Comments received on poems by Durdica Porobija
CLEAR MORNING
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely presented as a playmate gentle and playful the encouragement felt in its positive attitude. Nicely expressed Durdica
April 5th, 2026 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely presented as a playmate gentle and playful the encouragement felt in its positive attitude. Nicely expressed Durdica
April 5th, 2026 05:27
ONLY FLOWERS
sorenbarrett said:
A deep metaphor here Durdica Beautiful images painted in a flower shield. I live in a culture with present day laws that reflect its values. I recognize that these were not always the same nor are they in other cultures. In western culture years back it was not unheard of to marry in the early teens, girls sometimes as young as thirteen. I my youth I had a friend that married a girl of fourteen when he was seventeen. In the orient child marriages by parental pledge usually not sexual until much latter. I do not advocate child sexuality or abuse but recognize the differences in what is accepted in some cultures and times. Poe himself infatuated with a child cousin. Times have changed. A lovely write about a cultural and personal value that we all have.
March 28th, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
A deep metaphor here Durdica Beautiful images painted in a flower shield. I live in a culture with present day laws that reflect its values. I recognize that these were not always the same nor are they in other cultures. In western culture years back it was not unheard of to marry in the early teens, girls sometimes as young as thirteen. I my youth I had a friend that married a girl of fourteen when he was seventeen. In the orient child marriages by parental pledge usually not sexual until much latter. I do not advocate child sexuality or abuse but recognize the differences in what is accepted in some cultures and times. Poe himself infatuated with a child cousin. Times have changed. A lovely write about a cultural and personal value that we all have.
March 28th, 2026 06:49
ONLY FLOWERS
Doggerel Dave said:
Limits, to be sorted and defined. Not a too difficult issue in that instance.
Thanks for an enlightening piece.
March 28th, 2026 06:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Limits, to be sorted and defined. Not a too difficult issue in that instance.
Thanks for an enlightening piece.
March 28th, 2026 06:19
LETTER OF SPRING
sorenbarrett said:
Spring always returns and with it rebirth and new life. Well written
March 22nd, 2026 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
Spring always returns and with it rebirth and new life. Well written
March 22nd, 2026 09:48
LISTENING TO A TREE
NafisaSB said:
beautiful message - one that i hope all other kids can recognize and understand - the pic is beautiful too - God bless you all
March 8th, 2026 23:43
NafisaSB said:
beautiful message - one that i hope all other kids can recognize and understand - the pic is beautiful too - God bless you all
March 8th, 2026 23:43
A WINDOW THAT LIGHTS
sorenbarrett said:
We feel it all around us in every object and bit of nature friendship fills all. Nicely done
March 8th, 2026 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
We feel it all around us in every object and bit of nature friendship fills all. Nicely done
March 8th, 2026 13:31
A WINDOW THAT LIGHTS
Friendship said:
Well written. a powerful poem facing death. Your poem \"A Window That Lights\" revolves around the contrast between darkness and light, both in a literal and metaphorical sense. The window symbolizes hope, connection, and the human spirit\'s resilience, while the darkness signifies isolation and the inevitability of mortality. To me, the poem explores the themes of remembrance, the clarity of truth that comes with facing death, and the illuminating power of the soul.
March 8th, 2026 08:43
Friendship said:
Well written. a powerful poem facing death. Your poem \"A Window That Lights\" revolves around the contrast between darkness and light, both in a literal and metaphorical sense. The window symbolizes hope, connection, and the human spirit\'s resilience, while the darkness signifies isolation and the inevitability of mortality. To me, the poem explores the themes of remembrance, the clarity of truth that comes with facing death, and the illuminating power of the soul.
March 8th, 2026 08:43
LISTENING TO A TREE
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the innocence of a young child and their connection with nature, especially what I call the wise old men of the woods (tree\'s). I am sure if they could talk we could learn so much from them, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2026 07:01
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the innocence of a young child and their connection with nature, especially what I call the wise old men of the woods (tree\'s). I am sure if they could talk we could learn so much from them, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2026 07:01
LISTENING TO A TREE
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of the innocence of a child that knows more than the wise and communication with nature. A most lovely write
March 4th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of the innocence of a child that knows more than the wise and communication with nature. A most lovely write
March 4th, 2026 06:48
LISTENING TO A TREE
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
Everything speaks to us of God and His creation; we only need to listen.
March 4th, 2026 05:00
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
Everything speaks to us of God and His creation; we only need to listen.
March 4th, 2026 05:00
MOON AT NOON
sorenbarrett said:
This is so beautiful and a lovely mythical portrayal of the heavens. A fave
March 2nd, 2026 16:39
sorenbarrett said:
This is so beautiful and a lovely mythical portrayal of the heavens. A fave
March 2nd, 2026 16:39
THE GREAT PREGNANT WOMEN
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful and original comparison- liked it
March 1st, 2026 11:33
NafisaSB said:
Beautiful and original comparison- liked it
March 1st, 2026 11:33
THE GREAT PREGNANT WOMEN
Poetic Licence said:
I really like the comparison of nature regenerating with birth of new life, and the fact the planet is portrayed as a woman, which makes sense. Enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 19:55
Poetic Licence said:
I really like the comparison of nature regenerating with birth of new life, and the fact the planet is portrayed as a woman, which makes sense. Enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 19:55
THE GREAT PREGNANT WOMEN
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem and Parallel. Can\'t wait for Spring.
February 26th, 2026 11:43
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem and Parallel. Can\'t wait for Spring.
February 26th, 2026 11:43
THE GREAT PREGNANT WOMEN
Doggerel Dave said:
Gosh - if child birth is so easy and beautiful, I think I might have a go!😊
February 26th, 2026 05:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Gosh - if child birth is so easy and beautiful, I think I might have a go!😊
February 26th, 2026 05:46
THE GREAT PREGNANT WOMEN
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done bringing in natures changes in seasons and new life.
February 26th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done bringing in natures changes in seasons and new life.
February 26th, 2026 04:47
THE GREAT PREGNANT WOMEN
mvvenkataraman said:
Superb poem written excellently,
The thinking is made brilliantly,
All the best to write more and more,
May wit and wisdom we all score !
February 26th, 2026 03:25
mvvenkataraman said:
Superb poem written excellently,
The thinking is made brilliantly,
All the best to write more and more,
May wit and wisdom we all score !
February 26th, 2026 03:25
THE WORLD AS A BATTLEFIELD
sorenbarrett said:
I took this as a metaphor for the world and its state. Well written
January 15th, 2026 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
I took this as a metaphor for the world and its state. Well written
January 15th, 2026 14:19
THE FUTURE HAS SPOKEN
sorenbarrett said:
A surrealistic poem in a surrealistic world where hedonism is the name and greed is the game. Well written
December 9th, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
A surrealistic poem in a surrealistic world where hedonism is the name and greed is the game. Well written
December 9th, 2025 08:54
NIGHT DISCOLORING
Lorenz said:
I know these stations drowned on cold nights between Brussels, Berlin or even further afield...My words often evoke them like fascinating and lethal spells...A pen dictated by the mood of the moment...
December 3rd, 2025 13:47
Lorenz said:
I know these stations drowned on cold nights between Brussels, Berlin or even further afield...My words often evoke them like fascinating and lethal spells...A pen dictated by the mood of the moment...
December 3rd, 2025 13:47
NIGHT DISCOLORING
sorenbarrett said:
A sandwich of a poem with beautiful bread on top and bottom and the meat of darkness between A lovely poem with great images and good flow
December 3rd, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A sandwich of a poem with beautiful bread on top and bottom and the meat of darkness between A lovely poem with great images and good flow
December 3rd, 2025 09:04
