Comments received on poems by Krissy.V
Love or lust
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, is love or lust better, nicely done
August 16th, 2025 17:50
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, is love or lust better, nicely done
August 16th, 2025 17:50
Love or lust
sorenbarrett said:
A twist on most poems of love it asks the reader to question what is love and lust and is one better than another. A wonderful read
August 16th, 2025 15:13
sorenbarrett said:
A twist on most poems of love it asks the reader to question what is love and lust and is one better than another. A wonderful read
August 16th, 2025 15:13
Endless cycles
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical in nature this poem deals with time and its immutability. Well said
August 12th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical in nature this poem deals with time and its immutability. Well said
August 12th, 2025 04:14
The doll
sorenbarrett said:
Is this year a mirror image of last? It makes one ask what is this year\'s doll. A fun read that seems to have some meaning behind the metaphor. Nicely done.
August 10th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Is this year a mirror image of last? It makes one ask what is this year\'s doll. A fun read that seems to have some meaning behind the metaphor. Nicely done.
August 10th, 2025 04:30
Moonlight
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful depiction of the moon itself and its loveliness. Nicely written
August 9th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful depiction of the moon itself and its loveliness. Nicely written
August 9th, 2025 04:09
Obsession
sorenbarrett said:
Ghosts that come and go in the void. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 16:19
sorenbarrett said:
Ghosts that come and go in the void. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 16:19
Roses are red
sorenbarrett said:
A fun take on an old trite poem that now is pushed in a whole different direction. Creative
August 7th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
A fun take on an old trite poem that now is pushed in a whole different direction. Creative
August 7th, 2025 05:00
Friend
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the playfulness in the word itself. There is an end in friend and this provokes all kinds of thoughts. Nicely done
August 6th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the playfulness in the word itself. There is an end in friend and this provokes all kinds of thoughts. Nicely done
August 6th, 2025 04:42
Friend
2781 said:
We only need one good friend, one that will never leave us, or forsake us.
I hope you find it.
August 6th, 2025 01:41
2781 said:
We only need one good friend, one that will never leave us, or forsake us.
I hope you find it.
August 6th, 2025 01:41
Cuts
2781 said:
Once again, I shouldn\'t attempt an interpretation on what could be serious.
If it is an addiction, it\'s true, they are jealous tyrants, and for all their pleasures, we pay the highest price.
August 5th, 2025 10:34
2781 said:
Once again, I shouldn\'t attempt an interpretation on what could be serious.
If it is an addiction, it\'s true, they are jealous tyrants, and for all their pleasures, we pay the highest price.
August 5th, 2025 10:34
Cuts
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting yet valid in a mind that sees reality as running blood. Hard to read from another dimension its sadness trickles and clots over scars from a past lash. In its understanding it hurts. Well written
August 5th, 2025 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting yet valid in a mind that sees reality as running blood. Hard to read from another dimension its sadness trickles and clots over scars from a past lash. In its understanding it hurts. Well written
August 5th, 2025 10:06
Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting mix of vision and feeling and how this brings up interactions of tears that come with both. Nicely written
August 4th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting mix of vision and feeling and how this brings up interactions of tears that come with both. Nicely written
August 4th, 2025 04:46
Brain
Poetic Licence said:
How many people see the world, good or bad, it is, it isn\'t, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 05:23
Poetic Licence said:
How many people see the world, good or bad, it is, it isn\'t, nicely expressed and written
August 3rd, 2025 05:23
Brain
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents that dichotomy of the world that some see. A simple world of is or is not. Well done
August 3rd, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents that dichotomy of the world that some see. A simple world of is or is not. Well done
August 3rd, 2025 04:37
Time
Poetic Licence said:
The circle of time and how all we are ever doing is going round in circles, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 05:26
Poetic Licence said:
The circle of time and how all we are ever doing is going round in circles, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 05:26
Time
sorenbarrett said:
This poem echos the feel of time as it cycles back around only to end where it started. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem echos the feel of time as it cycles back around only to end where it started. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:36
Her..
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes in difficult times emotionally and mentally we align our behaviour to a different part of us, as if it was a different person, especially when looking back to childhood, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 08:06
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes in difficult times emotionally and mentally we align our behaviour to a different part of us, as if it was a different person, especially when looking back to childhood, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 08:06
Her..
sorenbarrett said:
As a child we see things through different eyes. Nicely written
August 1st, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
As a child we see things through different eyes. Nicely written
August 1st, 2025 05:40
Quiet
peto said:
A line in one of my fav songs goes
\"Stop whispering start shouting \"
I get the same vibe reading this
Enjoyed
July 31st, 2025 23:44
peto said:
A line in one of my fav songs goes
\"Stop whispering start shouting \"
I get the same vibe reading this
Enjoyed
July 31st, 2025 23:44
Quiet
Poetic Licence said:
A sense off trying to control voices that are trying to control them, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 10:53
Poetic Licence said:
A sense off trying to control voices that are trying to control them, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 10:53
Quiet
sorenbarrett said:
Questions and more questions with this poem. It provokes thought and is nicely written
July 31st, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
Questions and more questions with this poem. It provokes thought and is nicely written
July 31st, 2025 10:49
Eyes
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being cornered and the fear of knowing what might be coming , a strong feeling of panic and anger in the right, hope all is ok, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 15:21
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of being cornered and the fear of knowing what might be coming , a strong feeling of panic and anger in the right, hope all is ok, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 15:21
Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting it left a feeling of being rejected and even being laid for and subject to attack. Interesting rhymes
July 30th, 2025 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting it left a feeling of being rejected and even being laid for and subject to attack. Interesting rhymes
July 30th, 2025 14:32
16 mirrors
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is most intriguing and I take it symbolic. I too each mirror as a year and trauma breaks them but the nine that are left is that the age that trauma began? A sad poem well written.
July 30th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is most intriguing and I take it symbolic. I too each mirror as a year and trauma breaks them but the nine that are left is that the age that trauma began? A sad poem well written.
July 30th, 2025 03:47
16 mirrors
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of the mirrors are reflecting years and something traumatic happened after the ninth, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 00:07
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of the mirrors are reflecting years and something traumatic happened after the ninth, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 00:07
Cry
sorenbarrett said:
The feel of sexual focus is highlighted here and runs through this poem. Well expressed.
July 29th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
The feel of sexual focus is highlighted here and runs through this poem. Well expressed.
July 29th, 2025 04:32
