Comments received on poems by erendis
Ouroboros
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of the opposites, all encompassed in the cycle of eternity. a suggestion that maybe inside of us lies something much bigger that we are yet to discover, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 08:04
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of the opposites, all encompassed in the cycle of eternity. a suggestion that maybe inside of us lies something much bigger that we are yet to discover, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 08:04
Ouroboros
sorenbarrett said:
A masterful write of the opposites that give birth and death to all things in an eternal cycle. A fave
July 4th, 2025 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
A masterful write of the opposites that give birth and death to all things in an eternal cycle. A fave
July 4th, 2025 06:58
Ouroboros
arqios said:
A very interesting poem that explores the idea that everything contains its opposite: light and dark, good and evil, emptiness and fullness. It reflects on the deep connection between life, death, and rebirth, using powerful symbols like the lotus, the flame, and the goddess Demeter. The speaker describes themselves as both the beginning and the end, constantly changing and feeding into themselves like a circle. It suggests that beneath the surface of who we are lies something vast, mysterious, and cosmic. A thoroughly enjoyable read.🕊️🙏🏻
July 4th, 2025 06:09
arqios said:
A very interesting poem that explores the idea that everything contains its opposite: light and dark, good and evil, emptiness and fullness. It reflects on the deep connection between life, death, and rebirth, using powerful symbols like the lotus, the flame, and the goddess Demeter. The speaker describes themselves as both the beginning and the end, constantly changing and feeding into themselves like a circle. It suggests that beneath the surface of who we are lies something vast, mysterious, and cosmic. A thoroughly enjoyable read.🕊️🙏🏻
July 4th, 2025 06:09
Wretched Contentment
Poetic Licence said:
A well written and very appropriate write for todays world, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 06:04
Poetic Licence said:
A well written and very appropriate write for todays world, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 06:04
Wretched Contentment
sorenbarrett said:
This has an uncanny fit to today\'s world and politics it makes one wonder. Very nicely written with good word choice.
July 3rd, 2025 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
This has an uncanny fit to today\'s world and politics it makes one wonder. Very nicely written with good word choice.
July 3rd, 2025 06:01
My Zarathustra
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, beautifully written expressing the thoughts of freedom, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 06:29
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, beautifully written expressing the thoughts of freedom, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 06:29
My Zarathustra
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write that in symbols and metaphor speaks out for freedom of thought. Loved it
July 2nd, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write that in symbols and metaphor speaks out for freedom of thought. Loved it
July 2nd, 2025 05:00
