Comments received on poems by JPW



Wherefore Mark Thy Temple?
sorenbarrett said:

So nicely written it speaks to me of those that feel holy in an unholy place those that bring their arrogance into it and feel holier that the holy of holies themselves. A fave

September 11th, 2026 10:38

Narrow Trek
sorenbarrett said:

Epic in its nature, structure, formate, subject and wording. Well written and a fave

August 23rd, 2026 10:55

Freedom in Christ!
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of belief and faith replacing man made religion with a spiritual rebirth. Nicely written

July 17th, 2026 11:19

Jesus, You Are Enough
sorenbarrett said:

This well could be a hymn one the even Orchi would love. Nicely done it has a most majestic feel to it. Very well done

April 27th, 2026 11:32

A New Show
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of Satan\'s joke and trickery but well stated in great images

April 1st, 2026 08:46

Hosanna King Jesus!
sorenbarrett said:

A pome most appropriate for the time of year. Nicely crafted

March 29th, 2026 12:11

Hosanna King Jesus!
orchidee said:

A fine write JPW.

March 29th, 2026 11:20

New Seed
sorenbarrett said:

A religious Christian senryu one of the first I have read. Well done. Happy New Year to you

January 1st, 2026 05:04

Shepherd\'s Hymn
orchidee said:

Good write J.

December 25th, 2025 15:37

Shepherd\'s Hymn
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of religious belief on a Christian holy day. Nicely written Happy holidays

December 25th, 2025 11:02

Abba
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the poem of epic confession and profession of faith and belief. It reads like Psalms. Well done

October 7th, 2025 12:19

Serenade of a Follower
sorenbarrett said:

A very religious poem that could be called a serenade or a song of praise. Nicely done.

September 3rd, 2025 10:09

A Sinner’s Crossroad to Salvation
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the turn around a person that sees things differently now. Perspectives do change with time and it appears that this one has as well

September 2nd, 2025 12:21

A Sinner’s Crossroad to Salvation
orchidee said:

A fine write J.

September 2nd, 2025 11:25