Comments received on poems by saswati das
TO THE DARK
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 10:31
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 10:31
TO THE DARK
sorenbarrett said:
Fragments joined a puzzle assembled but it is only a broken picture and I wonder. Nicely done it leaves a feeling that is hard to identify.
August 16th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Fragments joined a puzzle assembled but it is only a broken picture and I wonder. Nicely done it leaves a feeling that is hard to identify.
August 16th, 2025 05:02
IS IT DIFFICULT
Poetic Licence said:
Much meaning in a few words , nicely thought out and written, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 12:23
Poetic Licence said:
Much meaning in a few words , nicely thought out and written, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 12:23
IS IT DIFFICULT
sorenbarrett said:
In a line of two there is depth. Well done.
August 8th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
In a line of two there is depth. Well done.
August 8th, 2025 11:49
TO SOMEWHERE
Soman Ragavan said:
Through many of your poems I notice sadness and despondency, because things are not working the way you expect. It happens to us. You have to struggle through these times and phases. Stay positive. Thinking about failures only keeps you down.
August 8th, 2025 11:03
Soman Ragavan said:
Through many of your poems I notice sadness and despondency, because things are not working the way you expect. It happens to us. You have to struggle through these times and phases. Stay positive. Thinking about failures only keeps you down.
August 8th, 2025 11:03
TH CURSE
Soman Ragavan said:
It seems you are going through a bad phase. Hope things work out better for you. Pay no attention to those who say bad things about you. Concentrate on what is positive.
August 8th, 2025 11:00
Soman Ragavan said:
It seems you are going through a bad phase. Hope things work out better for you. Pay no attention to those who say bad things about you. Concentrate on what is positive.
August 8th, 2025 11:00
TH CURSE
sorenbarrett said:
There is no scarier demond that the one inside. I too take comfort in darkness and there is nothing wrong with that it mean no fear of what lies there. A troubling poem of lack of acceptance. Very well written
July 20th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
There is no scarier demond that the one inside. I too take comfort in darkness and there is nothing wrong with that it mean no fear of what lies there. A troubling poem of lack of acceptance. Very well written
July 20th, 2025 12:31
THE LEFT PATH
Poetic Licence said:
Take each moment as it comes, nicely expressed
July 15th, 2025 07:50
Poetic Licence said:
Take each moment as it comes, nicely expressed
July 15th, 2025 07:50
THE LEFT PATH
sorenbarrett said:
Moment to moment is the feel that I get from this poem. A strong message
July 15th, 2025 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
Moment to moment is the feel that I get from this poem. A strong message
July 15th, 2025 07:10
WHERE CAN I HIDE
sorenbarrett said:
We all hide behind a mask and few know what lies behind. A good write
June 26th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
We all hide behind a mask and few know what lies behind. A good write
June 26th, 2025 11:25
THE WITCH AND THE GIRL
sorenbarrett said:
Phrases like thought splinters stick in the brain leaving feelings of terror to a child. Nicely written
June 6th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Phrases like thought splinters stick in the brain leaving feelings of terror to a child. Nicely written
June 6th, 2025 04:22
TO SOMEWHERE
Poetic Licence said:
A reflection of wishing on what they should of done, now left with wishes they do not want, nicely expressed and written
June 4th, 2025 09:46
Poetic Licence said:
A reflection of wishing on what they should of done, now left with wishes they do not want, nicely expressed and written
June 4th, 2025 09:46
TO SOMEWHERE
sorenbarrett said:
Wishes are plentiful and the harvest is full of ripe fruit a shame that only so many will fit in one\'s pockets. A lovely write
June 4th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Wishes are plentiful and the harvest is full of ripe fruit a shame that only so many will fit in one\'s pockets. A lovely write
June 4th, 2025 09:07
