Comments received on poems by unknown444
Dirty
sorenbarrett said:
Hard hitting and gritty it asks for truth that can not be attained alone. Well written
April 5th, 2026 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
Hard hitting and gritty it asks for truth that can not be attained alone. Well written
April 5th, 2026 12:02
1 am
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of great free floating anxiety that is overwhelming. Nicely written
April 4th, 2026 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of great free floating anxiety that is overwhelming. Nicely written
April 4th, 2026 09:50
1 am
2781 said:
The light shines in the darkness, but the darkness must comprehend it.
April 4th, 2026 09:26
2781 said:
The light shines in the darkness, but the darkness must comprehend it.
April 4th, 2026 09:26
Waking up already Empty
sorenbarrett said:
So well written it speaks to the tired state and the inability to loose it in sleep. Very nicely written it is a fave
April 3rd, 2026 08:27
sorenbarrett said:
So well written it speaks to the tired state and the inability to loose it in sleep. Very nicely written it is a fave
April 3rd, 2026 08:27
Waking up already Empty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kristen, there’s a deep, lived honesty in this…that space between showing up and barely being there. That line about movement being mistaken for strength anchors it, and the ending lands exactly where it should. I’m really glad you brought this here…welcome to MPS. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kristen, there’s a deep, lived honesty in this…that space between showing up and barely being there. That line about movement being mistaken for strength anchors it, and the ending lands exactly where it should. I’m really glad you brought this here…welcome to MPS. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:24
The Bad Habit
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem explores themes of mental anguish, self-harm, and the struggles with addiction and self-destructive behavior. It delves into the complex relationship between pain and a sense of control, as well as the pursuit of peace amid chaos.
April 2nd, 2026 20:36
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem explores themes of mental anguish, self-harm, and the struggles with addiction and self-destructive behavior. It delves into the complex relationship between pain and a sense of control, as well as the pursuit of peace amid chaos.
April 2nd, 2026 20:36
The Bad Habit
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of self infliction that speaks of despair and pain. Well written
April 2nd, 2026 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of self infliction that speaks of despair and pain. Well written
April 2nd, 2026 20:14
