Comments received on poems by Samuel
Unheld
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of James Blunt\'s song The Girl That Never Was. Being a father and grandfather I can imagine the pain that goes with loosing a child. It is a pain that I would not wish on anyone. Well written.
May 29th, 2025 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of James Blunt\'s song The Girl That Never Was. Being a father and grandfather I can imagine the pain that goes with loosing a child. It is a pain that I would not wish on anyone. Well written.
May 29th, 2025 04:52
Between Two Worlds
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem reflects the vision of having loved and lost and the wisdom of both. A fave
May 28th, 2025 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem reflects the vision of having loved and lost and the wisdom of both. A fave
May 28th, 2025 07:35
Where I Stand
sorenbarrett said:
Rebuilding is a difficult task and yet one to be admired. In this poem is a journey and one to be proud of. A lovely write
May 27th, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Rebuilding is a difficult task and yet one to be admired. In this poem is a journey and one to be proud of. A lovely write
May 27th, 2025 07:20
Let it Unfold
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem of love unrequited and of a sense of karma not as a punishment but as a consequence for actions or lack there of. Very nice
May 26th, 2025 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem of love unrequited and of a sense of karma not as a punishment but as a consequence for actions or lack there of. Very nice
May 26th, 2025 14:34
I Am The Shift
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a new attitude and one of assurance and fire. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a new attitude and one of assurance and fire. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 11:42
Porchlight to Cityscape
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me a metaphor of life in general where the familiar and routine can be interrupted at any moment leaving one naked and exposed and feeling not only vulnerable but estranged in a world one does not know. A great write
May 24th, 2025 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me a metaphor of life in general where the familiar and routine can be interrupted at any moment leaving one naked and exposed and feeling not only vulnerable but estranged in a world one does not know. A great write
May 24th, 2025 06:37
Two Houses, Two Loves
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, variations of how people\'s understanding can differ and potentially lead to conflict, beautifully crafted and deep write, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 02:53
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, variations of how people\'s understanding can differ and potentially lead to conflict, beautifully crafted and deep write, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 02:53
Two Houses, Two Loves
vicecream said:
Sakes alive this is an incredible poem. Absolutely faved
May 23rd, 2025 11:12
vicecream said:
Sakes alive this is an incredible poem. Absolutely faved
May 23rd, 2025 11:12
Two Houses, Two Loves
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely crafted with a wise concept of how definitions vary and lead to conflict. The metaphor of language was particularly well done for words meaning misunderstanding occur. This is a deep write and a fave
May 23rd, 2025 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely crafted with a wise concept of how definitions vary and lead to conflict. The metaphor of language was particularly well done for words meaning misunderstanding occur. This is a deep write and a fave
May 23rd, 2025 05:33
Two Houses, Two Loves
Demar Desu said:
This is one of the greatest poems I’ve read, thank you for this.
May 23rd, 2025 04:07
Demar Desu said:
This is one of the greatest poems I’ve read, thank you for this.
May 23rd, 2025 04:07
After the Rot
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem of seeing what is wrong and taking action to remove it. A lovely write
May 22nd, 2025 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem of seeing what is wrong and taking action to remove it. A lovely write
May 22nd, 2025 05:21
The Demon Left Me Hollow
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that reveals the recognition of being victimized and taken advantage of the admission of allowing it to happen and the resolve to not allow this to happen again and live a better day. Nicely done with power.
May 21st, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that reveals the recognition of being victimized and taken advantage of the admission of allowing it to happen and the resolve to not allow this to happen again and live a better day. Nicely done with power.
May 21st, 2025 04:37
Where the pigs eat
Samuel said:
This piece came from a place most people don’t talk about — the raw, unfiltered part of betrayal where love is twisted into control, and care is turned into manipulation.
It’s not about revenge.
It’s about erasure — about reclaiming power when someone tries to rewrite your love story with lies.
“Where the Pigs Eat” isn’t subtle.
It’s what it feels like to bury the version of you that tolerated cruelty and silence the echo of someone who never deserved your heart in the first place.
No more mourning. No more remembering. No more giving space to someone who chose to become unrecognizable.
This is closure.
My way.
May 20th, 2025 06:33
Samuel said:
This piece came from a place most people don’t talk about — the raw, unfiltered part of betrayal where love is twisted into control, and care is turned into manipulation.
It’s not about revenge.
It’s about erasure — about reclaiming power when someone tries to rewrite your love story with lies.
“Where the Pigs Eat” isn’t subtle.
It’s what it feels like to bury the version of you that tolerated cruelty and silence the echo of someone who never deserved your heart in the first place.
No more mourning. No more remembering. No more giving space to someone who chose to become unrecognizable.
This is closure.
My way.
May 20th, 2025 06:33
Where the pigs eat
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write entrenched in the overwhelming feeling of anger, hate and rage. Haunting and dark yet has a real feel to it, nicely done
May 20th, 2025 05:55
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write entrenched in the overwhelming feeling of anger, hate and rage. Haunting and dark yet has a real feel to it, nicely done
May 20th, 2025 05:55
Where the pigs eat
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the emotion shown in this raw and dark poem of anger and hate. So well written it reeks of the smell of the pig pen and the thought of being rooted up and devoured by them. Nicely done
May 20th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the emotion shown in this raw and dark poem of anger and hate. So well written it reeks of the smell of the pig pen and the thought of being rooted up and devoured by them. Nicely done
May 20th, 2025 04:26
You Lied to Live
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for its rawness and powerful statement screaming out of the dark. It carries some deep understanding of human motivation and a need to maintain one\'s own self image. It displays a strong feeling of pain and suffering as well as anger and one person in a broken couple. Powerful
May 19th, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for its rawness and powerful statement screaming out of the dark. It carries some deep understanding of human motivation and a need to maintain one\'s own self image. It displays a strong feeling of pain and suffering as well as anger and one person in a broken couple. Powerful
May 19th, 2025 06:44
Cathedral of Sky & Flame
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of gaining self worth, value and belief, to break out and become the person they had hidden beneath the self imposed shackles, the person they wanted to be, nicely expressed and written
May 18th, 2025 08:19
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of gaining self worth, value and belief, to break out and become the person they had hidden beneath the self imposed shackles, the person they wanted to be, nicely expressed and written
May 18th, 2025 08:19
Cathedral of Sky & Flame
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of becoming a victory cry. A lovely piece
May 18th, 2025 07:31
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of becoming a victory cry. A lovely piece
May 18th, 2025 07:31
The Rooms Still Whisper Her
sorenbarrett said:
The poem progresses from loss and its mourning through burial and the tomb to resurrection and a new day. A lovely process of nature and worded so well with great images in this metaphor. A fave
May 17th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
The poem progresses from loss and its mourning through burial and the tomb to resurrection and a new day. A lovely process of nature and worded so well with great images in this metaphor. A fave
May 17th, 2025 08:48
The Rooms Still Whisper Her
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write reflecting on loss, of people and the memories, some lovely lines, nicely expressed and written
May 17th, 2025 08:09
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write reflecting on loss, of people and the memories, some lovely lines, nicely expressed and written
May 17th, 2025 08:09
The Rooms Still Whisper Her
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem drew me in from start to finish , the tale told is a meandering road that perhaps reflects loss. Not only loss of a person but from memories. The embers fading , we are that which we burry indeed. Many reflections within these lines! A fine piece
May 17th, 2025 07:48
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem drew me in from start to finish , the tale told is a meandering road that perhaps reflects loss. Not only loss of a person but from memories. The embers fading , we are that which we burry indeed. Many reflections within these lines! A fine piece
May 17th, 2025 07:48
What the Trembling Knows
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way this poem left the ending open for interpretation and whether it was to divulge love or to let go of it remains the reader\'s choice. Well worded and metered for each thought to sink in before moving on to the next it was well paced. Nicely done
May 16th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way this poem left the ending open for interpretation and whether it was to divulge love or to let go of it remains the reader\'s choice. Well worded and metered for each thought to sink in before moving on to the next it was well paced. Nicely done
May 16th, 2025 12:13
you never became a woman
2781 said:
As someone may have once said, it\'s no use floggin\' a dead horse.
May 15th, 2025 09:52
2781 said:
As someone may have once said, it\'s no use floggin\' a dead horse.
May 15th, 2025 09:52
you never became a woman
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful and interesting write, enjoyed the read
May 15th, 2025 09:46
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful and interesting write, enjoyed the read
May 15th, 2025 09:46
you never became a woman
sorenbarrett said:
This poem so nicely puts in perspective the view of a mirage that faded away as the day cooled and became nothing more than dry sand. A beautiful piece of work.
May 15th, 2025 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem so nicely puts in perspective the view of a mirage that faded away as the day cooled and became nothing more than dry sand. A beautiful piece of work.
May 15th, 2025 09:08
Mothers Day Letter
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said and with such sentiment. Well done
May 13th, 2025 17:19
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said and with such sentiment. Well done
May 13th, 2025 17:19
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