Comments received on poems by TheInnerLens
The Serpent\'s Echo
sorenbarrett said:
A ghostly write that sets the scene with various images. Nicely written
March 23rd, 2025 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
A ghostly write that sets the scene with various images. Nicely written
March 23rd, 2025 14:46
Ghosts In The Mirror
Poetic Licence said:
How many people will relate to this, when they look in the mirror and wonder where the person they used to be has gone,lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:51
Poetic Licence said:
How many people will relate to this, when they look in the mirror and wonder where the person they used to be has gone,lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:51
Ghosts In The Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded with great images ( a crown of ash, a thrown of dust) very nice. A lovely poem a fave
March 22nd, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded with great images ( a crown of ash, a thrown of dust) very nice. A lovely poem a fave
March 22nd, 2025 09:53
Ghosts In The Mirror
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Good one , felt what the poem is trying to express
March 22nd, 2025 09:45
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Good one , felt what the poem is trying to express
March 22nd, 2025 09:45
The Mirror in the Mist
Poetic Licence said:
Has a really nice flow to the read and lovely imagery, well written and expressed
March 20th, 2025 03:31
Poetic Licence said:
Has a really nice flow to the read and lovely imagery, well written and expressed
March 20th, 2025 03:31
The Mirror in the Mist
Poetic Dan said:
I really needed this! Thank you for sharing and such a wonderful flow.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
March 19th, 2025 23:54
Poetic Dan said:
I really needed this! Thank you for sharing and such a wonderful flow.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
March 19th, 2025 23:54
The Mirror in the Mist
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of beautiful images and a play on words used at the end to describe confusion nicely said
March 19th, 2025 20:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of beautiful images and a play on words used at the end to describe confusion nicely said
March 19th, 2025 20:00
The Cost of Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
This seems to ask is the price of some dreams really worth paying for, nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 15:59
Poetic Licence said:
This seems to ask is the price of some dreams really worth paying for, nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 15:59
The Cost of Dreams
Lorenz said:
what about the cost of the half of your flag ?
March 12th, 2025 13:11
Lorenz said:
what about the cost of the half of your flag ?
March 12th, 2025 13:11
The Cost of Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to talk of a heavy price for obtaining dreams. Sometimes the price of a dream is more than its worth. Well worded and with good rhyme and meter it reads smoothly and finishes well.
March 12th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to talk of a heavy price for obtaining dreams. Sometimes the price of a dream is more than its worth. Well worded and with good rhyme and meter it reads smoothly and finishes well.
March 12th, 2025 12:13
The Guiding Flame
RSM0812 said:
The rhyme scheme is perfection. The words search and find positivity. A happy and safe ending. Really nice read. I hope to read more from you
March 9th, 2025 16:33
RSM0812 said:
The rhyme scheme is perfection. The words search and find positivity. A happy and safe ending. Really nice read. I hope to read more from you
March 9th, 2025 16:33
The Guiding Flame
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that in darkness light can be found, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 13:43
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that in darkness light can be found, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 13:43
The Guiding Flame
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of hope amidst despair and darkness. Lovely
March 9th, 2025 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of hope amidst despair and darkness. Lovely
March 9th, 2025 13:34
The Blade of Wisdom: Unveiling Clarity and Faith
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of assurtion and strong belief. Powerful
January 25th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of assurtion and strong belief. Powerful
January 25th, 2025 13:31
The Blade of Wisdom: Unveiling Clarity and Faith
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay, I get to be the first to comment! Indeed. Profoundly true. Well done and welcome to MPS! 🌹👏
January 25th, 2025 10:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay, I get to be the first to comment! Indeed. Profoundly true. Well done and welcome to MPS! 🌹👏
January 25th, 2025 10:33
