Comments received on poems by cellinic
Your Eyes...
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that opens as a rose bud that petal by petal opens revealing the rose. Nicely done
January 20th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that opens as a rose bud that petal by petal opens revealing the rose. Nicely done
January 20th, 2026 03:55
Beyond the conscience thoughts and my reflections…
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem reveals the procession of life. A most lovely write and a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem reveals the procession of life. A most lovely write and a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:37
Dissolving
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this poem moves like a quiet pilgrimage. Breath, season, belief, and boredom all weave together until meaning arrives gently rather than announced. It’s reflective, patient, and grounded in feeling. A thoughtful and resonant piece. A fave, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 10:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
cellinic, this poem moves like a quiet pilgrimage. Breath, season, belief, and boredom all weave together until meaning arrives gently rather than announced. It’s reflective, patient, and grounded in feeling. A thoughtful and resonant piece. A fave, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 10:19
Dissolving
sorenbarrett said:
There is a rapid rush in this poem that like water in a high pressure hose moves too fast to catch the ripples and bubbles it stings with its pressure. Hard hitting
January 18th, 2026 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is a rapid rush in this poem that like water in a high pressure hose moves too fast to catch the ripples and bubbles it stings with its pressure. Hard hitting
January 18th, 2026 08:46
Enlightening
sorenbarrett said:
Here it is the rhyme and word ordering that take front seat in this poetic write. A fun read it engages the mind and takes on on a journey. Well done
January 16th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here it is the rhyme and word ordering that take front seat in this poetic write. A fun read it engages the mind and takes on on a journey. Well done
January 16th, 2026 06:40
Eurydice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is rich with myth, tenderness, and becoming. Shadow and light are not in conflict here, but learning each other’s language. The poem moves toward meaning with grace, and that movement matters. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 20:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is rich with myth, tenderness, and becoming. Shadow and light are not in conflict here, but learning each other’s language. The poem moves toward meaning with grace, and that movement matters. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 13th, 2026 20:31
Eurydice
sorenbarrett said:
Several references to mythology fill this fantasy piece. Nicely worded. A lovely write
January 13th, 2026 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
Several references to mythology fill this fantasy piece. Nicely worded. A lovely write
January 13th, 2026 15:54
I can\'t forget, I cannot come back either...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic...well...I won\'t tell anyone! 🤐🤣 Thank you for the translation my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 10th, 2026 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic...well...I won\'t tell anyone! 🤐🤣 Thank you for the translation my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 10th, 2026 10:54
Memory
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this feels reflective and immersive. It moves gently through memory and perception without forcing clarity, and that softness gives it depth. I enjoyed sitting inside its rhythm and would love to hear it as a song. Great job.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 8th, 2026 14:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Cellinic, this feels reflective and immersive. It moves gently through memory and perception without forcing clarity, and that softness gives it depth. I enjoyed sitting inside its rhythm and would love to hear it as a song. Great job.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 8th, 2026 14:13
Memory
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition that things are as they are. Where everyone sees things in their own way. A nice write
January 8th, 2026 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition that things are as they are. Where everyone sees things in their own way. A nice write
January 8th, 2026 11:38
Spark of Eternity
sorenbarrett said:
If taken as metaphor this poem is a monument to restraint in a relationship that burns all the hotter for it. A lovely write that burns with measured passion that no longer seems to be the mode. Well done
December 28th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
If taken as metaphor this poem is a monument to restraint in a relationship that burns all the hotter for it. A lovely write that burns with measured passion that no longer seems to be the mode. Well done
December 28th, 2025 03:59
Happy New Year!
sorenbarrett said:
This write is a wonderful new year wish or blessing that speaks well the coming of a new age. Well done
December 25th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
This write is a wonderful new year wish or blessing that speaks well the coming of a new age. Well done
December 25th, 2025 03:58
Dans le milieu...
cellinic said:
thanks for your comment, but in fact not really much broken)
December 15th, 2025 09:59
cellinic said:
thanks for your comment, but in fact not really much broken)
December 15th, 2025 09:59
One by one, overcoming all obstacles...
arqios said:
A step at a time, a breath at a time, day by day. 🕊️🙏🤩
December 14th, 2025 06:06
arqios said:
A step at a time, a breath at a time, day by day. 🕊️🙏🤩
December 14th, 2025 06:06
One by one, overcoming all obstacles...
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of inner reflections and manipulations going on in this piece. Well written and nicely done
December 13th, 2025 20:52
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of inner reflections and manipulations going on in this piece. Well written and nicely done
December 13th, 2025 20:52
I Trust You Like I Trust Myself
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautiful expression of trust and unity. The words flow like a gentle stream, and the emotions are sincere. It\'s a touching prayer for mutual support and kindness. The imagery is serene, and the message is heartwarming. Very nice!!!
December 10th, 2025 05:23
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautiful expression of trust and unity. The words flow like a gentle stream, and the emotions are sincere. It\'s a touching prayer for mutual support and kindness. The imagery is serene, and the message is heartwarming. Very nice!!!
December 10th, 2025 05:23
I Trust You Like I Trust Myself
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for unity in this poem. Nicely said
December 9th, 2025 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for unity in this poem. Nicely said
December 9th, 2025 20:07
Red Nice Horsie
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a Christmas list for a young child. So innocent and child like. Loved it
December 8th, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a Christmas list for a young child. So innocent and child like. Loved it
December 8th, 2025 17:28
In the Faraway Land
sorenbarrett said:
A fanciful write that is most romantic and wistful. A lovely write
November 26th, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
A fanciful write that is most romantic and wistful. A lovely write
November 26th, 2025 10:57
My Little God
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of how we all have our gods big or small in form or not and how we nourish them. Lovely
September 30th, 2025 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of how we all have our gods big or small in form or not and how we nourish them. Lovely
September 30th, 2025 07:51
Vadim Zaitsev. The Dawn Queen.
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
The imagery of dawn, roses, and spring is enchanting. It feels timeless. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 08:41
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
The imagery of dawn, roses, and spring is enchanting. It feels timeless. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 08:41
Vadim Zaitsev. The Dawn Queen.
sorenbarrett said:
Passion hypnotic, seduced by desire in a poem nicely written. Well done
September 7th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Passion hypnotic, seduced by desire in a poem nicely written. Well done
September 7th, 2025 07:05
Vladimir Gippius No consolation is for ghostly life oblivion
Salvia.S said:
It\'s a heartfelt and atmospheric translation that captures the soul of the poem well. The emotion and imagery come through beautifully. Well done 👍
August 12th, 2025 21:17
Salvia.S said:
It\'s a heartfelt and atmospheric translation that captures the soul of the poem well. The emotion and imagery come through beautifully. Well done 👍
August 12th, 2025 21:17
Vladimir Gippius No consolation is for ghostly life oblivion
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a Lovely and interesting write, the journey of life, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 10:21
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a Lovely and interesting write, the journey of life, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 10:21
Vladimir Gippius No consolation is for ghostly life oblivion
sorenbarrett said:
A great sonnett that speaks to the evolution of life from sea to land. Very nicely done
August 11th, 2025 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
A great sonnett that speaks to the evolution of life from sea to land. Very nicely done
August 11th, 2025 09:20
Icelandic song of love
Neville said:
Damn it\'s good to be back for a while .. Neville
July 8th, 2025 07:59
Neville said:
Damn it\'s good to be back for a while .. Neville
July 8th, 2025 07:59
Icelandic song of love
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written with rich and evocative imagery painting vivid scenes that blend nature, mythology and emotion. Well done 👍
July 5th, 2025 09:12
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written with rich and evocative imagery painting vivid scenes that blend nature, mythology and emotion. Well done 👍
July 5th, 2025 09:12
Icelandic song of love
arqios said:
Here we are met with a sweeping, myth-laced hymn to Iceland,;a land where love, legend, and loss coalesce in the folds of time and landscape. It weaves Freyja’s magic with volcanic breath, runic mysteries with romantic destiny, tracing a journey that spans ancient sagas and spiritual rebirth. There’s an aching beauty in the inevitability of parting and reunion, where even Helheim becomes a threshold, not an end. Through elemental imagery and lyrical cadence, the poem suggests that love—when rooted in place, tradition, and the soul\'s longing, can transcend even death\'s grasp. It reads like a windswept ballad written on stone and sky.
July 5th, 2025 07:29
arqios said:
Here we are met with a sweeping, myth-laced hymn to Iceland,;a land where love, legend, and loss coalesce in the folds of time and landscape. It weaves Freyja’s magic with volcanic breath, runic mysteries with romantic destiny, tracing a journey that spans ancient sagas and spiritual rebirth. There’s an aching beauty in the inevitability of parting and reunion, where even Helheim becomes a threshold, not an end. Through elemental imagery and lyrical cadence, the poem suggests that love—when rooted in place, tradition, and the soul\'s longing, can transcend even death\'s grasp. It reads like a windswept ballad written on stone and sky.
July 5th, 2025 07:29
Icelandic song of love
Poetic Licence said:
That is a beautiful write, wonderful imagery mixing myth with reality and nature, enjoyed the read
July 5th, 2025 06:54
Poetic Licence said:
That is a beautiful write, wonderful imagery mixing myth with reality and nature, enjoyed the read
July 5th, 2025 06:54
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