Comments received on poems by Jonathan Merida
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sorenbarrett said:
Hemophilia or the use of curare but emotional in metaphor where the battles carry greater pain. A lovely write
May 4th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Hemophilia or the use of curare but emotional in metaphor where the battles carry greater pain. A lovely write
May 4th, 2025 04:29
Faster
sorenbarrett said:
Frightening and the unknown or unrecognized is the worst fear. Well written and worded it conveys its meaning well.
April 24th, 2025 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
Frightening and the unknown or unrecognized is the worst fear. Well written and worded it conveys its meaning well.
April 24th, 2025 10:51
Crescendo.
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem slowly builds into a flow, the movement and inner rhythm make it almost melodic. For me it reminded of a description of a sunset.
April 22nd, 2025 02:06
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem slowly builds into a flow, the movement and inner rhythm make it almost melodic. For me it reminded of a description of a sunset.
April 22nd, 2025 02:06
Crescendo.
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic and mysterious this poem rocks with power. Lovely
April 21st, 2025 18:16
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic and mysterious this poem rocks with power. Lovely
April 21st, 2025 18:16
Screaming
Poetic Licence said:
A dark,sad and poignant write of the difficulties of letting go off someone and something they long for, pain and hurt takes you to dark places which become increasingly difficult to escape from, nicely expressed and written write
April 12th, 2025 13:38
Poetic Licence said:
A dark,sad and poignant write of the difficulties of letting go off someone and something they long for, pain and hurt takes you to dark places which become increasingly difficult to escape from, nicely expressed and written write
April 12th, 2025 13:38
Screaming
sorenbarrett said:
Letting go is such a difficult process when one feels attached. Addictions are not easy to overcome. Nicely written
April 12th, 2025 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
Letting go is such a difficult process when one feels attached. Addictions are not easy to overcome. Nicely written
April 12th, 2025 12:45
Heaven
Poetic Licence said:
You hear the desperation of missing a loved one and asking how long does that pain go on for, nicely expressed write
April 6th, 2025 02:15
Poetic Licence said:
You hear the desperation of missing a loved one and asking how long does that pain go on for, nicely expressed write
April 6th, 2025 02:15
Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
The answer only to earth. A most interesting poem and thought expressed in poetic form
April 5th, 2025 10:59
sorenbarrett said:
The answer only to earth. A most interesting poem and thought expressed in poetic form
April 5th, 2025 10:59
Venom
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of raging anger and pain that is slowly eating them alive inside, nicely expressed and written
April 4th, 2025 02:10
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of raging anger and pain that is slowly eating them alive inside, nicely expressed and written
April 4th, 2025 02:10
Venom
sorenbarrett said:
So much anger in this poem that overflows with emotion. Well worded it takes the reader on a ride.
April 3rd, 2025 13:49
sorenbarrett said:
So much anger in this poem that overflows with emotion. Well worded it takes the reader on a ride.
April 3rd, 2025 13:49
Silence.
Poetic Licence said:
A soothing write around the positives and negatives of silence, enjoyed the read
April 3rd, 2025 02:10
Poetic Licence said:
A soothing write around the positives and negatives of silence, enjoyed the read
April 3rd, 2025 02:10
Silence.
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful it leaves a mood of peace. The last line is superb and contrasts the elements of positive and negative. Lovely
April 2nd, 2025 18:53
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful it leaves a mood of peace. The last line is superb and contrasts the elements of positive and negative. Lovely
April 2nd, 2025 18:53
Numb
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor as well when in shock we fail to notice those things that under other circumstances we would not be able to stand. Good write
April 1st, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor as well when in shock we fail to notice those things that under other circumstances we would not be able to stand. Good write
April 1st, 2025 04:45
Numb
Poetic Licence said:
A raw and very relatable write, you can get to a stage where you are oblivious to everything including pain, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 02:33
Poetic Licence said:
A raw and very relatable write, you can get to a stage where you are oblivious to everything including pain, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 02:33
Sign
sorenbarrett said:
Signs are what we look for from our gods, leaders, companions and ourselves. Signs mistaken or not seen and faith and trust lost. A most interesting poem. Welcome to MPS
March 31st, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Signs are what we look for from our gods, leaders, companions and ourselves. Signs mistaken or not seen and faith and trust lost. A most interesting poem. Welcome to MPS
March 31st, 2025 04:43
Sign
Poetic Licence said:
Amongst all the anger and frustration still hoping tomorrow will be a better day, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 02:30
Poetic Licence said:
Amongst all the anger and frustration still hoping tomorrow will be a better day, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 02:30
