Comments received on poems by Brian Otucho
Flight 19: Lost in the Triangle\'s Veil
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting tale of one of the mysterys of the bermuda triangle, which still has its secrets buried, nicely expressed and written
July 4th, 2025 05:30
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting tale of one of the mysterys of the bermuda triangle, which still has its secrets buried, nicely expressed and written
July 4th, 2025 05:30
Flight 19: Lost in the Triangle\'s Veil
sorenbarrett said:
A ghostly write of an unexplained loss in the Bermuda triangle. This poem reads gallantly and proudly blending into a mournful and haunting ending. Nicely done.
July 4th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
A ghostly write of an unexplained loss in the Bermuda triangle. This poem reads gallantly and proudly blending into a mournful and haunting ending. Nicely done.
July 4th, 2025 04:57
My Silence Still Screams: Flight 431
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of a real tradegy, and the sadness that followed, nicely expressed and written
June 29th, 2025 07:08
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of a real tradegy, and the sadness that followed, nicely expressed and written
June 29th, 2025 07:08
My Silence Still Screams: Flight 431
sorenbarrett said:
This is a tragic write that touches the soul and stimulates the thought of anyone that has flown or knows someone that has flown. In a broader sense it tells of unforeseen deaths in any way and that separation that ensues and leaves us with nothing but memories. A sad poem that leaves a feeling of a void. A fave
June 29th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This is a tragic write that touches the soul and stimulates the thought of anyone that has flown or knows someone that has flown. In a broader sense it tells of unforeseen deaths in any way and that separation that ensues and leaves us with nothing but memories. A sad poem that leaves a feeling of a void. A fave
June 29th, 2025 04:26
My Silence Still Screams: Flight 431
2781 said:
I would like to think this is fiction, for you?
June 29th, 2025 03:27
2781 said:
I would like to think this is fiction, for you?
June 29th, 2025 03:27
Echoes of the Deep
Poetic Licence said:
We will rise again from the tradegy of natures strikes but also a sense this could relate to global warming, and how nature is increasingly letting us know enough is enough, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 19:51
Poetic Licence said:
We will rise again from the tradegy of natures strikes but also a sense this could relate to global warming, and how nature is increasingly letting us know enough is enough, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 19:51
Echoes of the Deep
sorenbarrett said:
In a tragedy worded beauty, from the wreckage of despair a beautiful prayer of renewal raising from nature\'s blow. A fave
June 28th, 2025 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
In a tragedy worded beauty, from the wreckage of despair a beautiful prayer of renewal raising from nature\'s blow. A fave
June 28th, 2025 15:48
Always Something
Poetic Licence said:
Clever observations in what is normal perceptions, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 09:43
Poetic Licence said:
Clever observations in what is normal perceptions, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 09:43
Always Something
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there is and a good write indeed with more social perception than is common. Very nice
June 4th, 2025 09:05
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there is and a good write indeed with more social perception than is common. Very nice
June 4th, 2025 09:05
The Siege of Seven Days
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed writing of a biblical tale, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 08:18
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed writing of a biblical tale, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 08:18
The Siege of Seven Days
sorenbarrett said:
A great retelling of a biblical tale. Well done.
April 28th, 2025 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
A great retelling of a biblical tale. Well done.
April 28th, 2025 12:16
A Story of the Living Dead
sorenbarrett said:
Several good lines here. I like the idea of the thread and to where it led. A wonderful poem
April 27th, 2025 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
Several good lines here. I like the idea of the thread and to where it led. A wonderful poem
April 27th, 2025 11:47
A Story of the Living Dead
Tony Grannell said:
When the walls of Jericho came tumbling down in a well wrought Biblical verse. A beautiful passage of poetic literature - excellent! Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 09:50
Tony Grannell said:
When the walls of Jericho came tumbling down in a well wrought Biblical verse. A beautiful passage of poetic literature - excellent! Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 09:50
Jonah\'s Lament
sorenbarrett said:
The story of Jonah and the whale and more. This really was well written and reads much smoother than the biblical version. Loved it
April 26th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
The story of Jonah and the whale and more. This really was well written and reads much smoother than the biblical version. Loved it
April 26th, 2025 05:28
The Fall of Lucifer
Lorenz said:
God and Devil a same opposite and complementary face .
April 25th, 2025 15:46
Lorenz said:
God and Devil a same opposite and complementary face .
April 25th, 2025 15:46
The Fall of Lucifer
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and smooth flow in this poem of the fall of Lucifer. A story well known but polished and retold in bright new words that sparkle with great lines and images. Lovely
April 25th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and smooth flow in this poem of the fall of Lucifer. A story well known but polished and retold in bright new words that sparkle with great lines and images. Lovely
April 25th, 2025 09:26
Calm into Calamity
sorenbarrett said:
Things of calm and beauty can change in a minute to rage and terror. A great metaphor.
April 24th, 2025 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
Things of calm and beauty can change in a minute to rage and terror. A great metaphor.
April 24th, 2025 11:11
The Wooden Brother\'s Embrace
sorenbarrett said:
Enemies sneak into our midst with little regard and knowledge of what comes. A great write
April 22nd, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Enemies sneak into our midst with little regard and knowledge of what comes. A great write
April 22nd, 2025 13:13
Friendly Enemy
Poetic Licence said:
They are the most dangerous of all, nicely written
January 27th, 2025 16:47
Poetic Licence said:
They are the most dangerous of all, nicely written
January 27th, 2025 16:47
Why is it so?
Poetic Licence said:
Someone still searching for answers and struggling to except that possibly it is over, powerfully written
January 10th, 2025 01:47
Poetic Licence said:
Someone still searching for answers and struggling to except that possibly it is over, powerfully written
January 10th, 2025 01:47
God\'s Sky Has Split Apart
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write about the never ending push of the rich and powerful at the expense of all others, Well written
January 9th, 2025 01:57
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write about the never ending push of the rich and powerful at the expense of all others, Well written
January 9th, 2025 01:57
You Changed Like the Weather
marigold02 said:
i really resonate with this poem. i have been feeling the same way about someone. your writing style is straightforward but leaves an impact. it is heart-wrenching. well done!
January 8th, 2025 13:31
marigold02 said:
i really resonate with this poem. i have been feeling the same way about someone. your writing style is straightforward but leaves an impact. it is heart-wrenching. well done!
January 8th, 2025 13:31
You Changed Like the Weather
sorenbarrett said:
A great line the last line and title of the poem it changes the meaning of the rest and is unexpected and adds splendor to the piece
January 8th, 2025 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
A great line the last line and title of the poem it changes the meaning of the rest and is unexpected and adds splendor to the piece
January 8th, 2025 09:42
Hangover of Your Memories
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of deep longing and loss, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 04:12
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of deep longing and loss, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 04:12
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