Comments received on poems by – NoeticNonsense
The Architecture of Wounds:
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of metaphor. Well done.
September 14th, 2026 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of metaphor. Well done.
September 14th, 2026 14:01
Without Spark
sorenbarrett said:
Lurking in the shadows fear cloaks ugly memories buried in the dark. Well written a haunting piece
September 7th, 2026 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
Lurking in the shadows fear cloaks ugly memories buried in the dark. Well written a haunting piece
September 7th, 2026 07:01
The Distance I’ve Carried:
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and heartfelt with very good lines and analogies well used. A fave
September 5th, 2026 12:23
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and heartfelt with very good lines and analogies well used. A fave
September 5th, 2026 12:23
Love in the Dust
sorenbarrett said:
Not fooled by looks this poem takes us to the core of a person and this is the attraction. Nicely written with rhyme as well.
September 4th, 2026 03:31
sorenbarrett said:
Not fooled by looks this poem takes us to the core of a person and this is the attraction. Nicely written with rhyme as well.
September 4th, 2026 03:31
A Penny for No Thoughts:
sorenbarrett said:
A penny for thoughts and a dollar for dreams. This write speaks to me of the difficulty of day\'s labor as opposed to night\'s dreams but the wisdom to know one has to work to get ahead. A fountain of wishes does not pay the rent.
September 1st, 2026 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
A penny for thoughts and a dollar for dreams. This write speaks to me of the difficulty of day\'s labor as opposed to night\'s dreams but the wisdom to know one has to work to get ahead. A fountain of wishes does not pay the rent.
September 1st, 2026 13:46
A Spark With a Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
Mysterious and dark. Nicely written and a fave
August 30th, 2026 18:50
sorenbarrett said:
Mysterious and dark. Nicely written and a fave
August 30th, 2026 18:50
The Halls of the Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Different rooms, halls and compartments in the mind. Nicely done.
August 29th, 2026 18:03
sorenbarrett said:
Different rooms, halls and compartments in the mind. Nicely done.
August 29th, 2026 18:03
Memories Hold the Matches:
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem of dream. Nicely written
August 28th, 2026 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem of dream. Nicely written
August 28th, 2026 18:09
Memories Hold the Matches:
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts do take up residence in the mind and as squatters are hard to evict at times. Nicely written
August 28th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts do take up residence in the mind and as squatters are hard to evict at times. Nicely written
August 28th, 2026 04:06
A Familiar Weight
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful wording well written marks this poem and is a fave
August 23rd, 2026 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful wording well written marks this poem and is a fave
August 23rd, 2026 11:05
All Four Walls
sorenbarrett said:
A clever reversal of the concept in the end gives a new perspective of the write. Well done
August 17th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A clever reversal of the concept in the end gives a new perspective of the write. Well done
August 17th, 2026 04:18
Undertones
sorenbarrett said:
A mathematical formula in this poem. Nicely written.
July 26th, 2026 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
A mathematical formula in this poem. Nicely written.
July 26th, 2026 09:02
Semicolon
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem proclaiming the importance of the other. Nicely written
July 18th, 2026 18:19
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem proclaiming the importance of the other. Nicely written
July 18th, 2026 18:19
The Mechanism of Weather
sorenbarrett said:
This write leaves me with the feeling of being alone in the stormy night in precarious ground. Well written and imaged
July 12th, 2026 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
This write leaves me with the feeling of being alone in the stormy night in precarious ground. Well written and imaged
July 12th, 2026 09:13
The Mechanism of Weather
rhmn_7 said:
This raw reflection beautifully captures the cyclical nature of sorrow, however the resilient spirit remains standing to weather the inevitable return. Nice poem!
July 12th, 2026 08:07
rhmn_7 said:
This raw reflection beautifully captures the cyclical nature of sorrow, however the resilient spirit remains standing to weather the inevitable return. Nice poem!
July 12th, 2026 08:07
Tangible Silence
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely passage or two here that speak a mountain. It is what we don\'t say and don\'t do that troubles us most. Lovely and a fave
May 31st, 2026 12:11
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely passage or two here that speak a mountain. It is what we don\'t say and don\'t do that troubles us most. Lovely and a fave
May 31st, 2026 12:11
Diaphanous Nostalgia
sorenbarrett said:
The passage of time obscures many things is written in this poem. Nicely done
May 11th, 2026 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
The passage of time obscures many things is written in this poem. Nicely done
May 11th, 2026 08:03
Diaphanous Nostalgia
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written a poem of memories emerging out of dust. It has a nostalgic feel
May 11th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written a poem of memories emerging out of dust. It has a nostalgic feel
May 11th, 2026 04:30
The Perverse Presence
sorenbarrett said:
Dualities and paradoxes encapsulated in this write. Nicely done a most fun read
May 3rd, 2026 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
Dualities and paradoxes encapsulated in this write. Nicely done a most fun read
May 3rd, 2026 19:39
Noetic Horticulturist
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor in this poem so well written. Nicely written
April 30th, 2026 21:42
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor in this poem so well written. Nicely written
April 30th, 2026 21:42
Decoded
sorenbarrett said:
Most philosophical this poem reaches to the spiritual and becomes existential
April 20th, 2026 20:57
sorenbarrett said:
Most philosophical this poem reaches to the spiritual and becomes existential
April 20th, 2026 20:57
The Logophile Museum
sorenbarrett said:
The process of an author and poet. Well written
April 19th, 2026 15:04
sorenbarrett said:
The process of an author and poet. Well written
April 19th, 2026 15:04
Here, There or Somewhere
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read personified of large and small everything and nothing the extremes meet here. Well done
April 2nd, 2026 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read personified of large and small everything and nothing the extremes meet here. Well done
April 2nd, 2026 12:08
Love Rooted in the Ribs
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor used in this write that so poetically speaks of resilience and a sense of permanence grown from invisible roots of who we are. It sends its message with quiet power.
March 29th, 2026 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor used in this write that so poetically speaks of resilience and a sense of permanence grown from invisible roots of who we are. It sends its message with quiet power.
March 29th, 2026 05:18
Incoherence
sorenbarrett said:
Obsessive thought becomes thinking about thinking and before one knows it one looses the ends in the tangle. Nicely written
March 9th, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Obsessive thought becomes thinking about thinking and before one knows it one looses the ends in the tangle. Nicely written
March 9th, 2026 03:44
Cathedral of Sorrow
sorenbarrett said:
Macabre and dark this poem speaks to finality. Nicely written
March 4th, 2026 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
Macabre and dark this poem speaks to finality. Nicely written
March 4th, 2026 19:04
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