Comments received on poems by TheInnerLens
Fading Into Numbness
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded and loved the rhyme scheme. A poem with a message.
May 17th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely worded and loved the rhyme scheme. A poem with a message.
May 17th, 2025 08:59
The Silence of the Flame
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of strength that is powerful in its message. Well written with good rhyme and flow it stands like a rock in a storm
May 15th, 2025 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of strength that is powerful in its message. Well written with good rhyme and flow it stands like a rock in a storm
May 15th, 2025 20:07
Symphony of Ruin
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of straying from an initial path and feelings of destruction and sorrow. Well written
May 14th, 2025 14:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of straying from an initial path and feelings of destruction and sorrow. Well written
May 14th, 2025 14:05
The Blindness of Pride
rrodriguez said:
TIL, your poem is biblically prophetic. Proverbs 16:18 says: Pride goes before destruction, and a haughty spirit before a fall. Thank you for sharing your poem. It reads easily, and its message is relevant.
May 12th, 2025 17:30
rrodriguez said:
TIL, your poem is biblically prophetic. Proverbs 16:18 says: Pride goes before destruction, and a haughty spirit before a fall. Thank you for sharing your poem. It reads easily, and its message is relevant.
May 12th, 2025 17:30
The Blindness of Pride
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem with a powerful message. Well said
May 11th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem with a powerful message. Well said
May 11th, 2025 09:51
The Void Calls (From the Serpent\'s Perspective)
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s an interesting take on the difference between perception and reality, one to make you think, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 13:46
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s an interesting take on the difference between perception and reality, one to make you think, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 13:46
The Void Calls (From the Serpent\'s Perspective)
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical this poem reaches for certainty a most interesting write
May 10th, 2025 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical this poem reaches for certainty a most interesting write
May 10th, 2025 12:08
Sacred Threads of Redemption
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of the Greek weavers of fate the Moirai, Clotho, Lachesis, Atropos. A very nice write.
April 26th, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of the Greek weavers of fate the Moirai, Clotho, Lachesis, Atropos. A very nice write.
April 26th, 2025 14:52
Exodus at Sea: Beyond False Beacons
sorenbarrett said:
The author\'s note confirms my suspicions about the metaphor in this poem and its vivid images so well done. Loved the way you painted it and should need not explanation. I think I have been on those seas.
April 22nd, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
The author\'s note confirms my suspicions about the metaphor in this poem and its vivid images so well done. Loved the way you painted it and should need not explanation. I think I have been on those seas.
April 22nd, 2025 04:31
A Feast of Ruin: The Cycle of Ash and Hunger
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem is a dark reverie that goes deeper into the abyss peeling off each layer of existence, and each layer of non existence where the who nihilistic world collides into an escape. Like a dark night moth unfolding its wings.
April 19th, 2025 12:41
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem is a dark reverie that goes deeper into the abyss peeling off each layer of existence, and each layer of non existence where the who nihilistic world collides into an escape. Like a dark night moth unfolding its wings.
April 19th, 2025 12:41
A Feast of Ruin: The Cycle of Ash and Hunger
sorenbarrett said:
Great poem with a wonderful metaphor that holds well until the end of the poem.
April 19th, 2025 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
Great poem with a wonderful metaphor that holds well until the end of the poem.
April 19th, 2025 11:57
Footsteps of the Forgotten
sorenbarrett said:
This is a great poem with wonderful wording and images where metaphors meet reality. A fave
April 18th, 2025 17:56
sorenbarrett said:
This is a great poem with wonderful wording and images where metaphors meet reality. A fave
April 18th, 2025 17:56
The House Left Unguarded
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors here. A nicely written piece
April 4th, 2025 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors here. A nicely written piece
April 4th, 2025 11:35
The Lantern Keep
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliantly written with great metaphor and imagery. Lovely
April 3rd, 2025 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliantly written with great metaphor and imagery. Lovely
April 3rd, 2025 13:50
The Alchemy of Shadows
Poetic Licence said:
To find the strength in your enemy and not the weekness and use that against them, is the ultimate defence, needs more than one read this write as there is more to it than first appears, enjoyed the read
March 30th, 2025 11:36
Poetic Licence said:
To find the strength in your enemy and not the weekness and use that against them, is the ultimate defence, needs more than one read this write as there is more to it than first appears, enjoyed the read
March 30th, 2025 11:36
The Alchemy of Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
A Sun Tzu tactic of using an enemies strengths against them. A poem that deserves deeper thought. Nicely written
March 30th, 2025 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
A Sun Tzu tactic of using an enemies strengths against them. A poem that deserves deeper thought. Nicely written
March 30th, 2025 10:48
The Serpent\'s Echo
sorenbarrett said:
A ghostly write that sets the scene with various images. Nicely written
March 23rd, 2025 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
A ghostly write that sets the scene with various images. Nicely written
March 23rd, 2025 14:46
Ghosts In The Mirror
Poetic Licence said:
How many people will relate to this, when they look in the mirror and wonder where the person they used to be has gone,lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:51
Poetic Licence said:
How many people will relate to this, when they look in the mirror and wonder where the person they used to be has gone,lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:51
Ghosts In The Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded with great images ( a crown of ash, a thrown of dust) very nice. A lovely poem a fave
March 22nd, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded with great images ( a crown of ash, a thrown of dust) very nice. A lovely poem a fave
March 22nd, 2025 09:53
Ghosts In The Mirror
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Good one , felt what the poem is trying to express
March 22nd, 2025 09:45
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Good one , felt what the poem is trying to express
March 22nd, 2025 09:45
The Mirror in the Mist
Poetic Licence said:
Has a really nice flow to the read and lovely imagery, well written and expressed
March 20th, 2025 03:31
Poetic Licence said:
Has a really nice flow to the read and lovely imagery, well written and expressed
March 20th, 2025 03:31
The Mirror in the Mist
Poetic Dan said:
I really needed this! Thank you for sharing and such a wonderful flow.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
March 19th, 2025 23:54
Poetic Dan said:
I really needed this! Thank you for sharing and such a wonderful flow.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
March 19th, 2025 23:54
The Mirror in the Mist
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of beautiful images and a play on words used at the end to describe confusion nicely said
March 19th, 2025 20:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of beautiful images and a play on words used at the end to describe confusion nicely said
March 19th, 2025 20:00
The Cost of Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
This seems to ask is the price of some dreams really worth paying for, nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 15:59
Poetic Licence said:
This seems to ask is the price of some dreams really worth paying for, nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 15:59
The Cost of Dreams
Lorenz said:
what about the cost of the half of your flag ?
March 12th, 2025 13:11
Lorenz said:
what about the cost of the half of your flag ?
March 12th, 2025 13:11
The Cost of Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to talk of a heavy price for obtaining dreams. Sometimes the price of a dream is more than its worth. Well worded and with good rhyme and meter it reads smoothly and finishes well.
March 12th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to talk of a heavy price for obtaining dreams. Sometimes the price of a dream is more than its worth. Well worded and with good rhyme and meter it reads smoothly and finishes well.
March 12th, 2025 12:13
The Guiding Flame
RSM0812 said:
The rhyme scheme is perfection. The words search and find positivity. A happy and safe ending. Really nice read. I hope to read more from you
March 9th, 2025 16:33
RSM0812 said:
The rhyme scheme is perfection. The words search and find positivity. A happy and safe ending. Really nice read. I hope to read more from you
March 9th, 2025 16:33
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