Comments received on poems by Samuel



I Wrote. She Generated
Doggerel Dave said:

A lot of it about - MPS is a good case study. How to cope with AI is one of the (many) problems which beset our age. Stay and help sort it.

To disappear tomorrow is no solution.

July 25th, 2025 19:11

I Wrote. She Generated
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 25th, 2025 09:26

I Wrote. She Generated
Cheeky Missy said:

When they taught us everything we needed to know, they never told us, for they mustn\'t, the excruciating torture of love. You put into words what can hardly be spoken.

July 25th, 2025 08:01

I Wrote. She Generated
Poetic Licence said:

The sense of real pain and anger at pouring there heart out in person, putting the emotion in to write how they feel, to just get an automated cold heartless reply, difficult to cope with that, nicely expressed and written

July 25th, 2025 07:36

I Wrote. She Generated
sorenbarrett said:

All too real in a mechanical world we emulate what we see around us and become machines ourselves, cold, unfeeling, algorithm driven beings that are trapped in walled off boxes feeling autonomous but awaiting instructions that we must follow. Nicely written

July 25th, 2025 06:46

The Version You Never Met
Poetic Licence said:

A sad, honest and touching write of being hurt not once but twice, and having to heal all over again, nicely expressed and written

July 24th, 2025 08:39

The Version You Never Met
sorenbarrett said:

A sad and deeply tragic poem of pain buried and reopened to heal again. Dark in feeling it has great imagery and well conceived allegories nicely woven in. Well done

July 24th, 2025 06:46

“When It Wasn’t Enough”. V2
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

July 23rd, 2025 06:37

“When It Wasn’t Enough”. V2
sorenbarrett said:

Strong and powerful a poem raw from the soul but crafted with care and splendid images of pain and suffering in its darkness it cries out. I feel the pain in this one and it is a fave

July 23rd, 2025 06:13

“The Last One at the Grave”
Poetic Licence said:

A very sad and heartfelt write of a tragic story of a double loss, nicely expressed and written

July 22nd, 2025 10:34

“The Last One at the Grave”
sorenbarrett said:

A sad and tragic write of a loss in fact a double loss. A hard read. Well written

July 22nd, 2025 08:15

“If You’re Still Watching”
Poetic Licence said:

We all change over time and sometimes these changes effect our relationships and people around us, recognising this as the author has nicely expressed, makes life a whole lot easier, enjoyed the read

July 21st, 2025 12:29

“If You’re Still Watching”
sorenbarrett said:

As people change so do their relationships. Recognition of this makes things easier. Nicely stated

July 21st, 2025 11:04

The grief I could not set down
MatPie said:

the emotional wretchedness of one\'s life and giving life. Grief can never be removed but reduced. I felt this poem in my bones.

July 20th, 2025 23:36

The grief I could not set down
sorenbarrett said:

A tragedy carried onward as a weight in life. Sad this poem is a journey in itself. Very well written

July 20th, 2025 13:15

The Echo Chamber
sorenbarrett said:

This poem is well written in narrative form. It tells the story clearly in a flowing organized manner and with good rhyme as well. Very nicely done and a fave

July 20th, 2025 03:53

The Echo Chamber
Cheeky Missy said:

There\'s a reason my family forbade online romance, and as such mercifully never but fizzled you remind me why, in a sense. What a cruel jest, though! Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there.

July 20th, 2025 00:28

Catch Up
sorenbarrett said:

Whether drug inspired, money draws flies and a poem that seems to speak to the fly. Lovely

June 2nd, 2025 05:35

She Times the Wreckage
Poetic Licence said:

A very relatable write to many, people not looking back or even interested in the damage they have caused and left behind, and as the write says, never will until they are in that situation themselves, enjoyed the read

June 1st, 2025 09:02

She Times the Wreckage
sorenbarrett said:

A heartfelt poem of vision and a declaration of boundaries to protect while calling out against an abandonment. Well written

June 1st, 2025 08:05

TEMU Version
Poetic Licence said:

A nicely crafted write of someone\'s inability to except what is real, some nice lines, enjoyed the read

June 1st, 2025 02:40

TEMU Version
sorenbarrett said:

A poem made of cliches mended into a story that tells in irony the inability of one to accept what is real. Nicely done

May 31st, 2025 16:11

“Uneven Ground”
Poetic Licence said:

That is a wonderfully inspiring write about how and what we choose to be inportant in our life\'s, enjoyed the read

May 30th, 2025 07:27

“Uneven Ground”
Soman Ragavan said:

\"not of heartbreak, but of release....\" Finally we come to the point that we have to let go, to break free from a one-sided relationship. Letting-go is your saviour. Otherwise you become a slave to the relationship. Let go and start afresh somewhere else.

May 30th, 2025 07:25

“Uneven Ground”
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that emphasizes the difference in priorities people have. Well worded and motivating it is inspirational. Lovely and a fave

May 30th, 2025 06:28

Unheld
sorenbarrett said:

This reminds me of James Blunt\'s song The Girl That Never Was. Being a father and grandfather I can imagine the pain that goes with loosing a child. It is a pain that I would not wish on anyone. Well written.

May 29th, 2025 04:52

Between Two Worlds
sorenbarrett said:

Beautifully worded this poem reflects the vision of having loved and lost and the wisdom of both. A fave

May 28th, 2025 07:35

Where I Stand
sorenbarrett said:

Rebuilding is a difficult task and yet one to be admired. In this poem is a journey and one to be proud of. A lovely write

May 27th, 2025 07:20

Let it Unfold
sorenbarrett said:

A haunting poem of love unrequited and of a sense of karma not as a punishment but as a consequence for actions or lack there of. Very nice

May 26th, 2025 14:34

I Am The Shift
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of a new attitude and one of assurance and fire. Lovely

May 25th, 2025 11:42

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