Comments received on poems by Lyra Silvertongue



I, Your Pole Star
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful metaphor that carries the message that it is not the brightest light that guides or the most beautiful that has purpose but that the small unnoticed is often the one most important. Lovely

November 10th, 2025 07:44

Shattered
sorenbarrett said:

Trust is always a matter of degree. Some people I trust with some things others no, some a great deal others little. Trust the question becomes pragmatic and existential as well. A thought provoking write.

November 4th, 2025 06:01

Shattered
Paul Bell said:

The closest trust broken is always the most bitter, and I would imagine everyone can relate.
Some will say forgive, some revenge, always down to the individual.
I think revenge keeps you alive.

November 4th, 2025 05:01

\" Trust Why ?\"
NinjaGirl said:

Broken trust is one of the hardest things to repair...well-written poem!

November 2nd, 2025 21:48

\" Trust Why ?\"
sorenbarrett said:

Betrayal and fallen trust an issue in this poem where the only one that can be trusted is oneself. A strong write

November 2nd, 2025 13:01

WHY WOULDN\'T I ?
Rainbow said:

Beautiful poem . Flows really well and lovely use of words

January 15th, 2025 23:19

WHY WOULDN\'T I ?
Poetic Licence said:

A beautiful write out of sadness comes hope and positivity for the future, enjoyed the read

January 13th, 2025 12:13

WHY WOULDN\'T I ?
Thoughtless said:

This would be a good song. It has more than one interpretation of love.

January 13th, 2025 09:35