Comments received on poems by blacksparrow



Siren
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME BLACKSPARROW - Love your first poem. In my experience SIRENS are very appealing and more often than not irresistible. Your well penned poem focuses on a Siren scorned. Because her charms are ignored her "death" is inevitable. There is a moral in this poem of both "love" and "life". The last line is very poignant - something we have all experienced form time to time. Their music plays no more ! BRIAN

May 4th, 2016 16:49