Comments received on poems by Vipassana
Still life with deity.
Paul Bell said:
What a great morning image, especially the cigarette in the ashtray we all grew up with.
December 13th, 2025 04:51
Paul Bell said:
What a great morning image, especially the cigarette in the ashtray we all grew up with.
December 13th, 2025 04:51
Still life with deity.
sorenbarrett said:
Each of these elements, colors, images a symbol well placed and a meaning hidden. They all form a whole of destruction and creation, life and death and its resurrection. Very well crafted brilliantly organized a fave
December 13th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Each of these elements, colors, images a symbol well placed and a meaning hidden. They all form a whole of destruction and creation, life and death and its resurrection. Very well crafted brilliantly organized a fave
December 13th, 2025 04:44
winter solstice
Katie B. said:
Beautiful with lovely sentiment. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
December 9th, 2025 06:20
Katie B. said:
Beautiful with lovely sentiment. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
December 9th, 2025 06:20
winter solstice
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! The metaphor slowly evolves in this poem until at the end it has become one with thoughts, scene, person a masterful work a fave
December 9th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! The metaphor slowly evolves in this poem until at the end it has become one with thoughts, scene, person a masterful work a fave
December 9th, 2025 03:55
I appear to be missing
Karoline said:
Okay, you convinced me, I\'ll dive into my existential side again 😭
Loved reading this ❤
December 8th, 2025 11:54
Karoline said:
Okay, you convinced me, I\'ll dive into my existential side again 😭
Loved reading this ❤
December 8th, 2025 11:54
I appear to be missing
Paul Bell said:
This is me staggering in on a Saturday night, taking the dog out and realising after a mile there\'s no dog on the lead.
December 8th, 2025 06:01
Paul Bell said:
This is me staggering in on a Saturday night, taking the dog out and realising after a mile there\'s no dog on the lead.
December 8th, 2025 06:01
I appear to be missing
Katie B. said:
Enjoyable, clever write. Thanks for sharing!!
December 8th, 2025 05:09
Katie B. said:
Enjoyable, clever write. Thanks for sharing!!
December 8th, 2025 05:09
I appear to be missing
sorenbarrett said:
I like this poem it sends its message of confusion as to where one might be with such poetic style. Loved it a fave
December 8th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
I like this poem it sends its message of confusion as to where one might be with such poetic style. Loved it a fave
December 8th, 2025 04:49
blizzard
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice. A wonderful write with a haunting message. Well done
December 3rd, 2025 21:24
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice. A wonderful write with a haunting message. Well done
December 3rd, 2025 21:24
blizzard
Megan Blaney said:
Oh I love this, makes me nostalgic for winter days in Maine
December 3rd, 2025 21:23
Megan Blaney said:
Oh I love this, makes me nostalgic for winter days in Maine
December 3rd, 2025 21:23
Whatever New Thing
sorenbarrett said:
What an interesting vision it would be to see our part in the cycle of life and how we are redistributed after death. Well written
November 26th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
What an interesting vision it would be to see our part in the cycle of life and how we are redistributed after death. Well written
November 26th, 2025 04:51
a new Earth
sorenbarrett said:
Yes a world of contradictions and impossibilities where incompatibility is the order of the day. Well done
November 25th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Yes a world of contradictions and impossibilities where incompatibility is the order of the day. Well done
November 25th, 2025 04:19
a new Earth
NafisaSB said:
I like this concept and hope it works out for mankind
November 25th, 2025 03:00
NafisaSB said:
I like this concept and hope it works out for mankind
November 25th, 2025 03:00
Story of the self.
sorenbarrett said:
From dog to cat to rat being all things a mind provoking poem that poses the thought that all things serve their purpose. Nicely done
November 24th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
From dog to cat to rat being all things a mind provoking poem that poses the thought that all things serve their purpose. Nicely done
November 24th, 2025 04:18
Nature
sorenbarrett said:
I love the compartmentalization of a thought in each stanza linked together like cars of a train all connected form the poem. Very creative.
November 23rd, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
I love the compartmentalization of a thought in each stanza linked together like cars of a train all connected form the poem. Very creative.
November 23rd, 2025 04:40
start over new moon
sorenbarrett said:
Here short lines give a choppy feel as if small waves battering against a pier and the battered wording of bruised and bloodied give the feel of someone that is battle worn and weary. Nicely written
November 22nd, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Here short lines give a choppy feel as if small waves battering against a pier and the battered wording of bruised and bloodied give the feel of someone that is battle worn and weary. Nicely written
November 22nd, 2025 03:49
Youth
sorenbarrett said:
A series of overlayed images painted in words and beneath a series of overlayed meanings embedded in words. Nicely done
November 21st, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
A series of overlayed images painted in words and beneath a series of overlayed meanings embedded in words. Nicely done
November 21st, 2025 03:46
