Comments received on poems by oh kay
alluring and abiding (Feb 12, 2023)
Dimitryet said:
I saw the tree of the cross. And the human fabric of the heart (in French or Russian, \"tissue\" and \"fabric\" are the same word). And Jesus washing the feet of his disciples. With the white cotton or linen on his belt. Girded.
When Jesus, He opened the eyes of blind Bartimaeus. Bartimaeus first said that he saw passersby as trees. It is interpreted that he first received the inner vision of Adam, guardian of the garden, and of his brothers and sisters.
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The threads in the fabric are also in the shape of a cross. Some saints interpret the horizontal threads as emotions, and the vertical ones as principles. Moreover, in your text you mention that it touches the heart area. And the hair-thoughts also evoke the image of Sister Mary of Lazarus, who wiped Jesus\' feet. Woman - soul. Feet are also a symbol of the Gospel. According to the psalm of David, \"How beautiful are the feet that come with peace with the Father.\"
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Furthermore, Jesus used earth to anoint the eyes of this blind man. He anointed him twice. And to the other blind man, He said, \"Go and wash your eyes in the basin called \'Sent\'.\" This rhymes in imagery and meaning, according to \"the language of the Lamb.\"
March 1st, 2026 12:58
Dimitryet said:
I saw the tree of the cross. And the human fabric of the heart (in French or Russian, \"tissue\" and \"fabric\" are the same word). And Jesus washing the feet of his disciples. With the white cotton or linen on his belt. Girded.
When Jesus, He opened the eyes of blind Bartimaeus. Bartimaeus first said that he saw passersby as trees. It is interpreted that he first received the inner vision of Adam, guardian of the garden, and of his brothers and sisters.
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The threads in the fabric are also in the shape of a cross. Some saints interpret the horizontal threads as emotions, and the vertical ones as principles. Moreover, in your text you mention that it touches the heart area. And the hair-thoughts also evoke the image of Sister Mary of Lazarus, who wiped Jesus\' feet. Woman - soul. Feet are also a symbol of the Gospel. According to the psalm of David, \"How beautiful are the feet that come with peace with the Father.\"
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Furthermore, Jesus used earth to anoint the eyes of this blind man. He anointed him twice. And to the other blind man, He said, \"Go and wash your eyes in the basin called \'Sent\'.\" This rhymes in imagery and meaning, according to \"the language of the Lamb.\"
March 1st, 2026 12:58
oh, my love
Dimitryet said:
) To fully understand and comment on everything, I use a translator to translate the poems from English to French. Your poems retain their original poetry in French almost flawlessly. That\'s rare.
February 24th, 2026 20:58
Dimitryet said:
) To fully understand and comment on everything, I use a translator to translate the poems from English to French. Your poems retain their original poetry in French almost flawlessly. That\'s rare.
February 24th, 2026 20:58
benoit bouchard
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration takes front seat in this write with B driving and A along for the ride. Very well done
December 2nd, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration takes front seat in this write with B driving and A along for the ride. Very well done
December 2nd, 2025 04:40
dreadfully nostalgic (not a poem, just writing.)
sorenbarrett said:
I love the consistency in this poem where emotion changes with age and even the memory of it. A lack of present recognition staying in past memory and its associations is what reinforces the past feelings. A lovely psychotically maneuver that gives deep meaning to present feelings when exposed to past stimuli. Very nicely done. A fave
November 14th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
I love the consistency in this poem where emotion changes with age and even the memory of it. A lack of present recognition staying in past memory and its associations is what reinforces the past feelings. A lovely psychotically maneuver that gives deep meaning to present feelings when exposed to past stimuli. Very nicely done. A fave
November 14th, 2025 04:11
oh, my love
sorenbarrett said:
Longingly, romantic, with a sense of drama being classical in nature it pulls at the heart. Lovely
February 20th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Longingly, romantic, with a sense of drama being classical in nature it pulls at the heart. Lovely
February 20th, 2025 04:09
oh, my love
Poetic Licence said:
No need to say sorry, that\'s a beautiful touching write, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 21:15
Poetic Licence said:
No need to say sorry, that\'s a beautiful touching write, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 21:15
the only man
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that oozes with need for love. Who will love you if not this one the answer is you yourself. A most wonderful poem of feelings we all have to a lessor or greater extent.
February 14th, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that oozes with need for love. Who will love you if not this one the answer is you yourself. A most wonderful poem of feelings we all have to a lessor or greater extent.
February 14th, 2025 05:30
the only man
Cassie58 said:
This is top rate poetry. Penned with so much feeling. Fabulous metaphors. You are an artist with a pen . Well done.
February 14th, 2025 03:44
Cassie58 said:
This is top rate poetry. Penned with so much feeling. Fabulous metaphors. You are an artist with a pen . Well done.
February 14th, 2025 03:44
the only man
Poetic Licence said:
You can the feel the pain and emotion in the write, hope things get better
February 14th, 2025 03:17
Poetic Licence said:
You can the feel the pain and emotion in the write, hope things get better
February 14th, 2025 03:17
alluring and abiding (Feb 12, 2023)
sorenbarrett said:
Appreciate the author\'s note to clarify but without the clarification it seemed metaphoric just the same. A most beautiful description well done
February 13th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Appreciate the author\'s note to clarify but without the clarification it seemed metaphoric just the same. A most beautiful description well done
February 13th, 2025 04:31
alluring and abiding (Feb 12, 2023)
Teddy.15 said:
A very fashionable piece, silk never goes out, I absolutely love your first stanza, a wonderful poem. Welcome to MPS 🌹
February 13th, 2025 04:31
Teddy.15 said:
A very fashionable piece, silk never goes out, I absolutely love your first stanza, a wonderful poem. Welcome to MPS 🌹
February 13th, 2025 04:31
