Comments received on poems by Durdica Porobija
AN APPLE TREE FOR SHADE
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful pome with personal meaning where a tree is equated mythical properties. Most lovely
September 16th, 2026 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful pome with personal meaning where a tree is equated mythical properties. Most lovely
September 16th, 2026 15:10
AS IN THE VINEYARD
Cheeky Missy said:
As a metaphor this is classical in the very least, beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a most haunting poignancy. Fascinating and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing.
September 14th, 2026 13:27
Cheeky Missy said:
As a metaphor this is classical in the very least, beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a most haunting poignancy. Fascinating and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing.
September 14th, 2026 13:27
AS IN THE VINEYARD
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely picture whether meant to be metaphor or not it stands against urban demands and speaks for the common man. It is well imaged with pictures I can equate with having been in that vineyard some fifty years ago and tasted the juice of the vine, heard the laughter of the laborers. It took me back. for that involvement a fave my friend
September 14th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely picture whether meant to be metaphor or not it stands against urban demands and speaks for the common man. It is well imaged with pictures I can equate with having been in that vineyard some fifty years ago and tasted the juice of the vine, heard the laughter of the laborers. It took me back. for that involvement a fave my friend
September 14th, 2026 04:17
SANJA /in Croatian San-girl
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and cosmic in nature separated from worldly commotion, born on a dream a twinkle of starlight in a mother\'s eye a child herself. It is a continuation of dreams and generations that flow back to the beginning of time. Good to see you back Durdica a fave
September 12th, 2026 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and cosmic in nature separated from worldly commotion, born on a dream a twinkle of starlight in a mother\'s eye a child herself. It is a continuation of dreams and generations that flow back to the beginning of time. Good to see you back Durdica a fave
September 12th, 2026 05:55
FIRE
Thomas W Case said:
This turns fire into something damn multifaceted—destruction, terror, courage, hatred, and even the possibility of warmth. I especially like the ending, where the same spark that feeds hate can be redirected toward peace.
August 16th, 2026 08:04
Thomas W Case said:
This turns fire into something damn multifaceted—destruction, terror, courage, hatred, and even the possibility of warmth. I especially like the ending, where the same spark that feeds hate can be redirected toward peace.
August 16th, 2026 08:04
FIRE
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of all things expressed in this poem. Destruction and rebirth, pain and peace. A lovely write Durdica
August 16th, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of all things expressed in this poem. Destruction and rebirth, pain and peace. A lovely write Durdica
August 16th, 2026 07:43
WHAT WOULD I DO IF I WAKE UP AS A SEA LION
antra.coree said:
Nice, loved the imagination, so unique
August 13th, 2026 20:56
antra.coree said:
Nice, loved the imagination, so unique
August 13th, 2026 20:56
WHAT WOULD I DO IF I WAKE UP AS A SEA LION
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with imagination of being something other than a human. Here a sea lion\'s point of view. Well done
August 13th, 2026 14:09
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem with imagination of being something other than a human. Here a sea lion\'s point of view. Well done
August 13th, 2026 14:09
WHAT WOULD I DO IF I WAKE UP AS A SEA LION
Fränz Müller said:
This was quite enjoyable!
August 13th, 2026 14:08
Fränz Müller said:
This was quite enjoyable!
August 13th, 2026 14:08
DRY RIVERS
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Durdica that holds a powerful message regarding values. The analogy that works so well. Our species bones are of violence, and its imprints may last longer than any technological skin. A fave my friend
August 8th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Durdica that holds a powerful message regarding values. The analogy that works so well. Our species bones are of violence, and its imprints may last longer than any technological skin. A fave my friend
August 8th, 2026 04:36
LIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words decorate beautiful thoughts like jewels on a golden ring. Lovely my friend
August 1st, 2026 03:37
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words decorate beautiful thoughts like jewels on a golden ring. Lovely my friend
August 1st, 2026 03:37
BY DYING INTO REST
Paul Bell said:
The pessimist will tell you, we die everyday.
The optimist, we live everyday.
Some will live with deaths shadow.
Others will perish.
The world moves on.
July 30th, 2026 08:08
Paul Bell said:
The pessimist will tell you, we die everyday.
The optimist, we live everyday.
Some will live with deaths shadow.
Others will perish.
The world moves on.
July 30th, 2026 08:08
BY DYING INTO REST
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message in this poem a view on death or rather views. Death a universal law to all living things. The universes version of justice and equality. Many have fear of it but there is peace in it as well. I see it as a kind mother come to take me home. Very nicely written Durdica
July 30th, 2026 03:28
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message in this poem a view on death or rather views. Death a universal law to all living things. The universes version of justice and equality. Many have fear of it but there is peace in it as well. I see it as a kind mother come to take me home. Very nicely written Durdica
July 30th, 2026 03:28
\"NO\" IS A STEP-BY-STEP DRAWING OF SELF-CONSCIOUSNESS
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s the stuff - it\'ll become a reflex eventually...
July 25th, 2026 17:34
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s the stuff - it\'ll become a reflex eventually...
July 25th, 2026 17:34
\"NO\" IS A STEP-BY-STEP DRAWING OF SELF-CONSCIOUSNESS
sorenbarrett said:
Saying no one of the most difficult things to do but one of the most important. Well written
July 25th, 2026 14:41
sorenbarrett said:
Saying no one of the most difficult things to do but one of the most important. Well written
July 25th, 2026 14:41
The WORLD AS A WHEAT FIELD
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric of life itself and the harvest of souls where the fruitful and good grain is kept for the making of bread and the chaff is cast off. It feels parable like and biblical in a sense. Well done
July 21st, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric of life itself and the harvest of souls where the fruitful and good grain is kept for the making of bread and the chaff is cast off. It feels parable like and biblical in a sense. Well done
July 21st, 2026 04:31
FAMILY
sorenbarrett said:
Blood is thicker than water they say and family bonds are not easily broken. Well done.
July 17th, 2026 07:45
sorenbarrett said:
Blood is thicker than water they say and family bonds are not easily broken. Well done.
July 17th, 2026 07:45
LIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem Durdica it swims in cosmic metaphor and baths the reader in its light. Images are nicely planted along the way and one feels metaphysical as it unfurls. A fave
July 13th, 2026 14:20
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem Durdica it swims in cosmic metaphor and baths the reader in its light. Images are nicely planted along the way and one feels metaphysical as it unfurls. A fave
July 13th, 2026 14:20
GREEN GRASSCOC
sorenbarrett said:
The poem begins with a list of natural insect colored beauties and then returns to the grasshopper found dead and projections as to why. Personification enhanced speculation and it ends in biblical terms. Nicely done Durdica
July 11th, 2026 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
The poem begins with a list of natural insect colored beauties and then returns to the grasshopper found dead and projections as to why. Personification enhanced speculation and it ends in biblical terms. Nicely done Durdica
July 11th, 2026 14:12
SUMMER STORM
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid description of an event that may be extrapolated into metaphor as well. Sour fruit will eventually break before the storm where others bend. Nicely written Durdica
July 7th, 2026 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid description of an event that may be extrapolated into metaphor as well. Sour fruit will eventually break before the storm where others bend. Nicely written Durdica
July 7th, 2026 05:37
THE WORLD IS AN ORCHESTRA
sorenbarrett said:
Music in poetry in this poem, different styles for different moods. As they say different strokes for different folks. Nicely written
June 29th, 2026 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
Music in poetry in this poem, different styles for different moods. As they say different strokes for different folks. Nicely written
June 29th, 2026 10:57
ODE ON WATER
2781 said:
And God divided the waters which were under the firmament from the waters which were above the firmament...I better go easy...
June 28th, 2026 08:52
2781 said:
And God divided the waters which were under the firmament from the waters which were above the firmament...I better go easy...
June 28th, 2026 08:52
ODE ON WATER
sorenbarrett said:
What is common we give little regard even that precious liquid that is necessary for life but wars have been fought over it and in its scarcity people have been murdered for it. It\'s purity cherished it is worth more than gold. Wonderful write with great images.
June 28th, 2026 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
What is common we give little regard even that precious liquid that is necessary for life but wars have been fought over it and in its scarcity people have been murdered for it. It\'s purity cherished it is worth more than gold. Wonderful write with great images.
June 28th, 2026 08:34
AURORA
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely a great metaphor so splendidly painted in words of beauty. A fave Durdica
June 13th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely a great metaphor so splendidly painted in words of beauty. A fave Durdica
June 13th, 2026 04:25
THE CLIMB
sorenbarrett said:
So true when solo climbing one can only go up coming down is too hard. A good write well done
June 9th, 2026 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
So true when solo climbing one can only go up coming down is too hard. A good write well done
June 9th, 2026 11:28
FLOWERS vs PRICES
sorenbarrett said:
A stunning poem of a most powerful nature. Women on display and for sale or at least to put a price on or judge for beauty. We are a sexual society where sex is sold and marketed. Well done and a fave
May 31st, 2026 14:06
sorenbarrett said:
A stunning poem of a most powerful nature. Women on display and for sale or at least to put a price on or judge for beauty. We are a sexual society where sex is sold and marketed. Well done and a fave
May 31st, 2026 14:06
JOY CUP
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem symbolizes hope, compassion, and the search for healing in a world filled with sorrow and threats.
May 30th, 2026 08:56
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem symbolizes hope, compassion, and the search for healing in a world filled with sorrow and threats.
May 30th, 2026 08:56
JOY CUP
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem Durdica such vivid images of a visual and olfactory nature accompanied with a great metaphor. Honey the magic food that never spoils and that is a healer. Well done and a fave
May 30th, 2026 07:45
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem Durdica such vivid images of a visual and olfactory nature accompanied with a great metaphor. Honey the magic food that never spoils and that is a healer. Well done and a fave
May 30th, 2026 07:45
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