Comments received on poems by Layla3
Karma
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
Yep even the bible says u reap wat u sow
April 30th, 2016 17:49
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
Yep even the bible says u reap wat u sow
April 30th, 2016 17:49
Karma
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing LAYLA - KARMA is the spiritual cyclic principle of CAUSE & EFFECT and your elegant short story - describes it perfectly ! Yours BRIAN
April 29th, 2016 10:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing LAYLA - KARMA is the spiritual cyclic principle of CAUSE & EFFECT and your elegant short story - describes it perfectly ! Yours BRIAN
April 29th, 2016 10:26
The Perfect Guy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing LAYLA an interesting poem on how you see a MAN! Obviously we try to perfect our appearance - our smile and our attitude because that is what a Lady notices and that is what make us attractive "externally". The same is true of Ladies who want to be attractive to Men. Until we get to know someone (actions speak louder than words !) we can't know their heart what they are like inside. I try to be gentle and understanding and yes "I would never hurt you" I just hope the sincerity of my words would convince you to let me get close to you. If you did I wouldn't need to be kissing another Girl ! The proof of a pudding is always in the eating. Every blessing in your search for your "perfect" Man - BRIAN
April 28th, 2016 13:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing LAYLA an interesting poem on how you see a MAN! Obviously we try to perfect our appearance - our smile and our attitude because that is what a Lady notices and that is what make us attractive "externally". The same is true of Ladies who want to be attractive to Men. Until we get to know someone (actions speak louder than words !) we can't know their heart what they are like inside. I try to be gentle and understanding and yes "I would never hurt you" I just hope the sincerity of my words would convince you to let me get close to you. If you did I wouldn't need to be kissing another Girl ! The proof of a pudding is always in the eating. Every blessing in your search for your "perfect" Man - BRIAN
April 28th, 2016 13:03
Notifications
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI LAYLA - WELCOME and thanks for your first poem. I like the free verse style and the subject gives it a "time related" flow. Modern electronic communication media has great advantages (mobile phones - tablets etc) the whole World (Facebook - Twitter - e-mail etc) is only a CLICK away. The main disadvantage is that in principle its function is in the hands (and hearts) of humans. Some of the people I most want to contact have their mobiles switched of and emailwise are not "on line". So my calls go unanswered and my messages go unread. When these are emotional calls and messages it hurts even more. In the 21st C we are all "too busy" to receive or reply - so I can empathise with both sides of your frustration. Cause & effect the twin scourges of technology. We are all victims ! BRIAN
April 27th, 2016 15:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI LAYLA - WELCOME and thanks for your first poem. I like the free verse style and the subject gives it a "time related" flow. Modern electronic communication media has great advantages (mobile phones - tablets etc) the whole World (Facebook - Twitter - e-mail etc) is only a CLICK away. The main disadvantage is that in principle its function is in the hands (and hearts) of humans. Some of the people I most want to contact have their mobiles switched of and emailwise are not "on line". So my calls go unanswered and my messages go unread. When these are emotional calls and messages it hurts even more. In the 21st C we are all "too busy" to receive or reply - so I can empathise with both sides of your frustration. Cause & effect the twin scourges of technology. We are all victims ! BRIAN
April 27th, 2016 15:12
