Comments received on poems by TheInnerLens



The Cost of Dreams
Lorenz said:

what about the cost of the half of your flag ?

March 12th, 2025 13:11

The Cost of Dreams
sorenbarrett said:

This poem seems to talk of a heavy price for obtaining dreams. Sometimes the price of a dream is more than its worth. Well worded and with good rhyme and meter it reads smoothly and finishes well.

March 12th, 2025 12:13

The Guiding Flame
RSM0812 said:

The rhyme scheme is perfection. The words search and find positivity. A happy and safe ending. Really nice read. I hope to read more from you

March 9th, 2025 16:33

The Guiding Flame
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write that in darkness light can be found, really enjoyed the read

March 9th, 2025 13:43

The Guiding Flame
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful poem of hope amidst despair and darkness. Lovely

March 9th, 2025 13:34

Pathways to Purity
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 26th, 2025 10:43

The Blade of Wisdom: Unveiling Clarity and Faith
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

January 25th, 2025 14:56

The Blade of Wisdom: Unveiling Clarity and Faith
sorenbarrett said:

A statement of assurtion and strong belief. Powerful

January 25th, 2025 13:31

The Blade of Wisdom: Unveiling Clarity and Faith
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Yay, I get to be the first to comment! Indeed. Profoundly true. Well done and welcome to MPS! 🌹👏

January 25th, 2025 10:33

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