Comments received on poems by The Velvet
I want to love you
sorenbarrett said:
So many lovely comparisons made in this poem to emphasize the love held. Nicely done
January 23rd, 2026 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
So many lovely comparisons made in this poem to emphasize the love held. Nicely done
January 23rd, 2026 12:37
I am a Man
sorenbarrett said:
The conflicts of social demands and expectation where ideals are not realistic and disappointment falls on both sides. Here in this work many of the double standards are raised. Nicely done
January 21st, 2026 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
The conflicts of social demands and expectation where ideals are not realistic and disappointment falls on both sides. Here in this work many of the double standards are raised. Nicely done
January 21st, 2026 11:02
I am a Man
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem reflects modern societal issues, particularly relevant in discussions of gender roles today.
January 21st, 2026 08:13
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem reflects modern societal issues, particularly relevant in discussions of gender roles today.
January 21st, 2026 08:13
What and Why
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning that dives deep into the origin and source of love. The where, why, when and how of this enigma of life. Lovely
January 19th, 2026 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning that dives deep into the origin and source of love. The where, why, when and how of this enigma of life. Lovely
January 19th, 2026 07:25
Someone I knew
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being overlooked and offering what was desired was not seen. Lovely
December 1st, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being overlooked and offering what was desired was not seen. Lovely
December 1st, 2025 06:16
A Sinful Love
sorenbarrett said:
Spoken of as if a drug it holds the same addiction. Nicely written speaking of love as a sin and if we are talking passion not love perhaps to some it is. Nicely done
November 26th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Spoken of as if a drug it holds the same addiction. Nicely written speaking of love as a sin and if we are talking passion not love perhaps to some it is. Nicely done
November 26th, 2025 04:56
Elder
sorenbarrett said:
Many are despised by their own people for various reasons. Some because of their betrayal, others misinterpreted, some for their vision. Nicely written
November 25th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Many are despised by their own people for various reasons. Some because of their betrayal, others misinterpreted, some for their vision. Nicely written
November 25th, 2025 04:17
Elder
NafisaSB said:
What a true and sad commentary on life and people around us. 👌
November 25th, 2025 03:03
NafisaSB said:
What a true and sad commentary on life and people around us. 👌
November 25th, 2025 03:03
Penélope
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we wish dreams to be true. Such a disappointment when we find that they are not
November 24th, 2025 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we wish dreams to be true. Such a disappointment when we find that they are not
November 24th, 2025 16:03
Thy Dawning
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a love poem on one level or another not a sappy or gooey love poem but one of real love that is more than sex and roses. Nicely done
November 21st, 2025 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a love poem on one level or another not a sappy or gooey love poem but one of real love that is more than sex and roses. Nicely done
November 21st, 2025 14:40
A Painting
sorenbarrett said:
An intriguing and wonderful poem that slowly unfolds up to the last line where all is revealed. Loved it a fave
November 19th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
An intriguing and wonderful poem that slowly unfolds up to the last line where all is revealed. Loved it a fave
November 19th, 2025 12:13
Oh, My Mind...
sorenbarrett said:
Words of the classics dealing with the eternal poetic subject. Musings in most poetic form. Well done
November 15th, 2025 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
Words of the classics dealing with the eternal poetic subject. Musings in most poetic form. Well done
November 15th, 2025 04:52
Beneath Thine Essence
sorenbarrett said:
Classic in its wording this poem is romantic and definitely a love poem well done
November 13th, 2025 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
Classic in its wording this poem is romantic and definitely a love poem well done
November 13th, 2025 10:06
The Bloom of Absurdism
Nayak said:
fascinating, as if, silent chaos wrapped in charm.
November 11th, 2025 06:09
Nayak said:
fascinating, as if, silent chaos wrapped in charm.
November 11th, 2025 06:09
The Bloom of Absurdism
sorenbarrett said:
In a day that nothing can be believed or taken seriously this poem strikes at the heart of reason. A poem to make one think. Nicely written in good poetic form.
November 11th, 2025 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
In a day that nothing can be believed or taken seriously this poem strikes at the heart of reason. A poem to make one think. Nicely written in good poetic form.
November 11th, 2025 05:52
