Comments received on poems by Ferjohn Timung



ONCE CALLED HEAVEN
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Anguish of desecration conveyed very nicely

May 24th, 2025 10:26

ONCE CALLED HEAVEN
Poetic Licence said:

A Lovely tender write that in the depths of hell there can still be a glimmer of hope, enjoyed the read

May 23rd, 2025 05:46

ONCE CALLED HEAVEN
sorenbarrett said:

It is the combination of the rhyme and wording of meaning that gets the fave on this one

May 23rd, 2025 05:10

THEY HAD JUST BEGUN
sorenbarrett said:

A most sad write of what could have been and never was to be. Tragic and causes one to ask why. Well written

May 6th, 2025 04:55

A THREAD TO LIFE
sorenbarrett said:

Good message, for every action there is a reaction and this applies to our treatment of the planet. It seems that it has its own plans as well.

May 5th, 2025 04:19

My Lazy Shadow
sorenbarrett said:

A good message sent with a wonderful metaphor. Very nice rhyme paired with good meter made this one read easily. Well done

May 5th, 2025 04:04

My Lazy Shadow
dimpy said:

this is really a masterpiece...

May 5th, 2025 02:24