Comments received on poems by Janice3
Hour\'s Howl
Paul Bell said:
The month of make belief, but only in mind.
November is around the corner, and so is December.
A lot of sadness in this spooky write.
October 27th, 2026 10:25
Paul Bell said:
The month of make belief, but only in mind.
November is around the corner, and so is December.
A lot of sadness in this spooky write.
October 27th, 2026 10:25
Hour\'s Howl
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a funny, slightly ragged melancholy underneath the Halloween revelry here, with costumes, edibles, and spooky distractions becoming ways to postpone the insecurities and troubles that will still be waiting when November arrives. “Become November First’s worries until then Im slashing” is the keeper for me, because it captures the poem’s central bargain with such dark humor: for one glorious month, you can dress your troubles up as monsters and pretend you’ve conquered them, even when you know they’ll be waiting when the masks come off.
October 27th, 2026 08:51
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a funny, slightly ragged melancholy underneath the Halloween revelry here, with costumes, edibles, and spooky distractions becoming ways to postpone the insecurities and troubles that will still be waiting when November arrives. “Become November First’s worries until then Im slashing” is the keeper for me, because it captures the poem’s central bargain with such dark humor: for one glorious month, you can dress your troubles up as monsters and pretend you’ve conquered them, even when you know they’ll be waiting when the masks come off.
October 27th, 2026 08:51
Hour\'s Howl
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal and most fitting it shows good rhyme and is well done
October 27th, 2026 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal and most fitting it shows good rhyme and is well done
October 27th, 2026 08:45
I have to start practicing the Guitar
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that voices the concern of most young people that of acceptance. When a person can not accept you for what you are then they are not for you. Well done
February 24th, 2026 14:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that voices the concern of most young people that of acceptance. When a person can not accept you for what you are then they are not for you. Well done
February 24th, 2026 14:58
