Memory
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Cellinic, this feels reflective and immersive. It moves gently through memory and perception without forcing clarity, and that softness gives it depth. I enjoyed sitting inside its rhythm and would love to hear it as a song. Great job.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

January 8th, 2026 14:13

Spark of Eternity
sorenbarrett said:

If taken as metaphor this poem is a monument to restraint in a relationship that burns all the hotter for it. A lovely write that burns with measured passion that no longer seems to be the mode. Well done

December 28th, 2025 03:59

Dans le milieu...
cellinic said:

thanks for your comment, but in fact not really much broken)

December 15th, 2025 09:59

One by one, overcoming all obstacles...
arqios said:

A step at a time, a breath at a time, day by day. 🕊️🙏🤩

December 14th, 2025 06:06

I Trust You Like I Trust Myself
Salvia.S said:

This is a beautiful expression of trust and unity. The words flow like a gentle stream, and the emotions are sincere. It\'s a touching prayer for mutual support and kindness. The imagery is serene, and the message is heartwarming. Very nice!!!

December 10th, 2025 05:23

Red Nice Horsie
sorenbarrett said:

This seems a Christmas list for a young child. So innocent and child like. Loved it

December 8th, 2025 17:28

My Little God
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem of how we all have our gods big or small in form or not and how we nourish them. Lovely

September 30th, 2025 07:51

Vadim Zaitsev. The Dawn Queen.
sorenbarrett said:

Passion hypnotic, seduced by desire in a poem nicely written. Well done

September 7th, 2025 07:05

Vladimir Gippius No consolation is for ghostly life oblivion
Poetic Licence said:

That\'s a Lovely and interesting write, the journey of life, enjoyed the read

August 11th, 2025 10:21

Icelandic song of love
Neville said:



Damn it\'s good to be back for a while .. Neville

July 8th, 2025 07:59

Icelandic song of love
arqios said:

Here we are met with a sweeping, myth-laced hymn to Iceland,;a land where love, legend, and loss coalesce in the folds of time and landscape. It weaves Freyja’s magic with volcanic breath, runic mysteries with romantic destiny, tracing a journey that spans ancient sagas and spiritual rebirth. There’s an aching beauty in the inevitability of parting and reunion, where even Helheim becomes a threshold, not an end. Through elemental imagery and lyrical cadence, the poem suggests that love—when rooted in place, tradition, and the soul\'s longing, can transcend even death\'s grasp. It reads like a windswept ballad written on stone and sky.

July 5th, 2025 07:29

Icelandic song of love
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful images that appear dreamlike but real and nature and myth melded as one. Nicely written

July 5th, 2025 05:38

Andrey Yurich. Happy Easter. Translation
sorenbarrett said:

Lovely words for a special season. A poem almost a prayer this one rings with good wishes for mankind. Lovely

April 25th, 2025 06:22

Boris Pasternak, The Dawn. Translation
sorenbarrett said:

A roller-coaster of emotion in this poem with its ups and downs. The feeling or rejection over rides it all. Sad but a good write.

March 24th, 2025 15:53

Let\'s say hello...
Poetic Licence said:

An entertaining read nicely crafted, enjoyed

March 11th, 2025 12:54