Comments received on poems by Brian Otucho
The Siege of Seven Days
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed writing of a biblical tale, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 08:18
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed writing of a biblical tale, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 08:18
The Siege of Seven Days
sorenbarrett said:
A great retelling of a biblical tale. Well done.
April 28th, 2025 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
A great retelling of a biblical tale. Well done.
April 28th, 2025 12:16
A Story of the Living Dead
sorenbarrett said:
Several good lines here. I like the idea of the thread and to where it led. A wonderful poem
April 27th, 2025 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
Several good lines here. I like the idea of the thread and to where it led. A wonderful poem
April 27th, 2025 11:47
A Story of the Living Dead
Tony Grannell said:
When the walls of Jericho came tumbling down in a well wrought Biblical verse. A beautiful passage of poetic literature - excellent! Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 09:50
Tony Grannell said:
When the walls of Jericho came tumbling down in a well wrought Biblical verse. A beautiful passage of poetic literature - excellent! Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 09:50
Jonah\'s Lament
sorenbarrett said:
The story of Jonah and the whale and more. This really was well written and reads much smoother than the biblical version. Loved it
April 26th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
The story of Jonah and the whale and more. This really was well written and reads much smoother than the biblical version. Loved it
April 26th, 2025 05:28
The Fall of Lucifer
Lorenz said:
God and Devil a same opposite and complementary face .
April 25th, 2025 15:46
Lorenz said:
God and Devil a same opposite and complementary face .
April 25th, 2025 15:46
The Fall of Lucifer
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and smooth flow in this poem of the fall of Lucifer. A story well known but polished and retold in bright new words that sparkle with great lines and images. Lovely
April 25th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and smooth flow in this poem of the fall of Lucifer. A story well known but polished and retold in bright new words that sparkle with great lines and images. Lovely
April 25th, 2025 09:26
Calm into Calamity
sorenbarrett said:
Things of calm and beauty can change in a minute to rage and terror. A great metaphor.
April 24th, 2025 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
Things of calm and beauty can change in a minute to rage and terror. A great metaphor.
April 24th, 2025 11:11
The Wooden Brother\'s Embrace
sorenbarrett said:
Enemies sneak into our midst with little regard and knowledge of what comes. A great write
April 22nd, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Enemies sneak into our midst with little regard and knowledge of what comes. A great write
April 22nd, 2025 13:13
Friendly Enemy
Poetic Licence said:
They are the most dangerous of all, nicely written
January 27th, 2025 16:47
Poetic Licence said:
They are the most dangerous of all, nicely written
January 27th, 2025 16:47
Why is it so?
Poetic Licence said:
Someone still searching for answers and struggling to except that possibly it is over, powerfully written
January 10th, 2025 01:47
Poetic Licence said:
Someone still searching for answers and struggling to except that possibly it is over, powerfully written
January 10th, 2025 01:47
God\'s Sky Has Split Apart
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write about the never ending push of the rich and powerful at the expense of all others, Well written
January 9th, 2025 01:57
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write about the never ending push of the rich and powerful at the expense of all others, Well written
January 9th, 2025 01:57
You Changed Like the Weather
marigold02 said:
i really resonate with this poem. i have been feeling the same way about someone. your writing style is straightforward but leaves an impact. it is heart-wrenching. well done!
January 8th, 2025 13:31
marigold02 said:
i really resonate with this poem. i have been feeling the same way about someone. your writing style is straightforward but leaves an impact. it is heart-wrenching. well done!
January 8th, 2025 13:31
You Changed Like the Weather
sorenbarrett said:
A great line the last line and title of the poem it changes the meaning of the rest and is unexpected and adds splendor to the piece
January 8th, 2025 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
A great line the last line and title of the poem it changes the meaning of the rest and is unexpected and adds splendor to the piece
January 8th, 2025 09:42
Hangover of Your Memories
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of deep longing and loss, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 04:12
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of deep longing and loss, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 04:12
Lullaby
Poetic Licence said:
A heart warming piece of comfort, nicely written
January 4th, 2025 04:45
Poetic Licence said:
A heart warming piece of comfort, nicely written
January 4th, 2025 04:45
Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
A very haunting and touching piece which feels like it is addressing regrets, well written
January 2nd, 2025 06:19
Poetic Licence said:
A very haunting and touching piece which feels like it is addressing regrets, well written
January 2nd, 2025 06:19
Slow down
Poetic Licence said:
Some one taking a honest hard hitting reflective look on themselves, Well written
January 1st, 2025 04:24
Poetic Licence said:
Some one taking a honest hard hitting reflective look on themselves, Well written
January 1st, 2025 04:24
Hero
Cassie58 said:
Courage found for a fresh start. Sad poem with a positive outlook. Nicely penned lines. All the best.
December 26th, 2024 13:16
Cassie58 said:
Courage found for a fresh start. Sad poem with a positive outlook. Nicely penned lines. All the best.
December 26th, 2024 13:16
Hero
Poetic Licence said:
Regaining their own control after being consumed by the power of love, a well written poem
December 26th, 2024 02:07
Poetic Licence said:
Regaining their own control after being consumed by the power of love, a well written poem
December 26th, 2024 02:07
We\'ll meet again
sorenbarrett said:
This touched a personal nerve and I felt it. Nicely written it said its message powerfully and forcefully/ Well done
December 24th, 2024 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
This touched a personal nerve and I felt it. Nicely written it said its message powerfully and forcefully/ Well done
December 24th, 2024 04:04
We\'ll meet again
Poetic Licence said:
Out of sight but not out of mind, tied by the heart. Enjoyed reading this poem.
December 24th, 2024 02:36
Poetic Licence said:
Out of sight but not out of mind, tied by the heart. Enjoyed reading this poem.
December 24th, 2024 02:36
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