Comments received on poems by cellinic
Je t\'aime
sorenbarrett said:
There is a gentle sense of intimacy in this poem that whispers. Nicely done
July 2nd, 2026 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
There is a gentle sense of intimacy in this poem that whispers. Nicely done
July 2nd, 2026 03:38
In Hour of Unrest
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, what a graceful meditation. The movement between mystery, longing, beauty, and rebirth feels seamless, and the questions themselves become part of the journey rather than obstacles to it. I came away less concerned with finding answers and more appreciative of the search itself. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, what a graceful meditation. The movement between mystery, longing, beauty, and rebirth feels seamless, and the questions themselves become part of the journey rather than obstacles to it. I came away less concerned with finding answers and more appreciative of the search itself. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:45
In Hour of Unrest
Neville said:
I bet you feel so much better having got all this off your chest and out into the open .. Neville 😎👍
June 27th, 2026 04:34
Neville said:
I bet you feel so much better having got all this off your chest and out into the open .. Neville 😎👍
June 27th, 2026 04:34
In Hour of Unrest
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is quite dense in its wording and deserves multiple readings. It speaks of sacrifice and of passion and love. It is philosophical and very nicely written. Its wording and rhyme and first rate. I give it a fave
June 27th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is quite dense in its wording and deserves multiple readings. It speaks of sacrifice and of passion and love. It is philosophical and very nicely written. Its wording and rhyme and first rate. I give it a fave
June 27th, 2026 04:14
Devotion
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sincere, almost hymn-like quality here—steady, declarative, and grounded in belief. It reads like something meant to be spoken aloud, with that repeating “Devotion is…” acting as both anchor and affirmation.
June 21st, 2026 08:12
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sincere, almost hymn-like quality here—steady, declarative, and grounded in belief. It reads like something meant to be spoken aloud, with that repeating “Devotion is…” acting as both anchor and affirmation.
June 21st, 2026 08:12
Devotion
sorenbarrett said:
A smooth piece that delivers its message quickly and poetically with rhyme. Well done
June 21st, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
A smooth piece that delivers its message quickly and poetically with rhyme. Well done
June 21st, 2026 04:36
To Josef Brodsky
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is beautiful. There is such reverence throughout the poem...not merely for the person being remembered, but for the enduring power of their words. It feels both mournful and grateful at the same time. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is beautiful. There is such reverence throughout the poem...not merely for the person being remembered, but for the enduring power of their words. It feels both mournful and grateful at the same time. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:28
To Josef Brodsky
sorenbarrett said:
Well done both the original and the translation.
June 16th, 2026 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
Well done both the original and the translation.
June 16th, 2026 08:16
There is a Sacred Line in Human Closeness...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this really moved me. There is a profound sadness running through these lines...the ache of recognizing a boundary that feeling alone cannot erase. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 14th, 2026 07:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this really moved me. There is a profound sadness running through these lines...the ache of recognizing a boundary that feeling alone cannot erase. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 14th, 2026 07:54
There is a Sacred Line in Human Closeness...
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a haunting restraint here—love held right at the edge, where crossing over would cost something essential.
It feels almost tragic in its clarity: the heart refuses not from lack of feeling, but because it understands too much.
June 14th, 2026 07:16
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a haunting restraint here—love held right at the edge, where crossing over would cost something essential.
It feels almost tragic in its clarity: the heart refuses not from lack of feeling, but because it understands too much.
June 14th, 2026 07:16
There is a Sacred Line in Human Closeness...
sorenbarrett said:
Translation more difficult than writing oneself. I have tried it before. To keep the original meaning and feeling of the poem while maintaining meter and rhyme are near impossible given the differences in languages ask Alexander Pope and how well he did with the Iliad and the Odyssey epic poems from ancient Greek. Very nicely done.
June 14th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Translation more difficult than writing oneself. I have tried it before. To keep the original meaning and feeling of the poem while maintaining meter and rhyme are near impossible given the differences in languages ask Alexander Pope and how well he did with the Iliad and the Odyssey epic poems from ancient Greek. Very nicely done.
June 14th, 2026 04:27
Beyond the Crossroads of All Times...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this really drew me in. It feels like standing at the edge of something ancient and listening closely enough to catch its voice. There\'s a beautiful sense of wonder running through this piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this really drew me in. It feels like standing at the edge of something ancient and listening closely enough to catch its voice. There\'s a beautiful sense of wonder running through this piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:07
Beyond the Crossroads of All Times...
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem of cultural spirituality echoing out of the past. It has a calling feeling to it. Nicely done
June 13th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem of cultural spirituality echoing out of the past. It has a calling feeling to it. Nicely done
June 13th, 2026 04:00
I dissolve...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this feels like stepping into a dream and a meditation at the same time. There is something wonderfully ethereal about the movement between steam, twilight, stars, birdsong, and dawn. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this feels like stepping into a dream and a meditation at the same time. There is something wonderfully ethereal about the movement between steam, twilight, stars, birdsong, and dawn. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:32
I dissolve...
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of rhyme, meter and meaning painted in dream like imagery makes this a fave
June 11th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of rhyme, meter and meaning painted in dream like imagery makes this a fave
June 11th, 2026 04:07
Inconstancy
NafisaSB said:
A beautiful representation and reminder of what’s happening around us
June 4th, 2026 08:28
NafisaSB said:
A beautiful representation and reminder of what’s happening around us
June 4th, 2026 08:28
Russian Concertina
NafisaSB said:
a lot of questions put up here for us to ponder on...a good write..
June 2nd, 2026 02:21
NafisaSB said:
a lot of questions put up here for us to ponder on...a good write..
June 2nd, 2026 02:21
Beyond All Time, All Space and Pure Conception...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinc, this is one ambitious poem. What struck me most is the sense of vastness...history, faith, empires, memory, and human conflict all moving through the same current. It feels less like a narrative and more like a meditation on civilization itself. There is a dreamlike quality throughout that kept pulling me forward. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinc, this is one ambitious poem. What struck me most is the sense of vastness...history, faith, empires, memory, and human conflict all moving through the same current. It feels less like a narrative and more like a meditation on civilization itself. There is a dreamlike quality throughout that kept pulling me forward. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:59
Beyond All Time, All Space and Pure Conception...
sorenbarrett said:
This has the feel of Boudica and the revolt, of Druids cutting the mistletoe from the oak. Frazier\'s Golden Bough comes to mind. A lovely write
June 1st, 2026 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
This has the feel of Boudica and the revolt, of Druids cutting the mistletoe from the oak. Frazier\'s Golden Bough comes to mind. A lovely write
June 1st, 2026 11:23
Russian Concertina
rhmn_7 said:
This one definitely gets a fav, nice poem Cellinic!
May 31st, 2026 01:30
rhmn_7 said:
This one definitely gets a fav, nice poem Cellinic!
May 31st, 2026 01:30
Russian Concertina
sorenbarrett said:
A complex poem with deep meaning and emotions of loss and questioning. Well written
May 30th, 2026 11:07
sorenbarrett said:
A complex poem with deep meaning and emotions of loss and questioning. Well written
May 30th, 2026 11:07
Russian Concertina
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is beautifully melancholic. The poem feels suspended between prayer, memory, and self-examination, with music serving as the thread that carries it all forward. The atmosphere is rich from the very first lines. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this is beautifully melancholic. The poem feels suspended between prayer, memory, and self-examination, with music serving as the thread that carries it all forward. The atmosphere is rich from the very first lines. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:27
Russian Concertina
Friendship said:
Well written. The poet delves into themes of love, loss, and the search for understanding in a world filled with complexities and unanswered questions.
May 30th, 2026 09:09
Friendship said:
Well written. The poet delves into themes of love, loss, and the search for understanding in a world filled with complexities and unanswered questions.
May 30th, 2026 09:09
Inconstancy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic… there’s a quiet, ancient weight in this…everything shifting, never quite settling. It pulls you into that sense of constant movement, and it lingers in a grounded way. You held that feeling all the way through. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic… there’s a quiet, ancient weight in this…everything shifting, never quite settling. It pulls you into that sense of constant movement, and it lingers in a grounded way. You held that feeling all the way through. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:36
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