Comments received on poems by YannickM
A Tryant\'s Folly
sorenbarrett said:
More metaphor than mosquitos in a swamp this poem buzzes with carnage. Dark and with meaning\'s light. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
More metaphor than mosquitos in a swamp this poem buzzes with carnage. Dark and with meaning\'s light. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 11:10
A Letter to Home
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war, death and all its destruction. Well painted in this poem a fave
August 27th, 2025 15:56
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war, death and all its destruction. Well painted in this poem a fave
August 27th, 2025 15:56
Of Sitting and Staring
sorenbarrett said:
I have had such moments and believe that most people do. Nicely done
August 21st, 2025 12:23
sorenbarrett said:
I have had such moments and believe that most people do. Nicely done
August 21st, 2025 12:23
Walking the plank
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written cleverly rhymed and emotionally powerful. A fave
August 20th, 2025 12:32
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written cleverly rhymed and emotionally powerful. A fave
August 20th, 2025 12:32
Walking the plank
Cheeky Missy said:
It is. We instinctively turn away from suffering, as if to look on it would pull us into its world and drown us. Ergo, as we sink none seem to know or hear, our corpse worth more than our lives. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 11:54
Cheeky Missy said:
It is. We instinctively turn away from suffering, as if to look on it would pull us into its world and drown us. Ergo, as we sink none seem to know or hear, our corpse worth more than our lives. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 11:54
Morning
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme scheme of this poem. It speaks from darkness into light. Well done
August 19th, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme scheme of this poem. It speaks from darkness into light. Well done
August 19th, 2025 05:29
Stargazing
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 09:23
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 09:23
Stargazing
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS the poem leaves the writer voyaging on time. Nicely written with rhyme.
August 18th, 2025 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome to MPS the poem leaves the writer voyaging on time. Nicely written with rhyme.
August 18th, 2025 09:12
