Comments received on poems by mrsweewere



Daddy You Have Gone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks - Another awesome poem with great rhythm and a consistent rhyme pattern abab cdcd etc. Losing a loved one is always painful - but we sorrow not as those that have no hope. Faith in GOD and a belief of reunion in Heaven is a great Blessing ! Wonderful tribute to your DAD - thanks for caring and sharing - Yours BRIAN

April 13th, 2016 08:34

I Am Apart Of Everyone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW - GREAT POEM with a twist in the tail. Pain can be positive it makes us more empathetic to others who are in pain. Also a bit of pain makes me count my blessings especially when you finally leave me - no pain lasts for ever ! Thanks for visiting Yours BRIAN

April 12th, 2016 14:02