Comments received on poems by szl
Unattainable Kindness
sorenbarrett said:
Giving what one does not have is theft. Theft from oneself in this case. A lovely write
November 14th, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Giving what one does not have is theft. Theft from oneself in this case. A lovely write
November 14th, 2025 05:58
Hope
NinjaGirl said:
And it does! Hope does indeed take courage...it\'s not so simple, to \"just be hopeful,\" it certainly requires some effort. Well done
November 13th, 2025 14:27
NinjaGirl said:
And it does! Hope does indeed take courage...it\'s not so simple, to \"just be hopeful,\" it certainly requires some effort. Well done
November 13th, 2025 14:27
Hope
sorenbarrett said:
Well put in metaphor the issue of hope and how it is so difficult to get off the ground. A lovely write
November 13th, 2025 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
Well put in metaphor the issue of hope and how it is so difficult to get off the ground. A lovely write
November 13th, 2025 09:31
And Then…?
sorenbarrett said:
The presence of strife and stress. After the rain comes the rainbow a lovely image. Well done
November 12th, 2025 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
The presence of strife and stress. After the rain comes the rainbow a lovely image. Well done
November 12th, 2025 11:18
And Then…?
Paul Bell said:
Strife is the pressure you feel, whereas strike is the forward you.
November 12th, 2025 10:27
Paul Bell said:
Strife is the pressure you feel, whereas strike is the forward you.
November 12th, 2025 10:27
