Comments received on poems by szl



And Then…?
Lorenz said:

Amazing existentialist lullaby !

November 12th, 2025 12:23

And Then…?
sorenbarrett said:

The presence of strife and stress. After the rain comes the rainbow a lovely image. Well done

November 12th, 2025 11:18

And Then…?
Paul Bell said:

Strife is the pressure you feel, whereas strike is the forward you.

November 12th, 2025 10:27