Comments received on poems by Zwinkele
Graveyard Of Paper
Emi said:
I love it! I found myself feeling sad for these paper airplanes, since you wrote it so well. :)
March 24th, 2011 16:48
Emi said:
I love it! I found myself feeling sad for these paper airplanes, since you wrote it so well. :)
March 24th, 2011 16:48
Out Of My Mind
jerrypat said:
new here. First read and comment. I always feel funny about "rating" poetry, I guess I figure that your words do that for you, but . . .
"Gotta get away," was always my claim for reaching for peace and quiet after the rigors of whatever I was involved in at the time. Of course my "getting away" usually mean shacking up with Jim Beam for awhile. When I returned I had more chaos than what I had left. So I envy you. You found the key much easier than did I.
Enjoyed the poem.
January 6th, 2011 22:05
jerrypat said:
new here. First read and comment. I always feel funny about "rating" poetry, I guess I figure that your words do that for you, but . . .
"Gotta get away," was always my claim for reaching for peace and quiet after the rigors of whatever I was involved in at the time. Of course my "getting away" usually mean shacking up with Jim Beam for awhile. When I returned I had more chaos than what I had left. So I envy you. You found the key much easier than did I.
Enjoyed the poem.
January 6th, 2011 22:05
Out Of My Mind
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I love it. It's a delightful look at taking a mental breather. Very enjoyable, fascinating perspective. Excellent!
January 6th, 2011 20:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I love it. It's a delightful look at taking a mental breather. Very enjoyable, fascinating perspective. Excellent!
January 6th, 2011 20:13
Graveyard Of Paper
Cheeky Missy said:
I love your delightful studies on trivial paper! Excellent!!!
January 5th, 2011 22:46
Cheeky Missy said:
I love your delightful studies on trivial paper! Excellent!!!
January 5th, 2011 22:46
A Blank Piece Of Paper
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! I love what you did with that "simple blank piece of paper"! I've done all that too with it, and one more.....take the pen[cil] to it.....and compose.....this poem! Superb. I quite enjoyed this piece!
January 1st, 2011 22:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! I love what you did with that "simple blank piece of paper"! I've done all that too with it, and one more.....take the pen[cil] to it.....and compose.....this poem! Superb. I quite enjoyed this piece!
January 1st, 2011 22:09
