Comments received on poems by Aaron Roberson
THE MOUNTAIN
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive attitude demonstrated in this poem that keeps trying. Nicely done.
October 26th, 2026 15:03
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive attitude demonstrated in this poem that keeps trying. Nicely done.
October 26th, 2026 15:03
I Am From The Real America
Norman Flagtea said:
A great poem, Aaron! Very true, very sad, very angry., Bob Dylan and Allen Ginsberg would be proud of you...!
September 18th, 2026 07:51
Norman Flagtea said:
A great poem, Aaron! Very true, very sad, very angry., Bob Dylan and Allen Ginsberg would be proud of you...!
September 18th, 2026 07:51
BPD EXTREME HELL
sorenbarrett said:
This poem dives deep into the self perceived views of a person with bipolar disorder and their swings in mood. Nicely written and imaged it takes the reader for a ride. Nicely written.
September 18th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem dives deep into the self perceived views of a person with bipolar disorder and their swings in mood. Nicely written and imaged it takes the reader for a ride. Nicely written.
September 18th, 2026 04:17
I AM BODY OF WATER
sorenbarrett said:
There is acceptance in this poem of being who one is and asking others to do the same. Patience waiting here. Well written
September 4th, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
There is acceptance in this poem of being who one is and asking others to do the same. Patience waiting here. Well written
September 4th, 2026 06:19
Pain = Life
sorenbarrett said:
Pain exists in life but it is not continual but intermittent. Nicely written with an ending of hope.
August 11th, 2026 18:11
sorenbarrett said:
Pain exists in life but it is not continual but intermittent. Nicely written with an ending of hope.
August 11th, 2026 18:11
Happy 4th, May Your Memories Attack
sorenbarrett said:
Trauma from any source can plague a person for a lifetime. This poem that links a day and its celebration with past pain and loss of a traumatic event is tragic. Well written in rhyme and good short meter that gives a racing feel to the poem.
July 5th, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Trauma from any source can plague a person for a lifetime. This poem that links a day and its celebration with past pain and loss of a traumatic event is tragic. Well written in rhyme and good short meter that gives a racing feel to the poem.
July 5th, 2026 04:55
Rose Thorns
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric in flowers and thorns in overcoming and being scared it sends its message well. Nicely done
June 16th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric in flowers and thorns in overcoming and being scared it sends its message well. Nicely done
June 16th, 2026 04:20
“I Want Love, Not Just Sex\"
Shah Asst said:
strong message about choosing real, lasting love.
May 26th, 2026 06:31
Shah Asst said:
strong message about choosing real, lasting love.
May 26th, 2026 06:31
I Am From The Real America
sorenbarrett said:
Powerfully written this poem lays it out and proposes a different direction for the country that is now mired in greed, anger, prejudice and lies. Well written
May 25th, 2026 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
Powerfully written this poem lays it out and proposes a different direction for the country that is now mired in greed, anger, prejudice and lies. Well written
May 25th, 2026 10:06
“I Want Love, Not Just Sex\"
Isha Malhotra said:
Such a great poem, really impressive. More beautiful poetry is available on https://shayariiworld.com/] you read it.
May 22nd, 2026 06:30
Isha Malhotra said:
Such a great poem, really impressive. More beautiful poetry is available on https://shayariiworld.com/] you read it.
May 22nd, 2026 06:30
I Scream But Nothing Comes Out
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the torment of the damned where a lack of identity and values leads to an existential crisis and demise. Well written it speaks with power and force. Well done
May 16th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the torment of the damned where a lack of identity and values leads to an existential crisis and demise. Well written it speaks with power and force. Well done
May 16th, 2026 04:29
I Am So Close to the Edge, Just Let Me Go
sorenbarrett said:
Are we remembered indeed after we are gone? A poem of questions that need an answer. Well done
May 15th, 2026 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
Are we remembered indeed after we are gone? A poem of questions that need an answer. Well done
May 15th, 2026 13:57
Searching the Deep Unknown — Part III: The Soul
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels very surreal and quite symbolic. Nicely done
April 21st, 2026 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels very surreal and quite symbolic. Nicely done
April 21st, 2026 13:36
The Ballroom Dance — Part II: The Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A maniacal waltz a devils dervish. Well written
April 20th, 2026 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
A maniacal waltz a devils dervish. Well written
April 20th, 2026 12:07
The Empty Party — Part I: The Brain
sorenbarrett said:
Great analogy for the vast emptiness of the mind from time to time. Well done
April 20th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Great analogy for the vast emptiness of the mind from time to time. Well done
April 20th, 2026 04:35
Stabbed with the Anxiety Blade
Mutley Ravishes said:
Been in that war a long time! Lately I`ve been inspired by the idea the \"your faith is your fortune,\" (not in some external deity). Great write.
April 17th, 2026 06:10
Mutley Ravishes said:
Been in that war a long time! Lately I`ve been inspired by the idea the \"your faith is your fortune,\" (not in some external deity). Great write.
April 17th, 2026 06:10
Stabbed with the Anxiety Blade
sorenbarrett said:
An apt metaphor in this poem that evokes the pain and discomfort of anxiety. Well expressed
April 16th, 2026 21:21
sorenbarrett said:
An apt metaphor in this poem that evokes the pain and discomfort of anxiety. Well expressed
April 16th, 2026 21:21
“He Moves While You Can’t”
Friendship said:
Wow, a very heavy story, yet so sad. Your story delves into the visceral experience of fear, helplessness, and suffering. It presents an unsettling scenario where the speaker is confronted by a dark entity that embodies their trauma, emphasizing the physical and emotional scars left behind.
April 15th, 2026 10:37
Friendship said:
Wow, a very heavy story, yet so sad. Your story delves into the visceral experience of fear, helplessness, and suffering. It presents an unsettling scenario where the speaker is confronted by a dark entity that embodies their trauma, emphasizing the physical and emotional scars left behind.
April 15th, 2026 10:37
“He Moves While You Can’t”
sorenbarrett said:
An Incubus described in poetic terms where it is felt, seen and in a sense raped by. Well done
April 15th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
An Incubus described in poetic terms where it is felt, seen and in a sense raped by. Well done
April 15th, 2026 04:56
I’m invisible,can you see me
sorenbarrett said:
In a sea of people we are all invisible melting into the crowd. A sad write were we feel unseen.
April 11th, 2026 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
In a sea of people we are all invisible melting into the crowd. A sad write were we feel unseen.
April 11th, 2026 05:26
I want to go home
Priya Tomar said:
Me too .
Sadness whispers through every line .
Good write .
April 11th, 2026 01:47
Priya Tomar said:
Me too .
Sadness whispers through every line .
Good write .
April 11th, 2026 01:47
I want to go home
Allie561 said:
It’s hard when the place that’s supposed to be safe, isn’t. Hard to call your house a home when it doesn’t feel like one. I hope it comes to you soon.
April 10th, 2026 21:08
Allie561 said:
It’s hard when the place that’s supposed to be safe, isn’t. Hard to call your house a home when it doesn’t feel like one. I hope it comes to you soon.
April 10th, 2026 21:08
I want to go home
sorenbarrett said:
We all search for that and some of us find it sooner than others. Nicely done
April 10th, 2026 20:57
sorenbarrett said:
We all search for that and some of us find it sooner than others. Nicely done
April 10th, 2026 20:57
I am Addicted, to happy pills
sorenbarrett said:
Addiction is a difficult thing to deal with and this poem deals with its elements. Nicely done
April 7th, 2026 19:38
sorenbarrett said:
Addiction is a difficult thing to deal with and this poem deals with its elements. Nicely done
April 7th, 2026 19:38
I am Addicted, to happy pills
Katie B. said:
Deep, heavy and forthcoming. Thank you for sharing your struggle, it will speak to someone else.
April 7th, 2026 18:34
Katie B. said:
Deep, heavy and forthcoming. Thank you for sharing your struggle, it will speak to someone else.
April 7th, 2026 18:34
I Bleed Red, I Am A Human
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of mortality and yet its virtues and faults. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of mortality and yet its virtues and faults. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 13:05
I Bleed Red, I Am A Human
Abdullah123 said:
I adore this poem.... timeless and wholly relevant. A fave
April 5th, 2026 13:02
Abdullah123 said:
I adore this poem.... timeless and wholly relevant. A fave
April 5th, 2026 13:02
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