Comments received on poems by Andrew1234
Crown Victoria Pantoum
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ANDREW - Great PANTOUM and a great subject. I'm acussed of treating my cars better than my lasy Friends ! When you post a classical structure like a PANTOUM you should explain the rhyme structure ABCD BEDF EGEH GAHB Thanks for sharing - my next poem will be a PANTOUM - BRIAN
May 2nd, 2016 09:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ANDREW - Great PANTOUM and a great subject. I'm acussed of treating my cars better than my lasy Friends ! When you post a classical structure like a PANTOUM you should explain the rhyme structure ABCD BEDF EGEH GAHB Thanks for sharing - my next poem will be a PANTOUM - BRIAN
May 2nd, 2016 09:58