The fear of lost
sorenbarrett said:

Somnambulism I assume. A most interesting write. Well done with rhyme.

May 1st, 2025 04:01

Endless labyrinth of life
sorenbarrett said:

There is a feeling of being overwhelmed in this poem of modern day stress. Well written

April 27th, 2025 04:57

Why did you leave the river?
sorenbarrett said:

So many symbols in this splendid piece. Reflections in water and time. The mirror that time gives us to see ourselves change. There is a softness to water and it is reflected in the tone of the poem, There is a harness of water that like time wears all things away. There is a cycle to water as it evaporates, condenses, rains down only to evaporate again, just as time does the same to all living things. A most wonderful poem

April 26th, 2025 16:37