Comments received on poems by Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer
Her Innocence
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of guilt and shame. It seems a sad poem to me. Well written leaving the subject open.
November 24th, 2025 16:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of guilt and shame. It seems a sad poem to me. Well written leaving the subject open.
November 24th, 2025 16:08
My Wings of Affection
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem speaks to a love that can\'t be. Nicely done
November 18th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem speaks to a love that can\'t be. Nicely done
November 18th, 2025 12:06
A Young Man Named Gray
sorenbarrett said:
A clear image that may mean more. A Sunday dance defiance against the expected, in tennis shoes more defiance, baggy pants more still and falling on the floor the ultimate defiance. Lovely
November 1st, 2025 15:15
sorenbarrett said:
A clear image that may mean more. A Sunday dance defiance against the expected, in tennis shoes more defiance, baggy pants more still and falling on the floor the ultimate defiance. Lovely
November 1st, 2025 15:15
My Destiny
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes It\'s just not to be, and no matter how much you try, it can\'t be fixed.
October 28th, 2025 10:27
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes It\'s just not to be, and no matter how much you try, it can\'t be fixed.
October 28th, 2025 10:27
My Destiny
sorenbarrett said:
This one sounds familiar to me is it edited or republished? A good write it speaks back to one that does not want such love or will not accept it. Well written.
October 28th, 2025 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
This one sounds familiar to me is it edited or republished? A good write it speaks back to one that does not want such love or will not accept it. Well written.
October 28th, 2025 09:58
Find Me Again
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of passion that speaks sensuously and looks for resolution. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of passion that speaks sensuously and looks for resolution. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 14:28
The Other Side
FÃna Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
A poignant meditation on love lost and dreams unfulfilled, balancing grief with acceptance. The strength comes from the speaker’s ability to mourn without bitterness. A very strong writer, nicely written ✨
September 17th, 2025 16:54
FÃna Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
A poignant meditation on love lost and dreams unfulfilled, balancing grief with acceptance. The strength comes from the speaker’s ability to mourn without bitterness. A very strong writer, nicely written ✨
September 17th, 2025 16:54
The Other Side
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that of unrequited love that falls on deaf ears. Nicely done
September 17th, 2025 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that of unrequited love that falls on deaf ears. Nicely done
September 17th, 2025 12:44
God\'s Mercy
sorenbarrett said:
There must always be hope, if not life ends. Very nice
August 31st, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
There must always be hope, if not life ends. Very nice
August 31st, 2025 11:04
Fly Like A Bird
Demar Desu said:
*finally takes the first step to flight* wow I’m actually doing it! Here I go!
*crashes into a billboard*
August 16th, 2025 20:18
Demar Desu said:
*finally takes the first step to flight* wow I’m actually doing it! Here I go!
*crashes into a billboard*
August 16th, 2025 20:18
Fly Like A Bird
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely postive write with a lovely message to the reader , enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 13:46
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely postive write with a lovely message to the reader , enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 13:46
Fly Like A Bird
sorenbarrett said:
Light and most positive this poem speaks to the heart of the reader. Nicely written
August 16th, 2025 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
Light and most positive this poem speaks to the heart of the reader. Nicely written
August 16th, 2025 10:26
Past Love
sorenbarrett said:
A question of relationship or lack thereof. Some relations are based on distance. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
A question of relationship or lack thereof. Some relations are based on distance. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 14:32
Past Love
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem of a loving message being sent to another, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 13:52
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem of a loving message being sent to another, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 13:52
With You
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of unfaithfulness and the pain and hurt it causes, nicely expressed and written
July 18th, 2025 00:45
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of unfaithfulness and the pain and hurt it causes, nicely expressed and written
July 18th, 2025 00:45
With You
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal a most difficult thing to deal with. I can hear the pain and hurt in this poem. Very well written
July 17th, 2025 16:00
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal a most difficult thing to deal with. I can hear the pain and hurt in this poem. Very well written
July 17th, 2025 16:00
Enough
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of the Ungratitude shown to the person who was always there for them, happens all to often in life, nicely expressed and written
July 7th, 2025 12:24
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of the Ungratitude shown to the person who was always there for them, happens all to often in life, nicely expressed and written
July 7th, 2025 12:24
Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Love blinded and gratitude forgotten to another\'s seduction. A poem heart felt and evident in human history and myth. A lovely write
July 7th, 2025 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
Love blinded and gratitude forgotten to another\'s seduction. A poem heart felt and evident in human history and myth. A lovely write
July 7th, 2025 11:19
The Survivor
Poetic Licence said:
Written in the spirit of a survivor, overcoming ones fears and moving forward, enjoyed the read
May 31st, 2025 02:14
Poetic Licence said:
Written in the spirit of a survivor, overcoming ones fears and moving forward, enjoyed the read
May 31st, 2025 02:14
The Survivor
sorenbarrett said:
Overcoming one\'s fears is the mark of courage and fighting on makes for a survivor. Well written
May 30th, 2025 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Overcoming one\'s fears is the mark of courage and fighting on makes for a survivor. Well written
May 30th, 2025 13:55
Irreplaceable
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write reminding everyone that everyone is worth valuing including yourself, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 12:24
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write reminding everyone that everyone is worth valuing including yourself, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 12:24
Irreplaceable
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone is valuable despite what they think. Good write
May 13th, 2025 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone is valuable despite what they think. Good write
May 13th, 2025 12:09
Adore No One
Poetic Licence said:
Showing how quickly things can change, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 10:18
Poetic Licence said:
Showing how quickly things can change, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 10:18
Adore No One
sorenbarrett said:
So short but how things change as the poem states. Very nice
May 11th, 2025 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
So short but how things change as the poem states. Very nice
May 11th, 2025 09:52
Cold Love
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of pride and fear of getting hurt, stopping true feelings being revealed, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 01:15
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of pride and fear of getting hurt, stopping true feelings being revealed, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 01:15
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