Comments received on poems by mortal357



The Holy Hills of Heaven Call Me
TobaniNataiella said:

Nicely written, i don`t know the song but i Love the line Bars of Bone hold my Soul, Good read

December 19th, 2024 01:51

Dark waters
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS! (If a bit belatedly 😊)

December 18th, 2024 03:35

Wonderland
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 17th, 2024 10:25

Wonderland
TobaniNataiella said:

i hope you find a happier place to dance in, a sombre poem nicely written

December 17th, 2024 06:24

Galaxy
TobaniNataiella said:

A tender poem showing real love lasts forever, nicely written

December 13th, 2024 12:04

Galaxy
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 13th, 2024 10:55

Mortal
Cheeky Missy said:

You can\'t know until it happens and you find yourself left nakedly behind, unable even to weep, a shell where you\'d thought yourself a whole person. Winsomely rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy.

December 12th, 2024 02:56

Mortal
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

December 11th, 2024 14:48

Mortal
TobaniNataiella said:

A very poignant and tender poem, beautifully written

December 11th, 2024 14:03

Dark waters
Tony36 said:

Excellent

December 10th, 2024 08:15