Comments received on poems by Brian Otucho
The Gospel According to the Ballot
Tristan Robert Lange said:
💯 The truth! Well done on this satire, my friend!
January 31st, 2026 12:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
💯 The truth! Well done on this satire, my friend!
January 31st, 2026 12:45
The Gospel According to the Ballot
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is in a democratic prayer to a Monarch God that was never elected and owes nothing to constituents fearing no voter revenge. A good write
January 31st, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is in a democratic prayer to a Monarch God that was never elected and owes nothing to constituents fearing no voter revenge. A good write
January 31st, 2026 04:21
Pest
sorenbarrett said:
The wording and theme of this poem reads as though it were legend already. A fave
January 30th, 2026 15:13
sorenbarrett said:
The wording and theme of this poem reads as though it were legend already. A fave
January 30th, 2026 15:13
Ghost Nightmare: B-2 Spirit
sorenbarrett said:
Written in a most classical biblical even prophetic style. Nicely done
January 24th, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
Written in a most classical biblical even prophetic style. Nicely done
January 24th, 2026 12:42
Silent Echoes
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful piece that speaks to the greater wisdom of silence and the space between the words. A fave
January 23rd, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful piece that speaks to the greater wisdom of silence and the space between the words. A fave
January 23rd, 2026 06:10
Kiss Me!
sorenbarrett said:
A kiss one universal signs of intimacy to be so intimate with him as to kiss the lips of God. What a metaphor.
January 18th, 2026 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
A kiss one universal signs of intimacy to be so intimate with him as to kiss the lips of God. What a metaphor.
January 18th, 2026 08:57
911
sorenbarrett said:
Realization that comes too late with little that can be done but watch. An emotional roller-coaster. Nicely written
January 13th, 2026 10:04
sorenbarrett said:
Realization that comes too late with little that can be done but watch. An emotional roller-coaster. Nicely written
January 13th, 2026 10:04
The River Styx
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and chilling the use of mythology in its detail is great at setting the scene and your imagery is wonderful. Nicely done
January 8th, 2026 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and chilling the use of mythology in its detail is great at setting the scene and your imagery is wonderful. Nicely done
January 8th, 2026 13:16
The Last Refresh (Russo-Ukrainian)
Paul Bell said:
This war will only end when the Russians kill Putin.
December 8th, 2025 13:09
Paul Bell said:
This war will only end when the Russians kill Putin.
December 8th, 2025 13:09
The Last Refresh (Russo-Ukrainian)
sorenbarrett said:
Emotional and well worded with good rhyme and meter it is a fave
December 8th, 2025 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
Emotional and well worded with good rhyme and meter it is a fave
December 8th, 2025 11:44
The Arc of Silence - Malaysia Airlines Flight MH370
Katie B. said:
Nice history, compelling read. Great write. Enjoyed reading.
December 5th, 2025 05:37
Katie B. said:
Nice history, compelling read. Great write. Enjoyed reading.
December 5th, 2025 05:37
The Arc of Silence - Malaysia Airlines Flight MH370
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was well written its rhythm, meter, rhyme and imagery kept my attention more than the story itself and deserve a fave
December 5th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was well written its rhythm, meter, rhyme and imagery kept my attention more than the story itself and deserve a fave
December 5th, 2025 04:16
Poveglia Haunted Island
Keeter C said:
Sometimes I wish I wasn’t Half Italiano.
Spooky.
September 9th, 2025 00:35
Keeter C said:
Sometimes I wish I wasn’t Half Italiano.
Spooky.
September 9th, 2025 00:35
Poveglia Haunted Island
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful and well written poem that packs a punch. A fave
July 24th, 2025 17:13
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful and well written poem that packs a punch. A fave
July 24th, 2025 17:13
Death Crown
sorenbarrett said:
Defiance against greater forces, no shame, honor in standing up. Nicely said
July 21st, 2025 19:47
sorenbarrett said:
Defiance against greater forces, no shame, honor in standing up. Nicely said
July 21st, 2025 19:47
Whispers in the Fog – Tenerife, 1977
Poetic Licence said:
A nice crafted rememberance to a past tradegy, very well written
July 19th, 2025 07:58
Poetic Licence said:
A nice crafted rememberance to a past tradegy, very well written
July 19th, 2025 07:58
Whispers in the Fog – Tenerife, 1977
sorenbarrett said:
Poignant given past events. Haunting and sad the remembrance, a pome a tribute a memory nicely rhymend and with good flow. Nicely done
July 19th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Poignant given past events. Haunting and sad the remembrance, a pome a tribute a memory nicely rhymend and with good flow. Nicely done
July 19th, 2025 04:33
Anthonius Gunawan: Aviation\'s hero
Poetic Licence said:
Another lovely write, feeling of bravey, pride and honour, enjoyed the read
July 6th, 2025 10:37
Poetic Licence said:
Another lovely write, feeling of bravey, pride and honour, enjoyed the read
July 6th, 2025 10:37
Anthonius Gunawan: Aviation\'s hero
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted in good meter and rhyme this poem is heroic in nature and leaves the reader with a feeling of pride and honor. Nicely done
July 6th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted in good meter and rhyme this poem is heroic in nature and leaves the reader with a feeling of pride and honor. Nicely done
July 6th, 2025 04:35
Midnight Code: Y2K Bug
Poetic Licence said:
An enjoyable and nicely written piece
July 5th, 2025 05:47
Poetic Licence said:
An enjoyable and nicely written piece
July 5th, 2025 05:47
Flight 19: Lost in the Triangle\'s Veil
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting tale of one of the mysterys of the bermuda triangle, which still has its secrets buried, nicely expressed and written
July 4th, 2025 05:30
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting tale of one of the mysterys of the bermuda triangle, which still has its secrets buried, nicely expressed and written
July 4th, 2025 05:30
Flight 19: Lost in the Triangle\'s Veil
sorenbarrett said:
A ghostly write of an unexplained loss in the Bermuda triangle. This poem reads gallantly and proudly blending into a mournful and haunting ending. Nicely done.
July 4th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
A ghostly write of an unexplained loss in the Bermuda triangle. This poem reads gallantly and proudly blending into a mournful and haunting ending. Nicely done.
July 4th, 2025 04:57
My Silence Still Screams: Flight 431
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of a real tradegy, and the sadness that followed, nicely expressed and written
June 29th, 2025 07:08
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of a real tradegy, and the sadness that followed, nicely expressed and written
June 29th, 2025 07:08
My Silence Still Screams: Flight 431
sorenbarrett said:
This is a tragic write that touches the soul and stimulates the thought of anyone that has flown or knows someone that has flown. In a broader sense it tells of unforeseen deaths in any way and that separation that ensues and leaves us with nothing but memories. A sad poem that leaves a feeling of a void. A fave
June 29th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This is a tragic write that touches the soul and stimulates the thought of anyone that has flown or knows someone that has flown. In a broader sense it tells of unforeseen deaths in any way and that separation that ensues and leaves us with nothing but memories. A sad poem that leaves a feeling of a void. A fave
June 29th, 2025 04:26
My Silence Still Screams: Flight 431
2781 said:
I would like to think this is fiction, for you?
June 29th, 2025 03:27
2781 said:
I would like to think this is fiction, for you?
June 29th, 2025 03:27
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