Comments received on poems by Luke Bensing
I need a new definition
sorenbarrett said:
\" Don\'t let the sun go down on your anger.
I always thought that was good advice, but who can stop the sun from setting? \"
Great lines here, loved it.
November 13th, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
\" Don\'t let the sun go down on your anger.
I always thought that was good advice, but who can stop the sun from setting? \"
Great lines here, loved it.
November 13th, 2025 13:59
Come Rest Your Weary Bones
NinjaGirl said:
I\'d say my bones and my mind are weary! I love this imagery
November 12th, 2025 10:33
NinjaGirl said:
I\'d say my bones and my mind are weary! I love this imagery
November 12th, 2025 10:33
Come Rest Your Weary Bones
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective poem where the weariness comes from bones that contain the brain and the ribcage that contains the heart. A wonderful write
November 12th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective poem where the weariness comes from bones that contain the brain and the ribcage that contains the heart. A wonderful write
November 12th, 2025 09:26
One Very Big, Bad Wolf
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety is a wolf and sometimes in sheep\'s clothing. He huffs and he puffs and he blows the strongest of houses in. He then devours the pig inside and usually from the inside out. A lovely write
November 11th, 2025 15:13
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety is a wolf and sometimes in sheep\'s clothing. He huffs and he puffs and he blows the strongest of houses in. He then devours the pig inside and usually from the inside out. A lovely write
November 11th, 2025 15:13
Reaching into the dusk
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that this poem ends mid thought where it ought. Nicely done
November 10th, 2025 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that this poem ends mid thought where it ought. Nicely done
November 10th, 2025 10:14
your room
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with questions about which room we are talking about. A mind provoking read.
November 9th, 2025 15:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with questions about which room we are talking about. A mind provoking read.
November 9th, 2025 15:37
emotionally manipulated by the melody
sorenbarrett said:
Pieces connected the whole greater than the sum of the parts a gestalt concept and so true. Nicely worded and composed. Well done
November 8th, 2025 16:54
sorenbarrett said:
Pieces connected the whole greater than the sum of the parts a gestalt concept and so true. Nicely worded and composed. Well done
November 8th, 2025 16:54
collection of words
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to put some things into words there are just not the proper ones to describe it. Nicely done
November 7th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
It is hard to put some things into words there are just not the proper ones to describe it. Nicely done
November 7th, 2025 08:38
collection of words
sorenbarrett said:
This is philosophical and thought provoking. Nice
November 6th, 2025 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
This is philosophical and thought provoking. Nice
November 6th, 2025 10:17
the smell of something
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the last line that holds so much meaning. Yes indeed nostalgia mar rearrange memory and often does. Nicely done
November 5th, 2025 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the last line that holds so much meaning. Yes indeed nostalgia mar rearrange memory and often does. Nicely done
November 5th, 2025 08:29
a string of birds
sorenbarrett said:
A set of beautiful images cast in this poem. I feel that I have been there before and can still see it. Lovely
November 4th, 2025 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
A set of beautiful images cast in this poem. I feel that I have been there before and can still see it. Lovely
November 4th, 2025 14:21
Ike Untitled poems
sorenbarrett said:
A series of poems unrelated yet they seem to be in wording that is so matter of fact so common to the daily hours yet somehow poetic and most pensive. A lovely set of poems.
November 3rd, 2025 09:24
sorenbarrett said:
A series of poems unrelated yet they seem to be in wording that is so matter of fact so common to the daily hours yet somehow poetic and most pensive. A lovely set of poems.
November 3rd, 2025 09:24
Where I\'m From
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like the Midwest to me but then what would I know I\'ve only lived in seven states and traveled through another dozen. Sounds like places I\'ve been. Well written
November 2nd, 2025 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like the Midwest to me but then what would I know I\'ve only lived in seven states and traveled through another dozen. Sounds like places I\'ve been. Well written
November 2nd, 2025 19:02
Where I\'m From
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought this was an intriguing riddle...... which i was unable to solve. Often Americans are accused of not knowing much geographically of the rest of the world. I think the same accusation may be made of me and the US.
Entertained by the local colour.
November 2nd, 2025 17:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought this was an intriguing riddle...... which i was unable to solve. Often Americans are accused of not knowing much geographically of the rest of the world. I think the same accusation may be made of me and the US.
Entertained by the local colour.
November 2nd, 2025 17:28
heart shaped metal
sorenbarrett said:
The world is full of contradictions and paradoxes here they are voiced. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
The world is full of contradictions and paradoxes here they are voiced. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 16:06
the puddles, unnoticed
Keeter C said:
Do we ever know what’s under the surface, nice.
August 12th, 2025 14:17
Keeter C said:
Do we ever know what’s under the surface, nice.
August 12th, 2025 14:17
the puddles, unnoticed
Poetic Licence said:
I got the sense this is about the mind and its thoughts during those dark nights, sometimes they constantly drip and sometimes your mind is flooded with them, interesting and enjoyable read
August 11th, 2025 15:21
Poetic Licence said:
I got the sense this is about the mind and its thoughts during those dark nights, sometimes they constantly drip and sometimes your mind is flooded with them, interesting and enjoyable read
August 11th, 2025 15:21
the puddles, unnoticed
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that shows the depth of the sea and the breadth of it as well, it rushes like a white water river. Nicely done
August 11th, 2025 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that shows the depth of the sea and the breadth of it as well, it rushes like a white water river. Nicely done
August 11th, 2025 13:54
the cloud tails emerge
Poetic Licence said:
Beauty of perspectives, everyone has a different one, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 14:02
Poetic Licence said:
Beauty of perspectives, everyone has a different one, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 14:02
the cloud tails emerge
sorenbarrett said:
Perspectives are everything. So many different and each valid. A lovely write
August 10th, 2025 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
Perspectives are everything. So many different and each valid. A lovely write
August 10th, 2025 12:09
heaveness
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write from the present to the past back to the future. Quite a series of jumps. Nice
August 9th, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write from the present to the past back to the future. Quite a series of jumps. Nice
August 9th, 2025 13:59
New Build Homes
sorenbarrett said:
The shell does not equal what it contains. A lovely poem of something intangible.
August 9th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
The shell does not equal what it contains. A lovely poem of something intangible.
August 9th, 2025 03:58
you give it a title
V1RU$ said:
It transitions from despair and loss of control, but in the end a hint of reassurance. I love how its constructed! Keep up the good work
August 7th, 2025 23:13
V1RU$ said:
It transitions from despair and loss of control, but in the end a hint of reassurance. I love how its constructed! Keep up the good work
August 7th, 2025 23:13
you give it a title
sorenbarrett said:
Waves of emotion in this poem that speaks of ebbs and flows. Nicely done
August 7th, 2025 18:31
sorenbarrett said:
Waves of emotion in this poem that speaks of ebbs and flows. Nicely done
August 7th, 2025 18:31
oh the places you\'ll go
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting analogy that I hadn\'t thought of before. Having moved many times in life I have always woken up in a new home, and what is home indeed. Having children I remember strapping them into the car seat and their rapid going to sleep with car movement. Nicely written thought provoking
August 7th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting analogy that I hadn\'t thought of before. Having moved many times in life I have always woken up in a new home, and what is home indeed. Having children I remember strapping them into the car seat and their rapid going to sleep with car movement. Nicely written thought provoking
August 7th, 2025 04:46
Spring
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor of life in its cycles. Nicely done
August 5th, 2025 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphor of life in its cycles. Nicely done
August 5th, 2025 16:09
Spring
Poetic Licence said:
Everything has it cycle, beginning and end, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 16:04
Poetic Licence said:
Everything has it cycle, beginning and end, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 16:04
telephone pole
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write with much deeper meaning than first appears, enjoyed the read
July 31st, 2025 10:42
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write with much deeper meaning than first appears, enjoyed the read
July 31st, 2025 10:42
telephone pole
sorenbarrett said:
Although literal a great metaphor as well in this poem. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
Although literal a great metaphor as well in this poem. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 10:37
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