Comments received on poems by Vipassana



I appear to be missing
Katie B. said:

Enjoyable, clever write. Thanks for sharing!!

December 8th, 2025 05:09

I appear to be missing
sorenbarrett said:

I like this poem it sends its message of confusion as to where one might be with such poetic style. Loved it a fave

December 8th, 2025 04:49

blizzard
sorenbarrett said:

Very nice. A wonderful write with a haunting message. Well done

December 3rd, 2025 21:24

blizzard
Megan Blaney said:

Oh I love this, makes me nostalgic for winter days in Maine

December 3rd, 2025 21:23

Whatever New Thing
sorenbarrett said:

What an interesting vision it would be to see our part in the cycle of life and how we are redistributed after death. Well written

November 26th, 2025 04:51

a new Earth
sorenbarrett said:

Yes a world of contradictions and impossibilities where incompatibility is the order of the day. Well done

November 25th, 2025 04:19

a new Earth
NafisaSB said:

I like this concept and hope it works out for mankind

November 25th, 2025 03:00

Story of the self.
sorenbarrett said:

From dog to cat to rat being all things a mind provoking poem that poses the thought that all things serve their purpose. Nicely done

November 24th, 2025 04:18

Nature
sorenbarrett said:

I love the compartmentalization of a thought in each stanza linked together like cars of a train all connected form the poem. Very creative.

November 23rd, 2025 04:40

start over new moon
sorenbarrett said:

Here short lines give a choppy feel as if small waves battering against a pier and the battered wording of bruised and bloodied give the feel of someone that is battle worn and weary. Nicely written

November 22nd, 2025 03:49

Youth
sorenbarrett said:

A series of overlayed images painted in words and beneath a series of overlayed meanings embedded in words. Nicely done

November 21st, 2025 03:46

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