:41
Your Eyes...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this is a gentle meditation on love as witness and endurance. You hold darkness, healing, and devotion together without rushing resolution, letting care itself become the miracle. A heartfelt piece, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 20th, 2026 15:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this is a gentle meditation on love as witness and endurance. You hold darkness, healing, and devotion together without rushing resolution, letting care itself become the miracle. A heartfelt piece, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 20th, 2026 15:08
Your Eyes...
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that opens as a rose bud that petal by petal opens revealing the rose. Nicely done
January 20th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that opens as a rose bud that petal by petal opens revealing the rose. Nicely done
January 20th, 2026 03:55
Beyond the conscience thoughts and my reflectionsโฆ
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem reveals the procession of life. A most lovely write and a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem reveals the procession of life. A most lovely write and a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:37
Dissolving
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this poem moves like a quiet pilgrimage. Breath, season, belief, and boredom all weave together until meaning arrives gently rather than announced. Itโs reflective, patient, and grounded in feeling. A thoughtful and resonant piece. A fave, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 18th, 2026 10:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this poem moves like a quiet pilgrimage. Breath, season, belief, and boredom all weave together until meaning arrives gently rather than announced. Itโs reflective, patient, and grounded in feeling. A thoughtful and resonant piece. A fave, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 18th, 2026 10:19
Dissolving
sorenbarrett said:
There is a rapid rush in this poem that like water in a high pressure hose moves too fast to catch the ripples and bubbles it stings with its pressure. Hard hitting
January 18th, 2026 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is a rapid rush in this poem that like water in a high pressure hose moves too fast to catch the ripples and bubbles it stings with its pressure. Hard hitting
January 18th, 2026 08:46
Enlightening
sorenbarrett said:
Here it is the rhyme and word ordering that take front seat in this poetic write. A fun read it engages the mind and takes on on a journey. Well done
January 16th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here it is the rhyme and word ordering that take front seat in this poetic write. A fun read it engages the mind and takes on on a journey. Well done
January 16th, 2026 06:40
Eurydice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is rich with myth, tenderness, and becoming. Shadow and light are not in conflict here, but learning each otherโs language. The poem moves toward meaning with grace, and that movement matters. Well done! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 13th, 2026 20:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is rich with myth, tenderness, and becoming. Shadow and light are not in conflict here, but learning each otherโs language. The poem moves toward meaning with grace, and that movement matters. Well done! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 13th, 2026 20:31
Eurydice
sorenbarrett said:
Several references to mythology fill this fantasy piece. Nicely worded. A lovely write
January 13th, 2026 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
Several references to mythology fill this fantasy piece. Nicely worded. A lovely write
January 13th, 2026 15:54
I can\'t forget, I cannot come back either...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic...well...I won\'t tell anyone! ๐ค๐คฃ Thank you for the translation my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 10th, 2026 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic...well...I won\'t tell anyone! ๐ค๐คฃ Thank you for the translation my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 10th, 2026 10:54
Memory
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this feels reflective and immersive. It moves gently through memory and perception without forcing clarity, and that softness gives it depth. I enjoyed sitting inside its rhythm and would love to hear it as a song. Great job.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 8th, 2026 14:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this feels reflective and immersive. It moves gently through memory and perception without forcing clarity, and that softness gives it depth. I enjoyed sitting inside its rhythm and would love to hear it as a song. Great job.๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
January 8th, 2026 14:13
Memory
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition that things are as they are. Where everyone sees things in their own way. A nice write
January 8th, 2026 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition that things are as they are. Where everyone sees things in their own way. A nice write
January 8th, 2026 11:38
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